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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
PERFECT!!!!! Edward is so loving... They can't keep their hand off of each other...!!!! Loved it!!!! And Alice was amazing to warn Bella what to expect from the marking!!!! Esme is so sweet!!! And Charlie and Renee so happy fo rBella finding her mate!!!! And they were furious about Bella haing to give her blood!!!!! Will Edward allow her to do it again??? And she have to continue giving blood even now that she mated??? Does she have to stay healthy for her vampire???
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!!!
Bella definitely has to stay healthy. The cullen's will do everything they can to fight for Bella's rights for a human.
XxoO
jells
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
wow!!!!!! Perfect!!! I wasn't expecting Edward to get through The Change...!!!!!!!!! And so soon...!!!!! Is it because he is the Ultimate Vampire??? He is so huge and powerful!!!!! WOW!!!!! Too bad that Bella could expirience The Change with Edward!!!!! What is wrong??? Why Aro isn't coming???? And how will it affect Edward and Bella???
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!!!! Sorry for the late responses. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story, LAH. Living Amongst Hell, which is a dark version of this story. Dark Edward and Cullens etc.
You'll see soon why ro cancelled. Keep in mind he's a monster.
Thanks again,
love hearing form you!
XxoO
jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
LOVED IT!!!!!!! It's amazing that Edward amted instantly and that Bella accepted it so quickly and well!!!! She even want the claiming and the maring... She doesn't care!!!! And then Tanya... God she is totaly stupid!!!! Thank God that Edward was there and heard everything!!!! Will she go after Bella again in the future?? When she find out that Bella is his mate????
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Love reading your comments!!!!!
The answer to Tanya finding out about Edward and Bella being mates will happen in ch 18, which i still have to finish. The story is kinda slow paced, I take it day by day pretty much. lol And Tanya doesn't like to give up, she's a challenging female which you will read about soon, If you still like the story that is .lol
Thanks again,
XxOo
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
omg!!!!! Bella is so furious!!!!! Of course she is right and Edward should respect her more but she should have realised by now that when Edward is feral he doesn't think...!!!!! Even Mr Greene??? He should be more controled!!! And he thought that he could win... hahahah... God!!!! What happened with Edward??? Vampires don't get sick right???? Is he going throught some transformation or something???
Author's Response:
Yup, definitely a transformation =) You are right!!!
Yeah, Mr. Greene is such an old, lonely and horny vampire lmao He shouldve been more controlled. ;)
No, technically vamps can't get sick, BUT, you never know.... I love mind games. I have lots more up my sleeve,
Thank you
XxoO
jells
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
LOVED IT!!!!! Mike finally is dead... Edward should have killed him the first time that he wanted to... Thank God that he felt Bella's feelings!!!! He shouldn't have left her alone... And Tyler is crazy too helping Mike with all this girls!!!! He is going to prison now!!!!! Will they accapt Bella's words about Mike being the one to kill all this girls???? The Cullen and Swan were so worried about Bella!!!! But she is fine!!!!! And what is going on wih her period??? Is she in truble??? She didn't know what would happen...
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much! Have I told you have awesome you are. I'm adoring you and your reviews! I appreciate it so much! I get all giddy seeing a comment from you!
I will write Tyler's trial very soon, hopefully ch 19 =) Vampire court should be interesting, at least I hope lol
XxOo
jells
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! Edward was furious about Victoria and so consern about Bella's safity...!!!! The same goes for Charlie and the other Cullen!!!! Who is after her??? Not James... But who??? And right now in the woods???? The crest was amazing!!!! And Emmett was hilarious in the end with Alice... hahaah... Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much. I cant say it enough
XxOo
Jells
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
omg!!!! No!!! Did she lost the baby after all??? Carlisle managed to save her and the baby the first time but now??? Ben's dad is such an asshole??? He might not want Angela but he couldn't just act like that... And what about Bella??? Is there a reason why Ben didn't have time to make the release ceremony??? Maybe because Edward's trial is Monday and Bella being a Submissal could help her being protected even if Edward goes in prison after all??? no?? What will happen??? Can't wait to read more....
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!! Edward is furious.. What will he do??? And who is after Bella??? James???? Can't wait to read more... Victoria is an idiot!!!! She really thinks taht Edward won't go after her??? And Charlie too??? Ben was great to support Bella against Mike and invite her to his party!!!!! Bella shouldn't forgive him... Will he think that now he have hope to gain her???? And who are Peter and Charlotte??? How do they know Bella????
Author's Response:
Peter and Char are Jasper's best friends. I will have more of them in future chapters, but much later. They will be important to the story. They are in college, at least that's how I want it. lol can't wait to take you on a tour of a Vamp Univeristy =)
Thank you,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
LOVED the chapter!!! Edward was so sweet!!!!! He was ready to kill James and then Mike!!! He is really powerful among the others... They are afraid of him... Does he knows that Bella is his mate??? Alice has saw her??? Do they even have powers??? And what about Tanya??? Will Bella listen to her or talk to Edward????
