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Mocked by Faith by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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For Alexia Cross and Justin McNear, things are not what they seem.  Both were born and raised in hidden, gated communities.  A place where time virtually stands still and marriages are arranged by parents before a child’s 18th birthday.

Alexia is destined to be her community’s first spinster.  In a last ditch effort, a husband is found.  The only complication?  He has no idea he has been betrothed. Will his history of dating outsiders help or hinder his relationship with his future wife?

Justin McNear searched outside his church for the woman of his dreams. Returning home after failing, he knows he needs to rectify his life and his faith. Can a woman he’s never met make him whole again?

Will this couple end up mocked by their own faith?  Follow Alexia and Justin through the trials and tribulations of finding, falling, and surviving each other's love. It’s never easy saying “I do” to someone you don’t.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2359 Read Count: 1129
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2011
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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Alexia Cross’ crossroads.

cool i cant wait to see what justin thinks

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

Wow she had no idea! keep it going!

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

OMG he doesn't even know!

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

Finally we get justins in out! cant wait for thye next chapter!

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Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

cool

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

You've gotts love a good wedding!

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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

that's why you never listen to rumors.

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

those poor kids how embarassing!

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

When did my kitten become a tiger?

that was so wonderful!

Summary:

Fairies have been around since the beginning of time. They are - by nature - a friendly and peaceful species. Unfortunately, it exposed them to the not so pleasant species. Fairies have always been exploited by those who think themselves superior. Those days have come to an abrupt halt.

 This is not a TinkerBell story. Welcome to the darkside of the beloved winged creatures.

Just imagine what the world would be like if there were no fairies, no more myths, and no more magical beings of any kind. A world where there are no unexplained mysteries.

In the days of old, there was a thriving magical world. It was full of creatures that humankind could never understand, but not anymore. Slowly they've begun to die off - mostly because of the fighting amongst themselves - in their futile attempt for power over each other and struggling to control the ever shrinking hiding spots. As with all non-humanoids, they have pushed deeper and deeper into the very small regions that humans dare not go. Places like the steepest mountains of Appalachia and the deepest forests of Brazil are the only places left for them to seek out their own kingdoms.

They are well aware of the human myths and lores about them, some of them they have even been encouraged, but those are the least of their problems.

Whether you believe it or not that is your choice, but to the fairies it's life or death.


Categories: Original Fiction, Supernatural
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1297 Read Count: 250
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
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Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Fate of the Fairies

sounds promising

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Let Me Explain

finally a differant kind of story. I love fairies!

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Fate of the Fairies

i am so hoping she doesn't end up with Lucian!

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Fate of the Fairies

Awww too sweet!

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Fate of the Fairies

Owhhh nauthgy fairies!

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Fate of the Fairies

Not thats one naughty little fairy!

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Fate of the Fairies

Happy hunting!

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For Stella Richards, life in the charming town of Virginia Beach is not as magical as one would think. Sun, fun, and sand only guarantee one thing, unwanted visitors. Stella learned long ago to never befriend anyone visiting the beach. They're here; then they're gone, drifting in and out as the tide ebbs and flows. She vowed to never connect with anyone vacationing in Virgina Beach - until spring break. Stefan changed everything.

Stefan Sterling lives life never knowing where he will end up next. Bouncing from one Military base to another has hampered his ability to connect to those around him. That's what happens when your father is a high-ranking officer in the military. Raised in a world of discipline, control, and strangers, Stefan never expected to find anyone he'd want to be close to...let alone love.

A family curse verses a loving abnormality promises to keep Stella and Stefan on their toes. Was it an accident or could it be destiny? Will they be able to survive their families? And, is there ever a time when you can fully let go of the person who awoke your soul?

A story of love, sacrifice, and growing up before it's time.


Categories: Original Fiction, Young Adult
Characters: None
Genre: Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4286 Read Count: 381
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2011
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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Destiny

Oh how sad!

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awe so sad! hope he comes back!

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Destiny

That must be a pretty sight.

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Destiny

yikes military school!

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Destiny

thats right stand up to them!

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Destiny

Brianna! what a jealous little tart!

Loving on the Bayou by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

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Banner by Meliisa Condor! My many thanks XOXOX Love ya!

Loving the boss’ daughter will only bring you heartache. Or will it?

Yvonne is a beautiful, rich, well educated woman. When she returns home to the family cane farm after attending all the best schools in New York, her former life will haunt her. Can she truly forget the only man she’s ever loved? Will a mystery man be her salvation or curse?

Thibodaux is a 6th generation, rugged, cane worker. He’s waited for her arrival back home for years. He knows he can’t have her even though she’s always been the woman who owned his heart.

Together they are a taboo. Even though they know they can never be together, they cannot deny their heart’s desires. Or, can they?

Two masks, one masquerade ball, one enchanted evening leaves their hearts hanging in the balance.


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2308 Read Count: 657
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2011 Updated: 08 Aug 2011
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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yvonne comes home

wow, baby, nice story. love the frenchie!

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

can i get one of those visits? please? great chapter, keep it up

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

nicely done. yay a repeat performance

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

Still loving on the Bayou, cant wait to see it published.

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

still trying to figure out who the mystery man is, but loving thibodeaux.

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

Holy crap, the first line floored me! great job

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

hummm Thib has a dominate trait! ok love it even more

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

Man why do people always have to stick their noses in? nice job

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

Busted! holy hell!

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Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

OMG is he????? i have to know!