Reviews by amwine
Summary:

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"Boop! Bella's preggers!" Emmett said. "And guess whose the father?" Rosalie continued. "Edward Cullen!" Alice yelled. How could this day get any worse? Edward Cullen stalked toward us a harsh glare on his face.

Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan absolutely hate eachother. What will happen in this comedy? Can love find a way? What happens when the worst tears everything apart? Love is stronger than hate my friends but can it pull through the worst of life?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52328 Read Count: 15446
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Aug 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Grow an Icicle Eddie

Of course he is falling for Bella.  Now if they will just really talk to each other.  I can't wait to see what happens next!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Get Up, Get Dressed, Fall on Your Butt

These two are so cute!  I can't wait for more!!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: You Turned Me Into Strawberry Shortcake!

I'm sorry but Emmett did deserve that! Way to go Bella and Edward!  I can't help but smile when I am reading this.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Take Care Of My Love

What a day!!!  Love it...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Forgetfullness and Snowball Fights

Poor Edward...how could Bella do that to him???  Pouring watere on him when it is cold outside....  Although it was pretty funny that he forgot his brothers!  Love it, thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Dancing In The pouring Rain

That was the sweetest thing to say to Bella.  I can't help but smile for these two.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Emmett's Invention

Too cute!  Emmett is something else!!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Remember Me

Don't give up Edward! It is going to take a little while...

I can't wait for more...great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: How Much You Mean To Me

Oh no...they have to be okay! 

They were so sweet telling each other they love each other!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: That's Worth Fighting For

I feel so bad for them.  I am glad that Edward wants to know what he is missing.  I hope his memory come back when he does see these things.  It seems like he is right onthe edge of remembering anyway.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chivalry In Retirement

I love it!  I hope this trip down memory lane helps him remember more!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Drastic Measures

Poor Edward...nothing is going right for him right now.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Friends

So sad...  I feel so bad for these two.  I can't wait for more.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: A New Beginning

This makes me sad...

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: The Resolution

I'm still sad they are apart, but maybe this is what they needed.  He is going to New York...there is always hope!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40319
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)

This is all so Bella.  I guess this just helps her to do what is expected of her.  We all learn from our mistakes.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Chat With Edward

I love it!  Thank Edward for me!!!  ;-) Great job...

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment

I am sure Edward did like what he read.  You can tell that Bella has thought about what she is doing and gone into this with her eyes wide open.  I am sure he is surprised.  He said she is always surprising him.  I love knowing how she views things...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I debated about putting the journal up, thought maybe it would start to be TMI, but I thought, whoever wants to read it can. Her journal helps with the story...Thanks again for the comment, they really do help me to know if I'm going in the right direction...lml

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: B & E answer your questions

I love it.  Interveiws are usually fun to read.  I have to admit I have never heard the def. of a bimbo before.  I laughed at that!!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

I heard the term Bimbo, years ago from a comedian...it's funny the things your brain retains. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it ...lml

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Janes OT

 Thank you for letting us know what Jane was thinking.  She loves Edward and Bella so much and she doesn't want anything to happen to them.  Great job...thanks!!!

Summary:

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4yrs After leaving Forks Bella is ready to face the past. Faithful to her true love she sacrificed her happiness for his future. Now she s returning to Seatle in hopes to soon practice law. He`s moved on sort of, but can Edward forgive Bella´ s secret or is it to late for their ´Happily Ever After´ rated for languge and very lemony lemons!!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44252 Read Count: 6166
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Epilogue: Merry Christmas Baby!

I love the story!  I can't wait to see what happens.  It's sad they have to be a part and that Edward doesn't know he has a daughter.  I can't wait for more.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

thanx!!!! yeah it made me sad that they had to be apart too. I´m a diehard Bellward fan..but I promise it will eventually be worth it.  stick with me a little longer.

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Dirty Little Secrets

I love Mamma Esme!  She is the best.  Always there for all her kids, but keeping them in line at the same time. 

Loved the converstaion between the girls.  I really love this story so far!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Isn´t she like the da bomb Mom!! I effnnn love her to pieces..Thanks for the kind wordl... stick with me and let´s see how this plays out.

