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Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211600
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Twoonia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

ohhhh update very soon, i really love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Twoonia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: re live and be damned

this story is very dark, but interesting....so far i like it,  although i must say, if i were bella i'd calm down and stop trying to run, it obviously dose her no good

i can't wait to see where this goes....

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238938
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Twoonia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i love this story and where it's headed... but please dont let bella be the quiet type not to share her problems, that happens in far to many fan fics already....she so should tell on tanyas ass and not keep quiet about the threats...but i do understand that each story has a process.... i also love the retractable fang factor thats hot!!!this story has a the feel of true blood with some of the elements such as the retractable fangs but i love that...i hope you keep the stroy risque with loads of blood bonding ( sort of how sookie and bill do during sex) that would be hot also...but really i can't wait until darkward marks bella....cant wait to see where this will go....i have a feeling this will be a fan favorite of all time



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

I totally understand about Bella keeping quiet. I agree that she should tell but I guess I won't know until i start writing when that will happen. I can assure you that I won't drag out the whole keeping Tanya's secret thing. Something will happen before chapter 5 ends.

IKR? I LOVE fangs!!! You can tell right? I only mention the fangs like on every page. LOL Yeah, I'm totally fan of True Blood. Love the part where Sookie and Bill have sex and he feeds from her! Totally hot! There will be LOTS of bloodplay/blood bonding with Edward and Bella (might get a little kinky). I just have to develop their relationship further ANd that is why I can't have Bella keeping the secret for a long time. Like I said, hopefully I can pull off that 'something' that I want to happen in chappy 5 that will resolve Tanya's threat sitch. LOL

Yeah, I'm totally looking forward to him marking Bella. Should be interesting when Bella gets marked =) I hope. LOL

I hope I can keep this story interesting for you.

Thanks for reading/commenting =)