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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date
I think it will finally happen. I think Bella is ready and I know Edward is ready. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
We'll see on Wednesday!
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together
I think you did a great job. Very realistic. I am really glad Rose is there for Bella to talk to. great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
I think it's good for her to have Rose, too!
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets
I am glad these two talked. I hope they keep talking. I think Bella overreacted just a little bit, but so did Edward. She said she just wanted to be alone for a little while. Maybe now these two can settle down and communicate better.
I don't know why, but I never thought that Bella would say she went to her Grandmothers.
I think I finally know a quote... “Take me now, or lose me forever.” from Top Gun, right???
I can't wait to see what happens next with these two. It is a struggle but I think they will get there... Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter
I was so shocked at the letter Renee wrote. I didn't see that coming. I am glad Bella didn't fall for it. I was afraid she would run out or something.
I am glad Edward told her no and why he was telling her no. She took that pretty well. Love the whole Christmas tree thing. I am sure Edward was done after that.
I think the quote is "You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me" from Miss Congeniality.
I love it as always! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans
I felt so bad for Edward and Bella! It looks like she made up for the it though. I can't decide what I want to happen. I would like it either day. A baby would be good though. One it would so Bella what a great mother she will be, two, the baby would be close in age with Rose and Emmett's and three, to show her mother she doesn't know what she is talking about!
Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
And thank you for your opinion!
xx
Gelix
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas
I can't wait to find out what is going on with Bella. I hope nothing is wrong and if she is not pregnant, I hope is something that can be fixed pretty easy.
As for her last question, well if I was in her situation and got married to someone like she did and wanted out, I would have looked into an annulment. Edward might be surprised to find out she was thinking that way though. This is going to be an interesting conversation!
I hope all is well with Rosalie and Lily and there will be no more scares! Great job...thanks so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
And Bella's 'problem' will soon be revealed!
xx
Gelix
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve
I love it! What a great day for these two! I can't wait for the honeymoon.
What is up with Jake. Did he say something to Edward? I have a feeling he did. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Jake was just being supersticious to why they're married in the first place, just like he was at the wedding.
xx
Gelix
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon
She has to be pregnant! Everything just seems to point to that. I hope that is what is going on. I love it...great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital
I am so glad they are pregnant! I think they are going to be great parents. Bella just has to start eating right so she won't pass out. I love that they may move just down the street from Rose and Emmett. Things are looking good, but I am a little worried about what she dreamed the the second time she dreamed of Emily. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Bella will be sharing her dream someday in the future!
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats
I am glad that everyone is happy for them. It is about time Bella and Jake had it out. He needed to know that this is really what Bella wants. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you
I am happy that Bella is getting help now. It is going to get them to deal with the past and put it to rest once and for all. No more pretending it was a different Edward.
I can't wait for them to tell their parents. I think they will all be happy. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents
I love it! Charie was so funny. I am glad that Edward found out what Bella was thinking. He needed to help her through that quick before it got way out of hand. Great job...thanks so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower
I love it. I am sure moving is going to be a little hard. They are giving up the first place they made good memories together. Living close to Rose and Emmett will be good though.
I have never heard of boiling macaroni in milk. I will have to try that. Let me know if there is more to it then subsituting milk for water..please! As a kid we always had macaroni and tomatoes (just add canned tomatoes instead of cheese). That is my favorite!
I love this stroy as always! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Here is what you need to do:
It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!
Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)
I've never had tomatoes, but I hate the taste. Otherwise I would have tried, it sounds interesting ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Boy or Girl?
I love that they are having a girl and her name is Emily. That is very sweet of Edward. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body
I love it! These two babysitting was cute and so were Rose and Emmett. I loved it when Edward was talking on both phones.
I can't wait to see what the surprise is. I have no idea. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise
Okay Bella it looks like you are going to have to face another fear. I am sure Edward will help with that too. They were so cute when they were shopping. I love these two. They have come so far.
I am really glad that Renee was not mean on the phone. It is sad that she won't be there for Bella when the baby comes.
Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting
Great chapter! I love the idea of all of them being the godparents! Their time babysitting Lily was good for them. They will get it all figured out. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you liked it!
xx
Gelix
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up
I think the girls are going to be very supportive. I am glad that Bella let Esme be there for her and that she will be there when the baby comes. That is going to help Bella so much! Great job...thanks!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch
I am glad they had a good visit with Renee and Phil. I hope Emily calms down on the kicking. I feel so bad for Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful
Love the secret door in the closets! Alice will have a fit it she finds out. Great chapter..thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever
I love Edward's birthday. I am also glad that Bella seems to be making progress with getting in the water and deciding to read the books. Great job as always...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home
What a sweet chapter. I am glad that everyone is there for them. I am worried about Alice. I hope she has not gotten bad news about not being able to have kids. I hope it is just taking longer then she wants it to. I love the chapter. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own
I love it as always. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Halfway to fifty
Bella is a good Mom. She can take care of her baby by herself and she proved it to herself. Everyone else knew she could do it. I am sure it is scary, but it is scary for everyone at first. She has come so far. I love seeing how much she has grown. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Therapy
I am so glad Alice is ready to talk. I hope she and Jasper have not had bad news or something.
I can understand Edward being overprotective, we have all come to understand that about him, but Bella can't be expected to stay home all the time if he is at work. He can't make her depend on him that much.
Great job...thanks so much! I hope tomorrow goes well for you!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Alone Time
I think they did pretty good being away from their daughter for the first time. I also think their time in the hotel was awesome. I figured Alice and Jasper were have trouble conceiving. I understand how how that is. I love this story. Great job as always...thanks so much!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue nr 1
I love it! I wonder what Alice and Jasper were doing. I hope they were getting a baby!
Edward and Bella have come so far. I am glad they are so happy and things are going so well for them. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 46: S: First day in school
I love how their little family is doing so well. I hope they get to add to it soon. Great job...thanks so much!!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: S: A Shocking Surprise
I am so glad they are pregnant again. I can't wait to see how things go at the reunion. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: S: High School Reunion
I love it! Bella was awesome at the reunion. She didn't take any crap from anyone and I am so proud of her for that. She has grown so much and I think she even sees that now. I also love what Edward did. He will always take care of his girls. Great job...thanks so much!!! Good luck with the job interview!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: S: Father's Day
I am so glad Masen is here. It was perfect that he was born on Father's Day. I felt so bad for Emily that she thought they were going to send her away. I hope she understands now that they would never give her away. Great job...thanks so much!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue
I love it, but I am sad that it is over. Edward is so funny now that he is the Dad with a teenage daughter. He would hunt down any boy that treated his daughters the way he treated Bella...even if they did really like her. He also wouldn't put up with his son doing those things. I am glad they worked through everything and have a very happy life now. Great job...thanks so much!!! I will miss these characters!!!
How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is. Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?
Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Pushing
Well. Bella you have a right to be suspicious. I can't wait to find out what is going on. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Lol thank you!!!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Signature
Oh Edward, you are messing up you life! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. next chapter will be up soon, I promise.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confrontation
He better be ready to come clean. I can't wait to see what he says. I feel so bad for Bella. Dr. James Hutton needs to take a hike. He can not be a friend to you Bella!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
So funny! Take a hike! LOl Thanks for reading hun! Next chapter isn't far away I promise!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Advice & Actions
I know Bella has to go through all this...whatever it is. I don't trust James, but I never do. Bella is putting up a good front, and I bet she thinks she is over it, but she's not. She didn't get answers and she will need them someday!!! Great job...I can't wait to see what is really going on. Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you honey! No one ever trusts James. Poor guy, can't catch a break. Bella is going to have to deal with it, trust me! :)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected Turn
Ok, I will admit I don't like Bella and James together...I'm a Bella and Edward girl and always will be. That being said, I am not happy with the way Edward handled things and I believe there is a lot more to the story then Bella knows. I understand the need for this chapter, but I can't wait for the next one and to start finding out what is going on! Great job...thanks so much!!! Don't worry I will be here 'til then end!
Author's Response:
LoL you are not the only one that doesn't like B & James together. I promise to give you some answers next chapter. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What She Said
Wow...I really hope there is another reason this could be all Edward's fault. Ok he cheated, but does the baby really have to be his??? I hope not!!! Maybe Tanya is just trying to blame it on him. Don't get me wrong I am not happy with Edward. What he did was wrong, and I feel bad for what happened to him and everything in his past. I just don't like James. I don't trust James and it just makes me sick to think that Bella thinks she is in love with him...yuck! I really don't know if Edward and Bella can come back from this. Bella would have to talk to him for that to happen and I am not sure that will happen now.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: What He Said
I hope Bella finally talks to Edward in the next chapter. That is going to be the only way she gets answers. I think Tanya is up to something. I have a feeling this baby is not Edward's. I really, really, really hope it is not Edward's baby!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall
So James is a creep after all. I am like Bella, he can't be trusted. He only went after Bella to get back at Edward. To me it doesn't matter if he started having real feelings for her later.
