Reviews by trixielou
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624810
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

WOW....  I think I am stunned. UGGG... My tummy is turning but I am sure there is a light at the end of the tunnel so here I go...



Author's Response:

Be prepared.  It's about to get a LOT worse before it gets better.  If you decide you can't deal with it skip to ch 11 and send me an email.  I'll send you the summary. of 2-10

Mic

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

I really hate to see them leave.  I loved that they spang something new on each other on his show.  

Great story.  Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us!

 

 



Author's Response:

i know, i hate to see them go as well

but alas the story must end

thanks for taking the time to read

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Wow. A lot went on in this chapter.  All the kids have had there issues with there other halves and mom and dad were there to save the day!! Yeah.

Love seeing Bella grow stronger and more confident. How she stood up for herself and Edward. How crazy to think he wouldn't want to walk with her down the Red Carpet. Stupid lady.

Great story. Thanks!



Author's Response:

thank you so much trix!

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

It is great to see Bella stand up for herself and put Edward in his place.  Sometimes you need to show the ones you love that you are not a door mat and you have to stand up for yourself.  

I think Edward has grown also.  He needed for her to to show him how strong and powerful she is becoming.  Put him in his place.  It is very humbling and he needed that. 

Can't wait to see how she handles the party. Hopefully she will shine.  Confident!

Thanks for the wonderful story.  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for your comments and review

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Great chapter.  Bella did so well at the party!  I think those three evil ladies are going to cause more trouble... they just seem that type.

 I also wonder if Riley is going to cause some issues???  So may things that could get between them.. hmmm

Great story.

 



Author's Response:

you naughty pixie - you love the drama don't you - well sweetie you have come to the right place - DRAMA CENTRAL XOXO

Patience my little munchkin - all in good time :)

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

WOW.... You are throwing them back into reality. Lets just hope they TALK to each other. But in real life~ that doesn't happen all the time. 

Lord knows they have been through a lot. I wonder if Garrett will travel on the dark side? Hmmm/

 

On the edge of my seat waiting for the next update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64140
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

LOVED,LOVED this story.  What a great story line.  Could not put this down.  

TNGUS ROCKS....

 

Thank you!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain

I am so glad they did not run into trouble in Portland. They have been through enough.  Bella is great support for Edward as he is for her. It just makes your heart sing.

Can't wait to see what Forks brings them. Luck and Love I hope.

 

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

SO enjoying this story..  A strong Bella is great. I want her to kick Victoria's ass in a big bad way.  I also want her and Edward to enjoy the few weeks they have together before she has to go home. 

Hopefully Charlie will take care of James his self?? Maybe.. who knows he and Jasper could be out some where near James and Charlie's gun could go off by accident???  YA think?

Thanks again for a great story.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Yeah... I wonder if that means he is sharing her room???  HOPE SO.

How long till he finally figures out James is a butt?   And what is the deal with Rene? Can Bella really trust her? Things that make you go hmmmm.

 

Great Chapter.  Thanks!  Happy Thanksgiving.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

YEAH......  Jack will be so happy to see his dad.  What a great birthday present. 

I have truly enjoyed this story and have recommended it to my blog group.  You have done such a great job with the charters. A different take on Edward and Bella.

 

Thanks for the ride. Can't wait for the Epi.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Love this story.... I think I have said this before.  Sorry to see this end. But can't wait to see what you have waiting for us.

I wonder how far the Epi will take us?  Will we see Jack grown and in love. With Kids? Will we see Seth grown. 

The wedding? So much could be done. Where will you take us?

Thank you again for a great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254713
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Gotta love Dougie. Stands up for his girl.

Good to see Edward be a little green when someone else has to watch after his pet.

 

Ahhh.... See what she did for him. All nice and clean.  I wonder how he will take that. It was part of her  independence against James.  That should be interesting.

 

Great chapter. Thank you so much for sharing your gift wtih us.

 



Author's Response:

Yes ... Dougie is great -- he cracks me up, thanks for reading ..louise

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I can't even think that this is your first fanfic... HOLY COW~!!!

I can't wait to see what goes down in the club.  I think Bella will pull a  9iron out of her pocket and floor everyone. And Edward will just wonder what the hell... his little sub..

James may not be the only problem...  ex sub's and dom's with no dick may also pose a HUGE problem.  Only time will tell. I just can't wait.

Great story Glad I found it here.  Can't wait till the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Well Thanks... and yes I am a virgin... to FF..lol.. I have a thursday teaser for you...lml

You know what I think?” He raised his eyebrows “No I don’t but I would love to know love to hear it”

 

“I think you are wrong …“ Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.” Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

 

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.” Edward nodded

 

“Your right I was, Aro doesn’t give them out.” I went on with my theory, while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom.

