Reviews by amwine
Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)

That is sad that he took advantage of her like that.  Not happy with Jame at all now.  Even Edward wouldn't have done that, and he is a real jerk!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Jams and Edward are both Jetks!  Hard to clear the air of the persona they give off!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)

James is one messed up dude!  I worry about Bella being with him.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

James means it, he is just so mixed up!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)

It is sad that James thought this was the best way.  I can't believe Bella was ready to join him.  I'm glad that Edward is keeping his promise.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

James might have fallen, we don't know that he jumped!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan

I hope he goes to Bella's graduation.  That would be horrible if he didn't.  Especially since Tori calls and runs right out the door. 



Author's Response:

It was nice that Bella gave him the option.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan

So the spark is there.  I can't wait to see how this works out.  They are going to have to start being around each other.  What is Edward planning for New York.  There is a lot to discuss!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)

Well I am glad he went to graduation.  That is a step in the right direction.  I wonder where Bella was going to school....NYC maybe?  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Bella doesn't even know he's going there yet!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)

I hope she is okay.  Edward is changing.  I am glad.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)

Oh no, no, no.  Edward better get there in time!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Caring (V)

I am glad he is taking care of Bella.  I hope they talk and get a plan going soon.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

It sure would help if they would talk!  Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 New York (V)

Edward is doing a good job of taking care of Mrs. Cullen that is for sure!  I can't wait to see what is next.  Greta job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Apparently when Edward does something, he really gives it 110 percent!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)

I think these two are going to be just fine as lome as they start talking. I can't wait to see what nice thing Bella is going to do for Edward. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

They really do need to talk, don't they!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Duty

What a mess.  Things don't look good, but all those things the investigation found can be explained.  Like the Chief said there are two sides to everything.  I hope Jessica wakes up soon.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)

I am so sad for Bella.  I hope Edward goes after her.  They both have feelings for each other.  They can make this work.  Bella is going to have to find a way to go on with her life.  She needs to go to school and get her degree.  Great job...thanks!!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Presents (L)

Edward is going to be so sad.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Yep, brokenhearted!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Note (L)

:-(



Author's Response:

Ah, was that a frowny face ?  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)

I feel so bad for Edward and Bella.  They could have been together all this time.  I can't believe she is living so close to him.  I hope he figures that out soon.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Weird how things turn oput sometimes, things are just under  your nose and you don't even know!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)

I feel bad for Edward.  I hope Jake has talked to Bella.  She needs to know that Edward has kept their wedding vows.  I can't wait to see what is next.  I hope all the Black family will be okay.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

If Bella would just even let Jake talk about Edward to her!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Helping (V)

Finally someone is helping!  I am so excited.  I can't wait to see Edward's reaction.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward needed to let his family in for some support!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)

Finally he knows where she is.  It may take a litte bit for him to convince her that he loves her, but I don't believe he will stop until he does.  I love Bella loves her Christmas present.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Yep!  They need to be together!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)

I hope Bella doesn't let him get too far away before she tells him how she really feels.  They love each other.  They need to be together and stop hurting each other by not being there for each other.  I am glad Cindy is going to be okay.  I can't wait for more.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for always leaving a review!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Run (L)

Jessica...really???  I know he is hurting bad, but come on.  Date...don't jump into anohter marriage.  I just knew she would get pregnant.  They have to talk.  Enjoy this pregnancy.  I don't want them to spend this time apart.  It is so important.  Make them talk already!  Sorry.  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

You're right - they really do need to talk and not just jump to conclusions!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Mine (V)

Thank you for 2 updates so close together!!!  I am so glad they are talking.  I am doing my happy dance.  Just make sure Edward gets his family ring back before he send Jessica on her way.  I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to the baby news.  He is going to be so happy!  Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Declared (V)

I hope she is going to tell him now.  He is going to be so happy.  I am glad they are talking now.  I like the way Edward handled Jessica.  Why doesn't it surprise me that she asked Edward to marry her and she just took his grandmother's ring.  You have spoiled us, but I can't wait for more.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Empty

I can't believe he had to leave. My guess is something happened at the hospital. I hope they talk soon. Great job...thanks!!!!

