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Judgment Day by 2amlovesick2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]
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Three innocent people, each surviving day by day until their lives intersect. One man accused of a crime he didn't commit. A second man setup to save another. A young woman whose life is threatened, hiding from a killer on the loose. Connections are made. Bonds are formed. Each living with the hope to see their own Judgment Day. Canon pairing AH M for violence and adult content.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 314922 Read Count: 30029
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2014 Updated: 14 Mar 2015
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Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Maria is finally dealt with and hopefully with John and Laura involved she will not be RIP.  You have to love John and Laura; John is now the garbage man!

On to the next one then, Eric Yorkie.  What he has to say should be interesting since he is involved with not only Jasper's imprisonment, but Edward's and also Victoria's troubles. 



Author's Response:

You are funny! Maria is out of the way now and you will hear from Erid Yorkie in the next chapter. He talks. He talks a lot. hehehehe I'll be curious as to your thoughts on what he has to say. Thank you so much for your time and reviews. I so appreciate both.

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Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Another one bites the dust. One more left to sort out.



Author's Response:

And sort out they will!  lol  Thank you so much for sticking with this story and me. I appreciate it so much.

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Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

John Ashley, King of the Everglades, swamp bandit and pirate.  You made him a loveable rogue.  



Author's Response:

John Ashley was a real life person. I liked his history. Glad I did him justice. Thank you so much for the review. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Em saves the day again. Poor Rose has more questions than answers and somebody has Victoria running scared.

Crowley is despicable, someone needs to put a hole in his head.

Stanley and Newton, liars who seem to have more to hide than just an affair.

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Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

A bit of history for us women. To think that Margaret Sanger was arrested for trying to advise women about contraception and her pamphlet banned.

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So Esme and Carlisle are off to Alabama as well. Charlie may find Renee in Florida but not Bella.



Author's Response:

LOL - All of the above is true. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it.

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Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Another one gets his come-uppance, the not so reverand, Jenks. PM saw his angel again and Alice passed Ace a note. Hopefully Ace and the morphine can keep PM going until the trap is sprung. 



Author's Response:

Let's hope you are right in your summation. :)

Thank you so much to taking the time to read and review. I sincerely appreciate it.

 

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Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

So they shared a first kiss and now he knows her real name.



Author's Response:

They are moving fast aren't they? :)

I hope you enjoy the second half of this story. Thank you for reviewing.

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Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can't believe they had to go back.

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Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Found you, lol, ditto with ffg's words. xxx



Author's Response:

LOL - The Agency must be on high alert!

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Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love me some Jasper.  Pity about the wicked witch, Maria.



Author's Response:

Pity? As in you wanted them together or it's her loss.

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Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Awesome Rose.  So Newton gets Sam to take on Edward's case.  Poor Jasper, of all the people to be chained to, James.



Author's Response:

Glad you like Rose - I like her too. Let's hope Sam does a good job. Yes, Jasper has all the luck. All bad! Thank you for the review. I really appreciate them. 

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Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Carlisle, no one believes him.

Go Rose!  



Author's Response:

It would be frustrating to have no one believe you. Let's hope Rose gets her questions answered! Thank you for reviewing!

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Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Rev Jenks, what a despicable man, how could someone like this become a man of the cloth.  Loved Mr McCarty apologising before he clobbered him!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately there are people like this and have been around in any religion. Glad you liked Mr. McCarty. Thank you for reviewing. I really do appreciate it.

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Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Banner wanted Edward found guilty real bad. Rose has smelt a rat and won't let this rest until she finds out the truth.  Hope Edward can survive his hard labour sentence long enough for Sam and Rose to get him free.



Author's Response:

It would seem to be the case with Banner. I take it you like Rose. I like her too! 

Thank you very much for reviewing. I so appreciate it.

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

All of the major players are dropping into place. Em, Jasper and Edward are at the prison and the connection is made between Jasper and Edward. 

Hopefully, with the help of Jasper, Blue and Tiny Edward will manage to stay strong.



Author's Response:

Prison life in the early 1900's was brutal. Men on the chain gang were treated worse than animals.

Connections are being made and more are to follow. Thank you so much for reading. I sincerely appreciate it. 

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Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Come on Rose, don't give up, you need to find the truth to free Edward and maybe also help Jasper get a letter to Peter and Charlotte.

Bella as Tanya singing in a club.  And this line was telling from Seth - "Tanya happened".  Who knows what kind of strife this has put Emmett in with his boss.

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Can't believe Edward actually thought Crowley had enough decency in him to deserve an apology. Edward sure is a bad judge of character, he just doesn't have any experience with bad people, just thinks everyone has morals and respect for others, which clearly most of those around him, other than his cell mates and Emmett don't.