 

“Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week, you and I got together and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you”

 

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?” I nodded.

 

“And it’s working”

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

WOW.... I need a cold shower now.  I think I was sweating with Bella.   I am so glad she did good.  That will boost her ego now.  And I can not wait to see what her reward is!!!!!!!!

Thank you for the great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you...lml

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Another great chapter.  Bella's dream seems to be telling her something.  I wonder if maybe her trip to Forks will be more than she expects??? 

I hope Edward is somewhere in the room... Maybe just went to the bathroom! I would hate that James was lurking around the coroner.

Hmmm... What a wonderful trip you have taken us on. 

 

 



Author's Response:

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Always the provider he see's things she forgets about.  Bella is a "doer" "get it done" type person.  I see where she forgets. She just wants to handle things. 

 I think this new chick comes from the club. Poor girl has it coming  from all ends.  

Screw Tanya.  And I think the family feels the same way. 

Bella has Jewels coming out of all ends, doesn't she.

I also think Seth will be her defender when the time comes.... 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I am amazed it has only been a short time they have been together.  She has grown so much and I really think he has too.   The joy he gets out of every day life with Bella says something. 

Can't wait to see where you take them and us.  You are doing a great job!!

What could possibly happen in FORKS??? Hopefully Bella will get a chance to stand up for herself. 

 

 



Author's Response:

In all honesty this would have taken up to a year to get to this point... I rushed it because of time constraints ((could you imagine how long this FF would be if it happened over a year ? Holy Calony ...lol....)))

Forks should be interesting ...there is alot that can happen..that's about al I can say ....

Thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you...

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

 

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Wow.. Great way to get him in!  Edward is going to kick his ass.... I have visions and Jacob is going to be right by his side... I can dream anyway.. 

Can't wait for next update!

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

What a strong chapter. Both having to show restraint.  I bet that was a LONG car ride.

 

Thanks for another great chapter.

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

I think I laughed most of the way through. Good Chapter.

Can't wait for the next update. They should be heading home soon right?

 

 



Author's Response:

the chapter was fluff and family time and yes they only have one more day of vacation which should be two chapters worth, then they go home to face what has been happning, they meet with Mr weiss (the PI) the weekend playtime and the 25th Anniversay at the club...oh and Uncle Marcus and Aunt Didyme arrive --- that should be interesting....

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89148
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: Flirting With the Long Arm of the Law

Love It, Love it, love it....

 

I am sure Charlie is not done with him yet.... But I am sure he will go to bed with a smile :D

 



Author's Response:

Hi trix!

Thanks for the storylove!

There will be a smile on that boy's face when he goes to bed...I can just feel it, can't you? ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Like it Could Be Anyone Else?

They are getting so close. 

 

Loving the story. Thanks for sharing with us!!

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Different

Great chapter.  Wonder how long YET will take??  Jasper needs a release or something. He needs to give them a break.

Wonder how long till Alice finally wins.  So many questions.

 

Sorry you feel so frusterated.  I read and enjoy this story. Hopefully it will get better for you.

 

Thanks for sharing with us.

 

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100866
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

Oh My... So much could happen. i think this Edward is a true hoedog. He will have to have reality slaped in his face good and hard.  

Maybe he went back to Victoria because he knows there is know connection. hmmm so many things it could be. 

 

Can't wait to see where you are taking them.

Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and Happy New Year.

 

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218283
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Great start.  Can't wait to see how Bella adjust to nice.  

I am sure the good doc Cullen will help ease all her woo's.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review - you know that the doctor is going to try - but this is a slower burn than plu.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well done.  I was wondering how you were going to do this chapter.  I think you did great.  

 

Can't wait to see where you take these two and all of Hope Springs.  Roscoe really needs for Bella to love him.. hopefully soon.

Thank you for sharing your story and gift with us.

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

I am loving it!!! What will blue balls Cullen do????  What will Hornaella want to do? 

 

 

So much to look forward too. Thanks for sharing your. Wonderful gift.

 

TIll next time... C

Summary: Past Featured Story

CFoW

 

Lily O'Brien is a hopeful child. Will her special cups of hot chocolate and a new friendship with Dr. Edward Cullen make her greatest wish come true? Aaaaaw moments ahead.

 

*Edward, Bella, Alice, Charlie, Angela

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28639 Read Count: 8913
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wonderful!! Lovely....

 

Thank you so much for sharing.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Loving the story... Can't wait till they get to get to some lovin' themselves!!!

