Reviews by peachtreegirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89851
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Rising From the Ashes

Yay!!! Awesome update! Thank you for it!! Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Thoughts and prayers are with you. It's  so difficult losing a loved one. I lost my mother this year after her 3 year battle with Ovarian Cancer. Tough year. But we must forge on and  live our lives to the fullest for ourselves, our families, and our lost loved ones.

Will be awaiting the next update.

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapt 30 The Way We Were

I was just thinking about this fic! Thank you for the great update! Now that Bella and Edward are stronger than ever together, they can face anything!

Love those two connecting again in the most intimate of ways! LMAO that Charlie caught them literally with their pants down!! ;-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366320
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Pulling All The Right Strings

Finally!!! I am so glad that Edward finally knows why Bella acted the way she did and that Em's to blame!! It was funny though when Bella told Edward, because I shouted out "Yes, finally" and my kids came running wondering what was going on. I  think they think I'm a little crazy!! LOL

I am so glad that Bella just can't leave Edward, and that Edward won't let her go without one hell of a fight! Just glad that all the truths are out there! Well except for this whole bun(s) in the oven thing! Totally blew me away with that one! Definetly took me by surprise!

I can't wait to hear the convo that Edward has with Emmett!! I am so ready for everyone to kick his ass!! Probably starting with Rose because she is physically able too!!

Well I for one will be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next update and how it's going to go!! Thanks for this awesome one!

peach



Author's Response:

Hey, Peach!  I love that your kids came running!  Shows they care! LOL

Nope! These two are connected and no amount of distance or time is going to erase that. They have a hard road ahead, but if anyone can manage it, it's them!

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: My Cross to Bear

Thanks for the update! Got to love Jazz!! I really hope that B opens up to him soon!! Because Em needs an ass kicking!! 

Loved Charlie and E's convo! I know that good things come to those who wait, and I know things will get better with some time.

So, since this whole NumbNuts/BarelyBreathing thing started I really have to wonder if it is truly an E/B thing! I just think it is B & E without them realizeing it, yet! JMO

Will be awaiting the next update!

peach 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Searching for a Reason

Argh!! What a cliffy!! Feel like I'm hanging by my fingertips!!  Wonder how B's going to react?

Have to love Jazz and Alice. Being such good friends/family to both B&E even if B doesn't realize it. And so glad that Jazz is so intuitive. He is so close to the truth it's scary. I just wonder if Em even remembers all that he said to B? Rose did mention about him freaking out on everyone and not realizing it. Well should definetly be interesting when it all comes out!! Though I still think he needs his ass kicked!!!!!

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update!! Please make it soon!!

peach



Author's Response:

Good catch with Rose's comment. ;)  And Jasper really is so much closer to the truth than he thinks.  All I can say is that when he does find out the truth, Emmett better watch his back.

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

Wow!! Great chapter!!!  Poor Bella, all those mixed up feelings , and add in those pregnancy hormones, she really has to be strong and a fighter to get through this!! And Rose just ROCKED!! Such sage advice, so glad it came from Rose, because Bella knows she tells it like it is.

Wasn't too sure about Edward talking to Charlie first, but understood he was trying to be a "man" and taking responsibility, and also telling Charlie that he needs his help in convincing Bella she is not alone!!

So glad that all the grandpadre's know, and so totally agree with not telling Alice yet!! I really hope the New Orleans trip helps them along. I know things won't be magically resolved, but hopefully Bella gets more of a "spark" and gets on track to fully trusting Edward  in the future. I have no doubt about Edward proving and making everything work out ok for them all!!

Can't wait for the next update!! Thanks for this amazing one!!

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 56: You Found Me

I know that I haven't posted in awhile (shame on me) but real life has been a whirlwind lately! So I got some extra time on my hands now and I am doing the "Happy Dance"!!  I just knew it!! I just knew that Numb was Edward! I am so glad that Bella now knows and realizes she can see things "differently" now that she really remembers Numbs views on his relationship woes!!  I just can't wait till Edward finds out that Bella is BB!!  I really think that things are going to get better and keep getting better from now on!! 

