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Not much to tell; just a boring woman from Wisconsin
Banner by MsRason
All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87538
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
a very omnious meeting. Can't wait to see how you write the next few chapters. This James and Aro are very scary!
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Happy new year. how will you resolve the Aro danger in one more chapter? Great update by the way.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm trying to do just that. hehehe let's see if I suceed. hehehe
Thanks! ;D
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
wow he left though. jackass
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! ;)
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
ok i love that she is making him work for it. for his reaction and then lack of contact for so long, this strong bella can bring him to his knees. happy thoughts :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
i am so glad his head is out of his ass! great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Beach Ball
funny. a score of 18 on a scale of 10
Author's Response:
Thanks...
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Ladies Luncheon
Esme. A very sneaky mother in law but a beautiful person. I am glad that she is going to try with Jane. I also hope she gets over her pretentiousness when it comes to the wedding.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland
L - I think you did a fine job. You just took Alice a little further into her snobbery than Stephanie did. I am amazied that this is her attitude at this point in the story, but in some ways it totally makes sense especially after her growing up with Esme and Jane. I wonder what she will think when Esme tries to make nice to Jane. Plus/But her whole Bella is a devious money hungry victim. Wow, I would expect that maybe - maybe from a bitchy stranger but for her to now conclude that is what Bella is, is kind of shocking. Great insight. Great addition to the story.
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!
Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards. See banners below.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Workouts & Sex Drinks
Great chapter. I know everything must come to an end but you have done amazing things with this story. I love it and I love these characters. I can't wait for hte next chapter. keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I don't think I'll ever be able to let these characters go.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows
This may be the first time I have ever cried when reading about a weddng. But you have made me love these characters. You did everything so well.. the wedding, the vows, the music, and the first time. Congratulations on this beautiful chapter.
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Outtake - Magnum Farce
Perfect. Loved that Em was finally a victim and I laughed, but they need to get him good at least once more before you end this little gem. Get Rosalie in on it. She is hte one that holds the power.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class
I just found your story and I have enjoyed it immensly. Your characters are easy to like and fun. Keep up the great work. I have a feeling more dark times are ahead, but you have given me faith in the characters that I know love and goodness will win.
Author's Response:
i believe in HEA, no matter what. But..just like real life there are always sad or angsty things that happen. Thanks very much!
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home
Loved the ending. I am glad you didn't leave us hanging. Where it would have been a scary ending, you made it into a teary ending for me. I love these characters. Keep up the great job with LRM and VV.
Author's Response:
thank you so much for you very kind words. Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises
loved it, loved it loved IT!!! it wa s a fun chapter and I like how excited both of them were. Keep em coming.
Author's Response:
i will...the next one is almost ready to go. Thanks!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds
loved the chapter. I like how she finally felt safe and her feelings have been awakened. Laters to you. Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response:
more is coming. Thanks!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
You made me cry at the end too.
Author's Response:
I hope it was a good cry...not a bad cry. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots
So sweet. You are doing an amazing job with this romance. Can't wait for Jill to get hers.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words
this chapter was needed. i loved the wedding planning. great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
Shuttling from Seattle to Forks - wow what a commute. love the interaction again by skyping between these two. I also like how flirty they are getting. Geri and the bus, made me lol.
Author's Response:
i know....I want to be on the party bus with Emmett!! Thanks! glad you liked it.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks
through tear filled eyes I applaud you for another amazing chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you so much..that was very sweet. more to come soon!
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Reality Shows & Apparitions
Wow great cliffie. Loved the meeting witht the publisher. Can't wait for the old girlfriend story and the road trip.
Author's Response:
his meeting with Meghan is told in detail in the latest chapter of LRM. He will also tell Bella about it in the next V&V...just not as detailed. Thanks!
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations
I loved the happy times they had. I don't like that E pushed B away like that. Does he doubt that she belives him? I think everyone who knows E knows he isn't the dad. So I really need to see this from E's POV because there has to be something that we don't know. Anyway, we all know that men suck sometime.
Author's Response:
he's freaking out over anything that can hurt bella...as usual. next LRM just posted. next V&V soon. Thanks!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox
So much in this amazing chapter - conflict, resolution, wild turkey, forgiveness, kissing, and Squeezebox? Great chapter. I can't wait until LRM is caught up and we move VV along. I love this story.