 

Thanks for sharing with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Recklessangel007!

 

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419079
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

And it begins!! At least they had a wonderful vacation. My guess it is Jacob.. Charlie in toe.

I like how you have helped Bella find her confidence and in turn helped her loose some weight. Being a see saw weight looser I like reading her progress. I think you have done a great job with it. 

Can't wait for the next update. 

Thanks for sharing with us. 

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wonderful!!!! I love how you wrote these two, well all of them.  Can't wait for the epi. I hate to see this end. It has been one of my favorites.

 

Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us. I hope you have another stroy up your sleve. 

 

Thank you again.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Epilogue

I have enjoyed this ride. It was emotional , scary,funny,and beautiful. You tell a wonderful tail. I think your epi  was  great. Closure all the way around.

 

Thank you for sharing and I am very glad you did not give up on this story. Screw the haters.  I never understand them when it comes to fan fiction.  

 

Falling by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

falling

Bella is just divorced when she meets Edward in a club. Can he help her heal?

 

Can she get over the past and fall in love with this amazing man?

 

falling

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124179 Read Count: 55188
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2013
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow... You have carried them a long way.  So proud of the way they have handeled themselves..

 

Can't wait to see little Edwards and Bellas running around..

 

Great stroy. Thank you for sharing with us.

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

What a great end.  I really enjoyed reading your tale of Bella and Edward.

 

Thank you for sharing with us.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

rl

 

Edward and Bella met in High School. After graduation they lost contact and went on with their life. Years later they meet again. Both have a lot of secrets.

They’re both unhappy and when they bump in to each other, they start to realize that there is more than just friendship. A/H OC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75604 Read Count: 30198
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Friendship

Great chapter!!!  Hopefully a start to a beautiful relationship.

 

Good luck on your exams.  Can't wait for the next update.

 

Thanks for sharing with us.

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Reunion

Thank goodness. Now they can get on with their lives.  I hope Paul because someones toy in jail...

 

Thank you for sharing with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"So, you have a kid?" He asks. "And you live with your best friend? Who happens to be a dude?"

I nod, and answer, "That would be correct."

"Isn't that weird?"

I smirk. Wait for it! "No weirder than the fact he's also my son's father." Needless to say, my date comes to a screeching halt.

BPOV. Family/Humor. Drabble.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24443 Read Count: 102174
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It's a start!! Loving this story.  What a different twist on this tale.

Can't wait for the next update.  

 

Thanks for sharing with us.

Right There by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

*Sequel to Come Closer* Accepting your place in life–and letting go of all that kept you in the wrong–is a powerful thing. Edward Masen knows this. Knows it with his heart, his soul, his being. Forbidden doesn't exist anymore. 'Can't have' are no longer words in his mind's vocabulary. And were never in his claim's. Isabella is getting everything she's ever wanted. To be his.

 

Right There banner by Frozen Soldier


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45749 Read Count: 5376
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Perfectly Appropriate

Thank goodness..... Let her have ALL of HIM just how she WANTS him and HE wants HER!!! 

 

What a slow and painful burn but OH so wroth it.

 

Thank you for sharing..Can't wait till the next chapter.

 

Dutch by nikkirocsurworld Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

A fluffy love story of two childhood friends. All EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13940 Read Count: 8229
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Age 36

Wow what a great story.  You have given us everthing... lots of love, humor, saddness and just a touch of angst.

 

I can't wait for the next chaper.

Thank you for sharing with us.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Age 38 BPOV

Loving this story.  I was not getting your updates.  I love that she was a seragant for Rose and Em.  Happy and sad just like life.

Thank you for sharing with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

alliwant

Bella's five year old son makes a Christmas wish she'd never expected, and sets her entire world spinning. Written for the Fandom for Preemies compilation.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44910 Read Count: 15301
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2013 Updated: 11 Oct 2013
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love this Christmas wish...  And Birthday wish. 

What a great story.  Thank you so much for sharing with us.

 

Mismatched Love by WeeAndJess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: 

Zany Bella is the maid of honor of her sister’s wedding. She has to deal with Charlie, her soon to be brother in law and his uptight rich family who don't like her. To top it all off, Charlie's brother Edward is back and they seemed to be pushed together in everything they do. They are a mismatched pair that can't seem to tell each other how they feel.

BANNER BY Deebelle1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67590 Read Count: 40439
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Jan 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ohhhh... Can we smack down Tanya, Rose and Alec???  I am really enjoying this story.

Can't wait till the next chapter.

 

Thank you for sharing with us.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Can't these two get a break? Oh my gosh! Let's gang up and kick some Rosnya ass!!! (Rose/Tanya) 

 

Can't wait to see how you take them down and bring our two love birds together. 

