Reviews by amwine
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995723
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love it!  These two are driving each other crazy!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Jacob is crazy! I am glad she got away from him. It is sad that Charlie wasn't there for her like he should have been. I am glad she opened up to Edward. I can't wait for him to tell her his story. Great job...thanks!!!

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167586
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Change

I love it!  I can't wait to get caught up!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I am sad that Charlie is gone.  I guess that is what takes Bella to Forks, but still it is sad. 

I love the girls!!!  Great job..thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Very interesting afternoon.  I love it!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

What a mess!!!  This is going to be very good or very bad!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Oh nooooooo...  Why would he tell her that when they are driving???  Here's my favorite part...

"Emmett asked me if I wanted to have a three way with him and Rose. And I agreed. Do you want to watch?" I baited him.

"That sounds great, baby," Edward replied. 

I love it!!!  Great job...I can't wait for more...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Wow...I guess I didn't see that coming!!!  I can't wait until these two can talk and get everything out in the open.  Great job...thanks so much!!!  As for the updates...I am good with what works for you.  Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I like seeing all the different POVs.  I don't agree with the way Bella has handled this, but I keep telling myself she will wake up and tell Edward.  I am glad that Alice and Rosalie both told her off in a way.  Edward deserves to know and I think Rose will tell him if Bella doesn't.  I just shook my head at Bella when her answer to Rose was I will start looking for a place.  Wake up Bella!!!  Also, how could she do this to the twins???  Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I am so upset with Bella that she took this whole pregnancy from Edward.  He might have been scared, but he deserved to be there.  He has a right to know and to be there for his child...his son.  I understand time heals all wounds, but Edward will never get this experience back.  He will not get to see his son born.  That is so wrong!

As for names...I think he will be named after Charlie and Edward...Maybe Charles Edward or Edward Charles...it would be nice to see Edward Anthony, but I doubt she will do that...How about Charles Anthony.  Ok...I will stop!  Great job...thanks for listening to my rant on Bella.  I do really love this story.  I just want them to be together.  Thanks again!!!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I have to say I am still really upset with Bella.  She should have benn honest with Edward.  I am going to focus on the fact that maybe it was better for Edward not to worry about Bella the whole time she was pregnant.  Maybe he will see that bad things don't always happen during birth.  I feel so bad for the girls.  It has to be the hardest on them. 

I loved Emmett's plan.  I can't wait to see what he and Rosalie come up with next!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Wow...I didn't really expect Edward to send Bella and Charlie away.  I can understand being a little distant from Bella, but not from Charlie.  He is your son Edward.  How could you not run and hold him???  What Bella did was wrong, but Charlie couldn't help that.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I am glad they are working things out.  They both made mistakes and now they are working through them.  I am curious...do the girls know Bella is back and has Charlie?  How did they take the news? 

I can't believe this is almost over.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

They are finally going to be a happy family again.  I'm sad that is almost over.  This will me missed.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I am so glad they are finally married.  I really hope they can make up with their family and friends.  It kind of makes me sad they got married with out a lot of special people there, but then again I understand.  Great job...I can't wait for part 2.  Thanks so much!!!  I really enjoyed this story!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I love these two...I am so glad they got their happy ending.  I couldn't help but be a little sad, but also excited for Edward when he said it is his fourth child, but the first one he would get to hold right after he was born.  I am glad he finally got that experience.  Great job...I will miss this story...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

This is cute.  I am glad Sam was there for Lizzie.  I think she needed that more then anything.  I love how excited Renee was to meet her brother.  I love it!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I love these two!  Thank you so much for another peek into their lives!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Summary:

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The long awaited 'Etched in my Skin'-outtake of the f*ckhot doctor Carlisle and Esme! Tattoos and Smut! What more do you want?

Written especially for Sessahhh whose awesome reviews inspired me to do this!!

Contains explicit sexual content!! If you're underaged, you have no bussiness reading this!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2263 Read Count: 926
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Passion and Ink

I love it!  Great job...thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting.  I can't wait to get caught up!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

I hope you like it! Thanks. :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

He is working through his brooding.  I like it!!!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

He's good at brooding, that's for sure. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Such sad news to share....



