Reviews by VickiShy
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334745
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so proud of Bella and Seth. I would like Renee to be dealt with. But I want to hear more about Charlie's suffering and why he was paying Jacobs tuition. Great chapter girls. 



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved the revenge karma you have set in motion. I still want more answers about Charlie. Or maybe more suffering for him. Also what is the weird relationship with Leah. We're the sleeping together?  Plus why still doesn't he have any remorse now that he knows Bella really is his daughter. I wold love some criminal charges for Lauren and Jessica since I still hate them. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Renee's comppence was my favorite. Great job. Yeah they are married. 



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This chapter was massive. What is the rosé ceremony?  Leah just wow. And who killed Harry?  Great job. 



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Ladies. Grat chapter cgreat story. I have loved every update. Merry Christmas. 



Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Guys. That was a perfect wrap up. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ladies. Thank you for a wonderful story. I just asked to join your Fb group. I loved the summary. Perfetto!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Detectives Edward, Emmett and Jasper are on the case of a serial killer roaming the U-Dub campus. With their sisters on campus, can they keep them safe and do their jobs effectively? What happens when feelings begin to change for Edward and Jasper? Will they be too late to save the girls they love? And who is that Killer in the Shadows? AH, canon couples.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26659 Read Count: 45618
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2013 Updated: 21 Oct 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Please tell me that Bella has eaten, showered and has clean clothes. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Nice. They are all together and of age now. I am happy. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Yet she rins from one end of campus to another by herself. This girl!  But the kiss - perfect

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue

Too short dear. Great story but I hate parting with you again so soon. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Welcome back lovely!  Great start. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Love it I can't wait until the girls are older. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Totally shocked. And stupid Bella I promise to never go anywhere alone. She never listens. Great chapter. You made Edward cry:-(

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I don't know the movie. :-(. I think she will rebound. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Great chaopter.  Kick btt Edward.  Loved it.  Now, I think she responded because she knew he wouldn;t let her get away with crap but, I do hope they have another kiss soon.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I was shocked it wasn't James.  Now I have no theory.  Great job.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Well it will be a good thing if Edward pulls his head out of his AXX.  Great chapter.  Bella should really knock some sense into edward though - idiot.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

That is a horrible cliffhanger. Edward please learn how to verbally complete a thought. ;-)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

great chapter I didn't know.  A steel door?  Where is she?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

But if he hasn't been back surveillance won't do any good right?  Great talk Carlisle!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98334
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

again, good chapter.  I liked the playfulness that eward exhibited.  The alice thing is weird - so who actually wants her around?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I just do't trust this edward to be able to handle seeing her real side.  her real side isn't what he wants her to be so this is just going to end badly.  good chapter though.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He just doesn't get it. He is so spoiled. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok. The whole Alice thing is weird and I need to know more about that situation. Good chapters. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Nice twist!  Now everyone has to not kill Alice. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hate the way he is trying to change her. It seems she rely shines when she is herself. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Pooh it started out so sweetly too. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella can't keep up the charade. How do you tell jake not to come?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The family visit seemed to go well. I hope Edward isn't such a prick in the next chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ok. He wasn't so bad this chapter. That's a lot of gifts. Great chapter 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am happy that Edward declared his love and wanted to make Bella's dreams come true. I like he happy and would pov to see the trust build up. But full circle?  I don't think I like the sound of that. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I like it.  please let edward not be an ass next chapter

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Very sweet. Nice job. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great story ladies.  

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54714
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Outtake - The Gauntlet Part I

This out take was fantastic. So detailed. Thank you for your hard work. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

He has to talk to someone. Come on. Great job. 



Author's Response:

LOL!  Don't you just want to slap him upside the head, and then hug him to death?  ;)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh no. Hot yes but I know thenext chapter will make me so sad. 



Author's Response:

There's still hope for these two...chin up!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Yes a real kiss !  Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

I know!  Yay!!  They'll get together eventually, I promise!  Thanks for reading, and reviewing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Powerful chapter. Great job. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Great chapter I hope he keeps following this advice. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  With any luck, he'll keep listening to Bella!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

He is so. Cute and sexy. 



Author's Response:

HEE!!  Isn't he, though?  Don't you just want one of your very own?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Are his nightmares new memories?  Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

No, the nightmares are still of that night in the forest.  Think of it as a bit of a PTSD thing, or, maybe he hasn't learned everything he could from that memory yet?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

The session was really good for him. I like how positive he is right now. 