I for one can't wait for the next update. Thanks for this one!!

peach



Author's Response:

Things are definitely going to be looking up from here on out! I think you all will really enjoy next week's chapter.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995702
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

What's a great story without a chapter ending doozy of a cliffhanger! It of course just keeps us on the edge of our seats wanting more, more, more!!

Loved the update! It's nice to see Edward being an "adult" in situations where he'd normally have temper tantrum. Bella and Edward are coming into their own with their first "grown-up" relationship! Yay for them, though I know that things won't always flow so nicely!

Thank you Edward for taking Jasper and Alice and giving them both a "swat" to get their childish asses back into adulthood! 

Absolutely love Paul!

And where in the hell does Billy think he has the right to press charges against anyone, let alone Bella, when Jacob helped terrorize her and the others! GAH!

i have faith though it will all work out, because you wouldn't have it any other way! ;)

Update soon! Thanks for this one!

peach 



Author's Response:

hey Peach - thank you and I'm sending you some love xoxo

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

Love this fic!! Interview was great!! Can't wait for the Auction and the reactions of everyone!!

Pittsburgh all the way baby!! Go Steelers!!

peach



Author's Response:

:) Thank you!  I'm glad you liked the interview.  The auction is up next and I'm very much looking forward to it as well!

I'm rooting Steelers too!  Let's hope so! ;)

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Loved it!!! I was laughing so hard when Esme annouced Em, and with his ouburst of "No way he's bigger!" Had tears in my eyes and wierd looks from the kids from laughing so hard! Can't wait till B&E get home!  ;)  And how beautiful are they together dancing. I just could picture it!

Thanks for the update!! Will be waiting for the next one!!

Go Steelers!!

peach



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you loved it!  Emmett was not sure what the Zeus thing meant but then Jas had to tell him and he had to yell. hehe I love making you laugh, so that pleases me!

The evening is only just beginning.  Glad you're excited for more!

Go Steelers indeed :)

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

I am sitting here laughing my ass off, tears rolling down my face!! Absolutely freakin' love Em!! He totally cracks me up!! Can't wait to see what comes next!!

Looking forward to the next update!!

peach



Author's Response:

Love hearing that!  I do!  Em is such a blast to write and I love that you all enjoy him like I do!  Thanks so much for the review, peach!

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: All or Nothing

~Sqeals~ Not only one update but two!!! Loved them both so much!!! And hot damn, E&B are soooo... HOT!!! Love them and this fic! So much so, I went back and read the whole thing again! 

WooHoo!! ~Going to the chapel and their gonna get married~ I just can't wait!! And so loved Eddie's bachelor party!  Just hope nothing is going to go wrong because the psycho Gianna is out there somewhere!! Though I know nothing can ruin their wedding, because all that matters to them is being Mr. and Mrs. Cullen at the end of the day!

Hope to see another update soon!! Will be waiting anxiously!!

peach

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254673
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great update! Love the insight that now has Bella thinking. Communication is definetly the key (to any relationship I might add!).  

Just wonder what's coming? All Bella's talk about something taking Edward away from her, he reassuring her that he is there for a lifetime, you've got something brewing up with all the little teasers within. I just can't wait!

Thanks for the new chapter! Will be anxiously awaiting the next one!

peach



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow! Newbie to this site and just got done reading this from the the beginning, and may I say this is absolutely f**ktastic!!  This is so totally up there with my #1 favorites!! Can't wait to see what you have in store for Bella and Edward next, and us too!  ;)

Will be anxiously awaiting for the next update from the edge of my seat! Thanks again for this amazing fic!!

peach



Author's Response:

Well welcome to the story, I hope you continue to enjoy it ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a  teaser for you...lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for the teaser! Now I really am anxious to read the next update!

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Great update!  I personally loved all of it and was no way upset with anything that happened between Edward and Bella. Loved the first "public" O!! It was more than just between Dom and sub, it was between two people who also love one another very much. And Edward singing to her - that's just enough to enduce major panty dropping!!  ;)

So what trouble is brewing their way I wonder? Not just from Bella's past, but from seemingly some vindictive people who can't handle that Edward is now off the market so to speak.