Author's Response:

Agreed. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I would love to know what Bella was thinking also!  I can't wait to watch Edward and Bella get to know each other!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

Check out the outtakes, then! I've posted them as a seperate story. :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

He would not be our Edward if he didn't feel this way!  I can't wait to see him change his mind!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's a stubborn one. Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

NO, NO, NOOOOOOOOO, please noooooo



Author's Response:

lol. It'll be ok. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well at least he didn't do anything too stupid!  I am glad he is going to talk to Bella.  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

Not too stupid at all, really. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think Alice had a great plan!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love it!!!  I think Edward better help her out with that kiss!!!  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love it!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow...this is awesome!!!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love it!  I couldn't help but laugh when Bella kept reminding Edward how he bit her.  I can't wait for the talk.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward is going to have to deal with what has happened almost as much as Bella.  He needs to be honest with her soon!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am glad they are getting to know each other.  They need that!  I am worried about the funeral.  How Bella will handle that.  It would be weird to know your funeral is going on.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I have to agree with Emmett...man up Edward!!!  I have a bad feeling about going to play baseball...I can't wait to see what happens.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

He finally told her he loves her.  Too bad it had to happen this way, but he had to make her stop and think and to prove he didn't want her to leave and was not going to let her go alone.  James and Victoria got what they deserved.  I liked the twist!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love it, love it, love it!  They way everyone came together at the end was awesome!!  I can't help but smile for these two.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love it!!!  What a perfect ending.  I am sad that it is over though!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can't believe Kate has lasted this long.  Come on Riley do the right thing...turn her in.  Great job...thanks so much!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella is taking this way too lightly!!!  I hope nothing happens while they are out.  I can't believe she didn't try to figure out some insurance first thing.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I love that Emmett may get trades to Philly and all the kids will be together!!!  Great job...thanks!!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master

Wow...you have my interest!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year

Poor kids.  No kid should ever have to wake up to something like that!!!  I am glad that Bella was there for them when Edward couldn't be.  Charlie took things better then I thought he might, but I think Evan made Charlie think twice about how to handle things. 

Great job...I can't wait for more...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

The most innocent but insightful things really do come from children.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

What an amazing chapter!  So much happened.  I am so glad things are tuning for our favorite couple.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

I am so disappointed in Rose and Alice.  They are not being good friends to Bella. 

Tanya is up to something, but then again isn't she always???  I am glad that Charlie and Sue were there for Thanksgiving.  I felt really bad for Sue though.  What is Seth thinking...

I can't wait to see what is next!!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Seth is thinking with the wrong head and likes having what he sees as a hot older woman with him.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year

Wow...to be so obvious and take a picture of someone at the ballet.  I guess it gets them what they want...proof.  I hope they could not see Bella,  but I don't know if they will be so lucky. 

I am not happy with Esme either.  I bet Carlisle also had a few words for her. 

Great job.  I love it all!!!  Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

The kids are awesome!  I am glad they are so close with Bella.  They are all so good for each other.  I just don't get what Esme problem is.  She is going to give up her son rather then be happy for him.  That is crazy!!!!  It is awesome that Charlie and Sue are so supportive and Calisle too.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

These two have been through so much!  They deserve to be together and not have to deal with all the crap!

I love that Charlie and Sue started getting to know the kids and is involved with them more. 

What the hell is up with Esme?  I thought since they showed up on Thanksgiving and Esme wanted to talk face to face that things would be better between them not worse.  It is sad that Esme can not be happy for them.  Who cares how old they are or their age difference.  Get over it Esme and anyone else that has a problem with it. 

I am glad that Tanya has no rights to the children. She wasn't good for them and didn't want them anyway. AS for her parents....I am not sure about them.  I wouldn't let them see them unsupervised that is for sure.  I think the kids should have some say in if they want to see them! 

I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job as always...thanks  so much!!! 



Author's Response:

Esme is VERY controlling and Carlisle and Edward are both just starting to realize that because it has always been disguised as concern and helpfulness. She has  a hard time coming to terms with the fact that she will not be able to control Bella and Bella wants the best for Edward - even if it means confronting his mother.

Thanks for reading - B

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

I love that he also surprised her with a wedding!  It was perfect!!!  I thought he would propose, but that was it.  The whole holiday seemed perfect for everyone. 

I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

I thought about a proposal but Edward didn't want to give people moret imte to question and gossip about them.  Now they will have to accept things.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

Well everything seems to be falling into place, except for Esme.  I can't believe her.  I am glad that Edward and Carlisle are still talking.  He didn't do anything wrong in this mess.  I hope Esme can accept thing.  Her son and grandchildren are happier then they have ever been...why can't she see that??? 

I am glad that James has been put away.  He deserved what he got from Bella! 

I can't wait to see how their lives are in Chicago.  I am sad they will be away from Charlie and Sue, but I hope they see each other often.  Great job..thanks so much.  I just love this story!!!



