Penname: Team66fan [Real name:
Member Since: 31 Jan 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

What’s in a name? Team66fan…


I am originally from Pittsburgh, PA (which relates to my FF sign-on name and the town's hockey team – the Pittsburgh Penguins – owned by former player & team captain Mario Lemieux #66). I am a huge sports fan. Special events/sports tournaments and party planning is my line of work. I am a planner yet, have no life plan of my own...other than endlessly loving my three beautiful four-legged "furry kids" - rescue greyhounds and former racers.


I got hooked on Twilight, later in the mix after getting it for Christmas in 2008. Now I am addicted to all things related to it. I am a 30-something, single female and married to my day job. I love world travel [Ciao, Italia, SCUBA diving/underwater photography and watching NHL hockey, beading and gardening. I can’t cook/bake worth crap…probably the reason my dad was a volunteer fire fighter, so I wouldn’t burn the house down!


I am a total proof reading nerd, so it is challenging for me to not read stories and edit at the same time. Force of habit, I guess. I am typically the person in my office that everyone brings their correspondence or marketing materials to proof read or critique. I think it was all of the years of proof reading (and often writing) many of my brother’s papers in high school and college! My biggest pet peeves are improper spelling or use of: their vs. there and whether vs. weather! Also, when someone says something illogical like... “Join us for the 'first annual' golf tournament.” A first time function/occurrence is INAUGURAL event; it isn't ANNUAL until it happens for a second time! Just saying…think about what the word ‘annual’ means. Moving on!


I give props to all of those authors out there that are brave enough to share their imagination, creativity and thoughts with the general public. I am still trying to gather confidence enough to throw my thoughts into the wind.


Happy reading and writing everyone! Please pass the lemons : )


- Team66fan


 


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Reviews by Team66fan
Summary:

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Struggling through tragedy and betrayal, Edward believes he’s living in a cold and loveless world with no choice but to harden his heart. He’s only living a numb half-life as his sole focus becomes revenge. If he forgets his true reason for living, is there anyone who can get through to him?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21 Read Count: 19536
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2019 Updated: 03 Jan 2021
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

What a nice way to finish things. Love this story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start, it is a great reminder to not take life and loved ones for granted. 



Author's Response:

I think it really is. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

So adorable 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Really enjoyed their conversation. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Our patience is about to pay off.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Poor Edward. I'm glad he was brave enough to call Bella for her help and support.



Author's Response:

It was a big step for him.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Big revelations! Great chapter. Can never get enough of these two.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Bella shared a big chunk of her soul.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Looking forward to reading about Edwards new beginning with bella. I really was touched by bella's gesture to ask Beth's permission.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It felt hugely important to me.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Great chapter and refreshing to hear Edward get his worries off his chest in therapy. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! He'll be better prepared for moving forward now.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2019 Title: Heart of Stone

Cute! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

The Loser by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 243]
Summary:

loser

 

Bella struggled with her weight throughout her life. Her problems are enhanced by the pressures society and her family place on her. How could someone like her ever find a decent husband? Her childhood best friend might have the answer to all her problems. A fake marriage. A rise in station for Bella and with the marriage, Edward stands to gain his full inheritance. How can anyone believe that a Cullen would ever want someone like Bella? Who is the real loser here? AU. Cannon. HEA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94730 Read Count: 19542
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2019 Updated: 30 Jul 2019
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good job to bella for making it through a tough day. I like seeing her and jasper commiserate together over the stresses of being at court. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good job to bella for making it through a tough day. I like seeing her and jasper commiserate together over the stresses of being at court. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love bellas big adventure to McDonald's. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Go bella! Time for your own happiness and enjoyment. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow didn't expect that twist. Admirable move Carlisle!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, wow! Didn't expect that...

Three's a Crowd by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Commercial Photography

Bella and Rosalie are roommates and best friends. When the third friend of their BFF trio moves out to live with her boyfriend and her newborn baby, the girls need to find someone new, and it appears that someone just happens to stumble into their laps.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17 Read Count: 4066
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2019 Updated: 23 Mar 2023
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2019 Title: Three's a Crowd

Love it. Cany wait to see how their teasing turns into foreplay 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2019 Title: Three's a Crowd

Absolutely awesome. The mating dance between these two is like a shot of sugar. So sweet, you can't help but smile.