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm happy that you gave my story a change. I really appreciate it. If you any questions. Ask! lol I'll have time to respond to comments later when I get home, I always do even if I'm running waaay behind.lol They'll know soon enough that Bella is Edward's ;) No, my vamps don't have any powers, but you'll find out who will later, like a lot later, I still have to write that scene. lol I hope that you continue to enjoy it. =)
Thank you
XxOo
Jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
OMG!!!! Is he James??? James is drinking from her??? What about Edward???? Where is he???? Will he save her??? Can't wait to read!!!
She already met Emmett, Jasper and Alice!!! She really liked them but they are vampires after all!!!! And Tanya... she is such a bitch!!!! Mike will be after her too???
Author's Response:
Yup, James is bad. I'll tell ya a little itty bitty secret, well kinda...lol. Just keep in mind that James is involed in illegal activities.
Xxoo
jells
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Edward was furious when he saw Bella's arm!!!! He wanted to kill them all for treating his Bella like this!!!! Will Bella be able to give blood now?? Doesn't she have Edward's venom in her system now??? Edward will try anathing to not allow them to take Bella's blood!!! I loved the idea about Carlisle taking her blood every month!!!! What is goigng on with the pills????Can't wait to read more...
James was stupid... to thinktht he will mark Bella before Edward!!!! Is Bella his mate too??? I loved that Edward marked her in public... He shown to everyone that Bella is his!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Bella isn't James' mate bUT he has this sick and twisted obession with her. He's crazy!
XxoO
Jells
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
wow!!!!! That god that Charlie was in time... Can't believe that Bree didn't do anything and she was agry with Bella... Bella was so afraid!!! James is so sick... What is their connection??? Maybe he is the one that killed Bella's parents???? You have said that the music box was something important but I can't think of anything other...!!!!!!
And the worst was about the trial... PLEASE tell me that you won't make Bella take another mate??? Right???? PLEASE!!!!!!! They belong with each other!!!! Will the court decide against Edward??? i don't think that they will regognise Bella as his true mate but will they sent him to jail??? Isn't Edward the one that will take the throne from Aro??? So this will be the cause??? The reason why Edward will want to fight??? He wants to change Bella and of course to have children with her so he has to fight to win those rights!!!!
And what is worng with Bella??? What about her sickness??? Edward can't feel her anymore and her blood isn't so potent anymore... What is going on???
I totally love andI'm so jeleaous of their sex life!!!! Bella is think about the mating house...????
How will Ben and the rest of the Cullen take that Angela is pregnant???? Was that scream from maybe Ben??? Angela told him???
Can't wait to read more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey *waves*
So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol
Bella will never take a new mate. She and Edward will be together forever...always. =) Your others questions will be answered soon.
Thanks so much! I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm in the process of rewriting it.
xoxo
Jells
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
omg!!!!!!!!!!! Shit!!!! Mike is so dead when Edward get to him... He is crazy!!!!! He has totally lost his mind!!!!! Is bella all right??? Will Mike take her??? Or will Edward get back in time???? Mike was the one to kill all this wommen??? Poor girls!!!! Can't wait to read more...
I'm so happy that Ben and Angela mated!!!!! YEAH!!!! But Ben's father... He is an idiot!!!! So anachrnistic!!!! He was ready to kill his own son... Either be literally killing him either by killing his true mate... He only though of himself...!!!!! Where will Ben go?? Will he stay with the Cullen???
Edward and Bella can't keep their hands off of each other... Perfect!!!!! And what Carlisle had to say... God!!!! That's why Aro does want hybrids!!!! He is so afraid that someone will take his throne... Can't wait to see what will happen with Edward...
Author's Response:
Thank you!! =) You are so aweosme!!!
Ben's father is a monster. He'll try to break Angela and Ben apart. Will they survive? Hmmm...
Ben and Angela will have to live together. It would be safer if they stayed with The Cullens. Since there is strength in numbers. But....you'll see ;)
Thanks again,
Xxoo
jells
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Bella was terrified!!!! So afraid that Charlie or Renee will drink from her... But both of them were amazing and so caring!!! The same goes for Carlisle too!!!! What about the music box??? How will Edward react to her??? Will he knows that she is his mate at once??? Will her blood sing to him??? And what about the other vampires in the school???? Can't wait...
Author's Response:
Hiya ! =D
The music box should be coming up soon. I had to keep pushing the scene back, hopefully by ch 20 I can get into it =)
Love reading all your comments.
XxoO
Jells
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like how this story is... And the alternative universe you have created but I can't wait to read more... Poor Bella!! she lost all her family in a year time!!! Will she accept Edward quickly or not???
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for giving my story a chance.
Xxoo
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
OMG!!!! What doea Aro want???? For Edward and Bella to visit??? Can't wait... Angela is great and they all loved her!!! She will be with ben right??? And I totally love all this sex with Edward and Bella... It;s awesome and so sexy...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Yup Ben and Ang are a true mate couple ;)
Thanks again, loooooove your commments
xxoo
jells
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
PERFECT!!!!!! Aro sent only two???? And they were stupid... They hadn't taken the rumors about Edward to be true... And now they are minus one guard... But they should be more careful about what they said to Bella...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the same goes for Mike, Tyler and Garret... They stupid to fight Edward!!!!! And they had sex!!! Loved the lemon!!!! Angela is here... She will mate with Ben, right??? And she will come to stay here with Bella??? Why are they inportant???
