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Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.
This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Oh no, I hope she is okay. What a mess!
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Oh no...I am guessing this is his connection to Bella??? I love how Edward made Abigail feel better. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward and Bella have a very special connection. He's feeling her pain of transformation and Carlisle doesn't know what to do about it. As far as he knows, it's never happened before.
And yes, Edward's always the sweetheart, letting Abigail know that his heart is taken while telling her how pretty she is and building her confidence. Could he really be any different? This is the sweet Edward before all those years alone hardened him.
I'm so glad you like this. You have no idea how great it makes me feel to see your reviews pop up after every chapter. Thank you so very, very much. Love you tons - D
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Wow...this is going to be a very interesting Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Vamp Bella is very interesting indeed. I really can't wait until you meet her.
Thanks for another review. Much love - D
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I am glad that Edward could help Carlisle can see the differences between Esme's situation and the one with Bella. I am glad Carlisle finally went to talk her through what was going on. I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Oh so close! I bet Edward would be able to tame this vicious vampire she has become. I would love to see her melt when she seems him again. I don't blame Bella for being so angry. She has lost everyone in her life. Well at this point she thinks she has... Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Poor Edward. I understand how hard living this way had to be. He was sad that he could not have his soul mate and Carlisle had found his. I felt bad for Esme when she said she could not bare to lose another son. I hope Edward and Bella find each other soon. At this point how long have they both been vampires, but have not found each other yet? Just curitous. I love it as always! Great chapter...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Edward is such a good man but he could only take so much. He had such a hard time living with a couple so in love while he sat alone. He just had to leave. And I feel bad for Esme. He was her son in every way that counted and it killed her to let him go. She has Carlisle to help her through it though and she'll stay strong until they see each other again. And to answer your question, Edward's chapter ended in 1927, so he has been a vampire for nine years and Bella for eight. Bella's next chapter will take them a few years beyond that. Over the next two chapters I'll be syncing their timelines back together again and they will be together soon, I promise.
And I know I've said it before, but you amaze me. Thank you so so much for reviewing every chapter of this story. You have no idea what that means to me. Love you tons - D
Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter:
With a devilish smile on his face, he whispered, "Are you ready for more, my dark angel?"
Just as I was about to answer, his eyes widened and his hand flew to my mouth. My normal reaction would have been to struggle against his hand but the worried look on his face stilled me. He took a deep breath, tasting the air but when I tried to do the same, all I could smell was the scent of his skin.
His arms wrapped tightly around me. "Leave now." His whispered warning was just for me.
I tried to pull away but he gripped me tighter.
"Use the rooftops and run for the trees."
Sensing his sudden fear, I held onto him just as tight. "What is it?"
He loosed his grip and took one step back. One hand touched my cheek and his eyes bore intently into mine.
"Please, Bella, just go," he urged. "Now."
"But what about..."
He cut me off, knowing what I was about to ask. "I'll join you soon. I swear it. But you must go now." His eyes glanced over my shoulder toward the main street before meeting mine again. "You have only seconds, please go."
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I hope he finds her soon. They both deserve some happiness. Thanks for the timeline. That helps a lot. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I just knew it was Jasper he was fighting. He is so angry. I am guessing he hasn't met Alice? Just double checking here, but Victoria is gone, right? Her head and body can't be put back together, right??? I hope Edward finds Bella soon. They were so close. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I am glad that Bella could see that Miss Emma and Lizzy are doing fine. I love that Lizzy has a part of Johnny with her always. Miss Emma have some great advice to the girls. I hope Edward and Bella find each other soon. I wonder if Bella will go back home since it is Edward's b-day. I love it. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Wow, I didn't see that coming. I am glad he finally found her. I am so sad that Charlie is sick. This is going to be do hard in Bella. I can't wait to see what she does. Edward has to get through to her. It is going to be hard though. She is so angry. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
I know it wasn't the reunion you expected but Bella has a lot of things she blames Edward for, some more justified than others, but it's going to take her a while to see that. In her eyes, Edward's got a lot to make up for and a lot of explaining to do. Once he gets his truth out there, though, she can finally start to heal. But that's still going to take some time. The only thing I can say is, at least they're together now and nothing is going to tear them apart again. As for Charlie, it kills me that he's dying but it's the way it has to be. But think positive, it's going to be the one thing that allows Bella to feel love again and that feeling will only help Edward and Bella in the long run. Thanks, as always, for the review, darlin. I love seeing your name pop up after I post a chapter. You always give me the best reviews. Love you tons, bb - D
Until next time...here's a peek at Bella's next chapter, which will be up later today:
A growl rumbled deep in my chest as Edward's scent pulled me from my thoughts. Turning my back to the shed, I scanned the darkness. I couldn't see him but I knew he was close.