Summary:

family

Bella has the love of her life with Edward. They have their seven kids, Happily Ever After feels real, but what if when it begins to rain it pours. Can they handle the stress as a family or is going to tear them apart.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48017 Read Count: 16026
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2019 Updated: 01 Oct 2020
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope his visit to Jake is a turning point.  I love that he id driven to want to be a doctor. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I hope that the therapist suprises him and he has his light bulb moment. where it all ckicks together.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Looking forward to seeing how that conversation goes with  Jake. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

My heart breaks for Damon. I think its a great idea that the entire family sees a counselor.  I look forward to reading what may help bring Damon out of his depression.  Its such a hard fog to wade through. One step at a time.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

My heart breaks for Damon. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh dang. Don't leave us hanging for to long. I hope that they will be ok. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow, that was a tear jerker. Beautifully written.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh boy!

Summary:

Madam President

 

Summary:  Bella Marie Swan, the previous first daughter of the United States is elected as the first female President. After her inauguration, she moves in the White House and begins the job that she was elected to do. It had been a hard-fought election, with her opponent attacking her personally for being a woman and not being married. However, in the end, the people of the country spoke with their votes. The first day on the job she was introduced to her security team and was shocked to see the leader was her high school sweetheart, Edward Cullen.

 

Edward Cullen had worked hard and up through the ranks to become the leader of USSS for the POTUS. Excited to start his new position for the upcoming President, until she won. The only woman he had ever loved.

 

Across the globe, an old foe of the United States has decided it is time to cripple their enemy before launching an all-out offensive. Sometimes the biggest killer is those that can not be seen by the naked eye.

 

Will Edward be able to keep his feelings hidden or will in the face of death, he will tell her? 

 

Action/Romance and of course a HEA!!! HeartforTwilight  #BabiesattheBorder #MadamPresident 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15900 Read Count: 7025
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2020 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief

Love the start of this story.  Its gonna be a great journey.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief

Love the start of this story.  Its gonna be a great journey.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief

Love the start of this story.  Its gonna be a great journey.

A Single Step by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

A Single Step Banner

 

 

Isabella Biers had it all. A loving husband, two adorable children and the dream job. One night, however, changed everything. Bella had a spinal stroke, paralyzing her from the waist down. Bella's husband tried to be there for her, but caring for a wife who was an invalid proved to be too much for him. He divorced his wife, unable to cope with her long recovery.

Despite being abandoned by her husband, Bella was determined to not let her disability define her. She wanted to walk again. Enter her physical therapist, Edward Cullen. With the perfect combination of humor, patience, stubbornness and love, can he help her in her endeavor in walking again? Will he open her heart after it was shattered by the man who vowed to be with her, in sickness and in health?

It all begins with A Single Step ...

 

A Single Step GIF


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49424 Read Count: 29336
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2020 Updated: 16 May 2020
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yay! I love motivational Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love snarky Aunt Lizzie! 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 17 May 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue 3

Beautiful and inspiring story.  Thanks for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to seeing how all this unfolds. Great start!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Cock block was pretty funny. Way to go Seth 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter.  Poor Seth and Jake, sadly kids are collateral damage in divorce. I look forward to seeing how things unfold and hope Edward is a healing partner for the boys, and Bella.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Squee awesome adorable and beautiful chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love that the boys are opening up to Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love how Edward is her rock and addressed the Esme situation.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bella is certainly deserving of those lemons.

I hope it helps her confidence soar.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love that Edward is helping Seth build his confidence back.

Happy for their family unit. 

Good riddance Riley!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So exciting seeing her improvement 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, thats a heavy burden for Bella to process. Im glad she has Edward.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love Edward for calling Riley and taking him to task.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter,  I'm glad the boys and Bella had their chance to share their parting shots at Riley. Good riddance!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 03 May 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hawt chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 07 May 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Absolutely beautiful 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 10 May 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue 1

So sweet!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 14 May 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue 2

Awesome chapter. sad to see it coming to a close. 

Summary:

Banner

 

***This story has been pulled to be published under Lara Norman as Bloody Halo*** When notorious criminal mastermind Edward Cullen came back to town, Bella was blindsided by old feelings of infatuation. She knew better than to dance with the devil... but she did it anyway.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Fallen Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2502 Read Count: 76833
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2020 Updated: 27 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excited to enjoy another one of your stories  



Author's Response:

Yay, thank you!

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68308
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One ~ First Blood

My interest is definitely piqued.  Can't wait to read more soon!

Summary:

double crossed


 


Edward Cullen was ruthless, deadly, a man whore and was damn proud of each title.  The only child of the West Coast Mob Boss, Carlise “The Lion” Cullen. From the age of thirteen, he had been groomed to take over for his father when he retired. The day before his twenty-five birthday, his father sat him down and informed him that he was ready to hand over the reins to him, that was after he performed two more acts of loyalty to the family. Edward grinned, knowing that there was nothing his father could throw his way that he wouldn’t do or could do.