I guess we will be getting more answers soon!

Am looking forward to Bella's rewards! Just hope Edward gets her panic under control before it's to late.

Thanks for the update!

peach



Author's Response:

I would like a dance like that...how do I sign up for those lessons...lol ... thanks for reading ..lml

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, just read this from the beginning! Thought I already did, but then realized I never started this one yet. Absolutely love it!! Know more s**t is coming their way, but they can handle it! Think Jake is more involved with what happened with Charlie and other things that went down! Seems to me he might of thought that offing Charlie would deaden the deal between the Cullens and the Swans, which happened anyway!

 

Will definitely be anxiously awaiting the next update, that's for sure! Loved Bella and Edwards game of catch! The ending results were orgasmic!! ;)

peach



Author's Response:

So happy you're liking this story. =) I appreciate your thoughts on this. Thanks! ;D

I'll try to update very soon...I hope. 

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40308
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Chat With Edward

HaHa! Had to chuckle about Infantilism because I actually did see that on HBO's Real Sex!  Love that show! Just wish they did a more updated version of it.

peach

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, I knew it was coming and boy was it a doozie! Yikes!  I actually got teary eyed thinking about how this is going to kill Bella. Edward Cullen fucked up royally. 

I do want to see what's coming, but also want to pull the covers over my head and pretend nothing happened. Will be anxiously awaiting the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  It means a lot since I'm not getting as much feedback as I had hoped for the story.

I would suggest continue reading the story with the covers pulled up to your neck - it's gonna get a hell of a lot worse before it gets better...and I'm not even at the halfway point of this story yet ;)

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

WooHoo!! An update!! And what a great one it is!

My heart just bleeds for Edward, but at the same time I'd like to kick his ass for messing up the best thing in his life. Though it wouldn't seem like it, Edward is so insecure for being such a kickass Rock Star! And even though Em's advice before wasn't the best, his latest is something Edward needs to follow. And as much as I love Edward, he deserves getting cold-cocked by Jakob. It's sad really, but Edward is losing everyone around him. He needs to straighten out his life for him, and then go from there. 

Thanks for this update! Will be anxiously awaiting the next one!! Hopefully it's soon!! hint-hint ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)  You're so dead-on with everything you said in your review and how I feel.  I was actually getting so annoyed with Edward as I was writing him this past chapter that I just wanted to punch him - so I made Jacob do it instead haha ;)  Things will start to turn around in the next 2 chapters - Edward's going to get that wake-up call soon.  I'm starting to write Chapter 22 now.  It's Bella's POV, which is always easier for me to write.  Hopefully it won't take too long!

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, definitely a tear jerker there!! My heart is breaking for Bella and Edward. Especially Bella. Her whole world came totally crashing down on her, and who is she really left with standind by her side? And Edward!! Gah!! Why do people drag themselves down that way? I mean he couldn't admit what he did, and then to lie straight to B's face about using! What was he thinking!! As you can tell, I am also furious with him and everyone else who helped keep the lie, though ultimately the blame lies with E because he threw a tantrum because B couldn't be there when he wanted her to be! 

Well I will be climbing up that hill waiting  and watching for the growth they will both need to come back to one another again! Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

It's interesting how both of their worlds' are crashing down - Bella has no one and Edward has everyone but is pushing them all away.  Don't worry, Bella won't be so alone ;)

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yay!! Another update!! And a great one at that!! The meeting of Bella and Edward after so long was perfect. And Bella singing her song after Edward announcing her, genius! Though I am so ready for James to get his!! Grrrr!!

So glad that Bella is following her own advice for Jake! Can't wait to see the next E&B meet! Hopefully soon!! ~hint-hint~

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great update! I was just thinking about this fic and am just excited to see an update! 

Love that Edward knows that he has a problem, that it's his fault, and went to rehab. I really hope that he stays the course, which I am sure he will, not just for himself, but to be the man Bella deserves.