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!! Ben and Ang are important for future chapters. They are the only other human/ vampire true mate couple around like Bella and Edward =)
XxoO
jells
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
OMG!!!! Bella can't take a break really...!!!!!! First Tanya and now James???? I loved that she stanted up to Tanya but Emmett is right... Tanya won't stop trying to get Edward!!!! And James... will he and Tanya work together to get to Bella and Edward???? Tanya want Edward and she might think that if James take Bella then he will be all hers??? Will Edward came in time??? Or will Bre help Belle??? And Charlei and Renne are across the street....
Angela!!!! She is pregnant??? Are they stupid??? I trully believe that a baby is a bless but now there is a chance for both of them to be killed...!!!!!! How could they have sex unprotected???? When they know the consequences...How will Ben react??? And will Aro find out??? It's not like they can hide... Angela has to go to give her blood every 15 days...!!!!!
And will Bella change in a vampire soon??? Because she and Edward are talking a lot about that....
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
omg!!!!!!!!!!! First Edward and now Bella???? Thank God that Edward was only going through the Change.... But what is wrong with Bella??? Is it the medicine that she is taking for her blood??? Edward will be furious and so worried...!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved how he wanting to have sex with her when he was going thfough his Change... But why did he when through it so early??? Can't wait...
Author's Response:
sorry for the late reply. Thinsg have been crazy!
I'll have up the next chapter very soon.
Thank you so much! I loooooooooooove your comments!!
Hope you'll like the next chappy.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
omg!!!! Can't believe it!!! The guys will be furious!!!!! They told them to stay at home and they went out... What were they thinking??? It is too dangerous for Bella...!!! Will Tanya attack her now that Edward isn't here???? Of course Rosalie is there but it isn't the same...
They were all terrified at first that Bella was going to die... but Rose saved her even if it wasn't her first intention...!!!!! Why didn't Edward drank from her???? His instincts should have told him right??? But the good news is that Rosa will do anuthing to protect now!!! And Edward's marking venom stop the infecton from developing??? As long as he inject his venom in her everyday everything will be fine????
I loved that you show that Edward starts to want to take Aro down... He is thinking about it more and more everyday...!!!!And Bella is starting to change or something??? No!!! But she is starting to have more and more features that vampires are having...!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read more.. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks again!!! I love your comments.
I hope you'll like ch 18. I'm trying to finish it this week. I really hope you'll like it.
Yeah They should've stayed home. You'll see what will happen ;) And you're right, ikt isn't the same as if Edward would be there.
And Edward should've drank from her, but he was so disrtaught that it was getting to him. Hopefully, Edward's marking venom will stop her infection from spreading. =)
Thanks so much!!
XxOo
Jells
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
omg!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!! Please don't tell me that she is going to lose the baby??? PLEASE??? She can!! And why didn't Ben gave her his healing venom???? He could help her until they reach Carlisle... I trully believe that her baby is important and maybe it will be the reason for Edward and bella to fight against Aro??? That with their desire to have children of their own and of course to change Bella... What will happen??? And with Bellabeing Ben's Sudmissale??? What does that mean in the long run???
Jasper's mother has been through so much!! I though that Aro only used human but he treated his own people like that too??? Son af a bitch!!!! When will Edward realise that he is the next king???
And then there is the trial???? Will they take Edward to the prison??? But he did kill s serial killer something that is really important!! he actually helped the coverment!! It doesn't really matter why he did it but he did the police's work... And they honestly should give Bella the right to true mate??? Aro is afraid of Edward after all... But most of all don't let anyone else to take Bella... Even if Edward does go to prison she can't take another mate... PLEASE???!!!!!
I totally loved this chapter!!! So many lemon and then the scenting scene... Jesus!!!! Only thinking of all that is making me horny... I really need to go change my panties right now... But it was incredible!!!!! I love dominant Edward!!!!
And last is Bella sick??? Because she was feeling faint and weak... So???
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow!!! Thank you so much!!! I loved your comment. It made my day!!!
Yes, you're totally right, the baby is very important.
Unfortunately, healing venom doesn't work for everything. And in this case, they weren't sure if the healing venom could actually do the baby harm.
You have some very great questions. They should all be answerd very soon. =) And Bella will never take another mate. She will be Edward's, always and forever. =)
Bella is indeed sick, it will be revealed very soon as well. The trial coming up will be a very difficult, but very important chapter, it's a turning point in the story.
Aww thanks, I'm happy that you like a dominant Edward. So do I *giggles* And he's fuckhawt. lol ;)
I will post a mini chap asap. Hopefully in a few days.
Thanks again, I appreciate the time you take to comment. It brightened my day!
xox
Jells
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...