 


Isabella Swan the daughter of Charlie “The Books” Swan, the accountant for the Cullen crime family for all of his adult life, as well as friend and confidant to his Boss.  Knowing from a young age what her father did for a living, she decided she wanted to develop her skills in weapons and combat so that one day she could find a place in the family. Called to a meeting with her father and Carlisle, she thought that her dreams were coming true.


 


What happens when they are Double Crossed? 


 


 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5939 Read Count: 2137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2020 Updated: 03 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome! I cant wait to read more soon!

Summary:

Falling for a Dark Soul

 

Isabella Swan moved away from the world she’s known, trying to move on from the loss of her parents and raising her baby sister, Katie. She’s always seen the best in the world, but she’s struggling in coping with all of the changes in her life. A new start was needed and she packed up, moving from the small town of Forks to Chicago to work as an advertising junior executive at Masen Advertising Corporation.

Edward Cullen, CEO of Masen Advertising Corporation, is a cold-hearted, uncaring, hateful asshole. An orphan and living in foster care until he turned fifteen, he was adopted by Carlisle and Esme Cullen. Edward struggled with forming relationships. All he wanted was a partner, a friend, a lover, a wife, a mother to his children. He lost his wife, Tanya, when she was found screwing his partner, Jacob Black, on his desk. She also shattered his heart, ending several pregnancies, even though Edward had pleaded to start a family.

What happens when Edward bumps into Bella in the hallways of Masen Advertising Corporation? Will she be the chink in his armor, shattering his carefully constructed walls? Or will he bring her into the darkness, shattering her optimistic view of the world? It’s uncertain, but she’s Falling for a Dark Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250672 Read Count: 73783
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2020 Updated: 17 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

What a beautiful journey. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Beautiful chapter and a heartfelt toast, a nice reminder for us now. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Beautiful chapter and a heartfelt toast, a nice reminder for us now. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh no, Edward jumping to the wrong conclusions is never a good thing.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, what an emotional chapter. Great job 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lol. I love Alice. The warmth Esme and Carlisle shared with Bella and Katie was so beautiful.  It's beautiful how they have welcomed them like family. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Beautiful chapter.  I love that Katie calls them mom and dad.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Big progress for Edward to say i love yous to his parents and seek out their guidance. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter,  i love how Edward is more relaxed and outgoing in social situations because Bella has brought out the best of him. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Beautiful chapter.  I really enjoyed reading it and Bella standing up for Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I like this warmer side of Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I like this warmer side of Edward 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love how their relationship is building.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love seeing Edward's progress as he matures and becomes more self aware.  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't imagine what kind of baggage a child carries with them when they have such a tumultuous experience like Edward's while growing up.  Its got to be like trying to hug and love a cactus. Im glad Bella said her peace and is thawing out Edward's frozen heart. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love how kit kat thaws Edward out.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Beautiful chapter.  I love how Edward's parents are seeing him so happy and enjoying life with Bella and Katie. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Beautiful chapter.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love that Katie called Edward to the rescue.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Cheers. Here's toasting to a sexy night for Edward and Bella. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Cheers. Here's toasting to a sexy night for Edward and Bella. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh wow, what a range of emotions in this chapter.  I dint envy Bella right now dealing with a sick sister. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love how Edward's family have become that support network for katie and bella

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love how Edward's family have become that support network for katie and bella

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh boy! Lopsided tits is Tanya. Ha ha ha

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yay, so proud of Edward for finally saying i love you. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So glad Edward professed his love for Bella.  I agree that James is a slimy character about to stir the pot.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

Such a beautiful journey.  Thanks for sharing this with us  

Redemption by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

redemption

After leaving Carlisle’s way of life behind, Edward chose to use his gift to feed on the very worst of humanity. Being away from his family for so long, can he ever return after all the lives he has taken? Bella’s mother kicked her out when she chose to have her baby. Alone and on the streets with a newborn, she is forced to turn to depraved deeds to keep herself and her baby alive. Both struggle to find redemption and both need one another in order to get back to what they once were. Vampires. Shifters. Canon.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82277 Read Count: 9655
[Report This] Published: 06 Nov 2020 Updated: 08 Dec 2021
Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love that Edward got the first evie smile. Hoping he comes to his jealous senses and tells Bella he likes her too.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter.  I love protective Edward. bless him for finally sucking up his pride for Bella and evie's sake.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh my goodness.  I am so anxious to see how things unfold 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter,  I'm really enjoying how the two of them are bonding. 

So sorry to hear about so many covid deaths of your acquaintances. Scary times right now. 

Stay safe and healthy.