Reviews by pnkats
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 219: Chapter 219

Give it to him Rosalie!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Awesome!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Loved it!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Wow why does he want her to go there I wonder

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Please more!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Hurt her because she disobeys or because you lose control!

Author's Response:

He would never hurt her because she disobeys. He is a good Dom. Doms don't hurt their submissives unless it is what the submissive wants. That isn't to say that spankings and punishments don't hurt, but Edward is afraid of losing control and hurting her.

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

But Bella isn't just any human huh!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Lucky for Bella she maintained her control

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Well I guess she better figure it out huh?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 214: Chapter 214

Loved it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Finally! Still can't wait till they are face to face!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow sexy Edward!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Poor Edward so all he ever plans on doing is just watching because he said he could never be with a human!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

Poor Bella. I know she's disappointed

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

For now that's fine but eventually she will see him?!

Author's Response:

of course, silly :)

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Too bad they aren't meeting yet. Can't wait though

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Poor Bella she doesn't feel good about herself now does she

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Omg me too!!!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh Edward such a stalker!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmm I wonder how long he will watch her before he makes his move?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yes so now they meet??!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Uh oh what will shethink

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Really that's all she reacted?



Author's Response:

She's pretty sure it's a wrong number. 

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hmm well someone obviously saw in bella!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh she is so perfect for him

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hmmmm she really needs him

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

He is such a tease. Guess she kows now the call is real

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hmm so she's anxious for the call

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh naughty edward

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Hmm so she is undecided

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Alice a dom huh

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Indeed he has!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh no no sharing please

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Yeah Bella don't be intimidated

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Awesome

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Loved it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Such a dirty stalker Edward!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Wow dominate Edward!! I like

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Call Edward!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Omg if it's Edward of course!! I mean only him would I take this from!! How much longer before they meet??!!

Author's Response:

the way im going, a while... dont forget the entire one shot is available on ff.net, but none of epov..

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Loved it. Poor Bella wont get her call !!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Can't wait for the date!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

So why did she stop being angry I wonder?



Author's Response:

In chapter 40 Bella realized that it wasn't her best performance. She decided to treat tonight like date night with herself!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Will he call I wonder

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Wonder of he will change his mind in the end

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Come on call Edward!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Looks lie bell is going to have to wait a while for edward

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Omg he's a vampire??!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Awesome

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Awesome again

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Me too!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

He really misses Tanya??!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

She learns fast

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Awesome!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Oh Edward such a tease!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Hmm I want to know too!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Oh he has it so bad !!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Awesome

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Yeah he's kinda losing it there!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Hmm so is Emmett a vamp too?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Impatient much?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

What will she say when he valls

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Awesome!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Uh oh someone's in trouble

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Damage control?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Oh Edward your killing her

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Yeah he's losing it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Will she be able to?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Uh oh can she do it?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

She did it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Awesome but cannot wait till the finally meet!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

So who is Edward's master

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Oh so it as carlisle

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Will he change his rules for Bella

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Hope that will change and he will be able to

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

What's he doing on the roof I wonder!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Loved Carlisle's pov!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Guess Edward better call her!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Wonder what kind of favor Tanya can give him

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Oh you are evil! Can't wait to find out though

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Wonder of he will ever be able to be with Bella the way he wants but says he can't. Poor edward

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Well it would have to be Edward saying it and no one else!

Author's Response:

I totally get what you mean. We had a discussion in one of the rooms about who could say things like that and what they could say. 

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Really can't wait till the meet!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Hmm but Bella doesn't know that at this point that Edward is thinking he can't do that with her?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Hope he can be different with bella

Author's Response:

Everything is differnt with bella :)

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

She made it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Poor Edward!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Call soon edward

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Ah yes Tanya. I guess I'd be Pissed too if Edward let me go!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Poor Bella. It's hard to feel less than when you are around super model looking women. I forgot. Does Edward know what her real name is.

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Yeah I would be scared too kinda

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Thanks sir for your contribution to this story!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

So will she meet him soon?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Perhaps just surprised maybe! If not hopefully excited

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Hmm so will Edward find out that Tanya has been snippy

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Loved it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Loved it

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Omg what does she want!!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

You tell her Edward. Jealous much??