Reviews by louisa
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752914
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

I've only got love for this fic...lovely, sad, and sexy, beautifully written.

 

Can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

I'm loving the set up - the peeks into the past, and the building and essence of their relationship. It's easy to see why they would be afraid to change the status quo, and their reactions to their fears are what I love seeing here. I also love the dialogue and easy transitions from scene to scene. It all feels v. organic and realistic. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

Great scene with the consultation.  I love that bella can be totally professional yet so compassionate at the same time. And seeing that her boss rewards her for that, encouraging her to be both at the right time.  

I love mama d, looking forward to femmes night out. Let's see some sparks fly!

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

Loving this so much, loved the bar scene.  Looking forward to hearing more about the swat team work. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

SWAT stuff:  It's good. I easily got the jest of the scene, enjoying the action and appreciating the suspense. The definitions were useful for clarification, context provided most of the meanings tho. I like that we get to see some of his job, some of hers. I'm wondering if Trevor was involved in the incident but from the bad-guy side? 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

*fans self*  mmm...hot date ;)

Edward said 'woo', to Emmett, no less!

Loved the whole chapter.

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

I love how edward had to justify his feelings for bella, again. Luckily we see inside his pov, but I'd be damn worried about his past too if I didn't know better. 

His room is soundproofed?!  Of Course!

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

Love seeing all the behind the scene security planning by edward and emmett, it's exciting ;)   What happened to jasper? I'd think he'd be in on all this planning too since alice seems a target as well. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

oh edward...you're not supposed to fall asleep after that. Didn't you forget something??  Waiting until the next morning doesn't count dude.

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238934
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm loving this story. Bella's fright is palpable. It seems even the nice vamps don't really understand her fears. James (?) at the end there...truly menacing. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I rarely read a WIP but the summary just looked too good to pass up. I love the first chapter so far. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella: Under Cullen Protection...mate to the ultimate, immune, vampire. I love it! Your writing flows so easily. I feel in touch with all the characters, the plot has good movement, and there is good mystery and vampire technicalities. MORE!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Thanks again,

xxOo

Jells

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Any of the vampires could be scary for Bella, but Tanya makes an impressive villain. I'm curious what she could do to Renee and Charlie. Emmett is love, Edward is liquid sex, and Alice is sweet, supportive and non-threatening. Great chapter. 

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2673252
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

Loving this story ;)  Edward is so rough and tough but then so vulnerable. And bella is so vulnerable, but then so tough. I'm somewhat shocked bella would go along with this marry for nanny plan (in a similar situation...rose wouldn't, alice would) since she just demanded the g.friend/b.friend/exclusive status. But you make a good argument with the family situation and her apartment is about to become roommate-less.  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: louisa Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

So much love for this book.  Not my first time thru, and since I rarely ever re-read, that's a statement right there. These characters are so gritty and sometimes so silly I can't help but love them.  The action scenes and reactions are great fun without being too vulgar with the violence. Love all the swearing (altho I rarely swear, but I did nic name my neighbor's yappy dog 'little fucker') and the NY vernacular - actually wish there were more r's dropped along the way in the text. Bella & Damion's silliness make me want to squeeze them too!  Loved Aro and Jacob and Alice and Esme and OMG!Carlisle.  Thank you for sharing your brilliance!!  

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

I love how you spun this. It all seems very natural and organic. For them, it's perfect. The dog eating the tampon...hahahahaha. That's funny to me. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Love this world you're creating - these characters!!  They're crazy and wonderful. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

Best first chapter ever!  Love this silly girl and this tough boy. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

Love this story so, so much.  I rarely read a fic more than once but this one appeals to me again. Thanks for sharing your true brilliance!

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

Love this story so, so much.  I rarely read a fic more than once but this one appeals to me again. Thanks for sharing your true brilliance!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533328
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Rolling in the Deep

You write the best action scenes ;))

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company

I need a smoke...

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

Skip as Dad...so good. His parenting style is so, so funny! Love how he bosses his kids around but laughs with and at them too. Porn??!!!!!!!!!!  OMG, really?!

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Love this chapter. Aro is such a layered character, I love all that you give him. 

Reviewer: louisa Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

whoa...that's...that's...a lot to take in.