So glad that Bella and Alice are "back together" and that Em and Bella talked. Happy that Em told Edward about Bella and the hospital. And Jake is truly a friend to Bella telling her she has to just be "Her" at the VMAs. 

And of course you left us with one doozy of a cliffhanger! Bella and Edward face to face. I really hope that they both get through this meeting and realize that they both really need to talk to  one another.

Can't wait to see what happens next!! Hopefully soon!! ;)

Congrats to you and your hubby! Hope all is well! Hope to here from you soon! ~coughs~update~coughs~ no pressure or anything!! LOL

Thanks again for the update!

peach



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  Yes, this chapter was definitely the turning point for both of them.  They're still going to have their own struggles individually (and of course trying to come back together), but at least they're both starting to take back control of their lives.

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thank you so much for the update! This is one of my favs, and I was just thinking about this fic last week! I for one know how busy RL can be, seeing I have 3 kiddies, two of them teenagers yet to boot! And me time? What's that? HaHa! By the way, congrats on the additions to your family! 

So onto RD,FS. So Aro isn't as stupid as James thinks, as I feel he is on to him and one Mr. Denali. And can I just say that I am so glad that Bella is going on tour with The Volturi. I really feel that this is the best thing to happen for Edward and Bella. Help them close the past chapters of their lives, and help them write a new one, hopefully together! 

Thanks again for this update! Really hope to see another one soon!

peach

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Passionate Dance

Great Chapter!! Loved the teasingly seductive dance!! Guess it did it's job!! The  passion sparked one hot fire, and what a way to wake up!!

Can't wait to see what happens next. Update again soon please!

peach

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56323
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Teach Your Children

Thanks for the update! So totally Bella and Alice and wedding planning! And Renee, tsk-tsk! Gotta love Charlie though! Great thinking!

Can't wait for some wedding bells and the "sooner than later"!! 

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! Glad you're enjoying the story. :) 

Sandra

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

Boy, oh boy I would so love to drop kick Jasper! He better know where the blame is placed here! And please, oh please Edward know that you are not at fault! Bella needs you now more than ever! I hope that Bella is going to be okay, not only for her sake, but for her whole family's.

Hey, can Alice whip Jasper's ass? After probably Sam & Emmett of course! 

You me now have me on the edge of my seat, gripping the edge, waiting for the next update! Please don't let us wait too long! Thanks for this excitingly amazing , if not a little scary now, one!

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Things

Thanks for the update! Loved how we see Edward and Bella growing in their relationship, because that's how one goes and developes into "every"thing! Especially since one was, repeat was known to do despicable things! 

Oh, and I so want to hear what Bella has to say to Emmett!

Thanks again for the update! Can't wait to see what happens next!

peach

La'arte Della Danza by llwarner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

Italian for the 'The Art of Dancing'. Bella Swan a veteran dancer, had plans to visit her dad before she left for school but something tragic happened that changed everything. Will she give up her dreams of school for something different or will La'arte Della Danza save her?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12105 Read Count: 1051
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2011 Updated: 10 Nov 2011
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loving this so far. Of course I love the meeting of E&B, and how normal instinct is taken over by something else! Can't wait to see how things develop between them.

Also would like to see Esme POV on how rude her family was towards Bella and her confronting them! JMO!

Will be looking forward to the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

Its funny that you mention the Esme POV. I had considered it, but it didn't feel right yet. So maybe further in the story I will do and Esme outtake. That could be fun! Thanks for reading and especially reviewing I love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Close Encounters

I figured he wasn't Seth's daddy. Great update! There is so much tension and conflict between those two, but I think they will eventually get it right! So Collin? I am thinking that he was one of his security detail and maybe gave his life to protect Assw- I mean Cullen. I am thinking that Edward didn't forget whatever it is and that Bella doesn't really have the full story. I guess I'll see if I'm right next time. Can't wait for the next update!!!

 

Also-fingers crossed for you and your "Seth". 

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation

Poor Bella! So glad she finally got that off her chest, but of course it just made Prezward more "interested" in her.  And after everything is revealed and talked about, hopefully Bella sees Edward in a better light, because even though he didn't think about it everyday, he never forgot about Brady. 