Author's Response:

Yes, it certainly was.  He's definitely changing the way he's thinking, which is SUCH a good thing!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Great chapter. I am glad you let them be happy and made a time jump. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I enjoyed giving them happiness too!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

hurry please!



Author's Response:

LOL!!  So glad you're that eager to read it!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Better ham last time. I can't wait o hear his memories about who he is. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think it's better than last time.  Yup, EPOV will be coming up soon!  :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Wow I hate this twist because now I believe it will take Edward forever to get back to Bella because of recovery, physical therapy, depositions, and trials. Plus if he calls she'll probably just avoid him. Please get them back together sooner than later. 



Author's Response:

Sorry!  It won't take forever, but you have some interesting insights here.  Another story whisperer...  ;)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Thank you I needed that. 



Author's Response:

You're welcome!  More soon!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I want the outtake s. I love Edwards attitude in this chapter. Great speech. Go get her Edward!



Author's Response:

Outtakes coming up after the epilogue.  :)  I'm so glad that you're happy with Edward!  Yup, he's going to get to the bottom of this!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I'm so happy right now! *tears*



Author's Response:

Aww...that's SO sweet!!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Perfetto!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Outtake- Oasis

Bella is an angel. You made the pain so real. Amazing outtake. 

Oh Brother by Kim Rathbone Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Sequel to Oh Captain, My Captain. Emmett, Jasper and Edward have been in the Army for the last 9 years together. Bella is Em's little sister. One package to Em changes everything. AH. HEA


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41569 Read Count: 16611
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2013 Updated: 07 Oct 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This was a sweet story and ending. Great job Kim. 

Summary:

 

Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106208
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Santino Chapter 8

Yeah. Loved the familial interaction. Love this family. 

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97779
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ok I Am glad that Marcus has been found but I am pissy at Bella. She needs to really think. Edward is making an effort. Eddie still seems like trouble to me. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very dark start. Happy to see the sequel. Great job. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow what an ending. She finally calmed down enough I sort through her feelings a little. Now if Edward would figure out what he wants without being drugged up and he can be reasonable they can move forward together. Great chapter. And what lies was little Eddie told?  There is a whole lot of sh*t yet to hit the fan. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok I feel for Edward in this chapter. I hope he does shit this part of the business down. Go Edward. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow. Send him to a hotel?  I forgot who little Eddie is?  Oh wait. I remember. How could he have no where to go. Should we trust him?  Bella held her own in both chapters. Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh oh  greAT CHAPTER.  i wish they would talk.  at least a little.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Di du dummmm.   Ok who is it and when is Bella going to start healing herself?  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Nice handling of Tanya and thank you edward for finally telling a little bit of truth. Can't Wait for more. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201998
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Perfection. Great story. Unique, smart women. Nice change of pace for the characters. A fun read. 



Author's Response:

Aww....thank you so much. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

My new story, The Perfect Light, is now up for your reading pleasure. Be sure to check that out.

Take care.

Ann

Worlds Apart by greenbabie1289 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

Bella Swan has opened up a new Restaurant in the heart of Indianapolis. She's successful, witty and creative. She also is terribly smitten with the Army/Mechanic Edward Cullen. Edward's also just as crazy about Bella. Only problem is...they've never met in person before. Can a digital relationship blossom into something real? AUclassic cars with edward and bella


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48341 Read Count: 11263
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2014 Updated: 02 Aug 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Life Could be a Dream, Sweetheart!

In reality, Edward should be a whole lot angrier. But those kisses could put anyone in a horny haze. 



Author's Response:

I agree, but there have been times where a good kiss will just shut me the you know what up too lol And I forget why I'd be angry. BUT the story isnt over yet, I'm sure there will be a little bit of tension (good and bad) as we progress. Thank you for stopping by and showing some love! It's greatly appreciated! -GB

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Hey Suga

Yum. This story is going to satisfy me I think. I love the different professions and locations. 



Author's Response:

I only aim to please my readers! :D Thank you for your kind words 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Diners, Drive-Ins and Jives!

Yum. Great way to end the chapter. 



Author's Response:

And it's only going to get better from here on out ;) thank you for showing love!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: First Night Home

She is such a tease. I love it. 



Author's Response:

I know right?! lol It's only going to get better from here on out ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella moves into a new apartment and meets a sweet, talkative little girl named Natalie.  As they get to know each other Bella notices things that worry her.  One night changes everything for Natalie and Bella meets handsome police officer Edward, they set out together to give Natalie a better life.

