Reviews by Nat3628
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

oh no so now she can read minds.  I wonder if next chapter he will explain to her the importance of the bond to her.  I think it is funny she said "growly thing."  I do have to say in her defense I don't blame her.  It would be nice for the women to have something the men couldn't ignore.  Maybe not growling but their scent maybe.  Like always I love this story and this chapter, and can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Not to worry. The women have a secret weapon as well. As a woman would I give all the power to a man? I think not! lol More will be revealed next chapter. I'm almost finished with my novel which means focus reverts back to CAM and ff.

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

yes, my faith is restored!!!!  Even though I really would like to know what Jasper meant above???



Author's Response:

Jasper's mysterious comment will come to light in the next chapter when Edward begins to explain a few things to Bella. Good times ahead...growl!

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

oohhh I can't wait to see how his hunt goes!!!

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

yes it was worth the wait.  I loved it.  It had to have been very frightening for Bella not being a vampire and not understanding his behavior.  very passionate at the end.  wonder if Edward is the only one out of his family that refers to himself as more than one person during a hunt like that.

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well if it is your last update until the new year!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Yes, they all refer to the beast inside of them as a separate entity. You'll learn more about the "beast" in Carlisle's outtake in Jan.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Again I love the bonding of the family.  I am curious though about this gold cord that is bonding them.  Is this a talent of Bella's to bind people together because they all had to touch her if so who did she get this talent from.  Marcus??  Does he have that ability in this story to bind people together or did Chelsea transfer her talent to Bella or neither I am just getting too deep??  Or did this stronger bond come into place due to the fact the family is complete with it's last member.  It will be very interesting to see what Marcus says about their bond if he ever gets there. 

Classic Edward here with not wanting to put any pressure on Bella to force her decision into their life.

Irina is just so arrogant and dumb.  I sure hope she listens to Tanya and leaves Bella alone even though she seems like she won't.

I like a powerful Bella.  So when Eleazar approaches the house and can sense the power I love it.  I am really interested to see what he says in next chapter and to see who Bella resembles.  Does that mean she is technically not Renee's daughter but Renee was just a surogate possibly if she looks like someone else that Eleazar is familiar with.  Can't wait to see what happens next??? hehehehe  



Author's Response:

sQuEaL!!!! You are a superstar!!!! No you're not getting too deep, the gold cord is not a talent, you hit the nail on the head completely I'm soooo proud of you, the strength of the bond is in fact due to her being the final puzzle piece of their family, they will be forever bonded but because of the incredible individual bonds they all feel towards Bella when the family connect at the same time the connection solidifies and enhances, sort of like a reminder of just how connected they are.... Yes it will indeed be interesting to see what Marcus sees hehehehehe, I know, I could just slap Edward sometimes hehehehehe only time will tell what Irina is up to but I can say she is going to be trouble.... You will hear more about the power Eleazar felt when he arrived soon, just to clarify though that wasn't Bella he could feel... At the time he arrived the family was connected so seemingly the bonding and connection as a family holds great power.... AH all will be revealed very soon my dear lady, but I will say that Bella is without a doubt Charlie and Renee's daughter.... but I like my twists and turns so you will have to wait for my next ch for answers heheheheheh I know I'm totally a bug meanie.... MWAH Thanks a bunch, I LOVED reading your thoughts....

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Finally getting to read and review.  I love that you get to see the brotherly and fatherly love in this chapter.  Not just her relationship with Edward but with the other members of the Cullen family.  Irina is just irritating and needs to be slapped.  If I was Kate and Carmen I could imagine how uncomfortable they felt that their family was causing so much trouble for the Cullens.  Probably just embarassed by her behavior because I would be.



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHHA!!! Irina needs more than a slap trust me hehehehehe, I'm thrilled you love the family connections, its such a pleasure to write those scenes, the love that everyone has for Bella is huge and I love being able to show you just how important she is to them all not just Edward... I think though embaressed Kate and Carmen are used to Irina and Tania's behavior, that doesn't mean they will stand back and just let stuff happen in the future, I think Kate especially will find it impossible not to come to Bella's defense if need be.... Thanks so much for taking the time to review MWAH

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

So does that mean that the curse part of Tanya's talent has been consummated and she will leave them alone now because she used her talent?

Author's Response:

hehehehehehehe, Thanks a bunch for taking the time to push that little button, the answer to your question is NO!!!! All this has done is give E & B piece of mind that she won't be able to manipulate them into being seduced. where would the fun be if T left them alone hehehehehe, There will be more craving on T's part because I'm evil and it's just so much fun hehehehehe

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I just knew you were going to say they were halves of the same soul when you started describing the tug of war Bella felt and the pain and the fact that she could hear the song as well.  Great Chapter as always!!!   I can't wait until next chapter to see what happens with Eleazar and what he says about his visit to Volterra and Bella.  I sure hope the gifts aren't affecting Bella physically unless that would make them have to turn her quicker.  Would she be at a disadvantage being turned now with being a newborn facing her foes or would she be better to stay human facing her foes????  Hmmm.  I kind of hope Renee is dead because she won't have to face any more torture and Bella doesn't have to see her mother hurting anymore.  Also I read most of your fav fan fics and most of those are my favs as well.  The ones I haven't read I will have to check out.  There is this one on fanfic that I really like by the author--drotuno.  It is three stories.  The first story is Broken Angel, then Angel's Embrace, and now An Angel's promise.  Great story if you haven't already read it.  I can't wait until the next chapter!!! hehehehehe!!