Author's Response:
i got a little sidetracked with the outtake i posted today...but still working on LRM. Thanks!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass
Holy crap. I knew you were going to do something like this but I was not ready after all the sweetness. I will be wringing my hands waiting for your next update.
Author's Response:
hopefully you've seen the new chap...although TWCS has been fail this week with notifying people. Thanks!
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags
Wow, great chapter. I cant wait to read it from E's POV.
Author's Response:
hopefully by now you've read the latest LRM. I've posted a sneak peek of the next V&V on the blog and facebook page. Thanks very much!
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises
I am ready for a few chapters of fluff. You have brought Bella so far. From the broken girl to someone whose strength is admired not only by those who love her but by those who only know of her. Please keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
thanks so much! next chapter is up.
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches
I was seriously hoping you would have the fab foursome on Oprah all together. Bring it on. Great chapter. I thought the calendar would get a bigger reaction but maybe in LRM?
Author's Response:
hopefully the reaction in LRM was to your liking....Edward thinks about it a LOT if that's any indication ..lol. Thanks!
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke
I really liked the train - too bad the paps had to invade but they still had a good time. Does her nightmare foreshadow another hurdle she has to overcome?
Author's Response:
only to the extent that Bella has not fully addressed what she's been through. She's been pulling a bit of a Scarlet O'Hara by pushing thoughts of her ordeal aside to think about later. We'll see what happens. Thanks so much, glad you liked it.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road
Oprah was great -but I would love to hear more about James reaction to Oprah canning his show - can you accomodate that?
Author's Response:
we shall see. We don't know exactly what she is going to do yet...but we will definitely see James again. Wow...that was vague wasn't it? lol sorry. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Teepees & Tribal Law
great chapter. congrats on the awards!
Author's Response:
Thanks! glad you liked it.
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks
you write suc h amazing thiings - have you experienced all of these bachelor/bachelorette party fun things? great job.
Author's Response:
hahaha nope. I'm embarrassing enough to my family when i drink...they have to keep a leash on me in Vegas. *snicker* I've never been to a wild bachelorette party...so a lot of this came right out of my head. This chapter in LRM is even crazier...all my imagination i'm afraid. Thanks!
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Fireworks & Dream Homes
Again, you make me love these characters more with every chapter. Great job.
Author's Response:
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time
you made me laugh and you made me cry and laugh again. Great chapter. Really.
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video
yes evil great chapter though. I hope the hurrican gods miss you.
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Tropical Sands & Blue Lagoons
Don't read if you don't want lemons. Really? I think the only reason I read stories is for the occasional lemons. Seriously good job. I love how you have developed these characters and thier love.
Author's Response: thanks very much! well...the lemons are what they are right? they've been waiting so long...i think they deserve a lemon-filled honeymoon. Glad you liked it!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics
A nice chapter. I love how they trust each other.
Author's Response:
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Time Warps & Slow Motion
great 3 chapter update. I caNT BEGIN TO TELL YOU HOW MUCH I ENJOY YOUR story. it is so well done. I cant wait for a sequel. i love these characters! happy new year!
Author's Response:
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Blessed Events & One Little Year
Anne - This story has been a joy to read from beginning to end and trust me when I say I plan on reading the whole thing through from the very beginning soon. Thank you for bringing these amazing characters into my rahter bland and boring life. I love your writing. Thank goodness for fanfic.
Vicki - Madison WI
Author's Response: Finally! I am able to get my review responses to show up! I've been responding to reviews for months and they weren't showing. There was one little setting in my author profile which needed to be changed. I feel dumb. lol. Thanks so much Vicky! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping to post the future take sometime today.
EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.
Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77199
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
Actually I really enjoyed these chapters from E's POV. Great update. I love these characters.
Author's Response:
wow...even with the peen refs? You're an awesome reader! lol Thanks!
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star
YOu always make E's POV so intriging. Great chapter. Love these characters. Enjoyed the E and Father Pat chat. I think he needed it.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! next V&V just posted.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
I really was curious about the phone call and Ess thoughts. I love that we are all caught up.
Author's Response:
we are caught up now...i just posted chap 58 of LRM...now back to V&V. Thanks so much!
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After
Oh dear god, I wondered what happened when he got the photo. So sweet.
