Reviews by amwine
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514151
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I am glad that everyone will be together trying to figure out how to beat James.  It's about time Aro called.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

OMG...I didn't expect him to get in the house so easy...

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

OMG...I can't believe that got the girls that easy.  I thought things would end at the cabin.  Edward has to be going crazy!!!  Please tell me they are right behind them.  I can't stand to think that Bella is with him any long then this....who knows what he will try to do to her.  Bella has been through enough...so has Vickie.  Great job...I was on the edge of my seat the whole time.  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

They were all scamed!  Great job...I love it...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I think it is a great idea to send James to Aro.  I think Bella and Victoria would have more peace that way.  I feel bad that Carlisle has lost his livelihood.  He trusted the wrong person.  I hope something could work out for him...well for everyone really.  Great job...thanks so much!!! 

This would be awesome as original work.  I would buy it!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116412
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.  I can't wait to catch up!!!  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love it!!!  Bella doesn't know what she got herself into!!   Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella tried to take a little control!  I love it!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

It seems they have all settled down now and were able to talk a little and understand the other side a little.  Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next!  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Edward has his hands full!!!  I love that he tried to be controling, but Bella reminds him he is not always in control.  At least not to the extent he wants to be.  I was a little afraid that Renee was going to be the one that brought the lunch and would catch them.  That would have been a whole other mess though. 

My favorite part was Bella saying...“If you two assholes don’t stop it, I’m going home tonight.”  That got their attention!!!

Great job...thanks so much!!! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am so glad the Bella is standing up to Edward.  He may not change, but she doesn't have to take his crap.  He doesn't want her to be friends with any guys, but he can tell her that Tanya is a friend and to get the fuck over it...can we say double standard????

Great job....thanks!



Author's Response:

A complete double standard! Bella will not put up with that...

Thx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good for Bella standing her ground and leaving anyway.  I am wondering if it is the new guy at scholl that drove up.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I really hope that Tanya is not pregnant or if she is that it isn't Edward's.  I can see it being someone else's baby and she is going to try and pass it off as Edward's. 

Great job...thanks so much!!!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Was Bella so shocked that she forgot to knee that witch???  Tanya can't be that strong.  At least I would have hit her with my cast sooner then Bella did!  I really don't think Tanya is pregnant with Edward's baby.  I would put it past her to pass it off as his though if she is pregnant.  I am wondering if Bella is the one that is pregnant...I really hope that both of them are not pregnant.  What  a mess that would be!!!!  Great job...I can't wait for more...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella was that shocked. I know for myself if another woman groped and coped a feel along with slobbering all over me I'd be a statue of SHOCK~lol. I'm halfway through the next chapter so it may be out soon...

Thanx for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thanks for the quick update!  I am so glad that it wasn't Tanya, but I feel bad for Bella.  I love that he doctor is her Aunt.  I can't wait to see what Emmett has to say about this.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Of course telling the parents was not going to be easy.  Renee was very selfish.  Charlie did start to comfort Bella.  He at least was listening to Bella and letting her talk. 

My favorite quote was from Emmett...Edward, you’re sure you don’t want to go back and get a helmet?”...I couldn't help but laugh!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

I am sorry to hear about your Dad!  I hope he is doing better.  You are in my thoughts and prayers.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow, so they are going to get married.  It will be hard, but I am sure these two can make it.  I didn't really think Charlie would be happy, but I didn't see him playing the card he did either.  Great job....thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Who is the idiot that is messing with Edward and Bella?  I can't wait to find out.  I am glad that Edward never thought twice about calling this guy out.  He didn't fall for the lie once.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Very interesting.  I can't wait to see what happened and who betrayed Bella.  I hope it was not on purpose.  Great chapter...thanks so much!!!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171310
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I can't believe that Bella has been abused like this.  Renee is an evil evil woman!!!  I can't stop reading this.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I can't believe that Bella has been abused like this.  Renee is an evil evil woman!!!  I can't stop reading this.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Please tell me that Renee is going to get what is coming to her.  Karma has got to come around, right???  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love Alice's last line!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow...I can't believe what Bella has been through.  The poor girl is afaid to go to the bathroom without being told it is okay.  I hope this comes out soon.  Charlie has to be told what she is thinking, but Bella doesn't know who to trust.  What a terrible cycle.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am glad that Bella is starting to feel like she can ask questions.  She is going to have to talk.  I am glad she has a puppy.  I think that will be good for her.  How can you not smile when a puppy is there!  I am worried about what is going to happen though.  Bella has been through enough!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope this is enough to keep Renee away forever!  She is so evil.  I am glad that Charlie said the things he did, but I am sure it is going to take a while for Bella to start to believe them.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow...where is everyone!!!  They have to get there in time.  I won't believe that they don't.  Put Phil away too!!  Get rid of both of the low lifes and Bella can get the help she needs and will maybe feel safe in her life for once.  It breaks my heart everything she has gone through!  I can't wait for more!!!  Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG...poor Bella has been through enough.  I hope that she remembers that Emmett said he loved her. 

