Reviews by rob-love
Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: rob-love Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Last chapter

wow, i laugh out loud the last sentence it was very cute,...her first orgasmic.....lollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllo

kidoo , you did very well, love it and thank to you and your dear beta just4ale,...you did well , in this story i think i am the only reader , who put review for each 7 chapters of your story , good job , you deserve it .



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review all the chapters. To answer your question how I came up with the idea, it is very simple: my husband suggested that I write my own smut after my offer to translate taratsueme's The Training was turned down. At first I thought I could do a one shot with the story that came to my mind, but then after I wrote the first 20 pages, i realized that it would have to be a multiple chapters story, but still I wanted to keep it a short story, hence the 7 chapters only (it is about 90 pages long on my PC).

Milk

Reviewer: rob-love Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Fifth chapter

oh thats sweet my bella

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Sixth chapter

wow, he rescue and he kill the poor sweet lion , and no one came to rescue these two ,emmm is  starange . love

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Fourth chapter

i like the parte, " mine next' when bella performed sexuall act , its cool and , i see some hind of dark ed .

good job to you and your pathner for writting this story

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Third chapter

sweet of her to do , good job bella

 

as for the author of this story  , this chapter written you are handy with sex toy , wonderfull

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Second chapter

naughty bella , very erotic orgasmic, good job ,... nice for your and your dear beta, putting time and writting this story , i am eager to see what you have in your mind

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First chapter

im just cruise how did you come up with this story idea, is different and interessting i am happy to read it all ,... to see how dark is it , my story hate you ,...is really dark than i think other story in this web is.... good job dear

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112168
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: rob-love Signed
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

emmmm very interesting story plzzz up date soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: rob-love Signed starhalf-star
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

wow, very well written , i already love the first chapter. what you have in your sleevs i great , writting is great, its reality isn't



Author's Response:

Hi rob-love

Glad you liked that first chapter. Thank you for the compliments...but one and a half coffee cups?? What did I do wrong???

-bannerday

HATE BELLA by nilo24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

 

I born in a rich family , life is not easy and i was innocent in all of it until i decide it to have one thing i cant never have. i decide it to not have heart-broken heart, my plan was to steal him, but i cant steal any men, but i did choose anorther option as you will know , HE will Hate me ...

CHARECTERS: BELLA, EDWARD, ALICE , ESME , CARLISE,CHARLIE,


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Tragic Affairs
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20791 Read Count: 1756
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2017 Updated: 15 Oct 2017
Reviewer: rob-love Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i re read chapters sometimes i forget story line

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

very interesting part wearing skirt while cleaning bathroom , smile

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Now that is just brilliant. I know a few of you fit this description, and that’s a wonderful thing

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you for  writing this wonderfull story

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

why he need the money , so many question i have

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

love to read more , and love your new banner .

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Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

she is very wierd , i wonder why she is doing it i, punishing him

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i love it , dark bella your story very different from what i read before

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

interesting chapter i thought he could leave from her home , wow , toy gun funny if he knew the gun wasnt real

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i love your story , please keep up dating faster i love to know why she is evil , is she dom , why she is behaving like that

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

do you know i love how she push him over edge

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

thank you for writting this story i appreciate it

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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, new story and new plot line , this is first for me to read dark bella

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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

cant wait please post more

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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

it would be interesting , how he agree for it , why he needs money what is up with it

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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i cant wait to read more of it , i am happy you are writting this story , it would be great and it would be nice

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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i cant wait to see how this story will go , how she will do furture , to see about it . i have to see

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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for writting this story :)

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Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I LOVE IT , LET SEE WHAT YOU HAVE

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Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

POOR EDWARD , WHY SHE IS SO CRUEL , BUT I LIKE TO KNOW MORE ABOUT IT

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Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

FANTASTIC DREAM , YOHOOOOO WE WILL SEE MORE ACTION I FEEL , YOU WILL COME UP WITH IT

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Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

UP GRADE FASTER , I CANT WAITTTT