"Don't take another step, Edward," I warned, knowing he could hear me.
I heard his footsteps come to a halt as silence hung in the air. A few minutes passed as I searched the area around me. He was nowhere to be seen but I could feel him out there.
"Please let me help, Bella." His voice sliced through the darkness.
"I don't need your help."
"Don't shut me out, Angel."
My eyes closed for a split second as the old name brought more memories of our lives together.
"I watched my father die, Bella," he continued. "I know how you feel."
"How long have you known, Edward?" I hissed, ignoring his last comment. "How long did you watch my father suffer before you came to find me?"
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Bella is going through so much. I guess she has to get through her hurt of losing Edward before she can really be happy that she has him again. She is going to have to listen to what he has to say at some point. She has to see that he thought he was doing what was best for her. I hope she holds on to the thought she had about how they could now be together for eternity. I love this as always. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Bella's thoughts and emotions are going haywire right now. It's to be expected, though, when everything she thought she knew turned out to be a lie and the boy she thought was dead was suddenly standing in front her expecting her to still love him like nothing had changed. But through it all, her heart really does know the truth. It's her head that puts up one hell of a fight. They're going to go through plenty of struggles and fights before the whole truth comes out and Bella is able to trust and believe in Edward again. Then the love she still has for him will come to the surface and they can be happy again. Thanks, as always, for your review. I really, really love hearing what you think. Love you tons - D
Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter, which will be up later today:
"Maggie?" Bella's quiet voice startled me.
"Mrs. Jones," I answered her. She lifted her confused eyes to meet mine. "You and I spent our entire childhood with that woman and had no idea she and your father were best friends."
I smiled when Bella's brow creased.
"How do you know this?"
My smile faded, knowing this would be where it started. I had promised her the absolute truth and that was what I would give her. It wasn't a difficult question but I knew my Bella would be upset by my answer. And I'd learned enough about the girl in my arms now to know that she wouldn't take the news lightly and I braced myself for a fight.
Hoping to keep her violent side at bay, I spoke in the calmest voice possible. "The first year I came home, I overheard a horrible argument between the three of them. Your father was so angry, more so than I'd ever heard in my life. He was yelling at your mother and when Mrs. Jones stepped in to defend her, he turned his anger on her."
"You're lying!" Her fist hit me hard and in a flash, she was across the room. "My father has never yelled at my mother and neither of my parents have ever said a cross word to Mrs. Jones. What could possibly cause them to argue?"
I didn't want to say it. I didn't want to hurt her again and it was inevitable that my words would do just that. I steeled myself for her wrath.
"They were arguing about you."
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: An Eternity to Love
Wow...such an emotional chapter! They both have been through so much. I hope this is the start of them putting things right in their lives. They need each other. They can't be apart anymore. Great job...thanks!!! I hope you have a Happy New Year!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Finally is right! Bella was giving me whiplash! I felt so bad for Edward. I hope things will be better for them now. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job....thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Someone actually referred to her as "Bipolar Bella" and, I guess, that description is pretty accurate. My girl is still a little messed up but, trust me, Edward's working on that part. Give him some time; he'll get his Bella back...kind of. hehe Thanks for he review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D
Until next time...are you ready for something a little more playful? Here's a peek at Edward's next chapter, which will be up later today:
"Are you trying to give me a heart attack?" I growled low into her ear.
A low growl rumbled in her chest as she exhaled and leaned back into me. "We've been climbing trees since we were ten and you're worried now. Now that I can't be hurt."
"The trees we climbed when we were ten didn't have you hundreds of feet above ground."
"We, my love," she twisted to kiss me quickly, "are indestructible. I could jump from this tree and the only thing to get hurt would be the ground beneath my feet."
"I just worry about you," I admitted.
"Don't."
She turned to straddle the branch, lifting an arm around my neck and resting her other hand on my arm. Her smile was gone.
"I've lived through so much already; falling from a tree is nothing in comparison."
"But I could have kept you from all of that. If I'd been here, I could have saved you from so much pain." I touched her cheek. "I will make up for that. I'll make up for every bit of pain you suffered."
"By keeping me out of trees." Her smile returned. "You've lived a sheltered life haven't you?"