Author's Response:

Esme doesn't think anyome is good enough for her baby boy and it could cost her their relationship.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

I love their first night in the new playroom.  What is up with Esme?  I could not believe that she invited Tanya and her mohter to the lunch.  Why not talk to Bella first.  I hope she did have her eyes opened.  Edward and Bella are being much nicer then I would be.  I understand why this is important to Bella, but then again she stabbed Bella in the back by inviting the other two women.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job as always...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Bella has been trying to take the high road but she is at her limit!!

Thanks for reading!!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months

Oh no...I wonder how many questions he will get about this.  I loved how Bella took care of the kids spending time with Charlie and Sue.  Esme about died.  I just don't get her.  I feel bad for Carlisle.  I'm starting to wonder if they will make it.  Thank god Charlie gave Bella the files.  I still wonder what is in there.  I am so glad the adoption is final.  They won't have to worry about that ever again.  I love it all.  So much happened, and I can't wait to see what happens next...baby maybe???  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

Wow...I love it!  Everything seems to be awesome in their lives.  They are all so happy.  I can't believe there is only one chapter left.  I will miss these characters.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

I have to admit this is the 3rd time I have tried to read this over the last few day.  I would cry every time and I would feel so bad for Edward.  I did like the ending though.  Thinking of them running off into forever makes me smile. 

I hope loved this story from beginning to end.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

I cried writing it = thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2010 Updated: 27 Jul 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day

I like it!!!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response: thank you and I'm glad that you've liked so far!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: First Day Pt 1

I love Gavin!!!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Who's going to be in her next class???  Thanks!!!



Author's Response: He is adorable, isn't he? lol

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: First Day Pt 2

Well, I am a little shocked at the pairing, but that should make it interesting.  Great job...thanks.  PS - I miss Gavin too!!!



Author's Response: shock can be a good thing, that means I've stepped away from the norm and gave you something new :-) and Gavin is hard not to miss

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Finding My Way

Gavin is still my favorite.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response: lol he's been the most popular so far

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Lunch Time Revelations

I am glad that Bella and Jasper opened up a little to one another.  I think all Bella's new friends are going to be supportive of her and Gavin.  I can't wait for her to see that.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response: I think they will too!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Out of the Mouths of Babes

I am glad that Japser knows about Gavin and reacted the way he did.  I think the party on Saturday is going to be so much fun and everyone is going to love Gavin.  They are going to be the saving grace Monday at school.  They will be there for Bella no matter what!!!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response: Bella is learning that there are people in the world that she can trust besides her family and I also think that the gang will be her saving grace as well

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Trying

I think Jasper spoke from his heart and that is all Bella can ask for.  He can't know what he wants right now.  He hardly knows Bella and she hardly knows him.  Saying he wanted to try is the best for both of them.  I understand where Bella was coming from though. 

I tell you everytime, but I just love Gavin!!!  Poor kid doesn't have a clue what he is saying, but the point gets out there.

I can't wait to see how everyone else reacts.  Great job...thanks!!!

 



Author's Response: I can't blame Jasper for not immediately jumping in with both feet, he has to consider the impact on his life. But I can't really blame Bella for asking either, because she is so ignorant when it comes to dating. lol and I love it that you love Gavin!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Confessions and Cold Shoulders

You are spoiling us, and I can't thank you enough!!!  It is horrible what happened to Bella, but I think it is good she told her friend.  They will be more support she needs them at school. 

I agree with Charlie...Jasper just needs to process what he was told.  I think he is having a hard time knowing this happened, not that he is trying to figure out how to get away from Bella. 

Best line of the chapter is from Gavin..."I pwomise that I don't bite anymore Edward, you don't haf to be afwaid of me."  How can you not smile when you read that!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

 



Author's Response: that was mine too lol and I also think that Jasper just needs some time, like Charlie said...and don't tell anyone, but I like spoiling my readers because you are all so good to me :-)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Yardwork

I was guessing this was Jasper's problem.  He needed to process everything.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response: yep :-) thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Fights, Ice Cream, and a Kiss

What a day!!!  I think Bella is starting to understand that she has friends that she can trust and that will stand beside her.  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response: I think she is too, it just took some time

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Price of Insanity

OMG...I can't imagine what Jasper went through.  How horrible.  I know that had to be hard to write...great job...thanks!



Author's Response: It was hard to write. I sat down and cried after finishing it, so thanks for not running away after reading how dark it is

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fix Me, Fix You

They both have a long way to go, but I am so glad they are there to help each other through this.  They are all there for each other.  Great job.  I really love this story!!!  Thanks so much!!!



Author's Response: I agree 100% thanks for r&r'ing!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: When did this happen?

Good times with Gavin...how can that not make everything feel beter???  I love the family they have together.  I could picture all the kids going to get a hug from Sue.  Are we going to see Carlisle and Esme and Billy?