I totally LOVE this story!!! I just started reading yesterday and could fucking stop!!! My whole house is a mess but I didn't care!!! This story is AMAZING!!!!!!!!! I'm in love with this Edward! They are so perfect for each other!!! So sorry that I didn't review every chapter but I couldn't stop reading.... But I'm so going to read it all over again so this time I.ll review!! lol What will Edward ask Charlie??? To marry Bella??? And who is after Bella??? And what about Tanya??? I have so many questions for you right now but I propise to try and be passient!! Can't wait to read more....
Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. 
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49807
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
hahahaah I LOVE Carlisle!!!!!!!!!!! He is amazing!!!!!!! And hilarious!!! HE know tha exact think to say to creep out Edward!!!!!!!!!!
It's perfect that Edward have alreadu fallen!!!!! And I think that the same goes for Bella!!!!!! Aro will be fine right????? PLEASE!!!!!!!! And Edward had to hear everything... haahahah.... CAn't wait to read more....
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
omg!!!! I really like how this story is going... Edward is already starting to feel thinks for Bella and the same goes for her too... What are the rules about teacher and TA??? And what I didn't like was what Bella said... Will she try to stay away from Edward???
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah!!! It amazing that Bella kissed him and of course he wanted it too... Please don't make them regret it or anything... Edward was so worried but he will help her to not get hurt again... hahahah... Carlisle doesn't know that Bella is Edward's s tudent-TA???? And Alice already met her??? Perfect!!!!!!!! What will happen to the BBQ????
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
omg!!!!!!! Of course Alice knows Bella and Rose... And aro was so understanting!!!! Edward should have told Bella what is going on... Can't wait to read their conversation!!!!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
hahahhaa PERFECT!!!!!!!!! Edward was so cool at first and then he showed the paper... Be;;a was so happy!!!!!!! I loved that they said I love you!!!!!!!! And Emmett has fallen for Rose!!!!! Will Edward brake Carlisle's and Esme's record????? Please YES!!!!!! Can't wait...
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! They defenatelly know great games...!!!!! They learnt so much about each other!!! And the best is that they told the truth... Loved the lemon!!!!!! Can't wait till next chapter... How will Jessica react when she sees Bella as a TA????? And Edward's girlfriend????
Author's Response: Jessica doesn't like TA bella...at all.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
OMG!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!! Jessica is still trying but it won't do any good... hahahah... Can't believe that both parents are expecting!!!!! GOD!!!! Both Sue and Esme are pregnant!!!!! PERFECT!!!!! All the kids are so happy!!!!! And you expected for Bella or Alice or Rose to get soon or something but not the parents...!!!!!!!hahahaah!!!!!
I love what Edward and Bella hav etogether and that they can't keep their hands off of each other... Charlie took it really well in the cafe...
Can't wait to read more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
hahahahah.... It was so amazing!!!!! Such a hilarious chapter... hahahha... "run Edward, run..." hahahaahh... Charlie is right to only want the best for his daughter and Edward is really lucky that he likes him...!!!!! Can't believe that Bella is pregnant... So Sue, Esme, Bella and Alice pregnant all together... No the only one missing is Rose...!!!!!!! Can't wait to read more...!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
omg!!! hahahahaha.... that's so hilarious!! the guys have so much to deal for the next months! hahahahahah... all of the girls will be hormonal and with mood swifts and cravings! hahahahah.. poor them! can't wait to read more...
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Teachers and TA's
hahahaha..... That was hilarious!!!! hahaha...Poor menthey definitely don't expect this!!! hahahaha....
Four year old Isabella Swan has recently moved to America from Australia for her father's job. It is here where she encounters the one boy who will never let her get away.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 471 Read Count: 1438
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Edward's Girl
I really like it!!!! Edward can't live without her!!! Is it the same with Bella???? Not at the same degree but can she be without him???? Please don't make so they're not together... Edward loves her so much!!!! And poor Bella... She lost her parents so suddenly!!!! How are the coping at school??? They are alone??? Where is Alice, Jasper, Emmett and Rose???? Can't wait to read the rest... Update soon...
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One
I really like this story... Why Edward is so mean to others??? And he become obssest with Bella??? I'm really happy that she was brave enough to go to him...
Author's Response:
(: Thanks!
He doesn't want people to take he's crayons. :P
And ya. :P
Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44791
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow!!! I really like this story... I loved that Edward wasn't married to Tanya... It's not like I have something against her but I really like for Bella to be the one to marry...!!!!! Ally knew Bella but Edward didn't??? wow!!!! And they both love each other!!! they are like a mother and a daughter!!! Now all that Edward has to do is to make it official!!!!! ahahah... Will he give it a chance????
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
omg!!!! Can't believe it.... And Edward never knew??? how??? How where they able to not ever meet??? And Bella was friend with Tanya too??? Who will he take it all??? Bella loves Ally so much ana dshe has done so much for her over the years!!! She really is her mother!!!! I love Esme... hahahahh...
