Reviews by bluefire-33
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89817
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: bluefire-33 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: How To Make An Entrance

I'm sorry but I dont like Edward right now. it talks of him cheating!

i hate cheaters. so why the heck does she want to get close to one again.

I also dont understand why bella hasntfiled for a devoirs if i where her and i didnt see or speek with my cheating husband in 4 long years i would have filed for a devoirs and gottin it done by now...

and why is she wanting his love, and touch. who knows what the he** his hands been on.

if i were bella i would be yell at him then file for one right there or maybe file for a devoirs later that night.

But thats just me, lol

I like your story. though your characters sometimes piss me off, thats normal...

 

oh before i forget what is up with felix, isnt he her lawyer?

Update soon!!!

oh wait the next chapter is already up LMAO

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38952
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: bluefire-33 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope they find a way to help Andy. he is one of my favorite characters in this story. the way he reminds me so much of my best friend/unbiological sister...

I hope he get clean and gets out of all this truble.

Love the story by the way!

~tell next time~



Author's Response:

Bella cares about him, and Jasper would do anything for Bella, so they'll do what they can to help him.  Glad you enjoying the story and connecting with my original character!

 

 

Reviewer: bluefire-33 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hope they can help Alice. she was one onf my favorite characters in twilight. and its sad to read about her like this.

i also want to know about Andy. how hes doing and stuff...

love the story



Author's Response:

The only bad thing about being a Bella/Jasper shipper is that Alice has to go somehow!  This was the way I chose to go, but don't worry, everyone will get resolution by the end of the story!

Hope you continue to enjoy!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!