I love it as always...thanks!!!



Author's Response: Carlisle, Esme, and Billy will have their time, I promise

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Date

OMG...please tell me Rose is okay!!!  Jasper should be there quick, right???  Charlie will go with Bella and the boys right??? 

The date was wonderful.  Just what they needed.  Gavin was so cute when Bella was telling him about the date.  I am glad that Japser asked about seeing Allen and Mischa.  It will be good for him.  Great job... thanks so much!!



Author's Response: Rosie and Jasper are alive, I promise..and thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: To Save a Rose

Well, there is more healing to be done, but I am so glad that they all have each other there to lean on.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response: and thank for for taking the time to read and review my little story

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Return to Nightmare Alley

Wow...so the parents decided to show up.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  The parents can't be mad, if they had been around maybe this wouldn't have happened.  I hope things settle down pretty quickly, for everyones sake, but especially for Rosalie!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response: I don't think Rosalie is going to be too happy about them being there

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Full House

I am so glad everyone is there for Rosalie and Jasper!  Jasper and Gavin are so cute together.  I can't believe how horrible Rosalie's mother is.  I hope she gets what she deserves!

This house is about to get more crazy then usual!!!  I can't wait!!!  Great job...thanks so mcuh!!!

 



Author's Response: lol crazy seems to be the name of the game!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Declarations

I love it!!!  They both deserve to have this great love in their lives!!!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response: yes they do!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Up in Smoke

Gotta love Emmett!  I wonder what happend to start the fire?  I hope no one is hurt even though the group got out of there.  I think it is so cute that everyone gets a chance to talk to Gavin at lunch.  They are one big family and I love it!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response: Everyone got out fine, I can tell you that. And yeah, Gavin has thoroughly charmed everyone. thanks for r & ring!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Big Bang, Emmett Style

Emmett is so funny.  I can see loving that show.  Great chapter...I love it all...thanks!!!



Author's Response: He is lol thanks for r&ring!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Creeps

Wow...I didn't see that last line coming as quick as it did.  I can't wait to see what is said next!!! 

I can't believe Bella saw James.  Has he been following them, or is it a fluke??? 

I felt so bad for Emmett.  I know Rose is just mad and she took it out on him.  I hope things change for them.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response: I didn't see it coming either lol and yes, it's a fluke, but you know what those can turn into

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: It's a WTF Kind of Day

OMG...he is so sick!  Someone please take him out!!!  Bella doesn't deserve this.  I wouldn't leave that house if I didn't have to.  Great  job...thanks!!!



Author's Response: he's going to be in a load of trouble if the family gets a hold of him

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Overload

Wow...too much for all these people to be going through.  I hope all these bad people can be taken care of once and for all. 

I loved it when she thought of Carlisle as Doctor Dad.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job as always...thanks!!!



Author's Response: there is a lot going on, but so much of it is connected too, so I hope it can be taken care of in one fell swoop...and I can't take credit for the Doctor Dad thing, my friend dementedevilpixie came up with it

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...

Oh Bella, I worry about you girl!  Charlie is not going to be happy with you!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response: thank you hun

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Blood Doesn't Always Make the Bond

Raven -

I am so sorry for everything you are going through.  Know you are in my thoughts and prayers.  Don't worry about updating or witing we will be here when you get back!  Thanks for letting us know.

Sherry/amwine

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Busted

Wow, I didn't expect Leah to slap Bella.  I guess I wouldn't have been very happy with her when I found out she left by herself.  I am afraid what is going to happen next.  I hope everyone will be ok...we except for James and Victoria/Renee...I hope they get what they deserve!  Great job...thanks so much!!!  I hope things are going better for you.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Finding Bree

OMG...please tell me she still has her gun!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response: lol you know I can't give anything away yet :-)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Ending the Nightmare

Thank you!!  It looks like James got what he deserved.  I hope Victoira/Renee gets what she deserves too.  Thanks for the quick update!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response: I think he got exactly what he deserved :-)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Finale

Wow...I didn't see this coming.  What a twist!  I hope you do write a sequel.  I feel bad for Bella though.  She though all this crap was over.  Great job...thanks so much!  I'm going to vote now... 



Author's Response: I think I am going to do a sequel, but not for a while. I've managed to talk my husband into co-writing a story with me lol So far we've decided to step away from the drama and angst and do something funny

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The Cullens left Forks so Edward could persue his dream of being a NASCAR driver. Many years later when Bella unexpectidly shows up in his life, how will they both be affected when they are magnetically drawn to each other and she is only there for one week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9128 Read Count: 1339
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this and would definitely love to read more about these two!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks for reading. Hope4more and I would love to continue this, but right now we are both busy with the full fics we are writng. I am hoping that when hr ends soon that maybe we can contnue then.