I am so glad that everyone got there in time.  I love the number that Edward pulled on Phil!!  I hope nothing happens to him for all that!!!

I think it is a good thing they will be staying with the Cullens.  I hate that all that bad stuff happened in Bella's bedroom.  I would never what to go back to that room!!!  Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next...thanks!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well, I sorry but I am with Bella...I can't seem to feel bad the Phil is gone.  After what he did to Bella he got what he deserved.  I am glad that Bella had fun at the fair.  It was a pretty great day until Tanya showed up.  I can't wait to see what happens next...great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This Bella breaks my heart.  I love how she is starting to blossom.  She has come such a long way.  I hope she keeps getting better and understands that her life is never going to be like it was before!!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love it!!!!  I can't wait to see everyones reaction...  I hope Rosalie and Bella can become comfortable with each other.  It sounds like Rose is trying...  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love the party.  Bella deserves to be spoiled!  Loved the kiss and Alice with Jasper.  I am sure Bella is going to have a hard time on the stand.  I hope she has had enough time with her real family that she will know they will be there for her not matter what it is she says up there and what she has been though in the past!!!  I can't wait for more!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am so glad the Renee got the maximum and the lifetime restrainging order.  Maybe Bella can finally find some peace in her life.  I have a feeling that Edward is going to be making a trip to the book store.  That would bring a smile to Bella's face for sure!!!  Great job...I can't wait for some first dates...thanks!!! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love Charlie and his "cop spidy-sences".  That was so funny!!!  Poor Jasper he got so worked up...I felt bad for him, but I couldn't help but laugh.  I am sure Bella will say yes and Alice too, when Japser comes out of the the bathroom, of course.  I am still worried about Bella though.  I can't wait to see what happens next!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

How sweet!  Poor Bella didn't know that Edward asked her on a date, which I am thinking was  a good thing.  She might have been too nervous if she had known sooner.  I was afraid Emmett was going to ask Vicky out.  I shouldn't be surprised.  I just don't want her to be hurt, and I am sure she will because I know Emmett will work things out with Rose at some point. 

I feel bad for Rose.  I can't wait to find out what is going on with her. I hope she and Bella can become friends.  I have a feeling they may know what other is going through more then anyone else.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I really hope Bella decides to get some help.  I would be good for Charlie and Emmett to go to.  Maybe even a group session with the Cullen's.  They all need to make Bella understand that she is not trouble for them.  The life she knew with Renee is nothing like that life she has with them. 

I can't wait to see what is going on with Rosalie.  I have a feeling it may bring her and Bella together as friends somehow.  Great job...Thanks so much!!!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I love it! Bella deserves to finally feel like a normal teenage girl. I am glad they had so much fun at prom. Charlie giving Bella the talk was priceless! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow...I feel so bad for Emmett and Rosalie.  She should have told him, but she didn't.  I hope they can work things out some way.  I really don't like Vickie and I don't want her being with Emmett. 

I am glad that Edward got Bella to talk to him.  Therapy is going to help Bella so much.  I can't wait for Bella to understand that she is a wonderful person and everything that Renee ever said to her was a lie.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love that Charlie and Bella spent the day together.  She needs to see that not all partents are like Renee.  Charlie and Carlisle and Esme would never treat her like that. 

I feel bad for Emmet.  He has a lot to think about and deal with.  I can see how Vickie is just trying to hold on it him, but she has to know that really isn't a good relationship. 

