Reviews by Scrawl
The Fence by Elvirina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Kenna is incarcerated and trying to survive the harsh streets roamed by rapist and vampires. It is a hard life and when she loses her friend Jayson, she suddenly finds herself in the midst of danger. She is trapped in a vampire layer. Living amongst the vampires she discovers the truth about the monsters and having feelings she deemed impossible.

Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19156 Read Count: 395
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Scrawl Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story. Now I'm a Twihard, but this is better. Kenna is everthing Bella Swan's not. Kenna has a personality, Kenna is aware of the danger, but most of all Kenna's not a love sick puppy. The only thing I'm not to fond on his how these vampires came to be, but at least they don't sparkle.



Author's Response: Hi Scrawl Thanks for the review... I really appreciate it. But aren't we all twihards? I know I am, but I am also discovering there are more than Bella swans in this world. When writing my heart and soul is in the Original fiction world. I wish more of those who write FF would spend their time and energy plotting more than just hunky, sex god Edwards or doe eyed Bella's. But hey... that is where the readers are, so once in a while you have to oblidge. As for the theory of how my vamps came to be, it was part of the challange to give the vamps your own twist, so I made my imagination run wild for a bit. Some love it others hate it, though, I don't think that is the important thing - I normally just appreciate if someone is willing to think outside of the box and take a risk. So that is what I tried to do. If you are willing to give another one of my stories a go, check out my blog. I can't promise there isn't a love sick puppy, but I promise you it is different from anything else you've read. I let my twisted and sick mind run wild again and my blog is the result of that. Thanks for the love and stay tuned for the last chapter