Reviews by sandrabr
Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

stories/10761/images/Bannerpleaserememberme1.jpg

 

The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: sandrabr Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm liking a lot of your story , thanks for sharing 

but I have a doubt, who really is Tanya in your story ? is she the girl that he first found or a friend with benefits of Edward ?

 

 



Author's Response:

don't worry you will find out about tanya soon.

Summary:

Just because it's forbidden - does that make it wrong? Bella's mother brings home a new guy from the bar, but who will he end up in bed with???  Dirty dirty - not for the faint of heart. One-shot - One-Giant-Lemon!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4506 Read Count: 5705
[Report This] Published: 20 May 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: sandrabr Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

are you planing to continue , you should!

 



Author's Response:

thanks for taking the time to leave a note. means a lot to me.  i'm really considering adding more to it. don't have anything written out there, but it's on my mind for sure.

Intensity by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 299]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Intensity

Twelve years have gone by since Paul and Bella walked away from La Push and reached for success. When they unexpectedly run into each other, the pack suddenly comes trickling back into their lives. Time changes people but can it change traditions? AU/OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 325149 Read Count: 65031
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 23 Feb 2024
Reviewer: sandrabr Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked a lot!
a lot happened in  just 1 chapter , makes me wonder of how many more are you planning and what waits in the future for them.

is there any more danger lurking in the shadows for them? 
will the Cullens make another apperance ? or someone from the Volturi ?

keep writing , I liked so far



Author's Response:

Yes, tons happened in the first chapter, and will in the second one, too--but I'm trying to bring them to the point where we can bring the pack back in.  Something is going on in La Push, and it's going to take Paul to pull it all together for everyone.  I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Marriage by Treaty by Zorantha Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 167]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Prince Edward of Forks and Princess Isabella of Voltura are forced to marry as the terms of a treaty signed by their fathers to end a war between the two neighboring countries.  Edward is a spoiled, arrogant womanizer who is determined to have a marriage of convenience.  Bella is a feisty young woman from a country where the women fight beside their men making her a warrior princess.  Can Bella tame the wild Edward and make him into the man he should be or will the whole world lose out.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59923 Read Count: 51684
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2011 Updated: 12 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sandrabr Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Rescue

wasn't Paul already dead ?

 

(...)

Our priority was to protect the Princess so with only ten men with me, I was forced to let them go. Oh, and Lord Paul was there. I killed him.

 

Seth said this, after ?Bella was rescued, after the episode with Tanya

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: sandrabr Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Moving House

I would think that Emmet would want a house made of clay, much more resistent, available close of rivers 

foundation poles with driftwood for the frame and weaving with bambo and after finishing covering with clay, is a technique used a lot in central and south america

some examples :

http://www.baixaki.com.br/imagens/wpapers/BXK28191_malocadocaboclodsc00019-800-x-600-800.jpg

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_eXlX1SuGx4g/ScptisqNk4I/AAAAAAAAAAY/3NcHdlL-tbM/S660/lehmhaus1.jpg

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_yesztZBJcJQ/Sq8CMG90nbI/AAAAAAAABIQ/ADN1gw6Y0B0/s400/Casa+de+taipa+em+constru%C3%A7%C3%A3o.jpg

http://media-cdn.tripadvisor.com/media/photo-s/01/c1/94/59/casa-tipica-de-barro.jpg

or a combination more cullen style woth bamboo and clay :

http://fotos0.mundofotos.net/2009/26_02_2009/aldabra1235671526/casa-hecha-de-cana-de-bambu.jpg

is a strong materiaal that would make possible and save the construction of a 2 floors house (the clay works like a glue or cement )

hope you don't mind me sending these, just trying to help

loving the story so far !  :)



Author's Response:

Hi sandrabr

Thank you so much. I did think of using clay in the construction for a fleeting moment, but I just assumed that clay would not be readily available on a tropical island in the middle of the pacific, especially one that was probably volcanic at one point. I will research and use clay if it's feasible. I love the fourth image of the 2 storey bamboo and clay house. Your review came at a perfect time for chapter 8 which discusses the house.

Thanks and regards, Jkazzie

Summary:

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A young woman sets out on her first adventure in the big world. She thought her father had prepared her for everything but she holds the key to much more than she ever thought, and now she sings for every vampire.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34870 Read Count: 9882
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: sandrabr Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

will he leave her with more then just memories when she returns to her father ?
is a little girl going to appear in the next chapters :)



Author's Response:

LOL, you'll have to wait and see.