I can't wait to see what happens next.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I love it! I am glad they will all be living together when they are at college. Ashley seemed real sweet. I wonder if she will end up being a great friend and maybe even living with them. I can't believe it is almost over. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thanks for Charlie's POV.  I always love knowing what he is thinking!!!  I love seeing how far Bella has come.  She deserves all the happiness in the world.  I can't wait until she finally calls Charlie Dad/Daddy.  That will be a huge day!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!  I hope you are feeling better!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love it as always!  Looks like Vickie is showing her true colors.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow...I didn't see that coming.  Tanya is Renee's sister.  How did Charlie not know that?  I guess more of Charlie's life is going to come out now.  This family has been through enough because of Renee.  I hope they get through this once and for all!!!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow...what Charlie went through is so crazy!  He didn't deserve this.  Bella didn't deserve the crap she went through either.  People can be so horrible!  I am worried about Bella.  I hope she gets through this and can find a way to put it behind her.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Bella is getting there.  She is growing and healing and that is what matters most.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I am so glad she finally felt secure enough to call Charlie Dad.  What a special Christmas gift for him and for her.  I can't wait for the talk.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow...I didn't see that coming.  I can't wait to find out more!!! 

Bella catching the biggest fish on her first time out was priceless!  I just love to see her grow and blossom.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow...these two have been through as much as Charlie.  How can people be so mean and crule.  It took way to long, but I am so glad that Bella is away from Renee and doing so much better. 

I love that she was readay to defend her Daddy and the other guys.  Bella has come so far and I can't help but smile about that. 

Great job...thanks so much!!!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

A little scary, but she will be okay.  Liz along with all the family will be there to help.  I love the idea of Liz and Charlie.  I hope that can work out at some point in the future.  Charlie deserves to have a good woman in his life too.  Great chapter...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love how much Bella has grown.  It is because of all the support she has.  Rose has come a long way too.  I can't wait to see what "romantical" thing Emmett and Edward come up with.  This is going to be great for Rose.  Great job...thanks!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315689
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life

Wow...what a mess these two are making.  They are both going to get a wake up call!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - End Credits

I hope they continure to be nice to each other.  I am sure they will be freaked out by these new feelings and they way things are happening, but I hope they will give each other a chance.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything

I hope this was misunderstanding and Edward really didn't leave again...maybe he went for breakfast????  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

Wow...these two are a mess!!!  I like what Japser says..."grow the f*** up!"  I hope they figure this out soon!!!  They are so much better when they are together and nice to each other.   Great job...thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85740
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it so far!  I can't wait to get caught up and she what these two are up to.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow...this is amazing!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I feel so bad for Billy and Jake.  Charlie is going to take this hard too.  I am glad Bella and Jake are friends. 

It is kind of cute watching Bella and Edward try to figure out what they are feeling.  Great job...love it...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am so excited for Alice and Jasper!  This is going to be fun!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love it, love it, love it!!!!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am glad that Charlie is going fishing with Billy and Jake.  It will be good for them. 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love these two.  They are so sweet!  That had to be really hard for Edward to tell Bella.  She reacted just like I expected her to.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love it!!!  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love these two!  Great job....thanks so much!  I can't get the smile off my face when I am read this story!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I feel so bad for Jake.  I am so glad that Jake Charlie and Bella were there with Billy.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love it!!!!  How exciting!!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

James got what he deserved.  He was going to keep hurting people.  Now Victoria and they baby can be free to live a life free of that horrible man.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I love it!  Poor Jasper didn't know what he was getting into when he agreed to go with Edward to the airport to pick up Renee and Phil.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Everything was beautiful.  I was hoping there would be some kind fo spark between Jake and Victoria.  I can't wait to see what happens with that.  Charlie catching the garter was funny.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

How sad.  I can understand how Bella would become so scared.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ahhhh...that was so sweet.  They are a happy little family.  I had to laugh that he was overdue, but when he was ready it was right now!  Great job...I love it....thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love Daddyward!!!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I love it!!!  What a great story!  Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

I love it!!!!  What  a happy life they have had together!!!  I like seeing all the little snap shots from their life.  Great job...thanks so much.  I will miss this one!!!