I still don't get why Edward cheated with Tanya. How stupid. Is the baby even his? It was never said. Maybe he only dating her because she wouldn't leave him alone and Bella wouldn't talk to him. I know that sounds bad, but he can't really care about her if he can tell Bella while she is standing there that he made a mistake and wants to fix thing with her. I can't wait to see what happens next. I don't blame Bella for wanting to get away. Great job....thanks so much!!!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions
I am so glad Bella agreed to see Edward. No matter what they had to talk and see each other. It seems the weekend went pretty good. I can't wait to see what happens between them. I still have hope they can make it back to each other. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Changing Tides
I am happy with this chapter. I know it is all very hard, but I am glad that Edward got joint custody of Parker. He deserves both parents equally. Yes his Dad screwed up, but he is trying to do the right thing.
What Edward did was wrong, but what Tanya did was wrong too. She went after a man that taken. Yes he fell for it and made stupid decisions, but he was taken at the time. Did she really believe they would be a family. He never loved her.
I love it. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:
It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon. There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend. Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life. But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle. This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back. There are some laughs along the way. The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Georgia on My Mind
Wow...I love it! Great job...thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving the story a chance!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-At Last
I love it!!!! I have been laughing at Edward's expense I have to say, but this is awesome! I am sorry I have not been able to review. I have been reading from my iphone and I can't review on there...at least I have not figured out how to do it yet. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you Amwine. I'm glad you are enjoying it and it's tickling your funny bone.
Mourning the loss of her husband, a widowed Bella moves back to Forks. Fate keeps throwing recently divorced Edward into her path. Can they fight past the pain and form a life together or are their hearts shattered beyond repair? ExB,flashback BxJake
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60506 Read Count: 5841
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Moon's Gift
I love having Jake's POV for this chapter. Great job...thanks so much!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: BPOV: Friendship
What did he do??? I can't wait to find out. My favorite part was Bella pushing Jessica in the pool. That was priceless. Edward is going to be sorry he missed that! I am glad that everyone got along. That will make life easier for everyone. Great job...thanks so much!!
Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow...very interesting! I can't wait to get caught up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I don't understand how he can walk away. I has to be having regrets, doesn't he??? Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow...what is up with Edward? Carlisle requested who Edward's date would be. There must be more to this??? Great job...thanks!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
How sad! I can't believe he can do this. How can he stay away? Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I hope Esme is the lifesaver here. Please let her help these two. I am not happy with Carlisle at all!! I hope he changes his attitude!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Edward has so much to think about. I feel bad for his situation. It is not all his doing, but at some point he is going to have to stand up for himself! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Please Edward, stand up for Bella and your child! It will be the hardest thing you have ever done, but you will be better for it!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Wow...maybe Carlisle isn't as bad as I thought. I hope he is not! Great job...thansk!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Good for Edward! He seems to have the right attitude now. I can't wait to find out how Carlisle reacts! Great job...thanks!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Carlisle's POV
Wow...my faith is restored in Carlisle! Thank you!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
He is a fighter just like his momma. Great job...thanks!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
The ending to this chapter is so perfect! Although I have to agree with Edward on the two movies. I get the point. Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
What a sweet gift. Edward is really trying and so is Bella. There is still a lot to go through, but it sounds like that are on the right path! Great job! Thanks so much!!!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV
Grandpa is messing with move lives then just Edward's.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
I am so glad they are married and happy! They deserve to be happy. I can't wait to see what happens with Jasper and Alice. I would love to have her in Chicago too.
I am starting to feel bad for Charles. He needs to get over these feelings he is having. His grandson is happy and is about to have a child of his own. He shouldn't miss this. I am glad he saw the wedding. I hope that was a step in the right direction.
Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Charles POV
What a huge step for him. Thanks for his POV!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Birth
It is an amazing day! They will be glad that Charles made the effort to come and see them on that speacial day! Great job...I love it...thanks so much!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Wow...it is so sad what people will do. I am glad no on ran away. They stayed together and fought. When one needed the othe one to be strong they were. They were just like a family should be. I can't wait to see what Charles says. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...
I love it!!! I am so glad that Edward is letting go of his guilt. Now they can focus on their little family and be happy together. They have come so far...Edward...Charles...things are finally on the right track!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb
It is sad, but I hope something good came of it too. We all make mistakes...some bigger then other. Edward is learning from his mistakes and trying to make it right! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I am so glad that Charles took this step and made things right with Bella. Bella should feel a part of the family. I am glad she sees that now.
I can't believe there is only one chapter left. I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Interesting...did she really think she could come back and he would leave his family??? Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Extra (takeout)
I can't help but smile. This is a very sweet moment in time. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
I love it!!! I am so happy they are having another baby. I would love to see more of these two. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
These two have come such a long way. I love it! Great job...thanks!!! I would also love a part two of this story.
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Very interesting! I can't wait to get caught up! Great job...thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
How sad. I am so glad Bella was there.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Jack is so cute and he already has Bella and Charlie wrapped around his little finger and he didn't even have to do anything. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I think Bella's kiss at midnight was perfect. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Jake got what he deserved! What a jerk...I can't believe he did that to Bella and Leah. I love that Charlie is having so much fun with Jake too. It is nice to see him so loving. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I wanted Bella to be a published writer...I am so glad Alice pushed that along. Jack is just so cute. I loved it he told her about his wish. He is so sweet! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Bella's present to Jack was perfect! I am so glad Bella's book is published and doing so well. That will just be better for her and Jack. Renee is crazy as ever. What gives her the right to say those things to Bella??? I can't wait to see what happens next. I really love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
I am so excited! I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!
Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!
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Shel
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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.
"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."
Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.
"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.
"Will she what?"
"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"
When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.
"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."
Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.
"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.
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Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
Jack is so cute! I am so glad he is happy about his parents. I hope the Gala goes well. I am a little worried about it. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"
Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."
Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."
She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
I can not imagine what Edward and his family has been going through or what they will go through when the truth comes out. Victoria and her mother are both monsters and whoever else was with them. They lied to protect themselves and just left a 3 year old little boy to wonder the streets by himself. I am surprised he survived. I can't wait to see what happens next. This story owns me. I can't wait until tomorrow!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!
I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!
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Shel
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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."
Charlie's eyes widened.
"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.
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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Ok, I'm nervous! I can't wait to see what happens. It is going to be a long week!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!
Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!
Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!
I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!
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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.
"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?" Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.
"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."
Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.
"Mom! We're here!"
Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.
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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
OMG...I can't wait until next Friday!!! This is going to be a very long week!!!
I am thinking this went as well as can be expected. I should have known that Esme would be involved with the foundation. I am glad she stood up for Bella. This is a hard situation for everyone, but they are going to have to step back and think of Jack most. Weather they like it or not Bella is his mother, at least in his mind, and he can't be ripped away from another family. That would be the worst thing that could happen to him. The best is that they can all live together happily.
I think this is going to be hard on Edward, but maybe he will just be happy to know where is son is and to have him back. Things will have to be taken slow. That will be hard I know. I hope Edward gets the same reaction from Jack that Uncle Em got. They both deserve that and need that!!!
I can't wait. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!
<3 Shel
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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
Wow...I didn't see that coming. James is going where he belongs for a long time! It is really sad that Victoria was high and just forgot where she left Jack. What a piece of work. I am glad Edward and Bella are going to be okay. I love stong Bella that can handle a gun. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!
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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."
She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."
The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"
Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.
"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.
Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Wow...I am so glad that Edward talked to Bella and told her his story. I love that they are talking. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts!
I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!
<3 Shel
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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.
"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
I love it, love it, love it! Their date was perfect. Jack and Bella talking at the beginning was so sweet. This has to make Jack so happy. Great job as always...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Thanks for all of the love and support!
=)
Shel
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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.
"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."
Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."
Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."
"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."
Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.
"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Wow...I love the twist of Esme being Edward's half sister. This story is so amazing! I love the little smiles Edward and Bella are giving each other. The scrapbook is a wonder gift. I can't imagine what that meant to Edward and his family. I love watching them grow together and find little things out. Great job...thanks so much! I hope next week is better for you!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!