Author's Response:
lol..poor jasper. Thanks!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated
No need to beg. I think you showed E's emotions well. The cop was just a jerk. Wow. I love how everyone rallied. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
next chap is up..i digress into silliness for a bit of it. Thanks!
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy
Shameless confession, I ended up voting for you in several categories. Wow Oprah herself. Cool reveal.
Author's Response:
Thanks much! I am very far behind responding to these, I apologize.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)
ONG - these gusy will have hangovers that they will remeber for life. Great Chapter.
Author's Response:
haha...true! Thanks , glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Boys Will Be Boys
you make me smile!
Author's Response:
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 54: A Love Worth Waiting For
Wow, I seriously want a redo of my honeymoon because I am pretty sure you just wrote a hotter story than my wedding night. No, wait I know you did. Great job. Loved the emotion and closeness these two share.
Author's Response: believe me, it was hotter than mine too. lol. especialy since hubs caught a stomach virus as the wedding reception... spent a lot of time hugging the toilet. during the honeymoon.. i laugh now...well actually I laughed then as well. Thanks!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 55: A Trip to Paradise for the Newly Wed
Oh, you made me tear up at the end. I love how much E loves her.
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389620
Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...
Well it was certainly hot. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...
OMG that was an amazingly hot chapter. Great job.
Date: 18 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
Kraz - Amazing chapter. Too bad real life has to get in the way of the fun things. Thanks for posting anyway.
Author's Response:
IKR...I'd love to sit around writing all day! *sighs whistfully* I'm just glad that you guys find the chapters are worth waiting for! Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!
Krazi
xoxo
FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!
Hope to see you soon!
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...
Krazi - I just caught up on the story. Well, its smoking hot. great plot and great E & B.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18! Krazi xoxo
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Nicely done. B seems very unsure of herself though. not the playroom stuff but the abandonement issues.
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
K - great chapter. I am so in for more adversity. Bring it babe!
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...
Welcome back. I wonder who he called? Mmmmmmmm.
Author's Response:
First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:
Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”
My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.
Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!
He was right there!
Right fucking there!
Suddenly, I felt overdressed.
My clothes felt too tight, constricting.
All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.
I blame that bitch, Eve!
Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.
What?
No!
Give it to me!
Don’t tease me!
Pleaseeeeeee!
At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.
One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.
He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.
Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.
Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.
Right?
Wrong...
Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.
Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”
Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.
Hey, don’t judge me...
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...
Mwah! Great update. Worth the wait.
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 A Moment of Clarity...
I was thinking that Bella was the target but it's really Edward. Interesting. Can't wait for more.
Third story in FBI saga: Bella is lured back into the FBI when one of the team is hurt. Will she be able to find the perp before they strike again? Cannon coupling, language, and lemons. AU&NC-17
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116669 Read Count: 63904
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
more puzzle pieces - i love them and dread them at tye same time you TEASE ;-)
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Yes i am still confused. This plot is very much a mystery stll but i am sure you will blow my mind once you reveal it.
I am very concerned about bella, shouldnt she be a little better now and realize she wasnt weak but strong to survive?
Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Interesting. Keep it coming BB - the wait is worth it. take care.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
wow great start on a story. I understand that B is broken, but she seems to be overly so in this segment. I thought she was doing a good job of moderating her feelings at the ned of the last story. Here she is off the deep end.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Well, I didn't see that coming. Great cliffie. I hope E and B get on the same page. They work well together and to have this distance between them hurts not only them but thier work.
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I am patient. Very confused over the trouble that Bella and Edward are having. And I can't beleive that she told Edward it was his fault. Please don't let them drift too far.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Have faith and trust. It will be okay:)
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Great job BB. I am excited about this road trip. I don't like how Em is right now. I hope those left back at the office are safe.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
BB - you did a great job explaining B's pain in this chapter. If they are dealing with such an organized group of bad guys, should they really be calling home and stuff?
thanks for the update. happy new year!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Amazingly well done. With such high emotions will be able to think. Clearly and solve he case?
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
This was a good chapter. The team arrived and they actually started analyzing data. Granted, they didn't get anywhere. Why are they just looking at files? Why arent they interviewing people? Plus, how big is this rat hole? It sounds absolutely suffocating yet, large.
Great chapter. I have been sick most of the summer too. So, take care.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Wow. Bella needs to show Edward that she loves him. Great job. I love bitchy in charge Bella. Really these people asked for their help yet they keep withholding.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Wow. Great chapter cyhanks for the update and congratulations on the latest book you are so talented. Merry Christmas.
