Reviews by maizeandblueinvalpo
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

James is a real sick fuck.  I hope he gets more than a head bashing.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Damn, I started to feel bad for James.  I laughed for a while at first, but then I thought just kill h im already.  Aro is hardcore.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625393
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I feel much better now.  I can't wait for Carlisle to get his.

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Esme doesn't know much about hospitality does she?

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I wonder how this six month shoot will affect their relationship should she decide to take it.



Author's Response:

I'll repsodn to both of your reviews. Yep, problems with Esme.

Time frame on the film, yep, that could be a problem.

Thanks =0 j

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I can't believe she told him like that.  It will be interesting to see how he responds .  I imagine he's shocked.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thank goodness Esme seems to want to give Bella a chance.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153118
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

I find this lifestyle totally fascinating.  I could never do it myself.  Especially with someone like Rosalie in the picture.  I'd have to shank her.  I love Alice though.

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64124
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Even though Rose was being bitchy, you have to sympathise with her.

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53869
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Lunch

Really love this Bella.  It's nice to see a strong independent Bella for a change.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Revelations

I definately think Jake crossed the line.  I hope he will mind his own business.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Stepping Forward

All I can say is thank goodness for Rose.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Undisclosed Desires

We all know Edward has asshole tendecies.  The boy can't help himself.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I've Got You Under My Skin

It's about time these two got it together.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: At Last

It will be interesting to see what Angela thinks of them being together.

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

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Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Look forward to the next chapter.  I think Bella is going to give Edward a run for his money.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can only imagine what Emmett will be like out in the audience.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like that things are moving slowly.  Things don't always have to happen overnight.  Look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm glad that you like the pace. Slow is good sometimes!

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love the way things are progressing.  Not too quickly.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can't wait to see how the jive turns out.  I can imagine that will be tough for him.



Author's Response:

Yeah, the Jive is tough. I learned to dance that a couple years ago... it was very difficult to stay on the beat.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

These two are just too cute.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I thought it was a great chapter.  Finally realizing their feelings for each other.  Things are moving along nicely.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope they have the talksoon.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

How could you not get all caught up after doing the Rumba?  Especially doing it with Edward.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I guess it was only a matter of time.  Who could resist kissing those lips?

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I enjoyed the chapter and  the way their relationship is developing.  I think Nicole was awesome last night.  Not a fan of TPCD but she was good.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I thought she did very well too. I like her and Evan, Erin, Chad and even Pamela lol.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I knew it couldn't stay drama free forever.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can kind of understand why Bella got an attituse because Edward could have handled the situation a little better, but she could have waited until he discussed things with Alice and Jasper before wanted answers.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It will be interesting to see how this turns out.  Things definately won't be easy.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That really wasn't Rosalie's place to say anything to Bella.  She should have talked to Edward about it and told him to talk to Bella.  I can see the wheels turning in her head already.



Author's Response:

No, Rosalie shouldn't have done that, but she's nosy. She had good intentions, but it wasn't her place.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad things seemed to work out after Rose's interference.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm all about the citrus but only add it if you feel it will benefit yor story which I am enjoying immensely by the way.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Edward should have told her as soon as he decided what team he wanted to play for.  I can't imagine she won't be pissed.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I just don't understand that girl.

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106345
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad Bella decided to give Edward another chance.  Starting as friends is probably for the best.  I hope Kate won't cause any problems in the future.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Kate is something else.  It's one thing to screw the guy over and take his money.  It is something else when that money is being used to care for your child.

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wasn't expecting that one.  What a surprise.

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

The sexy times were hawt.  I read the teaser for chapter 19 and I must say Carlisle is an asshat of epic proportions.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

AT least she is starting to open up to him a little.



Author's Response:

Yes, she is and she will more in the upcoming chapters! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :) 

 

“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late. 

 

I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.  

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

I like having an EPOV as well.  Look forward to the next chapter.