Reviews by Browns
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

OMG! That was insane...I started reading this on FF...I'm sad the psycho has Bella now.  Ugh!

Please fix it soon...

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2673883
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Poor girl...never a dull moment in her life.

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

OMG! That was awesome!  She was so getting on my nerves this chapter.  She redeemed herself though. I wanna be like her (minus the whining) when I grow up.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Bad Taffy

I love it...she's more than the typical mobster wife.

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Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

I think I stopped reading here because I was so afraid the sequel would show the years when Edward was away, and I'm such a wuss, I didn't think I could deal with it.

So now, I'm much stronger, I can handle anything and I'm going to read the sequel now, but I'm still crossing my fingers on the angst.

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

Baby!

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

I'm still reading, and I said it before and I'll say it again...Carlisle is an asshole.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

I needed another, Mobward to read while I wait for BG to update, so I thought why not read the original. 

I forgot how funny this was...

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Great chapter...like being in Edward's head.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

Alice was a little mean in this chapter.  Actually she was a downright bitch.  Great chapter.

By the way, I'm noticing a location theme in your stories.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

I like that Bella has her wit here.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: The Game

Lol...this chapter was awesome.  I forgot how posessive he was...that's the difference between this Edward and the one in BG.  The possesiveness is more obvious, it was implied, okay heavily implied, but here it's more blatant and oh so good.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Aruba

Bwahahaha he hung up on him.

I strongly dislike Carlisle.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Round One

They're both so stubborn and delusional it's hilarious. 

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

It did lighten the mood.  Boy is he possesive. 

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Round Three

Carlisle is an asshole.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Decision/Draw

I don't care how nice he was this chapter...I still think he's an asshole.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

Your mob speak is excellent. I figured out most of it without the glossary.  Not so impressive sice this is my second time reading the story. Lol.

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Hot

I can't believe I forgot all this stuff.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533607
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

This was a great start.  I read the Quiet Storm, but I don't think i reviewed, I'm a lurker more often than not.

However, I had to congratulate you.  I definitely lughed out loud on more than one occasion during this chapter.

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Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Come Hell or High Water Part One

Little shit or not. I love that kid.

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

When I was a kid, my grandfather used to give us kids wine every holiday after dinner before bed.

That being said, I come from a family of rum heads...so yeah.

Hate on Edward for giving Sonny wine...no.  To each is own.

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

I love that Edward didn't fly off the handle.  In the last story when Carlisle told Bella he was in love with her and he was positive Edward knew, I really wondered if he did.  This chapter just basically confirmed that he not only knows, but is so aware he can see things that others can't.

"-his own Bella-model-"

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up

The chapter title said it all, but damn. I didn't expect things to be SO "bucked."

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One

Can I feel sorry for a mobster and his bad ass wife?  They're both a lethal mess.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

No not Aro...make him remember! This is so sad.

 

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later

You had me scared after the accusation, I thought one or both of them were gonna die.  I kept telling myself "...there's a sequel and more chapters..." to get through it.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

I hope Aro gets his own Bella-model.  Please...

Crap just remembered this shit ia already complete.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies

Shady bitch that one.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare

Well he got some, but will it make him happy...happy. I feel so sorry for him.

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

So that was intense. I thought Carlisle was going to go there fore a while.  And I really wanna know who sent the junky assassin. 

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

Is it wrong that I wanted Carlisle to kill Esme, too?

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream

I'm a little concerned with where this argument is leading.

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Fight Club Part One

ok better

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

I felt so many things for so many people in this chapter.

Edward - Sad, angry, happy, disappointed and then sad again

Aro - happy, sad, proud

Bella - sad, angry, angry, angry, angry, releived, sad and disappointed. I keep having to tell myself, she can't see into her husband's mind like we can, but...still.

So much going on here.

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Your stories bring up too many emotions.  My gosh, lady!

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

Two best lines ever!!!!