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Wet Day Dreaming

I love Carlisle giving Edward crap.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I really enjoyed writing this chapter...Hope you´ll stick with me to see how this all plays out!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Confessions of a Not so Teenaged... Not so Drama´d Queen

I love girl talk and Bella remembering the first time.  I love it all!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support and kind reviews... if you love girl talk... chapter 5 is up and there´s a bit of guy and girl talk... Let me know what you think!!!!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Big Brother Rights of Passage

The guys all crack me up!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: What the.... Didn´t See that Coming

Ok...I am sure Tanya kissed Edward.  I would have kicked Tanya's ass!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That talk went a lot better then it could have.  I had a feeling that Esme wouldn't be upset.  I am glad Carlisle has had a little time to think it though and is a little better about it now.  I am sure he is worried about his children and that is what bothers him to most.  He doesn't wait them to be hurt.  The thinking will have to change just a little, not much.  

I am worried about Emmett.  I hope Rose can help with him in some way.  I am sure he feels betrayed, but if he too stops to think about it, maybe he will come around.  No one will protect his sister more then Edward and isn't what brothers want?  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Very interesting!  I can't wait to see how this unfolds!  Great start...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I agree.  Edward especially is going to freak out when he see Bella in that dress talking to Jacob.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love Alice and Jasper.  I can see her trying to sneak in.  So funny!

I feel so sorry for Bella.  I can see that her brothers are trying to protect her, but come on.  The double standard is crap!!!  I would be just as mad as Bella!!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well at least they all made up.  I would be just as mad as Bella though.  They can't protect her forever.  They have to let go too.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am so glad that Edward talked to Bella and she saw through Tanya and knew she was lying.  That made me laugh when be said Tanya said it just proved how much she love him since she would do that.  What a line...

Great job...thanks so much!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love it!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I don't know how everyone is going to take this.  I hope they don't freak out.  Esme is smart.  They are going to have to be careful or she will figure it out.  I don't blame them for keeping it to themselves for a little while.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I feel a little bad for them having to sneak around, but at the same time that can be fun.  I am sure it is very hard over this Christmas break.  They will be back at school before they know it and I can't wait.  Great job...thanks so much!!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Of course Alice knew.  I am glad they will fainlly start having some alone time.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I just hope it was Rose and not Tanya.  I figured Rose would figure things out or see something.  I hope she supports Bella and Edward and doesn't make things harder for them.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am glad Bella said what she did to Rose.  She needs to find a calm way to tell Carlisle and Esme the same thing.  I couldn't believe that Billy was the one that found them.  The talk they had was good though.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh crap...here it comes!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Got to love Esme.  That was very sweet of her to do for her kids.  I hope what Edward said to Emmett will sink in.  I can kind of see where he would be shocked, but at some point he has to get over it, or he is going to lose his sister and his brother.  I am glad they are not going to hide anymore.  They deserve to be happy.  Great job..thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I have a feel that this is what it took for Emmett to see Edward and Bella together is not really so bad.  I like how the 3 couples ending the evening dancing.  I love it!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope things can settle down for them now. They deserve to be happy together. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can't believe it is over.  I love it as always!  I can see why they got married when they did.  It was time for them even though it didn't work for the rest of the family.  I am so glad everything has gone so well for them in New York.  They are so happy and that is all their family can ask for.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Punishment by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Summary:  Edward has auditioned to be Bella's sub.  However, he has a problem keeping his hands to himself and for that he must be punished.  Sample entry for the Dommella's Dungeon Contest because nothing is better than a strong Bella and an Edward who knows his place - serving her.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5305 Read Count: 2673
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Punishment

Very interesting.  Great job..thanks!

Barely Breathing by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A love taken for granted, we don't always realize what we have until it's gone. "They say bad things happen for a reason and I'd like to believe that's true." A story about realizing what's important. Edward & Bella AH


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7720 Read Count: 2620
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 09 Oct 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow... I hope he can make this right.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I feel so bad for her.  He got caught up and lost his way.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That is the best idea she has had yet!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great job...I love it!  thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What a perfect ending!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Lunch sounds great to me ;-)  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I think him being impartial just flew out the window.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting...I can't wait to get caught up!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

It is sad that Renee is gone.  Bella deserves much more then what Riley had to offer.  I guess what he did got her to think and decide to move.  So that is a good thing, and now she will be closer to Charlie.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

So, Edward needs a change too.  That is an interesting job he has.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This is gonna be good!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Pefect!  I don't want to think about him leaving though.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I am sad that he left, but I have faith it will all work out.  Alice will get to the bottom of this.  Great job..thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Oh noooo...that is how she starts to figure things out???  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I love the dock, it was awesome!  He better be honest with her.  I hope she understand and they can figure things out.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!!

THank you for reading and reviewing! I hope to have an update posted soon!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Well, he has to be honest with her first and then I hope she still wants him to stay forever. 

Rose was her sweet little self wasn't she???  Poor Emmet!  Great job....thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Lots of honesty on the horizon... I think :)

thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  I hope you enjoy the story!