 

Written for Fandom Against Domestic Violence. Bella, Edward and the rest of the gang are Stephanie Meyers' but Natalie and the story are all mine. This is not finished and right now I am not able to really work on it, so bear with me and just enjoy the story as it is.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52897 Read Count: 38944
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2014 Updated: 02 Jun 2017
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter. I love their relationshi. They are devoted to one another. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, they are pretty cute.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great job. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I am so happy they will be a family. Great chapter. So sweet. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I love it. I liked how you looked back. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great chapter. There was a lot of Bella pressure in this chapter. I hope she doesn't break. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  She was under a lot of pressure here, dealing with Jasper's anger and Elizabeth's problems on top of our poor, sick Edward.  She's strong, though, and she's building a support team around Edward, and also around herself.  ;)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great chapter. I loved how you wrote Jasper in this chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked Jasper.  He's definitely one of the heroes of this story.  Not as active as Alice right now, but Jasper saved Edward more than once before this story began, and he's here for the long haul.  We'll be seeing more of him, I promise!  :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great chapter. I am so happy for each morsel of progress. You have done amazing things with this story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  There has been alot of progress, hasn't there?  And there is certainly more to come!  So glad you're loving the story!  :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Amazing. I cannot say it enough. 



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you so much!  :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Ok. This is the second story today that has left me a sobbing mess. This story was, brutal, honest, hard to read, and worth every bit of angst. You have so much talent. Thanks for sharing. 



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you for the lovely review!  I'm so glad you stayed with me to see the beautiful ending after all the angst was over.  Thank you!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 602306
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Only two more.  Noooooo. Loved the chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Each chapter just makes me want more. Your story is like a drug to me!  :-)

 

 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Omg. I am so excited. I didn't want it to end. Great job. Beautiful wedding. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

You accomplished so much in this chapter. I loved how careful Edward was with Bella's injuries. Love each chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter. I liked how you portrayed Edwards dilemma. 

I miss you by louanne61 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 198]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When geek medical student Edward meets geek student/librarian Bella. They fall in love in the library. Lies are told and secrets are kept soon rip them apart. Can they endure the events that follow to find each other again.

This story has a happy ever after.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174321 Read Count: 53477
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2015 Updated: 14 Oct 2017
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Ahhhhhhh!  That is a horrible place to leave this. I do love how competent Bella acts now with the kids. 



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for leaving me a review. I know I'm cruel leaving it in such a horrible place. Bella is certainly a stronger woman know. We just have to wonder can Edward met up the her new standards ;)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Wow. But he screwed up bad. Very bad. 

 



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for taking the time to review. He certainly has messed up. Lets see what his explanation is in the next chapter. Do you think he will be able to change Bella's mind :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What a realization. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review. It was a big wake up call for Edward.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ok I kind of really like the twist with the kids. I wish she could have had a chance at romance though. I really do want a hea though. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a review. There is still time for her to get her romance back in her life. You are going to get your hea... promise.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I am so happy they talked 



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review. Its great they are talking.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 12 May 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Huge chapter. Huge. Rose needs to realize how wrong she was. Emmett needs some manners. Loved Bella and Edward this chapter.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. It was a bit of a long chapter. I did think about putting into two, but decided not to. Most people have been disappointed with Rose, she will try and fix her mistakes I'm sure. Bella and Edward are getting along, about time ;)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Great update but why can't he take the job?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. With it been so close to him coming home he is still very jumpy. It hasn't even been a year since he was shout. I have written it so he will still go with her back to Lakewood but he will get one of his dreams when it comes to his career.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I love mama bell and contrite Edward. Crossing fingers here. Head knocks for rose and Emmett. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading the story and leaving a review.  You haven't seen momma Bella in action yet, I wonder what Edward will think once he hears what she has to say to Rose ;)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

The chapter was perfect. Love the emotions you make me feel. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving me a review.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

So good. Heartbreaking though. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving me your thoughts.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Mwah!  Loved it. It broke my heart several times. It made me cheer and made me happy. Beautiful. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading this until the end I really appreciate it. Many people haven't and got really nasty about it. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. xx

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I did enjoy it. His father is still a bit off. Alice hasn't changed. Loved the happiness. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving me a review. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the wedding. Bella is really a forgiving person, I don't know how many people would have invited Peter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99372
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: His Good Angel

Loved it. 



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Fireworks aren’t the only exciting part of July 4th

Sweet chapter. Great job. 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved the reveal. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life

Hot and bothered. Great lemons. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I was nervous to post them, as they were my first.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Green Monster Birthday Boy

They are so sweet. 



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you so much :D

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!

Fun update. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you :D