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
hahahahah.... Alice will always be Alice... hahahah... Of course she has to 'help Edward and Bella along'... and then she want to get Ally to drees like her... hahahah!!!!! Amazing!!!! Edward and bella are getting so good!!! He isn't agry just confused how he could have missed all this... And he is starting to like Bella so much!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Loved it!!! Is jake gay??? Because he called Edward a God and all... hahaha... Edward is right to be mad!!! Some stranger knows his duaghter and hug her out of nowhere... Bella is diferent!!! He feels for her and she is a woman... but Jake... The car trip was great and they really enjoyed it!!! Can't believe that Bella has her whole house lwith Ally in her mind...!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
omg!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!! It was only natural that Edward would be worried about Jake but when he get to know him he saw that everything is ok!!! Bella would never have put Ally in any danger!!!! they are just so perfect together!!! Like a family!!! Well they already are... I bet that pictures that Jared and jake got are amazing!!!! Edward is in love with Bella!!!!! When will he admit it??? And Ireally hope that Jake and Jared take the baby they so desperatelly want!!!! Can't wait... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
omg!!!!! hahahaha... Can't believe that Edward was so out of everything... His family is so much more extented than he though...!!!!! I'm so happy about Jake and Jared!!! They totally deserved to have a kid!!!!! Ally is so cute!!! Edward is so in love with Bella and the same goes for her... When will they admit their feelings??? Renee is pregnant????
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
LOVED IT!!!!!! Edward could keep himself in sheck any more...!!!!!! He admitted that he is falling and it is so amazing...!!!!! And Bella is pregnant??? wow!!!! Well she could be anyway... They both are scared right now and it is understantable since they only meet a week ago but I'm sure they are going to be extetic when they make sure!!!! They will creat the family they both want so much... Esme ans Alice are crazy but as it seems Carlisle and Charlie isn't much better... ahhaah... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
hahahahahah... Poor Edward! I agree that it was his fault that the house was like that but he is in for some truble! I agree with Esme, thank God that Bella is here now! I totally LOVED the chapter!!! it was amazing!! They are in love and they just haven't told the other yet! Edward wants so much for Bella to have his baby! Ca't wait to read more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."
Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
Date: 19 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : In An Instant
Hey, I'm sorry if I bother you but I really want to ask you if you are going to continue with this story?? It's one of my all time favorite and I really hope you update again! I totally love the connection they have with each other, and Jaimin's possessiveness!! Can't wait to see how their story will move forward! Please I hope to hear soon from you!!
Nerdy, studious Bella has a boyfriend... but nobody believes her. They all think she made him up, and give her hell for it. Then, Edward is made aware of the situation...
Inspired by the song "Landing in London" by 3 Doors Down
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8222 Read Count: 3406
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OMG!!!!!!! Totally loved it!!!!!! It was amazing and so sweet!!!! They fell in love and Bella didn't know how he was...!!!!!! Edward couldn't let her classmate go away with their treatment toward Bella so they got what they deserved!!!!! haahhaah!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me that you are going to make it a story???? Show us their lives in the end of high school and then in college and in life...!!!!!! Think about it?????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow... I really didn't expect so many of you to want a continuation of this! I hadn't thought any further that this. I'll think about it and see if any inspiration strikes.
I'm just stunned.
Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner! Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!
To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple. Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college. They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming. It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?"
This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!
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The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing. Either or.
Rating: MA/NC-17
Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!
18 and older please!
DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35421
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Standing Appointments...
omg!!! LOVED IT!!!! It was so kinky but so incredible at the same time...!!!!! The love that they share is amazing and they give each other what they both need without any judgement...!!!!!!!! They rully love each other!!! And beside the strong men always need someone to take care of them and that is exactly what bella is doing...!!!!!! PLEASE tell me tat you are going to continue it??? Please!!!! I'm begging here...!!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Enough is Enough...
loved it!! that was so fucking hot!!!! I totally understant that Edward was so frustrated with not getting any Mommy time!! that is something that they both want and need and he was so stressed with work too... will they try for another baby???
Author's Response:
Oh my! Aren't you a naughty one, and as far as the baby's concerned, we'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Dr. Cullen is stuck working on Christmas again. Will he get that miracle hes been praying for? And what can he do for the patient in room 3? M for a very Merry Christmas! All Human. EPOV.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2355 Read Count: 1928
Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
PERFECT!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!! amazing one shot!!! it was so intense and sweet at the same time... I really need to change my panties right now... hahahah... Bella was the best christmas gift!!!! PLEASE think about continueing???? At least make it a couple of chapters more???? PLEASE!!!! I'd love to see how their continue to live... I'd totally love that...!!!!!!!!
He gently pulled me down the bed, bringing my legs over his shoulders. He kneeled, and a moment later, I felt those wonderful fingers of his spread me for him in slow passes. It was a play on my fantasy, and I didn't hold in the cry of pleasure when I felt his mouth-slightly chilly-touch my most sensitive spot. I felt myself arch, and my hands grabbed his head, holding on to the silk strands of his hair as he began licking and lapping and driving me completely beyond reasonable thought.
A little plot, a lot of lemon.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8601 Read Count: 3564
Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Eternally Gifted
omg!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!! It was so intense!!!! I really need to change my panties right now... Edward loved her for the first moment he met her and bella felt the connection in their touch!!!! She would wanted to be change if she knew and I loved that they just followed their insticts!!!!! Her pleasure will always be the most important think for him and his for her!!!!! And now they have eternity to live!!!! PLEASE think about making it a story???? Show us how they live and of course the first years of mating... hahahaah... Or at least a couple of chapter more???? Think about it!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I sent you a PM on FFN.