Update coming soon!

xo
jaime

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I want him there with her.  They could have such a great life there together.  I just don't want her to be hurt because of why he showed up at the lodge.  I can't wait to see what is next!  I love this story.  Great job...thanks so much!!!  



Author's Response:

Thank you again.. for reading and reviewing!! He's really seeing how things in his life could change! that's a good thing!

I truly appreciate the kind words you have!

Update coming soon!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh nooooooo....I didn't want her to find out this way, but I just knew she would.  I can't believe Aro would say that knowing he called the White Swan Lodge.  I really hope this doesn't tear them apart.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I really understand why she is so mad, but I hope she will talk to him at some point.  He made a mistake.  We all make mistakes.  She just has to think it through and he needs to give her some time.  They have to find their way back to each other.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Even though it is his fault, I feel bad for Edward too, but I also feel bad for Bella.  She has already been through so much and now she has to deal with this.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - I'll get some writing time this coming week while I'm on vacation!

Thanks so much for the support!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

What a perfect ending.  I love that they have a little boy now and their lives are so happy!  Great story...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

It is about time she is going after her man!  I love the article her wrote.  It was perfect.  I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to seeing Bella again.  I just don't want them to miss each other.  That won't happen will it??? 

Spending time with Charlie was the best.  I am so glad their relationship is growing and getting even better then it was.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I am so glad they are together.  I was afraid that Bella was going to see his with Heidi and that would mess things up again.  I can't wait to see how things go from here.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I love these two. I am glad they seem to be working things out. Their evening was perfect. I am glad they are going a little slow but not holding back their feelings. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

There having a baby!  I love it.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

OMG!!! 



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 -

I love it!!!  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

thanks you, next update on monday. :-)

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389615
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

Bella does need to go deal with Renee and get it over with, but on the other hand what makes Renee think she can call up and tell someone I am sending a plane and you will be on it. I hope Bella sets her straight! I love the time Edward and Bella spent in her office. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

I am glad they talked a little, but there is so much more to talk about!  I can't wait to see how this conversation goes!  I hope they really talk about their feelings for each other and make this speacial for both of them.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I love it!!!  I can't wait to get caught up.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I´m glad you´re enjoying it so far!  Thanks for taking the time to review!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Jacob should be afraid!  I don't know how Bella left that hotel and didn't get him right then.  I guess she just needed some planning.  I love it!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

That he should be, and besides the best revenge is always planned.  If she would have confronted him then, her victory wouldn´t have been as sweet.  And trust me it´s going to be good and sweet!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Thanks for the RED...whoever that was...  I feel bad for Edward, but that was one hell of a dream he had!!!  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Ha!  You´ll be surprised!  I needed a bit of pepto and Stoli after this one!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

Jacob so deserved what he got.  I am glad that Bella is going to Seattle.  I can't wait to see what Alice says to Bella to let her know that there is nothing wrong with her.  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

That he did, but I´m not quite sure I´m done with him yet, only time will tell for sure.  Yes, SubBella is headed to new adventures in Seattle.  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

You got me.  I thought he wouldn't go through with it.  At least she didn't touch him.  She is so crazy.  I hope she is not too much trouble.  I love this story!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry!  DomWard broke out the flogger and I was a goner.  In my defense, I tried!  Yeah, Tanya is a few nuts short of a PayDay!  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

I love it!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

I love it!  This story is so awesome!!!  Alice is making this play out perfectly.  I love how Rose was with Bella.  There will be some fun times with those two or three if Alice is there. 

The one thing I don't get is how Edward and Bella don't recognize each other on the phone.  I think I figured out what BEB means.  I can't wait to see if I am right.  I wonder if Bella will figure it out.  I can't wait for more!  Great job...thanks so much!!!  I have a safe trip and Happy Holidays!



Author's Response:

Well I don't want to give anything away, but I has been about 5 years since they've communicated with each other, alot can change in that amount of time.  That said, we'll just have to wait and see how that telephone call goes!  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

I love Seth!  He is so cute.  It is going to be so good for him and Bella to have each other.  The grocery store was so funny. 

Well I thinking that Jake and Leah deserve each other.  What a shock for Charlie and Sue.  I hope they all make it through this.  Great job...thanks so much!  I can't wait for the phone conversation.  I hope you have a Happy New Year!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Seth is such a cutie! I'm so glad that you loved it, I was really nervous about getting chewed out in reviews because didn't bring the conversation to this chapter.  I really, really wanted to, but it would have been too long.  

