Reviews by sogian
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

that's so amazing!! She is pregnant!!! Yeah! They are all so excited!! 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

hahaha.... Bella's cravings a crazy!! hahahaa... and tgey are disgustings! Eww! But the whole family loves her and will do anything to have happy!! 

You haven't updated here... So I'm going to read the rest from fanfiction! see you there...

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I lve how possesive Edward is!!! their love making was amazing! they do have a lot of time to make up for... lol... hahahaha.... will Edward always be this possesive? and is she pregnant yet?

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I know I've said it before but Bella is so damn powerfull!! But she could have done it without Edward's help!! And they are going to try for a baby!!! Everyone is so excited!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

hahahahah... Laurent is great!!!He is so happy now!!!! And they are finally married and a famly!! Bella's idea about the venom was incredible!!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

that was so sweet!! I love how Edward and Bella are with Laurent! They are trully his parents!! And the Volturi are coming sooner?? Why?

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow!!! that's amazing!!! Lautence is back!!! I'm so excited!!! and he is their son now!!!! Genious!!! 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Jacob is Bella's brother and he want to be there for her!! And all of the wolves thinks of he as their little sister!! Edward ha to ask all of those fo permition to marry her....???? hahahaha.... and how Laurent know her?

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

omg!! really?? At least Alice saw them coming and they have tie to prepare?? What did Aice saw exacty? Won't they be able to fight them off and win?? Tanya toally deserved what happened to her! But why did she want to kill herself??

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow!! I loved how Bella handld the whole situation with both Eleazar and Tanya!! Eleazar is an asshole for leaving Bela alone and then he even blamed her for being forsed to kill.... idiot!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hahaha.... the wolves are shocked! hahaha... they were so wrried and now they hear her in their head... hahaha

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow!! Bella is getting even more powerfull now that she is managing to control fire! She will be able to kill the Volturi just by that power!!! Edward is furious with Eleazar!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

so...???? Does the Volturi sent James after Bella??? when will they be here??? Will Alice see them before they arrive?? and what abou th wolves?? Will they help too?? Edward and the others don't really like them right now after their feelings toward Bella! Edward was so amazing and sweet!!!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow!! I really like how this story is!! Amd of course Belka s forms! I think that I really love Bubbles and Becky! They re so cute and you want to pet them and care of them!M Edward loves her and the same goes for Bela too!! 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Tey just are so cute togethr!! lol I love to see them like that interacting! Oor Bella she shas gone through so much!! Edward is so amgry and could kill the Volturi right now!! What did Alice saw??

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

omg!! will Jacob try anything? Does he still want her? or does he have an imptint? Bella is so strong but I believe that she is sooo much stronger with Edward by her side!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

omg!! Really?? Thank God that Carlisle found out what threir desease was.... Edward was so scared for his love!! But they wil both be fine right? The whole famiky were so amazing and they were ready to do anything for them both!! How did the animals get sick?

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow!! Bella is so afraid of the Volturi even though she is mor powerfull than all of them together!! And Edward will protect her with his life!! Emmett was an idiot! And Edward is so mad at him right now!! Will Bella be afraid that Emmett is going to take her away now?? Emmett feels so sorry!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Adult Content: BDSM When Isabella’s contract with Master Jasper Whitlock is ending. Master introduces her to his friend, Edward Cullen. Will Isabella be the perfect submissive for Master Cullen? Will Edward be the perfect Master for Isabella?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181505 Read Count: 281212
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2012 Updated: 01 Sep 2013
Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Do You Wanna Play?

wow!! This story seems great! I really like how it starts!!Edward need a new sub and what better than Jasper's? can't wait to meet Bella...



Author's Response:

Thanks, I noticed you also reviewed on FF. I will acknowledge you here. Everyone can see, it. Keep reading and thanks for reviewing twice per ch.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Don't You Want Me?