Alley Cat.
While writing EPOV of the Twilight Saga I always go back to Edward's past, in journal entries or thoughts. I have long believed Edward's Catholic upbringing and faith made him who he is so this delves into that and shows us what his life would have been like had he met Isabella Swan in 1918, Chicago.
Thanks to @UNF4Rob for the fantastic banner she made for That Boy, which was donated to Fandom4Floods.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11812 Read Count: 983
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: That Boy
wow!!! That was such an amazing one-shot!!!! Perfect!!!! Edward found his Bella nd the army was only a memory!!!! They are just so sweet together!!!! And of courseboth their parents were happy about their union!!!!! They love each other so much ant they will make the other happy!!! I'd love to read more... Maybe when she gets pregnant???
Taboo definition ta-boo -adjective 1.proscribed by society as improper or unacceptable. Things are not always what they seem.AH drabble warning:BDSM themes, possible lemons, and coarse language
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1274 Read Count: 2822
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow!! I really like how this starts!!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This seems so promissing!! I trully like it a lot!!! Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you like :)
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
hahahah... Bella's parents are crazy!!!! ahahah.. But Edward can deal with them... hihihi...
Author's Response:
I know right :)
Date: 20 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
loved it!! hahahah... poor kid... hihihi... I trully like this story... Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I'm so glad people like it. :)
Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730
Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Media Madness
LOVED IT!!!! I totally love how Edward and Bella are with each other!!! I could read fluff about them forever!! I love the character that you have created!!! Thak you so much for sharing it with us!!
So what will happen with Eric??? Will he manage to hurt Bella??? Or will he go to jail?? Can't wait to read more...
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Damage Control
LOVED their inrterview!! I didn't thought that it was posible for me to love them more but I do!!! hahahaha... they are amazing!!!! and eid Eric kill Faith?? What will happen now?? Will only Edward's testefy by enough??? Can't wait to read more...
Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107118
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
aaahhhh.... come on.... who is it??? Please??? Can't wait for more...
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
wow!!! she is dead?? finaly! And Victoria told them the whole truth? that's amazing! they needed it!! especially Edward!!
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Loved it!!! It was such an amazing journey!!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!! Edward and Bella love each other so much and they are sooo happy that they have their baby with them finally!!! They will handle anything together!!!
She's a rockstar and he's a musician. Let's take a peek at a morning of their life. EXB Mature. Olderward. Written for Fandom4JuvenileDiabetes
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4060 Read Count: 6231
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow!!! that was so fuching hot!!! LOVED IT!! Such an amazing story!!!! They boh are so sexy and they can't keep their hands off of each othet.... hihihi...
Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.
Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
So he won't change her??? really?? or will he change his mind?? And he won't fuck her? because he said that it's too dangerous...???
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
i totally like this story!!! Love Sir's pov!!! he is amazing!! does he mean Tanya???? and what will he do?? will e have Bella or will he only watch??? can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
i love that you haven't read the one shot! It makes it sooo much more fun!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
wow!!!! love that!! Tanya shows nothing... that is even worst! it's like Edward is incapable of making fee anything....
Author's Response:
Tanya obeys, that's it. It would be perfect, but boring.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
what? will he fuck her?
Author's Response:
Edward already has, many many times.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
what wil he do??? and wih James? will he take Tanya? or will they try to brake her??
Author's Response:
Tanya will be fine :)
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Edward is giving her to James right? but how will Tanya react?? she won't like it... will she try to hurt Bella after?
Author's Response:
I will follow the story from the original Midnight Caller.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
wow!! can;t wait to see what they have planed!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
hahahaha... James just want to punish someone... what plans did Edward have?? about Bella??
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Brella willbe perfect for Edwar! Tanya is to perfect for her own good!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
it;s so hot to see Bella like that but only Edward can actually see her.... I think that Bella lkes t think that anyone could see her...
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
shit! you're right...picturing him with cock in hand watching her is so fucking hot!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
wow!I'm so excited to see what will happe next!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
that was awesome! It muat have been terified for Bella but oruit was great... ireally like that he stalks her!!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
doesn't she care at all if someone is watching her?? really?? or does she think that it was a wrong number??
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
hahahaha... you think so Bella... you think.... Edward can see you and he enjoys every minute of it!!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
I love this story!!! can't wait to read more... I show what he likes and what not and Bella will learn in time! She was so nervous and it's only natural after all... someone stranger is staring at her and stalk her. it's scary even if she is quiet excited about that!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114
the TWCS doesn't sent mail for the updates... if someone want to change that and get a email for every update of his favorite srorie and author go to "my account", then "edit preferences" and and choose "contact when favories are updated". I hope I helped!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217
hahahahah... poor Emmett.. hahahah... this wil teach him to tease Edward al the time... hahahaha... can't wait to read more...
banner made by: ME !!