Can't wait for some answers in the next chapter! And can't wait till Edward reams Rose out! Will be anxiously awaiting the next update!

peach

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess

This story is just so beautiful. I literally fight the urge to cry it is so beautiful! The love that Bella has for Edward is beyond words, and so is Edward's towards Bella, though he needs to bring the wall down his guilt has built. 

I will be anxiously awaiting the next update. Please give us one soon! Thank you so much for this one!

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Now

Loved all the updates now that I've caught up! Edward should thank the heavens that he has people that love and care about him so much! I am just glad that he finally got his head out of his ass and realizes that he needs to be home on his own, with the help of Tyler making him take a good, hard look at the truth! 

I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update!

peach

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923029
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just re-read this from the beginning. It's definitely one that you can't stop reading, even though because of the graphic nature, you may want too. I do absolutely love this fic.

Now that James is dead (by Piper I fiction. pretty sure : sidenote- can't wait to see what she did to Peter and his wife from her POV! And what she has done to Aro) and the babies are here, I can't wait to see what happens next. To see how the disgusting house of cards of all those involved in that heinous way of life falls down. I hope that you will update this soon. I will be patiently awaiting. 

peach

 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ok, finally just for to read this up to date. It is absolutely amazing, even with the abuse that makes me want to cut a bitch!

It's nice to see Edward, Bella, Jasper, Alice, and Tanya becoming friends and allies. Definitely will help in the long run!

Thanks for giving us all this fic! Hope to see an update again soon!

peach



Author's Response:

Next chapter out on Tuesdays... I'll try to stick to Tuesdays for a while!

Summary:

 

 

Their music lifted you up, spun you around until you were out of breath and completely unhinged. The way it sank to your bones and tangled in your hair, yanking and tugging it, making you want to get down and dirty. It freed you to do the forbidden, the illicit, the dirtiest, most darkest fantasies. ExB UST Mature. Drug use


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8948 Read Count: 3124
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was fuck awesome! Are you sure you have to end it there? ;-)

Thanks for this great story/lemon/smut!

peach

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113782
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Boy, love that Alexis! She just lays it all out there! So the Cullens have an interloper, just wish that everyone noticing weird things would talk about them to each other!

So glad that Bella and Edward have reconnected and are dealing together. They are so strong like that.

Enjoyed Jasper's talk with Jackson, though I can't wait until Jack talks to Edward about it! And just wondering, since Nick cracked the code to the "dungeon" 😄, and then Bella felt that something was out of place there, does that mean that someone else has gotten access to it too? Hmm? Lots of questions swirling as you lead us on another fantastic journey! Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please!

peach 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just love this fic! The reconnection between Edward and Bella is glorious. 

Well I am hoping that soon someone will start putting the pieces together and realize the connections between all the weird things going on!

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update! Hope it's soon, and that thumb of yours is healing!

peach 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281021
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just added this to my favs, and low and behold, my prayers were answered! There was another update!! WooHoo! But now I have to wait for the next one. ~pouts~

Love how Edward and Bella are sticking it through together. And it is really what is best for Levi too. Definitely stronger together, than apart! Can't wait until the next update.

peach

Summary:

Bella and Edward were the very best of friends in High School but when Prom came their lives changed. Now nine years later they both struggle with the mistakes from their past that has separated them. Can they find one another and save their friendship? They need to forgive themselves before they can forgive each other. Rated M for adult themes including abuse.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158404 Read Count: 36867
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 15 Apr 2014
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yes!! Well I guess that goes to show Edward that controlled/uncontrolled environment, that Bella can handle herself. Hopefully he doesn't blow this by being an ass, and just lets Bella know how proud he is of her! And I bet Seth is going to be all smug now! As well he should be. Bella's got the power. Love it.

I know that there is more drama coming their way, with Jakob and probably other things, but I sure hope Edward comes clean about the tracking device in her necklace. I guess we all will see!

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update! Love this fic!

peach

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983102
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

That Bella better get her head out of her ass!! Edward loves her, and all she is doing is hurting herself and him with her stubborness. Keep being patient Edward! You and Bella are worth it!

