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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624922
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

????? Says a decent word count of over 3000- but nope- nothing there.

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

Nope!

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

Mr. Cullen???? And he says nothing about this??? His last name is 'Masen' after all?? Typo???

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry

Okay, question answered. It was intentiona,I tend to chirp before  giving any time for explanation.

 

Loving ur fic so far..xx



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story so far - hope you like where it goes from here.

Thanks for R&R! :-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens when bad girl Bella is forced to attend church when her newly saved mother forces her to go? What happens when the handsome Youth Pastor, Edward, catches Bella's eye? She puts into effect Operation Seduce Mr. Innocent. Will Edward fall from grace or will Bella be his saving Grace?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143297 Read Count: 48613
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 May 2010
Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Let Your Mercy Fall on Me

Hmmmm...interesting story. I enjoyed it!

In the beginning I wasn't too sure it would be my thing. And honestly, it wasn't. But u did a great job with it.

I was hoping to see A x J get together and some much more intense B x E - like a skip to the future or some shit. But good either way.

 

Great job!

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238929
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This idea kinda sorta reminds me of The Morganville Vampires. I love it. And it is cure how u have Charlie actually express himself.

 

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Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. I hope that you continue to like it.

XxOo

~Jells

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wondered what they would put on their sign now, Vampire population: 3,120, bloodbag: 1?


Too f'ing funny. Loved it!



Author's Response:

lol Thank you so much =)

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Tnaya eh! What a biatch....Is she really any sort of powerful or resourceful? Or just full of a lot of hot bullshitty air?



Author's Response:

lol. She's a major bitch. She may be just full of bs ;)

Thanks for reading =)

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, that was rather fast, but whatever- at least it isn't drawn out and leaving us hanging....lol

 

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Author's Response:

lol yeah, I totally didn't want to draw out the whole Tanya sitch, but I have a feeling she'll be back. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yeah- so ummm..that mating bit was pretty crazy. I'm not sure if I'm more intrigued or revolted by it, but it is kinda hawt. I so can't tell a lie...lmfao

 

So, m'dear. What's up with the pills??



Author's Response:

lmaooo!!!

Hmmmm the pills, huh? You'll see later. I will cover more about the pills in ch. 13.

 

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well, wasn't that a packed chapter!

I still think it is James, of course it is, right!

He is a smart lil bugger, ain't he?

But, now I am left wondering about all these vampire laws, and how Bella and Edward can actually have a normal relationship- or more- with them in place. He is obviously going to need to turn her at some point, and pregnancy could very well be inevitable, with or without birthcontrol. I mean, Edward's swimmer's have to be a helluva lot stronger and more potent to a human girl. I doubt vamps have thought of making the pill for human -vamp sexual interaction....

 

Meh, anyway- I'll stop rambling now....



Author's Response:

LOL. No you're not rambling. I love to hear your thoughts.

Edward and Bella's relationship will be tested in so many ways. There is so much working against them.

Thank you

~Jells

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I absolutley adored this chapter- this primalward is so f'ing hot. It is still a bit unique to get used to, but I love it. Great job, sweets.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you liked. Yeah, it's quite different but I'm glad that you're still enjoying it.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Again LOVED this chap- this feral love making business is uber hot- Js.

I did notice someting though, and I am anal, so please, feel free to ignore me, but you said earlier on in this chapter that B and E had sex once in the cabin and once in the forest, but last chapter you mentioned that they had sex a cpl more times after the lemon before B fell asleep.

Just thought I'd point that out.

 

Loving this fic.

 

xx



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you. I'm happy that you liked ch 11. I still cringe when I think about that chapter. I just...didn't feel it. I think I was scattered brained writing it.

Oh no I won't ignore you. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll have to reread that again and then change it. I usually reread my chapters a bunch of times but there's always something I miss. lol

Thank you. I'm stilll happy that you like =)

~Jells

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

K, I'm confused. Angela left the last chapter or maybe the one before that. So, did she come back for the party, then?

I may be just having a blond moment, because my son is here chirping while I read, but did I miss something?



Author's Response:

Hi =)

Yup she came back for the party. Sorry I didn't mention it. You didn't miss anything.

Thank you

 

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

You are so right. I have read many much much worse. Tense jumping is a common thing for writers, though. So, sometime ya almost get used to it.

 

Happy writitng, bb and Merry Christmas.

xx



Author's Response:

Thank you, I think? A lot of people forget that this is fanfiction. Something people do to let out their creative side. I suppose some are aspiring writers, or using this forum for practice and honing their skills. However, most are like me-bored housewives having some fun and maybe discovering that they have a knack for storytelling/writing. I don't claim to be a writer, I'm just playing around here and if anything I write is any good and people like it? Well then I think that is wonderful! Thanks so much for reading!! Hope your Christmas was great!

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So, I just happened to stumble upon this lil fic of yours. It has great storyline, but your tense jumping kinda mades me cringe a bit.



Author's Response:

Thanks? I'm sure there are some inconsistencies, but I've read much worse. I'm happy you like the storyine. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts! 

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The things some people will do for love....

 

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Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10422
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Twenty One

K, I am trying this again. lemme know if it works. I so dl chrome just for u, babe.

 

Loving this fic. I want the final chap- like ...yesterday. K.... so gimme gimme, as well as the rest of that article.....