Author's Response:

Excellent guess!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80 Ice Cream

They are so cute together. I can't wait for the babies!!! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Babies, coming up!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)

I am very happy that they are together and that the story is far from over.  I can't wait to see how their families react.  I hope everyone will be happy for them.  Great chapter...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, this tale is just geting stated well!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Edwards POV

Looks like they are having a great time on their trip.  I hope they can deal with Jessica  pretty quickly when they get back.  She needs to understand that her crazy plan is never going to work.  Great chapter...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 Back Home

Everyone is so happy.  I can only imagine how Jessica is going to try to ruin that!  I can't wait to see what Carlisle has to tell Edward.  Great chapter...thanks!!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Back to Work

Whatever the hell is going on has to do with Jessica, I am sure.  I can't wait to see what it is.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Strange

So she is telling everyone that Edward got her pregnant.  Jessica is such a piece of work!  I can't stand that woman!  I am glad Grace heard the conversation.  That will get this mess over with faster.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

You would think it was a simple mess to overcome, since the baby could not be his if they never even had sex . . . but sometimes things get complicated . . .

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Life

They are so lucky to have Esme.  Jessica is just living in her own little world.  I hope Edward can burst that bubble soon.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Lawyers

Jessica is a nut.  I think the truth will have to come out at some point.  I just hope it is sooner rather then later.  Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 Blackmail

Jessica is a mess!  She is just looking for a free ride.  That is sad. 

I am glad that Angela and Edward are such good friends.  Hope to see more of her and Ben.  Great job...thanks!!



Author's Response:

Angela seems like a breath of fresh air, doesn't she!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 Questions

Wow...what a mess.  Jessica started this mess, but she doesn't deserve what Tyler did to her.  I hope she and the baby will be okay.  I know Charlie has to get the facts, but I feel bad for Edward having to defend himself to everyone.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Bit of a mess, really, but let's hope Charlie sorts it out!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 Obnoxious

On one hand I feel bad for the situation that Jessica is in, but the way she went about trying to fix her situation is just wrong.  She is just going to make things worse for herself and her baby in the end. 

I loved the time with Angela and Ben.  They are going to be very close friends.  Great job..thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Jesica just doesn't have any skill in how to e a nice person, she was a brat in highschool and it continued!

Angela and Ben, now they are seriously fun!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 Rough

Tyler is horrible.  If he ruffs Jessica up again, I am thinking a nice jail cell would be a good place for him.  Then he wouldn't have to worry about putting a roof over his head and I am guessing he would get a few paybacks for the way he treated Jessica too. 

I hope Edward doesn't pay Jessica off.  It is not right what she is doing.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Not to worry, he won't pay her off.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 July 4th

I love how well everyone was getting along.  I can't wait to see what Charlie has to say to Edward.  I hope it is some kind of welcome to the family.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

You just never know with Charlie!  lol

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 Explain

I think the talk between Edward and Charlie was great.  That is a big step of Charlie.  It seems like a great day for all of them.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to have Charlie more on team Edward now!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 No Contact

Jessica will never learn.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! I just don't know if she will ever get the right idea or not!  lol

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 Confrontation

I am not sure Jessica will ever learn.  Edward is too good of a person not see Jessica in that situation and not stop.  I was really afraid it was going to be Tyler.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Well, I;m not sure it was in Edward's best interest, although she definately did need the help!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 Advice

This should be interesting.  No matter what Jessica will turn it to her advantage.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I agree, Jessica is just such a brat!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions

What a way to wake up! I am sure that made his day! Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 Intentions

Tyler is scary!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 No Doubt

I am glad that Bella could make Edward understand that she was not made at him for helping Jessica.  These two are really good for each other.  Bella is right...a lot of time was wasted, but if they had stayed together they may not appreciate each other as much as they do now.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me, I couldn't agree more!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 Bonus

I love it!  Bella knew what she wanted and she took it.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I just loved the idea of her dismissing him and leaving him lying there!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 Happenings

Edward was having a great day!  Sounds like that party will be fun.  I have a bad feeling about Jessica.  Did Tyler get to her???  I can't wait to see.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

EDWARD'S DAY IS ABOUT TO CHANGE!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

Way to go Bella.  I love how she set everyone straight.  I wish they would listen already.  I also love how Esme let Edward have it.  Always trying to keep her boy in line.  Great job...thanks!!!  