Bella is really insecure about herself but she is Bella after all! I love how honest and open they all are and I think that this trust is the most important in the relantionship of any kind! Bella must have gone through a lot and can't wait to find out...



Author's Response:

You will find out pretty soon, and it hurts to. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: You Sexy Thing

wow! Their limis are so similar! Especially the hard ones! Edward will teach her so many more things!His questionaire was amazing an so unique! No te usual staff about her life but about what she really wants and needs! and they were so cute in Skype... hahaha... checkng each others appearances! lol 



Author's Response:

I loved that questionaire when I saw it, they can talk about the other junk. People don't always want to open about about their sexual fantasies...We all have them no shame in it. LOL

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: If You Don't Know Me By Now

omg!! No wonder why Bella is so hesitant... James is an asshole using Bella's trust like that! Is he still obsessed with her? Will he be after her?



Author's Response:

Yes, he is still obsessed we will see him in down on the corner chapter or the one after that. He will talk a little about following her. We will eventually see him again. Once she is very confident in the playroom. My last chapter is when she start finding her strength. Once she has that he will come.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: In The Air Tonight

wow!! And Edward has gone through so much too!! I love the backround that you created for both of them!! So will Bella stay with him and go 24/7? Jasper was great with all the informations!!

So I know that I say the exact same think to both rewies in TWCS and FFn but I know that reviews are important to the writer and I wanted you to increase your reviews in both sites! The story definitelly deserve it!! It is amazing so far! Andthank you so much for answering! 



Author's Response:

You are right, I do need the reviews and I appreciate them on both sites. Thanks... I try to answer all my reviews unless something like a computer glitch which happened yesterday keep me from three of them. FF doesn't have my complete tally of review right either. When people see it like right now it say 153 to people, but when I click on 162. I don't like that really. I have keep all the review good or bad not matter what. That is what makes me grown as a writer, and there is always good and bad in life. I can't please everyone. Thanks for reviewing I like that people love my story.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: I Touch Myself

omg!! That was so fucking hot!!! And they were only on Skype... can't wait to see them together in person!! James did all that? Shit! Edward is furious!! Will he help her with the tattoo being a plastic surgeon?



Author's Response:

Yes, he is going to help her, but she doesn't get help with it until Chapter 25 which isn't out. She sees a doctor Edward recommends. You will see, the question is can she get it removed or repaired before James finds her?

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Natural High

The first meeting went really well! Edward and Bella both like each other and want to try more... Does Bella have to have this document before evey scene? And what if the dominant want to improvise in the playroom? And will Bella be able to deal with it? 

James has done far more damage than I first thought... He is sadistic! 



Author's Response:

You will see the extent of his damage in chapter disturbia and disturbia 2 were she has flashbacks. She has to have this paper in order to get her mind wrapped around the idea of things. She often has an anxiety attack on Jasper when things get to off course...he thinks it's subspace, but it's not. Like I said learn more of what is wrong with her. Edward will get her to where he can improvise, but not yet.

 

 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....

That was so hot!! And sexy!! The whole scene was awesome but I loved that Edward can't wait to have her all to himself!! 



Author's Response:

Yep, wait until he does HOT!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: But Whips and Chains....

wow!! I'm so excited to read the next chapter... it is the only time for them to participate in threesome after all... because Edward won't allow any sharing afte Bella is his sub!!! They are sp great together and they get to know each other more and more!! Edward is so sweet with her!! He trully cares about her and what happened to her....