 

Thank you for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story


The Sequel to Swan Lakes Ranch. The Cullens are on the ranch and ready to help out. Bella comes to terms with her husband’s death, can she find a cure for her broken heart in Edward? Will Edward’s past haunt him? Will their relationship be ripped apart before it has a chance to grow? AH B/E M Romance/Drama

 

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Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, Stephanie Meyers does. However, I do own this plot and story-line.  I also own my own original characters.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, products, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Author’s Note: This is a continuation of my story Swan Lakes Ranch. I would advise you read that story first as they go together and there are things you will not understand in LTLA without reading SLR. 

Also, if you are looking for a story full of lemons, this is not the story for you. 

I’m warning you now, there will be character deaths in this story.

Enjoy!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Swan Lakes Ranch Series
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107330 Read Count: 40193
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2013 Updated: 16 Jul 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds

I am really enjoying this story. I like how detailed you are about them and their surroundings.  

I love how Edward is with Cassie.

 

Can't wait tell next chapter.  Thank you for sharing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101884
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Author's Note

I just want to start by saying Thank you for sharing your gift with us.  It is a gift and we take it freely. You have to first take care of you. Your greif does not have a time line and you can not rush your healing.

There may be those who are all about "ME" and what "I" want but they don't matter. You have to do what is right for your well being.  So when you find that you are able to get back to these kids, you will and we will be here ready to read.

Prayers of peace are with you and I am truely sorry for mom having to go. I will hug mine twice as hard on Tuesday when I go to see her just for you.

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

concealed

 

 

 

 

 

Oscar night in Tinseltown and Bella Swan is all dressed up with nowhere to go. What happens when her uptight coworker isn't as buttoned up as she thought?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11460 Read Count: 4647
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2014 Updated: 25 Feb 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

This was great. I hate to see it end. You have such a great start to continue with...hinthint.

 

Thank you dor sharing with us.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind review.

On The Bed by kyla713, ericastwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

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Edward has been trying all morning to get his neighbor's attention, at the risk of being manhandled by others. Will he finally get the woman he's been lusting after? Or will old Ms. Stanley get her paws on him?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4679 Read Count: 2246
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2014 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: On The Bed

Very Cute.... I love fun Edward and Bella. I am enjoying y'alls one shots.

 

Thank you very much for sharing. 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159709
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wonderful.. Maybe we can get an out take 15 yrs down the road.

Love y'all's tells. Can't wait to what you have for us next.

thank you for sharing with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201874
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: My Super Boring Life

She really never stood a chance. Poor Charlie.  Can't wait to see where you go with this.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. It's going to be a slow burn. The first fifteen chapters of this story is available in ffn but I am moving the story here. So for now there will be daily updates! :-)

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter-11: It’s Happening!

Enjoying your story. Can't wait to see how the chemistry works out for them. 

Encase you didn't known your updates are not "updating" to our time line. 

Thank you for sharing with us. 



Author's Response:

You're welcome.

Thanks for the review.

I'm glad you like the story so far. :)

Thank you for letting me know the update problem. Actually I am doing my dissertation right now so most days I get so lost in data sheets and MRI scans that by the time I update more than 24-hours have passed. That coupled with the 10-hour gap my country has with the US is a major problem. But I'll try to do better. :)

The next chapter will be up soon.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life

I can't wait to see what the "Rents" excuse could possibly be....  

I am glad Edward and Bella stood as a united front..  Good chapter. 

 

Thank you for sharing with us.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

The next chapter should be out on Friday.

Take care.

Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

bnb

Banner made by:CaiteexxGraphics

SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Aww,  I hate to see it end.  Was a hard story to get through at times but yall did a great job guiding us.

 

Love your stories and can't wait to see what you've got coming to us.  Thank you so much for sharing with us.

 

Summary:

Edward and Bella college sweetheart's. Graduated got married and had a son now they get to go through the gift of life again only this time it's a girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21477 Read Count: 8204
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2014 Updated: 31 May 2017
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Keep it going.  Can't wait to see how she tells him #2 is on the way... Question.. How is she able to wait so long to tell him.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :).  She's not that far in the pregnancy so he can't tell yet by looking at her cause she's not showing. He is going to find out about baby #2 soon though.

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

Thank God!!!! It's about time. They need healing, happiness and a wonderful bundle of joy with no looking over their sholder. 

 

Can't wait to see where their happiness leads.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Please take your time with your mama. She needs you. Life is too short to worry about FF.

Prayers being sent and we will be here for you when you need us.  

