Aro is one sick dude.

Creepy is putting it mildly.  HAHA.

When is Charlie going to show up and take Aro down??  The old pervert is seriously pissing me off.

If no one ever leaves it could be Tanya, but I would think it's the sick Aro.

Can't Carlisle slip him some poison somehow?

Good chapter, I thought Jacob was going to have a cow when he found out Bella was at the school and really wasn't resentful in the end for being there.  Good twist having it look like Laurent was the mastermind.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow.

I thought they had Laurent's house staked out. He is going to have to kill Heidi also cause there is no way he can handle three hostages.

Great chapter.  Please let them nail James soon.

Please let Aro deal with James, it needs to be very painful and permanent.

Great story, sorry to see it end.  You guys did an awesome job with this story.

Ok while Esme and Bella are up at Emmett's helping Rosalie.  Carlise, Marcus and Demteri are at the house discussing their evil ways and damn the luck theres a gas leak and they go BOOM!!!! Oops.  :)

Or Edward get ahold of something from the hospital to knock them out while they are sleeping and then binds them up in the basement for a week or so (Carlisle being on a vacation) to see how they fare. And at the end of the time the three men have an unfortunate accident along a winding mountain road loose control go over a side of a cliff and end in a firey explosion below.  :)

Hate to see Edward slipping back.  Still say we need to do away with Carlisle and it NEEDS to be painful!!!

Great chapter.  Not as violent as I would have liked to see them die, but at least they're gone.

Ok he is still delusional.  Good chapter.

Good chapter, Bella is showing more resistance which would seem more natural.  Still can't quite figure Edward out.

Great chapter.  Bella's confusion was very good and its nice to see Jasper and Emmett are really on her side and willing to stick up for her.

OMG, a hit definately goes out on James and the guy from the restaurant.

Run Bella Run!

Please tell me they shot that SOB James.

She let him off WAY too easy!

I just started reading, but as far as I concerned once a week is good, more ofter would be great, but you have to have a life too.  ;)  With kids that age and working fulltime that you even write is amazing.

It's Me. Mason.

Do not say that somehow Bella is pregnant, that is just wrong.  She is 17 and on the pill she took responsiblity.  Now if Tanya were newly pregnant say only a month and had a STD that would be righteous.

Good chapter, I'm placing bets on it being her mother.

Rough times ahead.  Good chapter.

When I first found out I was pregnant I instantly knew what sex they were.

Poor Rosalie that has to be difficult to want something and try to make is come true so badly and then someone else comes along and accomplishes it without even trying.

Yeah for a doctor he really is not thinking straight about what the news could be, Seth pretty much spelled it out.

Awwwww!!!!

OK Bella needs to grow the F up!!!  Just tell the boy, it cannot be worse than what she is imagining.

Fucking Asshole.  She did not lose the baby on purpose, there was nothing that anyone could have done after the fact. 

These two are giving me a headache.  Hopefully Edward will see his dreams are trying to tell him what a Psycho Tanya is and she definately set him up both times.

Ok this might be twisted but since Leah didn't put out the pills for Bella that evening could Jacob have done it in order to come in and save her and be the hero? 

How come Edward cannot find out what was going on through Alices' thoughts?

Tough call, I'll be interested in what you plan next.

Demitri is at the back door isn't he.

good chapter.

Ok so they turned Rosalie, where the hell is Alice and why isn't Jasper more upset???

Good chapter, but my only thought is two wrongs don't make a right.

Good chapter, nice twist.

Great chapter, but what did Bella find in Alina's thoughts?

Go Bella!!  Give him hell, keep him on his toes!

Schizo Edward can't wait until he tells to beat himself up.  :)

I'm surprised that Rosalie didn't come with Emmett to kick Edward's ass!

He is on one powerful ego trip.

Interesting set-up the story line looks good.  Edward is actually Tony and they both were hiding from their responsibilities for a time. 

Good chapter.  Let me guess that is what Edward used to say to Bella when she knew him as Tony and she told Angela.

Boy are those two going to be surprised when they get to the alter.  :)  I imagine they're both going to be pissed off also.

Can't wait for the wedding.

Good chapter.  Even though King Charles is an ass, it does bring one comfort that he has a speck of decency in him.

Good chapter.