Reviews by edwardnbella4ever
Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72878
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever Signed
Date: 22 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Carlisle certainly was a bastard, I got a bit squeamish at parts, but I can't say you didn't warn us. I can't wait for the sequel. I want more Edward and Bella. I just read the last three chapters, my mouth dropped open when Bella jumped Carlisle. That was awesome, and I wasn't expecting it to end that soon, but I was very happy that she got her revenge. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever Signed
Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 (I meant to add this to my ch 15 review) I'd love to read an EPOV from when he received the file upload through the takedown if you felt like writing one, whether it was in the sequel or an outtake. Did he know that it was Bella that killed them? Did she leave the videos of her or delete them. Did she shut down the feed from the playroom when she killed Carlisle or was she caught on camera? When did Edward teach her how to hack? Not to be pushy or anything, just curious : )