After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Holy hell is right. They have got it bad for each other. I hope then they do start to talk that they will stop and listen and not run away from each other. It is going to be hard though. I love Rose. I am glad she was there for Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
I love it! I am so happy that Bella invited Edward to dinner. Peyton and Edward on the beach was priceless. That lucky sea glasss is going to help Edward. If also felt so bad for him when he thought he was not invited to the beach. What Emmett said to him was awesome. I love this story. I can't get enough. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
I am glad she is finally ready. She needs to deal with the past and start living again! Really living. I love Peyton. She is so cute. She is not letting her Mom get away with anything. She wants her best friend and that is that. I love it! She was so scared to ask her Mom if Edward left her a text. She didn't want to be disappointed anymore. I can't wait for the talk. They need to get this all out. As for Rose...I love her so much! Emmett is going to be so sorry when she is done with him. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
I love the ILUs. The way it came out was perfect!!! The whole evening was great. I like how Bella was testing Edward by moving around a little. It was so funny that she noticed it. The shower was the best! I can't wait to see what is next. I am so glad everyone is out together. Great job...thanks so much!!! See you in two weeks!!!
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
She wants him and she knows it. That is a huge step at this point. I am sure she has questions and she also has a story to tell. They can get through this, but I am sure there will be a lot of tears before it is all over. I hurt for Edward. I am glad that Bella ran after him. I think he needed that even though it hurt too. I am sure they don't feel like it, but these two people are so strong. I am worried about Emmett's reaction. Don't need tension on the boat. I can't wait until next week. Great chapter....thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I love how Peyton and Edward met. She is something else. Great chapter...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
It seems Bella has been throught a lot. Just like Edward has. I love Xavier. He is good for Bella and Peyton. This is going to be interesting. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
It is wonderful all the things these people are doing for Edward. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
I am so glad they talked a little. Edward is getting more comfortable and he deserves that. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Bella is a mess. I feel kind of bad for her. Poor Edward, he doesn't need to worry about what Bella thinks of him. He is going through enough too. I love Seth! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
I love it! Them in the parking lot was pretty hot! Xavier has some issues he needs to work on. I have a feeling he is going to be even worse when he finds out where Edward has been.
The talk Peyton had with Edward was pretty interesting. She sure doesn't want Edward to leave. She is such a great kid! Great chapter...thanks so much!!!
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
I think Bella did pretty well for the fist trip Edward had to take. I can't wait to see what is going on with Edward. Maybe he is just worried about her and Peyton...or maybe he just needed to see her to settle himself. I can't wait to see. I am really glad that Bella and Xavier talked and worked things out. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I can understand Bella needing some time. She said she has a lot of questions. I hope she just needs to get them staight in her mind and then she will ask them.
Too bad Edward didn't listen to his Grandfather sooner. He had to be shown instead. When it came down to it, Edward did the right thing. He didn't let that man die.
I can't wait for more. Great job..thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
I love it! They are so good together. Evan's story is sad. I can't believe they never found him. That never crossed my mind. I can't imagine being somewhere and hating it and not being able to go to my parents and tell them. The worst part is they walked away from Peyton...their own grandchild...a piece of their son. How can people do that.
I expected Bella and Evan to have had a great love. It was surprising to find out they were nothing more then best friends. She loved him but was not in love with him. The whole situation is sad.
I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I love Bella and Edward's time together! Edward's talk with Peyton went so much easier then I thought it would. She has a way about her that just makes everything ok. I love it! Great job...thanks!!!!
Edward and Bella have been together since High School, but after 20 years and too little time to be themselves, they find themselves at a crossroads, where one wrong decision could be their breaking point.
Originally written for Fandom 4 Tsunami Compilation
Banner by candykizzes24
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6664 Read Count: 1547
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I am glad Bella talked to Edward and Edward finally realized what he was about to lose. It is sad that Bella got hurt before Edward got a little bit of a clue. Great story! Thanks!!!
Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. 
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49807
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is going to be interesting! I can't wait to get caught up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Is this last part a dream? I am loving this story. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I love getting Carlisle's POV. The conversation here at the end was so funny. Bella has so m pretty awesome dreams too! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This is going to be so much fun! I love this Rose by the way. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love the whole family! Carlisle and Esme are so much fun. Edward and Bella are so hot together. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Sounds like a good way to wake up to me...minus Rose's music choices of course. I can't wait to see what is next for these two. I love this story! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: There is so much more.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love it! Sue and Esme...this is prefect! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I love it! So, I guess there is going to be a wedding soon! Great job...thanks!!!