Author's Response:

YAY great to see you are on my wave length and paying attention to the hidden hints hehehehe.... I will be posting the next ch in a day or 2 so keep your eyes open for it, Don't worry about Bella physically she will be fine, though mentally she may still have some issues. I'm not sure how she will handle her bloodlust and her powers once she is turned, she realised in the bath with Edward that her gifts are going to be extremely challanging once she is turned, She knows from seeing all of their transformations that once they woke up they were almost uncontrollable and the fact that if she were to wake up like that with her powers no one would stand a chance in hell at stopping her she is freaking out and this is why she wants to speak to Carlisle. I know what you mean about Renee and I still am yet to figure out what will happen with her, Thanks for reviewing and thanks for your story suggestions I will check them out.... MWAH!!!

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Thanks for the shout out!!  I almost like Jake in this one.  Jake is not my favorite character in any story if he is trying to be more than a friend to Bella.  I am glad that he recognizes the connection between Edward and Bella and the threats on Bella's life.  It always made me mad that Jake and the pack took for granted what Bella's wishes were and could have cared less if she wanted to be a vampire or not.  So I like this concept.  I just hope Sam and the Elder's will approve.  Curious how the two alpha dilemma will play out I guess I will find out though.

AHHHH!!!!! Esme gettin some lovin from Daddy C. 

I wonder about Irina now.  Wonder if she is going to be a problem in the future with her vindictiveness.  Hopefully not run to the Volturi again.  So did Bella have a vision of what Irina was going to do and then in her sleep used her shield to move him off of her???  I was just trying to figure out who did it. 

I almost forgot about Marcus and him sneaking away from Volterra.  It will be interesting to see how his character plays out.  Maybe he could be the one and only in command. 

Great job!!  Can't wait to see what happens. hehehehe.



Author's Response:

YAY!!! I'm totally with you on the Jake issues, I am team Edward all the way... I hate the love triangle and didn't want it in my story, this is how I wanted it to be... With Billy on board I don't see Sam or the Elders having a choice anymore but you can be sure Sam will be pissed.... I got cold feet when I started writing the Esme/ Carlisle scene hehehehehe I will need to work on my issues before I do the next one, for some dumb ass reason it felt like writting about my parents having sex *GAG* but I see them getting wild so I need to pull myself together.... Oh you can bet your ass that Irina will be an issue for Bella, it won't include to volturi though she will take matters into her own hands... You guessed it Yes Bella had a dream vision and solved Edward's problem hehehehehe... My lips are sealed on Marcus but I promise you won't be disapointed.... MWAH MWAH MWAH Thanks sooooo much for your review it means so much to me when my readers take an active intrest in my story!!!!

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Never Say Never

Sorry RL has been so hard.  I know what you are going through.  Because my constant reading sometimes causes a riffe with my husband. 

alright.  so I am guessing that Bella has inherited the succubus curse or talent or whatever you want to call it.  I wonder if it will cause problems in the future with Edward's jealousy or problems for Bella in general.  I know Edward wanted Bella to embrace this new thing that Irina gave her.  Did her future get fuzzy because of Bella being scared she was going to hurt her family and didn't want them close??

I hope Esme's feelings aren't too hurt. 

I wonder what is going on with Marcus and why he couldn't feed from that guy and what the pull is.  Is he mating again???  I can't wait to see what happens with him.

Take care and I understand you will post when you can.  Good luck with your move!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey, just a quick reply... Thanks a bunch for your words, I'm so gladyou understand.... Yes Bella has picked up the curse/talent... Trust me everything will work out in the yummyist of ways hehehehe... Yes future got fuzzy because Bella was undecided if she could keep the family close, she would never risk them so she didn't know what to do... Esme is great... lol... You may figure out whats going on with Marcus when you hear a POV in the next chapt from one of the Cullens hehehehhe

MWAH thanks a bunch

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I really don't know what to think.....who is lying???  who is telling the truth???  What is real and what is not???  I just cannot believe that Edward and his friends or atleast one of his friends don't know what happened to Jessica.  He is a good liar.  I guess I'll have to wait and see.  Very interesting story.  Love it!

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor Bella. She sooo needs to get out of there. I sure hope she can get away.

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I like the listing of the days. It makes it feel like her torture of being alone with Edward ominous. And makes the reader feel like it is going to progressively get worse

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

As sick as Edward is in this story, I almost feel sad for him at the end of this chapter.  No one has ever loved him except Bella at one time and he so desperately wants someone to love him back.  Soo Sad.

Reviewer: Nat3628 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

yeah she is free for the time being. I really hope she is free for good but worried that Carlisle will hire a private investigator to look for her. Which brings me to Carlisle and Esme (especially her). I honestly have always worried what is really their deal and their true thoughts on everything. I know Carlisle gave Bella a worried look before they went on their supposed week long trip but was it out of concern for her or just concern that Edward was going to get into trouble. Have they just been living in denial at what their son was doing and didn't want to face up to it or just can't believe their son would do such a thing? Or did they really know what was going on and could care less? Why are they so intent on cleaning up Edward's messes if they have acted like they never cared about him in the first place. Also now that Matt is in the picture is he going to be just the big brother to her or are they going to fall in love. If they fall in love what about Michael. Will she ever get to talk to or see him again. Just some questions I got going on in my head. Plus really interested in finding out what really happened to Jessica. There has to be some kind of evidence or is it just going to be an unsolved murder because of the lack of evidence. Sorry for my rambling just typing my thoughts.