Author's Response:

I think I might have run off a couple of readers with that one. Maybe they were hoping for a threesome the entire story. I don't know thinking of writing other stories similar, when I say that I mean erotica or bdsm.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Excite Me

Shit!!! Really? James is not only moving to Seattle but e is a billionaire with a lot of influence too?? That's why Bella is so afraid of him... she is afraid that se wont be able to fight him off? I believe that she doesn't go to sub sace but maybe in a place inside her head where she can't feel the physical pain that James used to inflic on her... she maybe used to do that with James when he wa extremelly brutal... Will she get better with Rose's help? Edwar is starting to fall for her!! And the scene in the beggining was soooo HOT!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, as you read Rose is a counselor that happens to live the lifestyle and doesn't look down on people who do. She will put Bella on antidepression pills, and anxiety meds to help her to cope with her life. Thanks for reading and reviewsing on both....:)

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Disturbia

God!! *gasps* Rose too?? They not only kniw each other but they are in te same danger!! It was Rose the friend who talked her into ving with James ad the others... I don't blame her but if it wasn't for her Bella wouldn't have been involved with James... So what will happen? Will Rose help her? And will they manage o get free of James? who else has the tattoo? The woman that Jasper is interested?



Author's Response:

Yes, Rose to...remember Rose was training to be a Dom because things didn't work out with Royce. She went to the house thinking that she would be a dominant. Bella doesn't blame her, she takes all the fault because she had the money to live somewhere else. Rose helps her to overcome, her guilt, her hurt etc. Eventually yes, they will be free of James. You will see who else has the tattoo in You've got a friend in me. Yes, the woman Jasper is interested in.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Disturbia Part 2

omg!! I think I'm going to be sick with everything that happened to Bella... I would have definitelly killed James after everything he done.... In his seep if I could... And why weren't the other doms doing anything to stop James and protect the slaves? And Alice was there? I knew it... It's a mirace that Bella managed to e back in the lifestyle a year after everything... Edward will protect her about anything but with James coming from money and power....



Author's Response:

The other dom were gone, he had successful run them off. They were tired of his ways. You will learn this is another chapter. Yep Alice was there, and it's a miracle. The lifestyle is something that she needs, wants, desires. 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Rehab

Bella has so many people now that care about her and will help her to get better!! Edward cares about her so much! Rose was so much help too!! can't wait to read the rest...



Author's Response:

Keep reading I'm hoping that you like where they are going.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Moving On Up

I love to see them playfull like that!! Charlie was amazing with Edward! He will do anything to protect his little girl!!! But on the other hand he doesn't want to know to much details... poor him! lol 



Author's Response:

I figured this is how a good daddy should be, be protective, but not want to know all the details. LOL Thanks for reviewing on both

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Everyday Is A Winding Road

hahaha... they almost get caught... hahaha... The officer was an idiot hitting on Bella like that... They are so damn horny but they have to wait till her medicine work!!



Author's Response:

All good, who hasn't been caught by the cops before?? Thanks for the review

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: I'm So Excited

wow!! That's amazing!! The contract was great and Edward thought of everything!!! Can't wait to see them play!



Author's Response:

Once they sign they play light at first and then towards the end it will get a little heavier. I had to remember she has been abused before, and he would take it easy on her. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Kitchen Rendezvous

That was so fucking sexy!!! I wish I could have that same rendezvou in the kitchen... with Edward of course!! lol! Bella was great thinking about their daily acting!



Author's Response:

I think we all think that way, that is where I get my ideas from. Thanks for the review.

Summary:

"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6609 Read Count: 1145
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2013 Updated: 25 May 2013
Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow!!! It was amazing to finally see what Isa thinks about everything!!! I loved it!! She is ready for more and I think that Edward is too even if going 24/7 is to much for them right now!! When will she talk to him? And will they decide to live together soon? I agree with Isa, Edward using her in the alley was so hot!!! 



Author's Response:

She'll talk to him next chapter about this, and the chapter will also answer your second question. I did enjoy writing the alley scene. The words just flowed on that one.

