Reviews by mynae
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets

OMG!  This story owns me.  I truly hope you are able to finish this story.  After all you did promise us readers a HEA.  :)  I hope all is well with you.  Gah!  My heart is beating so fast.  I hope that you do continue this story.  Thank you so much for this incredible story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward are happily engaged with their whole lives ahead of them. What happens when a tragedy strikes that will change them forever? AU, all human.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86164 Read Count: 6795
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue Blue Skies

Wow! What an amazing job you did with this story.  I appreciate the time and energy you put into this story to make in so realistic.  I really do appreciate a good fan fiction read.   I hope one day you will amaze us with another story.   Until then, Thank you!

Extremities One shot by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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My winning entry in the Auto Erotica Challenge. Awarded 'Best Handling'. 

Bella wanted to be one of the many girls that Edward pleasured in his Volvo. What happens when that car is now hers, and she makes the first move?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4867 Read Count: 921
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Extremities

That was fucking awesome and hawt!  I need to know what Edward was going to say to Bella.  Is he planning on hurting her heart or does he want more? Please Please Please continue this!  Thank you for this great beginning. I'm already hooked and you've only written one chapter. 

Exchange by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Bella has a Third Date Rule. Would it delude her into continuing with the not so perfect date? Sometimes fate intervenes to correct an imbalance. Not even the location can deter frenzied would-be soul mates. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6345 Read Count: 691
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 15 May 2010
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Exchange

This o/s sounds like a beautiful beginning of a story, what do you say?

Summary:

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They must keep their love a secret from everyone. Especially the ones they're married to.

Entry for The "I Love 80’s Music" NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-shot Contest

E/B, O/S, Rated: NC-17 for a reason, kiddies.

One-shot to be continued as a multi-chaptered story with the title, "Anhelo Amarte". Look out for in May of 2010.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9083 Read Count: 1554
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Secret Lovers

Loved it!  Can't wait to start reading the whole story and find out the outcome if Bella has the courage to come out with her and Edward.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

Just heartbreaking.   I hope Edward is strong enough to help Bella and Lil Bell through this tough time.  I hope he doesn't run.

Reviewer: mynae Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

Wow, I hate stupid chicks like Tanya.  Doing things like this only makes her look pathetic and desperate.  I guess she's going to black mail Edward.  Either dump bella and get back with her or she'll report him to the bar.  Am I right?

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I understand why Edward drew this invisible line with Bella, but I think someone or both will end up crossing over it, hopefully soon.  I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: mynae Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7, Pt. II

Wow, the UST is killing me. I hope it doesn't take them forever to get together.  I can't take it, anymore.  When is James going to make his appearance and will we learn more about Bella and James' relationship?

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Edward is soooo sweet. I'm glad he understands what Bella is going through. I hope he knows Aminah told Bella to break up with him due to the custody hearing. I kinda hoped that Bella wouldn't have listened to her.  After all these years, Edward is capable of loving.   I also wanted to add that this story fucking ROCKS!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews... You made it through the hardest part, I think. Maybe. Hope you like the rest.  M

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

OH MY! Edward is just.... gosh, so irresitible.  That was a really sweet moment between Lil Bell and Edward.    Makes me smile that Edward doesn't want to give up.  And yipee on Alec finding Jake's truck...at Trenton.  I have a feeling Rosalie reported Bella.......am I way off base here? I just can't get enough of this story.

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

So sad. 

Aside from Jake's funeral, the light at the end of the tunnel would be, Bella pregnant with....Edward's baby.  Cause she sounds kinda like she's pregnant.  Hmm...I hope.

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Yes, finally!  Help has finally arrived!

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30

Wow, so I was wrong about Rosalie reporting Bella to the Ethics Committee.  She's still a bitch though, lol!