The characters from this chapter at some point will play a role in Bella's life so I wanted to get there introduction out of the way, plus let the readers know that unfortunately we haven't seen the last of Jacob Black.  Just a little secret, I'm going to my best to get the next one up in a couple of days.  Reviews like yours make me eager to write!  Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Laterzzz:)

Happy New Year!

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Wow...this is so awesome and so worth the wait!!!  I can't wait until they are really together.  I am so afraid things are going to get messed up if they don't find out pretty quick who each other is.  I love it, love it, love it!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

I love all the texting going back and forth and the pictures too.  I couldn't help but laugh when I thought about Rose having a remote and was keeping Emmett on his toes. 

Shopping with Alice is always an experience.  I am glad she is there for Bella.  I can't wait until Edward gets home!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!!



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Wow...this is awesome!  I love their time together.  I am glad he knows he needs to be honest with her about his feeling sooner rather then later.  They both need to be honest about this, but it looks like Bella sleep talking has let Edward in on her little secret already. 

2 things I would love to see....#1 I hope they can go see Seth soon.  Seth will be so excited to see them at the same time.  #2 - I hope they are Edward and Bella when he makes love to her for the first time.  That would make it so special.  I can't wait to see what he has planned.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Wow...what an awesome chapter!!!!  I can't wait until they meet.  I hope that is soon.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Oh crap....i hope this does not end up with them running in different directions. I don't want Edward to run away. They have to talk this out and be honest with each other. They can't forget about the night before and how they both felt. They will be so good together. Great job...thanks so much!!! Happy Valentine's Day!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

It doesn't get much better then this.  I can't believe Bella would even think that Edward would set all this up just to tell her he didn't want her. 

Their night has been perfect so far.  I hope Bella is honest and tells Edward she is in love with him too.  Great chapter....thanks so much!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

I love their time together.  It was awesome!  I hope Edwad and Mojo can get along.  They are not going to want to be away from each other and who cares what people think.  I can't wait for them to go see Seth.  He is going to be so happy.  I am still worried about Tanya and what she is up to.  Great chapter...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Well we all knew Tanya would be coming back at some point.  Edward is going to have to deal with her once and for all.  Even though I don't know how he is going to do that since she just won't go away. 

Loved the Bella and Edward time!  That is always fun.  I loved seeing Jasper in his Dom mode.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

I love it!  Mojo and Edward were cracking me up.  That trip to Forks was awesome.  I wonder who caught them in the car...I can't wait to see.  Great chapter....thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

That was one hell of a weekend!  Bella cracks me up with her reaction to the new puppy.  I am worried Tanya is going to go after Bella.  That will not be pretty.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

Wow...I can't wait to see how this ends.  Jacob is such a jerk.  He is still lying to Leah and she is taking it all.  Will she ever see what is right in front of her face???  I feel so bad for Seth and Sue. 

I can only imagine what Edward has promised Mojo.  I am guessing Bella is not going to be happy about it.  Loved the shower time.  Bella is learning a few lesson pretty early.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  The new chapter is with the beta, and I think you´ll be happy with Leah and Jacob´s punishment.  Also we´ll find out just what Edward promised to Mojo and if Bella will approve or not!  Thanks for reading and checkout the blog for chapter 18´s teaser!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

So Mojo has a playmate too...  That was prett smart of Edward.   I can't wait to see what Bella says though.  I love these two!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Boy

Wow Edward....overreact much???  He really screwed up! Please tell me he didn't do something really stupid like sleep with someone.  I hope he was just in a bar.   I have a feeling Charlie tracked Mr. Newton to Arizona and that is why he is there.  I hope Mr. Newton is not there to hurt Bella or the baby.  Edward better start thinking straight or he is going to mess up the best thing that has ever happened to him.  Great chapter...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

i agree:) i thnk for the most part he is a good guy

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company

Renee is nuts...one second she is calling this baby a bastard spawn and the next she is saying she is there to protect her rights as a grandmother. Neither of these women deserve any rights to this child. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie

I knew Charlie would see how Edward loves Bella. I love the Jake and Emily hit it off. Great job...thanks!

Author's Response:

thankyou so much

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

I had a feeling this is what Edward wanted.  I love it!  I am sad for the baby, but she will be taken care of by Edward and Esme.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

thankyou so much, i love a good daddyward story

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

I am surprised Mike is not the one to do it.  I understand Edward backing off a little.  He feels close to this baby and it is going to be hard for him to let go too.  Charlie is calling the baby his grandbaby.  This is going to be hard for everone.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present

The first thing that comes to mind is Mike did it....  I can't wait to see.  Great job...thanks!