Reviews by Meddie
Watching Her by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She's his Drummer Girl. She plays. She dances. She's got secrets. He
watches her. If he comes out of the woods will she let him in or close the
doors forever? Daily Updates. AH.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95686 Read Count: 35349
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 May 2012
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Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Vixey

Hehe!  I love what he thought she might call him and then whipped out the "Creeper!"

We finally have communication!  DG is so brave to have written him back, but I think she's searching for a friend, even if he is a little creepy!  He's not really creepy, but only we know that right now.  Hopefully she will find that out, too.  I think my favorite line in her letter is, "I'm trying really hard not to be, but I'm still scared of you."

She just lays it out there and I think that is a good way for Edward to know he needs to take it slowly with her.  He's smart enough to figure that one out!

Edward's question to her is perfect.  It would be what I would want to know!!

Can't wait to learn more!!

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Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Ace Chicken Little Cluck

I had to laugh at how Edward got rid of the guys.  Don't those boys have food at their own house?  Maybe they just really like being in a house without parents and E's house provides that right now.

I felt so bad for him when he thought about someone else being with his girl.  His reaction was extreme, so that should show him that his feelings for her are more than lust.

Him saying if the doors were closed, that he would be done was rather disheartening.  He might say he was done, but I can't help but wonder if he wouldn't have been drawn back to her.  Luckily, we'll never have to know because those doors were open for him ... and a notebook waiting for him!

Can't wait to see what Bella has to say!!

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Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Fa Mulan

I LOVE that she addressed him as "CREEPER."  That's just funny AND that she says she likes that better than calling him his number.

DG sound so lonely.  Even though it is unconventional, this friendship will be good for both of them I think.

I'm totally picturing in my head him sitting on his bed doing the girl squeal and it's cracking me up!!

Can't wait for tomorrow!!  What is this great suprise we are going to have??

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Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Captain John Smith

Creeper is rather cute trying to figure out what to say to her, yet not scare her off at the same time.

I loved his hint about sugar cookies being his favorite.  "Just so you know, in case the thought ever crosses your mind **toe in dirt*  sugar cookies are my favorite."  I can totally see him doing that LOL

So he asked her a bunch of questions that we all want the answers to, now to see if she answers!!!

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Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Woody

Um!  Well, he's a teenaged boy, I'm surprised he held out this long!  He needed it and it was freaking hot as hell, too!

I love the little peek into what Jasper and Em are doing on their day "off."  You keep the story well-rounded by giving us those little glimpses.

It was awesome seeing him play.  We knew he did, but to see him playing is something else.

Can't wait to see what he says in his letter!!

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Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Bashful

Awwww she wore a t-shirt for him!  How cute is that!!

You just keep doing what you're doing, Creeper, and she will learn to trust you!

She'll play for you!!

I kinda have to laugh at him.  He really does talk to himself a lot.  Are we sure he's not a mental patient and this is all a fantasy? hehe

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Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Huey, Dewey, and Louie

LOL those boys are funny!  Typical boys, I'm guessing!

Jasper is going to end up getting pushy if Edward doesn't spill the beans soon. I think he would only get pushy if he felt Edward is in trouble.  He's such a great friend!

I'm so glad that Edward is going to go see his Drummer Girl!  He's probably going to need to be determined!!

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Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Flower

Okay, I need to take this step by step!

Those boys have been friends for a long time.  Edward's 17 and they have been together since they were 8-years-old.  It's not wonder Jasper can get a read on Edward when he's acting funny!

Good for Edward trying to keep his focus on what he's been working toward all his life.  Girls are so distracting :)

I can't believe he finally saw her somewhere in town ... AND he got to hear her voice.  That should ramp up the images he has in his head of her!  I thought for sure he was going to talk to her ... big chicken! I mean, he could have walked up to her in the store and told her he was her creeper and she could have beaned him with a can of ... beans!

