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Bio:
I am an obsessive reader and writer still struggling to find my place in the world.
I am also a wife, a mom, an employee and none the least trying to be a writer.
I am learning everyday and fuck up everyday - I hope to never stop learning as that will be the day I die, but I aim to eventually stop fucking up so much.
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All Human. OOC. A model striving to reach a goal that was once her mother's. A young prodigy that has everything and is unwilling for change to happen. The attraction is there. Will it be enough?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86502 Read Count: 12282
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Really great... keep it up :-)
Life is full of pain, but some people find that one true love that helps them through it all.
Categories: Drama, Romance, Young Adult
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1566 Read Count: 16
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You gave me a great review so I thought I would check out your stuff.
Funny, this story reminds me of another one I read. It's called 'For the summer' written by camoozle. it is like yours and fleshes out the storyline by years. It is great, you should check it out.
Now for your work. Is this your first writing? If so i can give you a few pointers, not that I work magic, but you have some rather basic flaws through this story.
I think you could develop the story, flesh out the individual year, put some more meat on your characters.
Good luck with your writing.
Nelly
Author's Response:
No It's not my first writing, but it is the only one I fished. My problem is I try to make things so long then before I finish I get another idea and start on it leaving the other one behind. With this one I set out for a short story. I tried to keep it short, and I know what you mean about missing meat with the charachters. I wish you could have read the book I started called Ember's Lullaby. I had 3 chapters of it done then started on something else. I might go back to it and post a few chapters.
Follow the journey of a destined love between Jasper and Alice, who were brought together by fate, and bonded by a Raw, Intense, unfiltered connection towards one another. Femme slash.
This is my shot at a love story between Alice and Jasper, only my twist is that MY Jasper is FEMALE.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82126 Read Count: 1964
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Week One
Hey.
Wow I am so happy to hear that.
I am glad you were the first who dared to review on this. I completely gave up on it.
I am posting next chapter soon
Take care
Elvie