Edward is a century old vampire. He has trouble balancing his submissive and fetish tendencies with his Victorian morals. The Cullen’s rescue him from 10 years of abuse. Can Isabella and her ranch be the balm to ease his wounded soul?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8310 Read Count: 2107
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Tonight's the night
I love this! Very interesting. I have never read about animal play before. I hope we get a little more from these two. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Maybe at a later date - thanks for reading - Beth
Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44804
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see how Ally reacts to having time with her Dad and her Mathair at the same time. Edward seems to be taking this all well. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: Ally is going to respond to it like any five year old would...it just seems natural.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I hope Edward takes this well. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: Always
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I love this! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I am so glad that Edward is going along on this trip. I hope Jake lives through it! Edward is doing very well with everything he is finding out. He could have been really put off by all the things at Bella's house, but he wasn't. I love these two. I am glad it looks like they are finally making their way to each other. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
What a perfect day for them all. Ally is loved by so many people! I hope Jake and Jared get good news. Sounds like they deserve this. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
What a great chapter. I love getting everyone's pov. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love it!!! It is a little fast, but when you know, you know. It was going to happen at some point anyway. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
"So, I stared at her and I laughed because I was crazy for loving her, but that was the only thing that ever made sense to me."
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2825 Read Count: 769
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow...that is a long time to wait. I love it! Great job...thanks!
Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36679
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16
I love Alice and Jasper!!! Alice is right though. She can't help Bella anymore. This is up to her and Edward now. I hope he will talk to her. If he reallly loves her he will. He has to! I can't wait to see what Alice and Jasper bet on next. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I have a feeling she was not in the other bathroom....
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14
For Edward this is a huge step. I hope they make it through this. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13
I like what he knows Carlisle would tell him to do. Man up and tell her how he feels. Deep down that is what she wants him to do. He is not screwed. He is scared and confused. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18
I love these two. They are so good for each other! I can't believe it is almost over. :-( I am liking this messed up Edward a lot. He is trying so hard to get things right. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bella POV 2
Edward is going to have a cow when he sees Bella with someone else. Got to love Alice. She just knows how to put things into perspective. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I am glad he opened up a little to Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Bella POV
I hope Bella listens to Alice. I know it has to be hard for Bella. It would be terrible to go through what James put her though. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Edward deserves everything he is getting! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Edward is falling hard and he doesn't even know it. I love all the texting. That was funny. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I am surprised they came to this agreement. I am worried...they are still going to be hurt by one another. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
This is way more complicated they Edward ever thought it would be. They are both hurting. I don't know how they are going to come out of this. Great job..thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
At least Bella found out now before she got even deeper in this. Is Edward ever going to grow up??? Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love Seth! I hope we see more of him. I think he is very good for Edward. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Wow...didn't give that much of a try did you Edward. I am glad that Bella says what she does to him. He deserves it. I hope it all starts to sink in a some point. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Edward is going to learn a few things, but I am afraid Bella will get hurt in the process. Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Well this is an interesting Edward. I can't wait to get caught up! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15
Wow...how do things go down the tube so fast. It is very sad. They are both hurting and it is just getting worse. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17
I am glad they are talking again. I can't wait to see what Bella's reaction is to Edward getting the job. Edward going to talk to Esme was awesome! That was a long itme coming. Also Edward standing up for wanting to stay Seth's Big Brother was priceless. Great chatper...thanks so much!!!
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19
I don't blame Edward for being so mad at Emmett, but he could have confronted him differently. All he did was make Bella feel bad and run again. I am glad she still will talk to him but asked for him leave her alone during finals. I hope they can work this out. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20
Edward is a good person. I hope he sees that at some point. He just needs to believe in himself more. I can't wait to see what happens with Gram. Also I hope Edward doen't lose his job since he just left that afternoon. Great job...thanks!
Edward and Bella finally get Renesme out of the house...
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1644 Read Count: 335
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is awesome! I love it. Great job...thanks!!!
Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.
Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Jessica (V)
She is out of her mind! She is going to have a rude awakening. I am glad Edward and Bella are leaving for Hawaii. I hope someone tells Jessica where they are going. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 I Want to See You (V)
I love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I think Bella and Edward enjoyed themselves, too!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Double (V)
I love that they are having twins! I love these two. They seem so happy. I can't wait to see what Charlie has to say. I hope he is as happy for them as everyone else. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Esme (V)
Esme was so funny. If Carlisle didn't move I think she would have pushed him out of the booth. Great job...thanks!!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 New (V)
Bella is getting very bold. Good for her! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
glad you like seeing her assert herself a little!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
Well, it is sad that Charlie didn't believe Bella. I am glad he started to listen to what Bella and Edward had to say. I have a feeling Jessica never left the ring. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Charlie is really a hard sell!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Private (L)
Well, this is a start. I am glad they talked a little bit. I hope they continue. Tanya is going to try and be a problem. I hope Bella doesn't listen to her. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank goodness Tanya is not successfu!l, or even important in this story!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Checking In (V)
I can only imagine what Mrs. Cope was congratulating Edward on. I am sure it is not what he is thinking. I hope the Whitlock's baby will be okay. It will be said if something happens while Bella and Edward are gone. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Really happy that you are enjoying it, and Mrs. Cope ws indeed congratulating him on something he had no idea of!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Information
I hope he can get info out of Mike. Edward can not found guilty of htis. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Family (V)
It is just going to take time for them to know and understand they are not going to be apart anymore. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to the news about the babies. Great chapter....thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yep, lots of insecurities still!
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Surprise (V)
I love it! It is very sweet for Edward to make up for the things they didn't do before. I am so glad he gave his Grandmoter's ring to Bella.
Then there is three weeks in Hawaii...with Edward...doesn't get much better then that! I wonder if anyone has picked Charlie up off the floor yet. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Wonder where I can get three weeks in Hawaii with Edward?
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Private Eye
At least Carlisle has someone looking into this too. I hope the guy can help Charlie out. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank goodness someone is checking this out, right!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 Plans
Wow...so he has other people against him too. They DA doesn't care about the truth or who is innocent or really guilty. This is really scary for Edward and he doesn't even know how bad it is. Charlie is really going to have to come through on this one. Maybe Lee can change his attitude and help out. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I think Lee will be no help. and Charlie will have to work overtime to solve this one!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Trust (V)
Trust... It is a wonderful thing! I can't wait to see what is next! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Waiting
Well Charlie seems to have the right names. I hope he can find everyone to talk to. Mike has got to help out in this... Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 Loosing
When Edward said "I just lost the baby" I knew someone would take that wrong. I hope Jessica make it through this so Edward can be cleared. I feel bad for what Jessica has been through, but I don't want Edward to suffer too. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Doesn't look as though Jessica is walking up!
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
I guess we all knew this was coming. Something has to give. I just have no idea what it is going to be. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can keep you in suspense for a bit!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Ours (V)
Twins...I love it! These two deserve double the happiness. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Parents (V)
I can't wait to see how Esme reacts! They are so happy since they are together again. That is all that should matter. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 Forced
It is sad the baby died. Edward will take that hard. I hope Jessica wakes up. Someone jas to know she was married. Where are her parents? I like how Charlie let the info out about the baby not being Edwards. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!
Author's Response:
Charlie is becoming team Edward!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Angela (V)
I think he was showed again how amazing his wife is because she wants to know if he is alright. She didn't run and she is not screaming at him. She sounds concerned to me. I hope that is what is going on anyway. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Evidence
There is nothing Charlie can do. He has to all the doctor do what they can to try to save the baby and Jessica. It would look worse if Edward did nothing and he was the one that could save her baby. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Totally right.
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
Thank you for updating again before you left. I am so glad the babies are here and are okay. I am really worried about Charlie. He has to be okay! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I couldn't leave you hanging about the babies!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 Babies
I can't wait for the babies! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 Toy?
Needy Edward is awesome! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)
Please let them talk. They can not have anymore mix ups! They have been apart for too long. They have to stay together. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Well, there is still some miscommunication to come!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Somewhere in a bar . . .
Sounds like Jessica is pregnant with Tyler's baby to me and wants to pass it off as Edward's. Great job...thanks!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Shopping
Charlie seems to be trying...a little anyway. I hope he is not sick. I'm worried... Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi
What jerk! I can't wait to see his attitude change. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I know, I couldn't stand him when I first read this chapter!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi
His eyes will be opened. I don't know what to think of James. Is he really nice? But if he is cheating on Bella how nice can he be. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yea, my friend Lynzi wrote him rough . . . I was hard pressed to make a nice guy out of him!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Promises (L)
So the pact has been made.... going to be interesting. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Yep, the course is set!