My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today!
Hope you enjoy the teasers!
XoXo Shel
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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.
Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father.
"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward.
Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded.
"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
I love this story! I hope you don't get tired of me saying the same thing everyweek!!!
They had such a great day out in the pool. Emmett needs to chill out. Edward and Bella are going to figure this out. I don't know how, but Bella is right...they do have great friends and family in Washington. It would be hard to just walk away from that. They will have a lot to talk about and plan.
Jasper needs to settle down too. I can't wait to see what happens next week. Alice needs to get there and calm him down.
Again, I love it...thanks so much!!!!
Author's Response:
{LOL! No, I don't get tired of hearing how much you guys love it! In fact, Fridays and Saturday are my most inspirational days as I read the reviews that come in!}
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified!
Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!
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Shel
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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.
"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.
He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."
Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.
"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
I can't help but smile after this chapter. I wish Edward would have found out earlier in the day that Jasper was not Bella boyfriend. I am a little sad he spent his birthday being sad and thinking that Bella had a boyfriend. I hope he and Jack were doing something fun on his birthday.
I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
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Shel
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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
If I was Bella I would tell Marcus Preston to take a hike!!! Bella is a smart woman. She is not going to do anything that will put her family in danger and that includes the Cullens. I love how she was with Edward and how Jack just put it out there that he face planted.
I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Fridays can't come fast enough anymore! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!
<3 Shel
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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Very interesting. So Marcus and Diane miss their friends. I am still not sure that Marcus doesn't know about Jack. I'm just not sure he doesn't know more then he is letting on.
I loved the time on the couch together. I can just imagine them all cuddled up together. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!
Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance!
<3 Shel
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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.
"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.
"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.
"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
I love Edward and Bella sneaking little touches here and there. I can't wait for them to talk. I am a little worried about what Tanya has to tell Bella, but I am glad she will be there for the meeting. That will give Bella some peace of mind. I love this story so much. Great job and thanks for the extra chapter this week!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!
<3
Shel
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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit."
"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.
"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
Finally!!!! I guess Esme and Carlisle were in on that from the beginning. Was everyone just trying to get Edward to wake up and ask her already? I love this story! Thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
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Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
I love thinking of them curling around Jack and keeping him being safe. That is what that little boy needs the most. It makes me sick to thing that James was involved the whole time and was still Edward's lawyer. Edward is going to be so hurt all over again, but now he has Bella and Jack and I don't see them being apart. I guess it could happen, but it won't be for very long. The three of them have to be together always and I think they will figure that out. Great job as always...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
♥ Shel ♥
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
I can't believe that Victoria would show up at this event. Poor Jack, he doesn't need this, but I guess it was bound to happen at some point. I have a feeling that James has something to do with Jack's disappearance too. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I'm also worried about what happens at the end of the summer. I just don't see how Edward, Bella and Jack can be apart now. I love it all. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!
The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!
♥ Shel ♥
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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."
Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.
"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
I love it as always. Edward has to be so excited to spend two weeks with Jack, but I am sure they will both miss Bella while she is on her book tour. I love the way Charlie fit right in. I don't know how this is going to work out in the end, but I am sure it will. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?
I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.
"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.
"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.
"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"
Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."
The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.
"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"
"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
I knew it! I just had a feeling that Edward was thinking about moving to Seattle. It will be hard for him to leave his family, but I just don't see him letting Jack and Bella go alone. I think he could start a branch of his business in Seattle if he wanted. He may just want to spend the time with Jack and Bella for a while though. I can't wait to see what happens. Victoria is going to have to be delt with with, and I think it will be hard for Edward when he realizes that James is involved with Victoria. Great job...thanks so much! I just love this story so so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
I love that they are so happy. Jack being so excited about his Dad moving to Seattle is perfect. That has to make Bella and Edward know for sure this is the right thing to do. I hope they just move in together. They both want to be together.
I am worried about the documents he wants to meet with Edward about. I have a feeling it is not going to be good. Great job...thanks so much!!! I can't believe it is almost over.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
♥ Shel ♥
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
I know it will be hard for all of them to be apart, but like they said they will be stronger for it. I am glad Jack was given the choice of to go to Victoria's funeral or not. I love this story. Congratulations on the awards this story receied. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!
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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."