Hope they have a great trip, that helps bring them closer together! Can't wait to read the next update!

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Go Edward! I wonder if Emmett will figure it all out come dinner and clubing. And i really don't want Bella or Edward interested in someone else, but wouldn't it be nice if Bella saw all the attention he may get from someone new. Hopefully it will kick her butt into action. And as much as Edward loves Bella, I really couldn't see him interested in anyone else, and it would break his heart to see her with anyone. I guess we will see!

Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next one!

peach 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Finally!! WooHoo! I am so glad that Edward got drunk and told Bella like it is, at least for him! Yeah Bella was upset, but nothing else was getting through to her! So glad that she realized what she was losing! And Edward now knows how deep her insecurities run. So now they can both work together for their relationship.

I know that you said there is more drama coming, but if Bella and Edward work together through it, I know they will stand strong!! Will be anxiously awaiting the next update!

peach

p.s. Absolutely love visiting your tumbler page! The pervy part of me can't get enough of it!! 😉

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Oh how I love seeing updates for this! Just love how Edward and Bella are sharing everything while cementing their relationship even more! I for one am feeling the "tension" between these two, but love the build up! When it all comes to head, it's going to be explosive! Can't wait! 

Thanks for the update! Will be anxiously awaiting the next one!

peach 

Haystack by AstridGreenEyes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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At the beginning, I didn’t know what was happening; I thought that it has to be a bad joke. Now, the only thing I know is that I have to be quiet. There are too many of them out in the alley. If they heard me, it could be my end. My mind started to wander to my friends. Poor Felix… I can’t even think about him without feeling sick. Those things ate him alive in front of me! I only could hope that this nightmare won’t reach my home town.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25481 Read Count: 12258
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2014 Updated: 10 Mar 2015
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great update! So I wonder if all three of them made it to Bella's apartment? And of course Bella is going to make it there! She is a survivor! So I am hoping mabe EPOV next time? I guess I'll see, hopefully soon!

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

Hey Peach!

Well all I can say is that Edward is next!
And that all of you are going to have a pleasant surprise. :D
Next chapter is coming so stay tuned!

Thanks for reading a reviewing!

P.S.

Don't forget to vote on the Fanatic Fanfics Awards!

Voting poll will close on Monday April 14th, 2014.

Remember that I'm nominated on the Favorite Work-In-Progress Fanfic!!!

http://www.fanaticfanficsawards.blogspot.mx/2014/03/voting-is-now-open.html

Chapter ten of Haystack is coming and I hope you like it, because I love it!...


Hugs and love!

 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yes!! Updates! And at least we got a look at Edward's POV and his stupid teenage reasons for what he did to Bella in High School.

Can't wait to see how Bella makes it back to her apartment, if she does. And to see her reaction to Edward coming for her. Should be interesting to say the least.

Will be anxiously awaiting the next update(s)!

peach



Author's Response:

That Edward! He reminds me an ex-boyfriend that I had, in high school. Lol!

Bella's journey to her apartment is going to be interesting. you'll see. ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So we have Alice and Jasper joining Bella on her journey, though who knows if all three will make it to Bella's. And now we have to wait and see who arrived at the apartment. Is it Bella and Company, or some others! 

Can't wait to see what happens next! Will be awaiting the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

Who knows what's going to happen at this point. Lol! :D
You'll have to wait and see!

Expect a new chapter next Wednesday!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478496
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes! Another fic from you Awesome writers!! Can't wait to read it all! Just speculating and wondering where all this going, but I know that it will be a great ride! Thanks!

peach 

Burn Notice by ifyouweremine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The last days of summer. Two weeks of freedom. One lie. What could possibly go wrong? BxE, canon couples, AH-OOC. M-RATING for lemons

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25364 Read Count: 13462
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2015
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really love this fic! Can't wait to see what's in store for Agent Cullen and "Marie"! Wondering how he's going to react about Bella knowing! 

Looking forward to more! Hopefully soon!

peach

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So here we are. The climax as we say, and now are on the slope down hill. A tad easier than the climb because Edward and Bella will hopefully be together through the rest of the journey. 