 

THanks again,

EA

Summary:

Edward knew he loved Bella from the first day of pre-k.  Bella's loved everything pink and carnation since Edward gave her one for her birthday.  Remeber a simpler time when your biggest worry was getting your favorite crayon and our booboo's could be kissed away with the promise that it would be better before we got married.  Originally an entry for the Crayola Contest.  My crayon, Carnation Pink. 

Warning: this story is rated K for cavity causing sweetness!

flower


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 897 Read Count: 9005
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 05 May 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How sweet!!!  I love it, love it, love it!!!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

Awe...thanks hon!  I really love this little one~

Carried Away by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

carriedAWAY

Bella developed feelings for Pixie Slippers new VP of Marketing, Edward Cullen, from the moment he entered the office.  But he seems to be keeping her at arms length.  Will she break down his walls, or is she simply letting herself get 'carried away.'

 

Winner of the Office Romance Challenge

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 3078
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carried Away

I love it!!!  Great job...thanks!

Creep by All you need is Moz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Bella has no one, no family, no friends, she feels worthless and when the one person who had ever shown her kindness humiliates her it's the final straw. But what has Edward Cullen, another loner, got to offer her and will she be willing to accept?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3515 Read Count: 784
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 14 May 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I didn't expect Jake to be there and be the accident.  I felt so sad for Bella being so alone.  I am glad she has Edward, but at the same time I am a little worried about the life they may lead.  great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

You're not the only one! I kind of wanted to show that although they had each other that wasn't necessarily a good thing. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Chrissie x

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

I am looking forward to this!  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Married to the Enemy

Love it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

I love it!!!  I say keep Bella POV and Edward POV.  I like seeing what they are both thinking.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Keep posting...I love it!!!  I can't wait to see what happens on this road trip!  I hope they can get everything out in the open.  Great job...thanks so much!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

I am glad they are talking and finding things out about each other.  I can't wait to see how this all goes.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

I love it!!!  Bella seems to be slowly working her way to Edward.  He has a lot to prove to her after the way he treated her.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

I am so glad that Bella is becoming more comfortable with Edward.  I am worried about this wedding invitation.  I hope things will be okay for Bella and Edward.  Great job...I can't wait for more....thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I hope they will be okay too ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

I love that she realizes that she feels so comfortable with Edward.  It is going to take some time, but I think Edward will get to keep his girl.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) And he probably will, who would leave him anyway? ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

OMG...I have to wait for six days????  ;-)  I am thinking positive thoughts.  I hope Bella will be ready to live her life now and not just go through the motions.  She is happy with Edward.  I hope she can see that.  I can't wait to see where they go!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm sorry. There is a reason to why I want to post it on the 16th. Otherwise I would have posted it tomorrow ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

She needed to say Goodbye.  I understand that.  I am so glad Bella opened up to Edward!  They just need to look forward now.  They can't change the past, so start over.  I can't wait to see what her birthday present is.  I have a guess, but I will wait to see if I am right.  I can't wait for more...great job...thanks so much!  I hope you have a good day.  You are in my thoughts. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much! :)

We'll see on Sunday (hopefully) if your guess about the gift is right or not

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

I thought she would be getting a dog, and it is very cute!  These two are always two step forward and one back.  I hope Edward doesn't end up on the couch after that kiss.  I thought Bella would like it!  I can't wait for more!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, some people guessed that she would : )

At least they aren't taking two steps forward and THREE steps back!

THANK YOU!

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

I am guessing it is just a business trip, but it will be hard for these two, I think, but then again it may be good.  I can't wait to see what happens!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

It could be... or not. We'll soon find out! :)

Thank you :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

Bella is going to have to stop jumping to conclusions and learn to trust her husband.  I love how they are growing closer and Edward is being awesome with Bella and taking things so slow.  It will be better for them in the long run.  I am really glad Bella is going to stay with Rose.  It will be good for the girls to be close.  Great job...thanks so much!!!  I love it all!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

I understand why Bella won't say those 3 litter words and I am glad she wants to say them when he is with her, but I wish there was a way to make Edward feel better.  I guess this mean their reunion will be a little more sweeter for him if she tells him then.  I can't wait...great job...thanks!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And I promise that the reuinion will be totally sweet! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

I am so glad Bella finally said "I love you".  I loved Edward's reaction.  He really needed that from Bella.  Great job...thanks so much!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it!

xx
Gelix