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Bio:
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
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This is by far one of the best stories out there in fanfic land! I have been enjoying following this saga for quite some time, and though I lost you for a few chapters in transition to this website, I've read each new chapter as soon as it came out! You somehow manage to be realistic in the head of the sick piece of work that is James, while at the same time, you draw one of the most caring and kind Edwards around. You do this beautifully, especially when Edward is in full Dom mode, which I believe is what makes this story especially hot!
Thanks for continuing to write a great story, which I look forward to following to the end. I hope James dies with his cock cage on!
~BOH
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Thank you for writing this beautiful and smoking hot story, and for staying loyal to it right through the end of 78 chapters! What an accomplishment. I love the ending, love that Carlisle was able to go back and start his school again, safer this time. Love that E & B can get back to some play time without baggage. Love that Victoria is enjoying motherhood.
Reorganizing all the POV's into one cohesive chronological story really helped the flow. You always did a great job overlapping without repeating details and dialogue unless it made sense to do so.
Glad you will keep this story up, because I could see rereading and enjoying the story all over again. Good luck with your next ventures and your original fics. Thanks so much for writing this story for us!
~BOH