I will be awaiting the next update, anxiously I might add, but understand that family come first. And this will give me time to deal with all the emotions you have wrenched from me. Thank you, sincerely. 

On that note, so glad that Edward lifted the d n r order on his own.(<- frustrated that it won't let me put the d n & r together!) Have a great week.

Until next time.

peach

 



Author's Response:

Yes, this was the main climax of the story, but we're certainly not done.  But you're right, E and B will face things differently now--together.  And what a difference it will make!  :)  Thank you for the lovely review!

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Wow, just wow. It's hard to put into words the emotions that are going through me. Frustration as some answers are just out of reach. Heart wrenching conflict on what to do (as if I am one of the characters) and where this is going. Love so strong it chokes you. Utter grief and sadness because it 's so hard to let go, but also knowing it's the thing to do. And of course as a reader, questioning when and where is the turning point for happiness? Closure? Ending? And of course Hope, that this will ultimately end the way I'd want it too, but still on the fence how?....... This is why I read. Because this is such an amazing story to pull all those things out of me, the reader. Can't really put more down in words as it's all swirling around inside. 

peach

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

WooHoo! Doing a happy dance that B & E have finally kissed! I absolutely love this fic. Though it's heart wrenching and I cry like a baby at times, I have faith in you that there is a happy ending coming. 

So I am hoping that now that Edward knows that Bella shares some of his feelings that he will hopefully now choose to fight for his life instead of feeling he needs to control the way he dies now. 

Also looking forward to seeing more of Jasper. 

Thank you for giving us this fic. I know that the subject is a touchy one with it dealing with cancer (I lost my mom 4 years ago to ovarian cancer), but it is the reality of life now a days. You are doing a beautiful job of telling this story. I for one can't wait for more! Can't wait to see the teaser on Shadow fics. (I'm the one that wanted to lick from jaw to cheek, lol). Will anxiously be awaiting the next update!

peach



Author's Response:

LOL!  I love your enthusiasm!  I'm so glad you love the story and that you're so engaged.  It makes what I'm doing here all worthwhile.  ;)

Edward is starting to see Bella's feelings for him, but he's a bit stubborn.  He's made his decisions, and he feels his reasoning is sound, so it's going to take a lot for him to rethink them.  There will be more of Jasper, too.

Thank you so much for your kind words.  I've worked hard to address this topic with grace and dignity, and your affirmation means a lot to me.  As I said, it makes it all worthwhile.  :)

 

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Another great chapter! Boy, oh boy, even on the good days I find myself teary eyed. Edward and Bella just pull emotion right out of my chest. I sure hope tomorrow is a good day for him. Maybe he will get some help to set up his room to give it a real date feel. Hoping soon that Edward realizes that there is a path vearing off from the journey he has decided to take. Can't wait to read what happens next! And of course our teaser on Shadow fics. Have a great week!

peach



Author's Response:

Thank you!  LOL!  You're not the first person to say that about the good days!  I'm so glad you've fallen in love with my characters so much that whatever they're doing affects you.  That's a huge compliment to me.  :)  Hmm...interesting idea about setting up the room to feel like a real date...  Ah, poor Edward!  Things are so complicated for him!  This weekend did give Edward a lot to consider, but it all comes back to whether or not he has treatment options, and if he does, if he believes there's any hope in them. He spent a long time making his decisions, and he won't rethink them easily, but there's always hope.  :)

Summer Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 353]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan’s last summer before starting college is here. Charlie Swan encourages his daughter to let loose and live. What happens when the town’s notorious bad boy comes back? Will he sweep her off her feet?

Banner by: Deebelle1

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25488 Read Count: 79478
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2015 Updated: 29 Apr 2015
Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So glad to see Bella being corrupted in all the right ways with the right bad boy! Still loving Charlie! Kind of reminds me of my Mom, though not quite so much pushing me to do things, she never told me no, or that I had a curfew, but let me know that I was responsible for me and would have to get myself out of any trouble I got into. I know TMI about me and not the story. ... Can't wait to see what happens next. 

peach