Reviews by DanceWithMeTonight
Summary:

Breaking Dawn from Leah's POV. Rated NC-17 for very naughty language.


Prelude: "She was pregnant? I snorted out a callous laugh. Here I was, a mutated genetic dead end. Having kids for me was completely out of the question. And this leech loving whiny little runt vampire wannabe was going to have a kid! Life is completely and utterly unfair."


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 220879 Read Count: 4449
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Jun 2012
Reviewer: saritacris Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Outtake 1: Dear Mom

Oh my goodness. I swear you are on your way to becoming my idol! You have written two incredibly wonderful stories about my favorite character and I absolutely love them! You capture her the exact way that I see her. You have a gift. Now it's just Seth that needs a happy ending hahah



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you. I appreciate the support.

I think Seth is a happy camper in general. He doesn't need a happy ending because he's happy no matter what. You don't have to imagine what he needs for a happy ending because he already has it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has a major crush on a major star, Edward Cullen. They have an obsession with the same game. Can they connect through Words with Friends and become more than that?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 322374 Read Count: 90808
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: saritacris Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Name

I'm so obsessed with this story!! But I can't read chapter 13 :( I feel so lost! Help!!



Author's Response:

I have no idea what the problem is, they're all uploaded.  It's over on FF.net under this same name if you can't read it.

Reviewer: saritacris Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Tilted

I don't understand what is happening. Some chapters just won't show up. I don't know what to do



Author's Response:

Contact TWCS or go to fanfiction.net and read it there!  Sorry hon!

Summary:

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It only took death for him to realize how much he loved her." For anyone who ever wondered "what-if" for Leah and Jacob. "What-if" Jacob had never broken away? "What-if" he hadn't imprinted? "What-if" life was completely different?

For all those fans who wondered what kind of twisted reality Leah Clearwater and Jacob Black could have lived had imprinting never come into play in Breaking Dawn. Has all of your favorite characters, wolf pack and vampires.

NC-17 for language and suggestive themes.

-Shoutout and thanks to JaneJoke on Twilighted for the banner.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jacob/OC, Leah/OC
Genre: Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206338 Read Count: 3115
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Jun 2012
Reviewer: saritacris Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Outtake 5: Sex Ed Sue

I just wanted to say that this is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Amazing job :)



Author's Response:

I greatly appreciate your kind words. Thank you.

Summary:

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In Breaking Dawn Alice and Jasper disappear, but we never see what happens on their journey.  Here's a brief look at what may have happened...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1719 Read Count: 143
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2013 Updated: 03 Jun 2013
Reviewer: DanceWithMeTonight Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Search

This is great! For a first attempt you've really manage to get a lot of detail and new information in. It felt a little rushed but I think you should really continue and see where you can go from here. I'd love to read anything you happen to share



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your encouragement!  Honestly the idea had been bouncing around in my head for quite a while until in one night of insomnia I started writing at 3:30am.  It all came out in one blast.  I can totally see why you felt it rushed.  I was concerned about getting too bogged down in Alice's visions and dragging.  I guess I went the other way ;)  Meh.  You have to start somewhere, right?