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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255046
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

carlisle & esme surprise me a little. besides some many family members involved in the lifestyle, edward is always so respectful in everything he does & really never purposely flaunts his choice in front of them. absolutely loved, however, esme coming to the beach with the braids. i also love that edward can call her nahtotse so freely, seems comforting to both of them. yea to the handling of jessica. and well, bella wouldn't be bella if she didn't make mistakes now & then. afterall this is a learning experience. if it came automatic to everyone it wouldn't be so special when she masters being in the right frame of mind all the time. thanks for all your hard work on this great story.

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I am enjoying this story so much. You're doing an amazing job showing how the abuse Bella suffered is now influencing her thoughts & actions. I love how her & Edward are finding their way in this realtionship since it's is new to both of them. They seem to be building a solid base, which will result in the HEA we all want for them. Thank you for sharing this story, can't wait for more (although, I'm dreading the tip to Forks almost as much as Bella - LOL).

Author's Response:

Forks sould be an evental experience ...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

omg, from hot & sweaty to sweet & tender. loved it.

Author's Response:

Edward is muti-demenisonial ....thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

loved the revelations in this chapter. smiled soo big when he was looking at rings!

Author's Response:

smiles of that too...BTW i sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you for the review

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

i thought that was what was goingon with leah. i'm glad to see you address the perceptions of others who know of the type of situation bella was in but have never actually experienced it so they just can't completely understand it. i love, love how supportive edward is, and that charlie sees how good edward is to bella. i hope at some point charlie will find out what james did & of course, i hope james gets exactly what he deserves!

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

wow, james is so digusting. i really hope charlie finally finds out the truth & shoots him. please!!!!

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

it was great for edward to understand bella's conncections with her friends. i can't wait to see what maggie has to say to bella. i hope bella draws from the strenght of her relationship with edward & stays strong if maggie gets tough.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading i have a small teaser for you....

After Bethany got everyone’s order Sue leaned over to talk to the table “You all look tired, what time did you go to bed last night?”

“What time did we go to bed or what time did we go to sleep?” Leah asked smugly raising her eyes in my direction.

“You couldn’t sleep?” Sue was concerned but Kim couldn’t resist “No there was a lot of yelling going on”

“Lots of yelling and banging” Emery added.

Before the conversation with Maggie Kim and Leah were teasing me in the restroom about how loud Edward and I were. So that meant that everyone else must have heard us too, which should have been evident by the laughter at the table. My face heated up as I tried to control my embarrassment while Edward just winked at me. Charlie on the other hand had no idea what was so funny came to his own conclusion. “I guess the kids on the beach must have been putting up quite a raucous if you heard it all the way back at the house”  

Thank god Charlie is so oblivious

“Oh yeah it was a raucous alright, as a matter of fact there was two of them”

“Two?” Emery questioned looking at Kim “We must have missed the second one”

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

oh, i love these two, their connection is so intense. you are doing such a great job with this story. can't wait for james to get caught paying someone (that cop?) to spy on her - edward was entirely too civilized towards james the last time they met, he needs to feel the full wrath of messing with edward's bella. i also can't wait for t hem to get back to the club. hope this story never ends! lol

Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

great chapter. i agree that edward did a good job with jasper, i'm so glad they had that talk & that edward let carlisle know where he stands on his future with bella & his career.
can't wait to find out what alice & rose do to emmett & even more anxious to know about the call to jane.
don't worry, you'll never lose me by writing too many chapters, i could read about these two forever! lol =)

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: clair61213 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

so romantic. perfect that you are showing how strong their bond is right before they go face the rest of the world. love this story