And yes, I guess we know where he'll be tonight ... stalking his heart's desire!

Can't wait 'til tomorrow!!!

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Piglet

Awww!  Poor Creeper!  My heart hurts for him, but really, what was she going to do?  I can't see her walking out into the driveway saying, "Come out, come out, where ever you are!!"

YUP!  I'd be slamming those doors closed to and then I'd probably have to change my pants!

Creeper, you can peek on me anytime, honey!

I'm glad he's not giving up though!!

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Aladdin

I LOVE the Drum Fairy reference ... that was classic.

No, someone telling me that he won't hurt me wouldn't freak me out at all!  *sarcasm*

I wonder how Drummer Girl is going to react to coming into her "safe" place and seeing that someone has intruded!

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Prince Edward

Awww ... at least he KNOWS he's insane and kind of admits it!  I think it's great that he got those sticks, even if it was for selfish reasons of just wanting the rest of that song.

NOW - how is he going to GIVE them to her?

Oh, Prince Edward ... be the hero!!

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Ariel

So Edward is going to go get her new sticks!  Will he give them to her in person?

I love his mental ramblings.  He knows what he is doing is wrong, but he can't stop himself.  Poor dude!

I love all of her different t-shirts.  Is there a significance to them?

I think creeper needs to bring a stool to sit on!!

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Donald Duck

Emmett and Jasper are hilarious!  They are great friends, even if they are a pain in the ass!

I wonder why she is so sad, and if maybe meeting Edward could make her life better.

 

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Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Belle

Edward is a stalker!  It sounds like he has a thing for his drummer girl!

It's a good thing his parents are out of town, otherwise he wouldn't be able to like a phantom in the night!

Great start!

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Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Penny

That poor girl!  I would be scared, too!

So ... we find out some things about Bella's house AND the fact that Drummer Girl is in fact Bella.  Well, you never know, it could have been Angela or something *shrug*

I feel awful for our Drummer Girl.  It seems like she is dealing with a load of pain in her house and now her place of escape has been intruded upon.

Hopefully things will work out and she will find out what we all know ... Creeper is harmless and just obsessed!

Maybe once she finds that out, she can have a new form of escape in Creeperward!

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Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Angel

Aw!  Bella seems so lonely and sad.  She says everyone leaves her ... wonder what that means exactly.

I'm so glad she sees Creeper's gift differently in the light of day and isn't so scared of him!

Hopefully she will open the doors again for him.

She says to Maggie, "This isn't Phonenix."  So is that where she came from before?

Hmm ... you answer some questions and leave us with others to ponder!

Until tomorrow!

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Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: The Sorcerer's Apprentice

Okay, that dream was cool as hell.  I could totally see it in my head, perfectly.  I loved the music notes floating around their heads.

I must admit that I swooned when he said, "She's my Bella."

He's such a sweetheart, even if he is a stalker.

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Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Baloo

OH!  Should we just call it fate that he was able to find her that way.   "I was wandering through the forest one night and POOF there you were and I just HAD to keep drooling over you for the last month or so ... no biggie!"

I'm captivated by what they are saying to each other.  I hope they keep writing to each other for a while before they meet!

Okay - her playing "Someone is Watching Me" cracked me up ... yeah, that's all for you, Creeper.  No worries there!

Great chapter!!

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Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: The Alley Cats

Well, that was a typical party I think.  I liked how understanding his parents, well, Dad, is about the fact that there might be some beer there, but just to make sure they are responsible.

I'm rather proud of Creeper for avoiding the come hither of Heidi.  Tramp!  Not that it was hard for him, seeing as he is totally enamored by Bella ... but still!  Good boy!!

Jasper ... what can we say about him!  Creeper must've been drunk babbling and spilled the beans!  This should be good!!

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Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chip 'n' Dale

Awwww Jasper is such a good friend, even when he's making fun of Edward!

Can't wait for Em's reaction.

Looking forward to tomorrow!!