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1

This was a great fucking story. This story had all the best emotions in it, happy, funny (laughing out loud funny), sad, suspense, angst, bitterness, anger, jealousy, acceptance and let's not forget unconditional love.  I loved every single bit of this story and I'm sad that is over. I have the last epilogue left and the outtakes. I can't wait to read more of your other stories.  You're a great author and you have an awesome imagination. 

Also, all the research from the legal and medical standpoint was right on. I used to work for an infertility clinic and a cardiovascular office and I did not find any flaws in your story in regards to Edward's and Carlisle's care.   I have no clue on the legal part, but it sure has hell sounded like you knew what the hell you were talking about.  2 thumbs up!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! I work in health care, so I tried to be as accurate as possible with the medical side of things.  For legal, I had a family law attorney to check with. It's the shakier side of things, but she approved it.  I'm sad it's over too, but I'm better rested these days, lol... I'm in the middle of an absurd comedy at the moment, and have more drama on the back burner, so look for it in the near future.  Also, there are at least three more out-takes coming from TPoL, so keep the out-takes on alert... M

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow!  What a day.  I'm so glad that Edward finally admitted Isabella and their baby to his family but most importantly, to hisself.  I'm happy that he stood by her side and did the right thing and defend his "family" to his grandfather.  Asshole!  I surely hope his father, Carlisle, will do the right thing, too.  I know Esme will, she already has. 

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Carlisle's POV

I'm really proud of Carlisle.  It was such a relief to find that Carlisle did not end up being just like his father, Charles.  I hope all ends well for Edward and Bella.  He did the right thing, finally, and now he is being punished by his grandfather.  Everything in this world comes with a price or a sacrifice.  Nothing is ever free.

Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow! I'm so glad I read this story.  I loved.....everything about it. I hope maybe you would consider a sequel. 

And the answer is yes. Yea, I would love to read the other chapter you have.  What are you waiting for?

Summary:

The sequel to "It Happened One Weekend". The weekend is over and it's back to the real world for Edward and Bella. Can their love survive or will they be torn apart by the forces around them, that don't want them together?

Again, taking a huge risk and publishing this as completed story. Please review, there is another sequel in the works and I appreciate the inspiration! :)

Lots of humor, drama, language and lemons! All human...all the usual suspects!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90519 Read Count: 12508
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am thoroughly enjoying your stories. I have laughed, smiled, and even cried. I can not get enough. I honestly can not wait to start reading the next leg of their journey. High Five to you!

Summary:

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After spending years in love with her best friend, Bella deals with heartache and learns to grow when he chooses another. 

 

My winning entry for the FanFicAholics Anon's 100 Pictures Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2263 Read Count: 1391
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mynae Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Not That Girl

Clever, very clever.  It was breaking my heart, but I caught on at the end, lol.  When she "was being held gently by a pair of warm arms".  I then realized E was Emmett and Lily was Rosalie.  Awesome story!

The Servile Gal by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

OOC. All Human. A one-shot made for 'Squeeze my Lemon'. SMUT GALORE! ExB    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4947 Read Count: 1863
[Report This] Published: 28 Dec 2010 Updated: 28 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mynae Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was awesome, but it doesn't read like an o/s.  I will absolutely love to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Yes, I ended it like that so I can continue this if I wanted to. Glad you liked it. I'll try to find time to continue this. Thanks. =)

Summary:

PostSecret Prompt Used: Everyone who knew me before 9/11 thinks I'm dead. 3rd Place Winner PostSecret Prompt Contest! SENSITIVE MATERIAL INCLUDED! PLEASE BE WARNED!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4371 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 17 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just wow!  I know you said that this story would not be continued, but I wish you would reconsider.  if not, i just want you to know this story was a beautiful bittersweet love story.  thank you for sharing.

Summary:

 

"When stating our vows, we hadn't believed '…until death do us part' would come into play..." O/S


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4446 Read Count: 277
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too sad, bittersweet.  Beautifully written.  Edward and Bella together forever.  Nothing can keep them apart, not even in death.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: mynae Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Playbook

Great start and I can't wait to read more to find out what happens between the two of them.