Bella is in her senior year of high school. She hated all science until she met Mr. Cullen, her biology teacher. He is older, she is just 18. Will their chemistry last past the doors of the classroom?
This a B/E story line
I should have been patient and waited for my Beta she is great !!
This has been Beta'd by RAH07890
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14159 Read Count: 54613
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
wow nice!! I really like how they are together!And that they have the same feelings, right? the house is amazing!!can't wait to read more...
Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap
omg!!!! That was so fucking hot!!! Their conversation or phone sex, whatever you call it, was so hot!!!! Bella is a lucky bitch!!! I loved that they foubd each other through facebook and that Em had uploaded all this photos of her!! That was how she found out Edward too!!!! Can't wait to see them together again! Edward won't be able to kip himself in check this time and I don't think that either of them want him to... lol!!!!
“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135539
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
LOVED IT!!!! It was incredible! Their first date was great and their connection out of this world! I love the way they are with each other! They don't play games! They just are themselves! Will he take Bella to the Annual Gala?
Carlisle is great! And he is his butler? I definitely wasn't expecting that... hahaha... How did Edward's parents die? And what about his brothers and other family?
Author's Response:
All will be revealed in time. It is mearly a waiting game to see what each chapter brings
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
PERFECT!!! I think I found my new favorire-can't-wait-to-read-the-next-chapter fic!!!! It been a while since I had tha and I'm so excited!! They are so grea together! They do fit perfectly and I love that they are open with each other! Especially Isa! She says what she wants and feels! So why won't Edward invited her to the Gala? And the kink will start in the next chapter? can't to se how that'll happen? They didn't even mention anything betwin them.... Can't wait tll next time...!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Perfect as always!!! Loved it!! I loved that they found a mentor!! Both Garrett and Kate will help them so much to fully understand every aspect of their fetish! They are doing great alone so far but a mentor is essential!! They can confide to the other about aspects that Isa as little wouldn't understand for Edward as her Daddy and the other way around!! Can't wait to read more. .
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: A Pale Fire
Loved it!!!! Edward was an idiot for letting time get past them like that while he was hidding away from his own fear but at least he inderstood that he needed to talk to someone and Garrett was the best option for advise!!! I understand his fears andthey need to talk them out with Isa!! She was so hurt and she felt abandoned!! She was right though, Edward was in real pain seeing how much he hurt her!! They have a lot to talk about and can't wait to read it... How soon will the scene that Edward dreams be?? Will Edward get lost in his painting often? Or will they find a rhythm? Will Edward say "I love you" again in a more romantic setting, like Isa wanted?
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow!!! This story seems amazing!! I love how it starts! It is so different from "who's your papi" but I think I'm falling for this Edward! He was so intrigued with Isa!! What is his story? Does he mean the fact that he likes to be a daddy? I have so many questions about his life but I'm sure with time everything will be revealed....
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Loved it!!! I don't know how you do it but I think every chapter is better than the previous!!! Garret and Kate are great mentors and they helped both Edward and Isa understand what is going on. I so glad that they got past the awkward phase again!! Can't wait for their weekend!! Will Edward follow Garret's advice?? What is Carlisle problem?? Why did Edward "had" to sent him on vacations?? Does he think that he is losing Edward to Isa? All their lives it was just the two of them and non of the other girlfroends were very important but Isa is!! Can't wait to read more...
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Loved it!!! I definitelly wasn't expcting everything to start like that... hm seeing pohots on her Mac! lol that's so unique! And they are going to learn together? Perfect! This chapter was so ot and sexy! And even though Edward is new to all this he loved it! So how fast will their relantionship go? and will they partisipate in BDSM? and in their community? Will there be anyone against their relantionship? And why? Edward is known but he isn't soneone that te press deal with alot... mostly his brothers! can't wait to read more... till next time...
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Loved it!!! Edward is so exited to learn about this new aspect of his life!! And he trully love everything he find out! He has found what he didn't even know that he was mising...!! Carlisle is so great! A great friend and confident and he knew what Edward needed to hear!! the phone sex was so hot and Edward was incredibe in the new role!! So sexy!! I also loved that Isa wanted his opinion on the piersing and that Edward was so posessive and wanted to go with her!! Will they meet at the gala? Isa is playing there right?? can't wait to read more....
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Perfect!!!! This chapter was so great!! Carmen is like Edard's bid sister! He only what him to be happy but she is nozy too! lol! She just can't sit aside... hahahah... she needed to know who Isa was!! I believe that Edward has started fauling in love with Isa!!! He can't get her out of his mind! and he doesn't want to! lol! Can't wait to read more... and their date... Will they start playing soon? Being Daddy and his little one?