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23675
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Love Rock N' Roll

I love it!!!  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like this!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Jingle Bells

Christmas day was tough, but I think these two will make it through what ever else comes their way!  Great job...I can't wait to see Renee's reaction!  Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Awe...thanks!  They'll survive it and much more, thats for sure!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Feels Like New Years in July

I am gald Renee had the reaction she did.  As for Charlie...he has got a little making up to do!!!  I understand not being trilled at first...it was a shock...but he said something really mean.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Charlie's going to come around soon.  First it was shock and now he just doesn't know how to make it up to her.  It'll work out!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Finding Answers and Striking a Balance

I am so glad that Edward called Charlie as soon as he could.  It was good for all of them that he was there. 

Edward is moving in...Yeah!!!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

This was an emotional, but very important chapter...thanks for the love!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: The Best Revenge is Good Sex

I wonder where Jasper and Alice ended up???  It was so funny when Jasper told Edward what he forgot to do before Bella could.  I love the name they came up with.  Now I can't wait for the baby!!!  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

Jasper and Alice are funny that way...and Jazz yelling at Edward was becuase he had heard an earful from Bella.  The name thing has people split, but I like it.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Something Worth Celebrating

Everything seems to be coming together.  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

The world is falling into place, and the baby's coming!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

What a sweet moment.  Finally being together on Edward's birthday...that is awesome! 

Gotta love Esme smacking Jake.  I hope he leaves them alone now!!!  Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

After a scare like they had they needed the sweetness!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Too Many Opinions

I love it!!!  I am so glad everyone is so happy now.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Decent Proposal

Gotta love thes two!  Great job...thanks!!!  I'm so sad it is almost over!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Jailbait’s Double Standard

I love it...all three guys having baby girls so close in age!  Sounds like they have a very happy life!!!  Great job...thanks so much! 

Summary:

The night of Bella's high school graduation she lost the 2 most important men in her life. Now 6 years later she has to decide between letting the one who left her behind by choice back in, or losing him forever. But can she ever trust him again?

 

*On hiatus till futher notice but will be finished, writers block sucks*


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29643 Read Count: 4865
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 31 May 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...what a decision to have to make!  I love it.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't think I could be more disappointed in Edward right now.  Less then two months...really???  Wow...

Great job...thanks!!

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, get over yourself Edward Cullen.  Wow...I didn't think I could like him less, but I do!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Emma is so cute!!! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes he was a fool!  I hope he doesn't hurt her again!!!! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well, now I feel bad that I thought so bad of Edward.  Just proves how thing are not always what they look like!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well, at least everything is out in the open now.  Maybe so healing can start.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great job...thanks!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108984
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!!!  I can't wait to get to the rest of it!!!  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love these two!!  Great job...I can't wait for more!!!  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What a wonderful day for all of them!!!  The kids were all so cute.  I am so happy that Emmett and Rosalie are going to have a baby!  Great job...thanks so much! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love Momma Bear!!!  I would have said they same thing.  I felt so bad for Car.  He was pretty brave!!!  Great job...I love this story!!!  I can't wait for more...thanks so much!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am so glad that Edward let Bella know about his situation.  She needed to know at some point.  I understand Bella's feelings.  I would want to be able to support my family.  Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love it!!!  Who cares what other people are going to think.  They know they want to be together.  They twins see Bella as there mother.  Edward thinks of Lily as his daughter.  What is there for wait for.  Sometimes you just know. 

I am so sad this is coming to an end.  I can't wait to see what you have in mind though.  Great job...thanks so much!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

I love it!  They all are so happy.  I hope Bella is able to stay home and write.  That is what she really wants to do.  Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next!!!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Oh I love this story and I will miss it!!!  It was so cute when Lilly ran down the isle to her Daddy...that was my favorite part!!!  Edward watching Renessmee was so funny.  I am sure my husband will be the same when our daughter goes out for the first time!  Just curious how far apart in age Charie and Renesmee are.  I knew that Bella would get her book published.  That is what she was meant to do, not work in a bank forever.  Great job...thanks so much!!!!



Author's Response:

Ugh, stupid! I should've put that in there somewhere! Charlie and Renesmee are about a year apart in age.

Thanks for reading :D

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

I would love to have more of this story!  It is one of my favorites.  I love the kids and Edward and Bella with the kids.  Thanks!!!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very interesting!  I can't wait to get caught up!  Great job..thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow...these two are barely hang on to the edge.  I love it!  Great job...thanks!!!