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 Tyler

Oh no, not Charlie.  I hope he is going to be okay.  That stupid Lee guy needs to be fired!  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 Toy

I love these two. I hope Edward is right and this is just the babies getting ready to come. I don't want anything to happen to them or Bella. Great job...thanks!!! I hope your day gets better!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 Nursery

Very sweet!  I love that Bella has Esme.  I have to say I am really worried about Charlie though.  Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Babies

I hope Charlie is going to be okay.  Edward needs to tell Bella when she wakes up.  He needs to keep the promise they make to each other.  She can handle it.  Great job...thanks!

Summary:

 

This story follows the “All American Life” of Bella Swan. From birth to giving birth to her own child. A purely fluff piece.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Charlie/Renee
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4343 Read Count: 859
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: All American Girl

I love it!  What a sweet story.  Great job...thanks!!!

Summary:

Set after New Moon, Bella goes to the carnival at La Push to speak to Jake.  While there, she makes a wish to become a vampire without breaking the treaty.  The next morning Bella wakes up to find her wish is granted and is forced to face the consequences that come with getting what she wanted.
Disclaimer: This story is rated NC-17 for a reason, if you can’t buy a pack of cigs then you shouldn’t be reading this.  All publicly recognized character, settings and scenarios are the property of their respective owners, Twilight is owned by Stephenie Meyer and Big is the property of 20th Century Fox.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9181 Read Count: 1479
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!  What a story!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427976
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **History**

I am so glad she said yes. I can't figure out what is up with Charlie. He didn't even come outside when his daughter was leaving? That is messed up. I can't wait to see what is next. This is going to be and interesting summer. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 **Meetings**

I think Edward had found what is has been waiting for.  I can't wait to know what Bella was thinking.  Alice is something else.  Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**

Very interesting!  I can't wait for more.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Expectations

I guess Edward needed to go pout for a little while.  I can't wait to know more of what Bella was thinking.  I can't wait to know what she really thinks about Edward.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings

I don't think Isabella is going to be able to stay away any longer then Edward.  My guess is Charlie drinks and is very controling.  That may be to easy of a guess, but that is all I have.  Maybe Charlie was passed out in the house when Bella left and that is why he didn't come out to say good bye when she left.  Just a thought.  I can't wait to see what is next for these two.  Great chapter...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Awake

I think Isabella is going to surpise Edward.  I can't wait to see what she is thinking.  I love this story!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 **Playtime**

Wow...what a chapter!  Their scene was awesome.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Panties

I love these two! Alice has to know something is going on. She wouldn't miss all this that is going on around her. I can't wait for everyone to meet Bella. I think everything will be fine. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

I love it! I just knew that Alice knew what was going on. The push she gave Edward was perfect! The playroom was awesome and I am glad the lists were pretty close too. I don't know why I was a little shocked that he just told her he wanted to make love the next day. I can't see Bella saying, why wait. I love this story! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Coitus

I love it! Great job...thanks!!!

Summary:

Bella, a college student, has had a crush on her friend's brother for awhile. Watch and see what happens as Alice decides to set up a date between her friend and brother.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17394 Read Count: 2824
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2011 Updated: 26 Jan 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sounds like a great morning to me! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!  Very sweet.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They are so cute.  I don't know why they are so nervous.  They already know they like each other.  I love it.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok...the pet names crack me up!  I love these two.  I keep saying this, but they are so cute!  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Alice needs to take a chill pill! I can't believe she started that with Edward and Bella in the restaurant. Esme is so sweet. I can't wait for them all the go home together. Great chapter...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow...Edward made a mess of things there for a while. I am glad they made up, but I also hope he is able to take his test. I can't wait to see what is next for these two. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love these two. I can't wait to see whow Edward's plan goes. Great job...thanks!!!