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
omg!! I'm so hot and bothered right now.... I really need to change my panties!! lol! LOVED the chapter!! It was amazing!! The sex scene was so hot!! I love that they are so honest with each other!! They are so similar over so many things! They are perfect for each other!!Can't wait to read more next time... till then... :))
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
LOVED IT,!!! This chapter was soooooo amazing!!! They are so natural in both aspects of their relantionship!! They were so great in the morning after and their scene was so hot!! I loved that they talked and that they are so open with each other!! The only think I didn't get was when they talked and agreed to tne scene they played... was it at a previous chapter? Anyway it was so awesoe!! And sexy!! Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
No, the part where they talked extensively was not put in the story, but I may write it in an outtake
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
LOVED IT!!!!! This Edward and Isa are amazing!!! You have created some amazing charachers and can't wait to read more. Isa's friends are great and crazy at the same time! Edward fit right into the group perfectly!! He really enjoyed himself too despite his nervousness at the begining! They are stating to fall for each other right? The lemon was so hot!!! It was incredible!! And toward the end it was so much more intimate!! There were feelings too!! When will they get into more of the daddy kink? Will they set a day to play or will it be more when the mood struck? Will they first become strong in their relantionship and then start playing more? And why Isa won't meet Carlisle? They are at Edward's house after all!! Can't wait to read more... Till next time!!
I hope the best with what is going on in your country! Stay safe honey!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
loved it!!! I was so excited to see a new chapter!!! I loved how they proccessed to their kinky relantionship!!Edwardwas hreat and so was Isa! I tottaly agree that they are perfect for each other!! Theyshould be more open with what they want but I guest that only comes with time and trust toward the other person!! Not that I'm saying that they don't trust each other. It was the best that they set a dateto play every two weeks! They both need that reasurance right now! I can't wait to see what will Edward do with his exibition... lol! So will his brothers be supprotive of his relantionship with Isa? Andwill they attent any party with other dadies and their little girls at some point? can.t wait to read more... I wish the best to your sister for her wedding! Toalways behappy withher life!! :))
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Loved it!!!!!!! It was amazing!! I was wondering what will happen when Edward get lost into his mind and his work and this chapter pretty much answered it!!! I loved how Isa took it!! She was mad at him for ignoring her but when she understood what was going on she was so nice!! And I loved her first answere to his text when he go to lunch!! Can't wait to read more andsee them descovering more about themselves and their relantionship!!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! It was such an amazing chapter!!!!!!! So hot!!!!! I loved that Edward went to Madame's Rosa's place!! He learnt so much!! She was great help!! Will she be the one to guide him and Isa? To be their Mentor in age play? I totally loved their scene!!! It's starting to get more natural for them to play! To delve into this part of their relantionship and to get into the right mindset!!! Will they become regural in Madame's Rosa's place now that Edward is a member? What will Isa think of the place? And will they meet in there anyone that they know but had no idea that he or she was into thinks like that? That would be so much fun! lol Can't wait to read more.... till next time....
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Perfect!!!! I sooo LOVED this chapter!!!!! I love how Edward snd Isa are with each other!! Their relantionship is so perfect for them even though they are still getting to know each other! They do have a lot to talk about but they make through everything just as they managed so fur! Will they set timesto play every weekend? Edward family is crazy! They want to know everything and yet they were pretty nice with Isa! I loved that Edward treats her diffirently and he doesn't shy in front of his family! Emmett is so nice! Whenwill he meet his girl? I loved Edward possesiveness too!!!! Why Carlisle acted like this toward Isa? Did something happened that we missed? Can't wait to read more....
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I know I've said it a lot but I LOVED it!!!!!!! It was perfect!!!!!! I loved how they talked about everything!!!! They are so honest with each other and that is the most important think in every relantionship and in their Daddy/Little relantionship even more!!! I love that they decided to have more and can't wait to read more... Edward is a natural and giving orders like that was so hot!!! He knows how to play her body perfectly!! Will they make it easily? Or will it get hard to be in Daddy/Little mind set with their lives going on and them having responsibilities throught out the day? Will they move together soon? Can't wait to read more....
Date: 07 Apr 2013 Title: A Pale Fire
LOVED IT!!!!!! It was such an amazing chapter!!! So intense!!! It was exactly what they both needed!!! And I loved that Edward talked her from the start that the scene wasn't about forgiving!! I only have one world PERFECT!!!! Can't wait to see more scenes between them!!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Loved it!! Yet agsinyou out did yourself!! Each chapter is better than the last!! I totally love the relantionship that they have!!! They are so perfect for each other!! They have can to know and anticipate some times what the other will need!! Isa's family are crazy!! They think that they have a say in her life when they don't!! It is her life and since she is happy they should be happy and not trying to control and change her!! I loved how Edward didn't fear Charlie in the end but stood up to him... He is a Dom after all and I loved how he just said "yes" daring him to say anything else!!! I just can't wait to read more... Will Isa's family interfere with her life a lot? Or will they live her just live it as she wants?
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!! That was so fucking hot!!!!Ilove whenEdward let his beast out to play!!! Can't wait to read more... I hope everything go well with your studies!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
perfect!! I absolutely Love this story!! I'm so jealous of their relantionship!! lol.. I want one of those too!! They have a long way ahead of them till they manage to find a relantionship that is perfect for them but I trully beleive that they will!! Will they consult Garrett about moving together andwhat to expect? And will Carlisle be ok with that? He isn't against Isa any more but moving together? Can't wait to read more... Will they go to the the party that Madam Rosa is hosting? Till next time...