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Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank goodness Em intervened and saved the day. Although I do think Ace could have taken Jewels down, but no doubt the missing guards would have turned up and he would have ended up in solitary.

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

They meet at last and the guys are out of prison, but sadly, on the run. 

Peter needs to keep his cool, but at least he knows what happened now.

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Leah is worried for Rose, but I think there is probably more danger from Banner finding out she has been nosing around asking questions, than Newton.

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Rose and Em finally meet!  Em did really well tricking Black and now he and Ace will be able to watch out for Preacher Man.

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Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Em and Rose finally meet and then on the second meeting they get up close and personal. Good for Rose, sad that she won't see Em for some time.



Author's Response:

Well Emmett will be gone for a month and Rose needs to continue working on the case. I agree with the good for Rose. She was rather bold. 

Thank you for all your reviews. I so appreciate it.

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

The plantation is worse than the prison.

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Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Alice and Peter pacing, priceless!

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Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Relieved they survived and are back at the prison.



Author's Response:

They aren't out of the woods yet. Thank you so much for all your support with this story.  

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Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

There are several people who need to die. Surprisingly Crowley is not one of them. Black, Fly, Lahote, who will be next on the list? It seems as quickly as PM puts one situation behind him another just as cruel, or worse, turns up.



Author's Response:

You are out for blood! :)  Thank you for your review and for reading.

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Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

One down - Fly, two to go - Lahote and Black.  Not forgetting whoever set PM and Ace up.  Now the gang just have to get them out.

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Black finally loses it and gets arrested, poetic justice.

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Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Peter might still figure it out! lmao x

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Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Newton - taab. At the opposite end of the scale - Rose is awesome. Now we have Victoria added into the mix. Apep has now been added to the s**t list. 

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Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Charlie took it well. Looks like they are all gonna end up in New Orleans.

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Date: 08 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

So Edward can shoot - rifles, and er, loads!! lol

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Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Eric Yorkie, another one who needs eliminating. Nice to see John and Laura back.

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Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Clothes pegs please for all those dealing with Yorkie!

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Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Sister Erica, lol! 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked the image. Thank you for reading and your comments. I appreciate them.

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Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Peter and his war room! Charlie finally meets the gang and reconnects with Bella.



Author's Response:

I do like Peter's reasoning for the 'War Room.' I think every household should have one. And yes, the long awaited reunion for Charlie and Bella finally takes place. Thank you so much for your time and comments. I appreciate both very much.

 

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Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Newton got off lightly. But at least Edward didn't give him the forgiveness he wanted.

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Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

"I may, or may not, have broken into Banner's office." Yeah, and with good reason. Go Rose!



Author's Response:

lol - Rose hasn't always played by the book, but it was fun to have her admit to breaking and entering. It was a shout out to SM when Rose spoke about facing Royce King. I always liked that part of the story. Thank you so much for your time and thoughts.   

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Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

And then there was one!  But not for long.  Next chapter is gonna be a cracker!



Author's Response:

lol - not sure what a cracker is, in the story it was James' prison name, but I hope it lives up to it. Thank you for your time and comments.  

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Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

And the story finishes on a huge bang! Well it did for Apep, lol! Herbie Ellis, the master of drama and suspence assisted by the gang. Brilliant.



Author's Response:

It's true, Apep did go out with a bang. lol  Herbie is a one of a kind character. I'm happy he seems to have found a place in your heart. Thank you for taking the time to read and letting me know your thoughts. I greatly appreciate it.

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Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue - Part 1 of 3

I, Edward, take you Billy, Angela, Tanya and Bella, to be my chameleon wife, to have and to hold a rifle by my side, from this day forward.

"From this War Room forward, for better or trade her in for a horse, for richer, for temper.

Peter - you gotta luv him!



Author's Response:

LOL! That was one of my favorite sections to write. Yes, you've got to love Peter. He definity brought laughter to the wedding. :)

Thank you so much for all your time and comments. Take care.

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Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue - Part 2 of 3

You mentioned this was bittersweet, you were right. Renee, Charlie and Sam are gone and the rest of the original gang are all elderly. But they have a many offspring to carry on the Whitlock/Masen Gang.



Author's Response:

The Whitlock/Masen Gang will live on in their prodogy.  The family ties are strong. :) Thank you so much for your time and comments. I appreciate them very much.

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Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Epilogue- Part 3 of 3

Wonderful ending. Standing ovation.



Author's Response:

Aww, so sweet! I can't thank you enough for all your time and comments. They encouraged me to write the best story I possibly could. Take care.