"He's like the nut-job-whisperer; surely he could talk Carlisle off the ledge he was on. "

And

"Bullship."

I'm glad the Skip is feeling/doing better.

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Part 3 Announcement

I'm done...moving onto the next one.

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806710
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

I love Ed Sr. Never really cared for him either way in the first two stories...I mean, he didn't seem like the best parent, but he was loyal to his kids when it counted.

Here, he;s hilarious. 

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Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 32: In Between

I'm so excited for him! I squealed like a girl (oh wait I am one) for him, too.

And Amelia's a fucking psycho just sayin'...

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Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Ahhh...I'm so happy for him. Wouldn't be too upset if it turns into something else. Amelia is a deceitful bitch, just like Katie. WTH is up with the women in this story?  Dude! You have me hating on my own sex...

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I feel better about the whole coked, furious husband, innocent child bride, scary Skip Daddy thing after this chapter.

Oh and I hope nothing happens with the plan. *sigh*

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Reality

Is it time for more Damion? Idk why...I feel like Maggie.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Case Study

OMG, he's so cute and crazy...I love him!

A couple chapters back I called him a psychopath, and I honestly thought he was, until Sonny asked if he just didn't know the difference between right and wrong.  Oh and then Edward made it perfectly clear.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Baby Blues

Katie is Lauren version 1.1 - that chick is annoying!  Poor Santino.

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

Why why why? I know children don't listen to their parents when they get older think the know everything, but really?  smh

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Santino

It Edward reincarnated...in both of them. It's so freaky...together they are their father. LOL

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Damion Part One

He's so crazier than Edward.

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Damion Part Two

I love him...more Dame, more Dame.

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Edward

MANIPULATIVE...

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

Dude! That was brutal! I kind of hated Katie in this chapter, however, again I have no idea what was going through her head.  I do know that Lauren was a major bitch and probably did fill her head with crap, so that could influence her thoughts against Sonny.

Anyway...entire chapter...just wow.

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

Im so happy for the pathological psychopath. That was great!

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Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Breaking the Habit

More Damion...

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

*sings* Layla likes Santino 

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

AHHHHHHH!

I so thought it was going to be him and Layla. I did NOT see this one coming.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

Okay...first, I know you have Emmy Rossum as Kylie, but I swear everything she does and says reminds me of this actress in the New Zealand show Outrageous Fortunes.  I kee having to try and picture Emmy, but it's SO not working.

On another note...effin' hate Katie, and poor poor Sonny.  He's my fave again, forget Dame.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

I had an epiphany last chapter, but now I am absolutely positive.  Maggie is Sonny and Damion's Bella.  I thought it was Amelia there for a while (okay like 3 seconds), but no, it's Maggie.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

He fuckin' deserved. Swarmy bastard...and he used to be my favorite. *sigh*

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

pfff...who needs translations when they have google translate...

Poor Carlisle - karma has bit him in the ass and he doesn't know what to do about it.  Happy for Sonny. Sad for Edward and Bella.  Hope Dame works his shit out...cause dude is on a roll.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

OMG! Now I feel horrible for all the Damion hate!

I thought he said he was 15 when he "lost" his virginity in an earlier chapter. I dind't think anything of it other than that's why he went after Alex, but now... Yeah I know it's just two years, but at 15 you're so much more mature...you think you know everything. It's like every teenage boy's dream.  I have a 12 year old child, and just the thought of something like that in a year. I can't even consider what Bella is going through.

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Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

Hmm...I don't feel satisfied with Lauren's demise. There should have been more pain. 

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Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

Sympathize with Katie? Are you kidding? She's a liar and a manipulator. She's just as bad as Damion.

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Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Crawl to Montauk

is it wrong that I want him in the family business?

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Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

It's over?  I can't believe it.  Oh well, it was great.  Thanks for sharing your words.

Now I had to go find something else to read...oh wait, you have more. LOL