Summary:

A man who has seen to much in life to question, returns home to his family after serving his country. However  he can't forget what he saw. Sworn to secrecy, but unable to forget, He prepares his family  for dooms day,  even if at times  they  think he's crazy.  What would you do to prepare? 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61656 Read Count: 7602
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2016 Updated: 22 Mar 2016
Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love love love this story so fur!!! I love that Charlie and the boys were prepared and that Bella is such a badass!! Can't wait to read more!!! Hope you update soon!!! 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I really like how they communicate with each other without even having to say anything! Emmet knew that something was wrong in Edward's and Jasper's car! Is Ron a good guy? Will he stay with them all the way to Swan's plantation? Look forward to reading more.. 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow nice nice! This chapter was really great. They are moving again and can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Omg!! Yes! They cleared the entire base and they have more people to help them protect the plantation! Everything is going so good for them! Will it continue until they get home? It's now almost a month since they started their way back , since they need more than two weeks at the base... Can't wait to read more..

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really like the life they have inside the plantation and now that the guys are back they have almost nothing to worry about! They have to worry about the fuel thought ... What are they going to do? Will they try to go to the city or near it ti get what they need? Or will they visit a small town near by? Will they have any problems with other survivors? And what will happen with Edward and Bella? Can't wait for more... 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hahaha.. I love this Bella!!! She will indeed go after them if they aren't back after the 48 hours .. And she knew almost everything before Charlie told them... She is amazing!!  The army is geting desperate and that is never a good thing! Will they find out about the plantation? And will they attack them in an attempt to take the place and everything they have? It was a good thing that Charlie send the boys now before all the fuel are gone anc before the army come south...  Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Haha.. Wow I'm so happy that Jasper and the guys are goin to be fine! He deserve to be happy with Alice!! So what will happen when they go out? Wilk the same survivors attack them again? And Bella being a girl could prove dangerous... The survivors what take every woman ot girl.. Will she be dresses as a man? Can't wait for more..

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Perfect!! Thank God they found the pawn shop with the metal bars vecause the glass wouldn't be avle to hold all those zombiea out! 

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG Who are they??? How do they now so much about the city and how can they find our guys? And what about the mob of zombies? Why where they so much and how could they appear so quickly? Did they somehow became smarter? I mean in their need for food perhaps they became better in smelling humans? And did those other followed them bacj to the plantation? Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yes finaly some answers!! We got tobknow who the men outside are and what they want! I really loved how Bella reacted to everything ... She is so well trained! And I'm glad the guys are fine! Can't wait to read about the attack!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Absolutelly loved it!! Anyony seems to be such a sweetheart and I'm so happy that Edward and Bella will keep him!! Will they get married with a ceremony or not? And are there anymore children and women out there? Can't wait to read more...



Author's Response:

I'm not sure if they can get married legally ...but they might have  a small ceremony  possibly..and as for the other woman and children, I'm not sure just yet..you will have to wait and  See... Thank you for sticking with this story...and all the great reviews...johnnysgirl

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG!! Poor Edward !! And it wil be even worse for his mother because he at least have Bella and  his son! What happened with thee others? Did they take them to the plantation? Even the woman that pushed Edward's father to the zoms? Or did they leave her behind? Will she face some kind of trial? I really love all this action and drama! Update soon!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It is so hard for them! Marcus was a good husband, agood father and a good friend and everyone will feel his loss for ever! But I agree that his death will make them stronger in the end because they will be more guarded! Update soon!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow!! Can't wait to see what will happen with the military!! They do have a lot of different ways to defent themseves.. What with the fences and the swamp and the guns but will it be enough? And what about the zoms? Are they leaving town in search of food? Update soon!!!

Reviewer: sogian Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Omg omg omg!!! Really??? Jasper is dead and is Cullen? So they are all have the virus inside them an d if they die they become zombies?! I'm realy sad that Jasper is dead but I'm more worried if more in the plantation will turn? Did Jasper manage to atrack more than the doctor? Are they even safe inside the plantation anymore? And who were the ones attacking them in the city? Are they with the army? Ot are thwy just survivors that wanted their car and weapons? And do the survivors have cameras in the city? How did they know were the boys were? Update soon!!