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
diabolical. yiu gave us a bunch of puzzle pieces but I will ned help putting the puzzle together.
Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman. A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH
First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning.
image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138749
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
ok so did hey figure out what cauased her miscarriages. I figured he would be a lot mroe careful with erh tahn this chapter showed. Also, why would he subject her to seeing Jacob when that could potentially add more stress to her. I would rather he saw Jacob himself and then told Bella about it later. I would hate for something to happen to the babies. now if I ignore the miscarriage potential, then I would have to say your lemons are extremely HOT. Great chapter besides my obsessive worry.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
No, Carlisle is waiting on her records. Bella doesn't remember because she was so distraught, and the Doctors mainly dealt with Jacob. Edward always keeps her pregnancy in the forefront of his mind. I think in future chapters it will be more clear. Bella wants to talk everything out with Jacob even if she is apprehensive. I think you'll also see her convey that more clearly later. Just so you don't worry she will not miscary, but that's not to say that there won't be other problems. :)
B
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I hate that everyone has to put so much pressure on B. Tanya (really couldn't she take the hint - not to mention she should have talked with Edward around since she is supposedly his friend). Then the kids and the disrespectful way they reacted to her and hen Edward not letting it go, and then of course Alice with the surprises. HHmm.. maybe I am in a bad mood - I will have to reread later ;-)
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Wow, he is going to be mad at Bella for Tanya's insistence that B make a decision. Great chpater. Congrats on the nomination.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
the last few chapters were very well done. I liked how real you made B's experiences being a mother. I also loved the sexy sexy times you ended with.
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
beautiful ending. great job.
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124870
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
wow, great job. so what happened with the baby? she felt it? Really Charlie gave no reason why he wanted her. unbelievable. great great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, "quickening" is the traditional term for the first time a mother feels the baby move.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Wow. I can't believe Renee showed up. I am so happy the Bella saved the voicemails. Great chapter. I can feel Bella's terror.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, Edward will be able to explain Renee in the next chapter.
Edward and Bella finally found their way back though the darkness that nearly consummed them. Will they be prepared for the wildest ride yet? Canon couples, AH and NC-17 for the usual. Third story in the My Boys series.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86867 Read Count: 38657
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
oh no. please let all 3 of the monsters be ok. good marcus talk. great vhapter. do Es and carlisle know?
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
good job.
i am always worried about bella and the babies
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Bb that was a beautiful chapter. Do the others know they are going to move after the babies are bigger?
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Mwah. great job with these characters. Her boys indeed. Thank you.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Good update. Is that what it's like to be pregnant? Emotions all over? wow!
Date: 18 May 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
BB - thank you so much for keeping the boys ok for another chapter. great job. so what is going on with the siblings - why were they all on at night? Also, B and Ed need to tell the others about Vermont. Great chapter.
Date: 17 May 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Mwah! thannks for the chapter. take care.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Great story. I am so glad I happened to run across you. I have spent the weekend reading your stories! Great stuff.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great chapter - there was little drama and I needed that.
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Happpy new year to you too. I love it when you write these two alone. Yeah, I love the other characters too, but these two together are so sweet and they can figure the world out together without the distractions of the others.
I am looking forward to the book!
vic
Date: 22 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
BB - loved the chapter. it is kind of refreshing reading a story wheere b and e aren't rich and have money problems like the rest of us.
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
BB - great chapter. I love the sharing of Edards feelings towards Bella with a stranger. Great job. The ending. Heartbreaking.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I would love it if they moved. Edward seems so tired. You are going to give me angst again soon aren't you ?
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Great chapter. The job offer is intriguing.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I don't like your cliffy - makes me cringe. Great chapter. I have never understodod the other couples' views that they have this right to tell E and B what to do. I mean that is why E and B moved to where they did, but the other siblings are still very much in thier business. Good job.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
He has to be honest with her. Great chapter. Keep up the great work.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Beautiful chapter. Great job.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I am so happy they are expecting help. I am more than sure that Renee would help too. Great chapter. I was worried she would really be in labor and lose one of htem.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Even though Bella is a doctor she seems to be callous regarding her pregnancy always constantly pushing to the extremes. Good chapter though. I like that Edward is slightly less stressed about money. You are definitely keeping this real.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
you scare me somuch with this storyline. seriously my bp is rising.