Thank you for sharing your gift with us. 

Take care. See you when we can. {{{{HUGS}}}}

40 Something by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 267]
Summary: Past Featured Story

40

This is about a older Edward and Bella 40 somethings. The story starts with a very unhappy Bella and her husband Jacob . Edward and Bella have yet to meet so bare with me for a while.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70470 Read Count: 57329
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 13 Nov 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 31

Maybe Kate can get hit by a train or a plane can fall from the air on her.... something very tragic!!!! Let's take her out! That will solve most of the problems..

 

Loving this story.  Can't wait for your updates.

 

Thank you for sharing with us.

 

Summary:

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When an amazing opportunity finally comes up to have everything they want, will they take it? Can they remain professional for the sake of success? Celebrating never felt so good.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56096 Read Count: 22641
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2014 Updated: 28 Aug 2018
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ Opportunity Knocking

Yahoo!! Can't wait for all the fun tension....

 

Thank you for sharing...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sam is the stalker! How did he know that there were 3 guys walking with them??? He has a job where he can keep tabs and he knows where she lives, he can get her mail. That is my professional FF reader opion. 

Always enjoy y'alls stories.  Hope you aren't too hard on Edward. I think he will be the hero of your story.

 

Hope I am close. I would hate to look like a fool.

 

Can't wait till next chapter.

 

Summary:

Edward is from old money. Bella is not.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33054 Read Count: 32552
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 26 Dec 2014
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

How frusterating.  Maw and Paw C need to get their head out of their ass and Victoria... wishing no harm to an unborn child, needs to GO..

 

Thank you for shraring with us. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Summary:

Bella Swan is a very successful businesswoman, a self made millionaire, and a wonderful 'mother' and best friend, but she is closed off to the world around her...and for good reason! With Bree unable to talk, things in her life are more than complicated...Will the charming and sweet Edward Cullen be the one to turn all of that around? Can he do what no-one before has managed?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4655 Read Count: 428
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2015 Updated: 29 Mar 2015
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start. Looks like we have a lot of mysteries to figure out. Can't wait for the next chapter. 

 

Thanks for for sharing with us. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullen meets Bella Swan. She's the young veterinary nurse who still believes in true love. He's the tattooed architect who finds himself very taken with the special girl. "There's something about you... Somehow you've got to me, Little Swan." This is their story of a fairytale romance in a modern world.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101028 Read Count: 39734
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2015 Updated: 30 Jan 2016
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

This story makes me so happy. Thank you for sharing with us. Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Hi,

What a lovely review - thank you.

I repeatedly say this but I really am so happy with how the story is being received. It's wonderful to know that you're enjoying it and that its maybe a bright spot in your day! I aim to keep it that way!

The next chapter will be uploaded in the next few hours, so keep an eye out. 

J x

 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

And there you go again... Excellent chapter.

Thank you for sharing. Hopefully little swan can smooth his woos. 

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

What an awesome chapter.  

 

Thank you so much for sharing.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 134997
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Here's pulling for those little boys.  Ready to see who and how they pull together to kick Emmett's ass.   

 

Loving this story.  Can't wait for the next update.

 

Thank you for sharing with us!!!

 

The Bunny Ranch by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bunny

Her outward beauty entices him, her innocent optimism intrigues him, her loving heart ensnares him. A lighthearted, fluffy tale about how a twenty-something's sanguine leash on life brings joy and happiness to even the gruffest member of the Playboy Club. A/H

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65809 Read Count: 24563
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: The Bunny Ranch

My update was for the chapter 6. Did you have a chapter 7?

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Let's see how he tries to handle her!  I say keep going..

 

Thank you for sharing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella ~ 1 

Edward ~1

Can't wait to see how she respons. Loving this little tale.

 

Thank you so much for sharing.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

Banner by Clo Rodeffler

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280777
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yeah!!!! Can't wait for next chapter to see where this goes. Will Tanya be back?? Will some highschool dummy make a scene???

 

Thank you for sharing. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/112065/images/Sprinkle_of_Sunshine-3-TWCS2.jpg

Fall—a time of sudden rains and cloudless skies ... the harbinger of the miseries of winter. That was when she came into his life. Like a ray of sunshine, she was bright and all things light. But will he let the sunlight sprinkle his colorless world with life? Or will he choose to shut it out? Flashfic. Rated for language and adult situations.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8337 Read Count: 8634
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2016 Updated: 08 Jan 2017
Reviewer: trixielou Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter-4

Loving this story.  And Bella is killing it. A Great Bella indeed.

 

Thank you so much for sharing with us.