Summary:

Edward writes a message and puts it in a bottle. While on vacation with his family, he drops it in the ocean. Hoping to find his soulmate the way his grandfather did. Will it end in love or in nothing? Sometimes you just have to believe in fate.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27091 Read Count: 5149
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So sweet!  I can't wait to see what is next for these two.  Great job...thanks!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this!  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It's time! They are finally going to meet. I can't wait! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oops... I can't wait to see what Esme does now. I am so glad she is finally in Chicago. They are going to have a great time! I am a little worried about Carlisle and Esme leaving for a few days only because who will make sure Rose stays away. I hope Emmett has learned his lesson and will not let Rose do or say anything to Bella. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward did the right thing telling Melissa that he didn't want to date her.  Emmett is the one that is in the wrong telling her he would take her and whatever else he lead her to believe. 

I think it is so sweet that Edward and Bella still want to write letters along with other ways of communication.  I am glad that Edward told Esme what is going on.  This way it won't be a shock.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am glad that Bella and Edward talked everything out. Emmett was so wrong, but I am sure that Rose was involved too. Malissa is strange! Edward needs to stay away from her. I can't wait for Edward and Bella to talk again. Great job...thanks!!!

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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well I am glad everything is out in the open in the Cullen house. Rose better watch it and give up on this or Emmett should kick her to the curb. She is out of her mind. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!

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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am so glad her parents said she could go. I don't think the conditions are too much either. Any parent should ask for those things before they let their daughter go meet someone in a stange city. They are going to have so much fun! I can't wait! Great job...thanks!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am glad that Charlie is realizing that his daughter is growing up. They are going to have such a great time together. I can't wait for Esme to meeting Bella. She is going to love her. Great job...thanks!!!

Summary:

Bella finds out some information before her wedding, she decides to run from her own wedding. What happens when she finds herself face to face with everything she wants, what will happen when things get mixed up. Not the best summary


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20729 Read Count: 4353
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am glad Edward is going to move closer to Bella, but I wish he would tell her and talk to her about it. I hope she tells him about the baby. She can't keep that from him. They have to talk! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am so glad they have all that out in the open. They are finally going to be together. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I had a feeling that Edward was Jacob's cousin.  What a mess!  I hope Bella and Edward can find a way to work this out.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Have more faith then that, Bella!  I can't wait to see what happens next.   Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well at least they finally talked. I hope they see each other soon, because it looks like Bella will have some big news to share with him. Great job...thanks!!!

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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think Edward is going to so happy if Bella is pregnant. I know it is fast, but he is not going to run away from her. I understand why she is scared though. I hope she find out and talks to Edward soon. Great job...thanks!!!

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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am so glad that Edward just got on the plane to go see Bella and that he is going to talk to her about the job offer. This will help her know for sure that she has to tell him about the baby. They have really got to talk more and not be afraid to tell each other how they feel. Great job...thanks!!!

Selfish by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella left everything behind for her husband the moment she married young. Now, as the years have gone by and her life has become a cycle of regret, she decides to finally be selfish and love herself instead. Drabble fic. Rated NC-17 cause you never really know. E/B

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32975 Read Count: 63661
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 07 Dec 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG...Jasper and Alice better figure out what is going on quick!!!!  Please don't let this happen to Bella.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Please let that be Bella that is screaming. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I can't wait to figure out how this all played out. I am glad Edward is there! I hope she is going to be okay. Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I cant't wait to see what is going on....figure out what really happened to her. Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What a surprise for both of them! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

What will he do???? Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I love Edward's POV. I don't know how he is going to fix this mess, but I can't wait to see. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Is it finally their time. Nothing in their way...for the moment at least. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I wish she didn't panic because she is happy. Being happy is a good thing! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I hope they both think before this gets too far. Get a grip Bella!!! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

That was too funny! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

This is not going to be good. I hope it is a misunderstanding. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

What the hell was Edward thinking? He fell right into Tanya trap. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I feel bad for her. She is a mess, and hasn't made the decisions, but she is trying to make it in this life. I can't wait to see what is next. Grear job...thanks!!!