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bittersweetheart by Mynxi Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

O/S for fun. Bella is changed abruptly but she's not the sweet girl they remember when she wakes up & Jasper finds the perfect mate for the Major. Rated M for violence & gore. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Horror, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4292 Read Count: 2604
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That chapter ended with a 'Major' Pop 'popping'. I think Bella-Enyo learned a few things from her mate on how to not spill a drop while feeding.

 

Oooo, I loved suthurn talkin' Peter and his Charlotte.

Rita;D



Author's Response:

Thanks Darlin!

xoxoxox

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Summary:

This story is a one-shot explaining one of the million and one scenarios of what could have happened after the Cullen’s left Bella in New Moon.

 

This story contains angst and character death.

 

 

The banner is a gift from a beautiful friend and fellow author, MissKingAtYourService . If you haven’t already take a look at her stories on here.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4347 Read Count: 879
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2012
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Debt to Pay

Bitter in its sweetness...Lonelier Than This.

Summary:

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One rule for buying at auction. Never buy blind. Jasper knew this, but he did it anyway. What lies in the ruins of what he bought? Can he fix everything there?

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77066 Read Count: 32563
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Such a wonderful story. I just had to find it & re-read it.

 

Merry, Merry & all that Jazz.

XxxHUGSxxX

For a jolly holiday

Take Care,

 

CentauRita, NorCal Gal

Summary:

KC - Let the Rain Come Down

Summary: Rejected by the world around them, they lead lonely, isolated lives, focusing solely on basic survival. All it takes is one single act of kindness to open the door to their new tomorrow... together. 

WARNING - Adult themes

Banner by Stephanie Lvt McNutty

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121309 Read Count: 8200
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I could feel the hope for the future, in Jasper helping Edward? Or, Edward helping Jasper? In the end, they both were helping each other...together.

Mmmm, loved the sensual shared bath.

Delightful story. This world would be a much better place by learning to give unselfishly, as Jasper and Edward by repaying kindness with kindness.

Hope all is well with you, KC. It's...'All I Want to Hear'**hoping for your kindness and perhaps an update...soon?**

 

Take Care and Happy Writing, Always...

Yep, it's Rita ;D

Hostage by maryhell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

stories/35826/images/Hostage2.jpgJasper and Edward are members of NYPD SWAT and are in love. When they get involved in a gang related situation, a skeleton comes out of the closet that neither were prepared for. Will they survive? Rated NC17 for M/M loving, language and mature themes.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Action, Drama, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Hostage
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64157 Read Count: 11713
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jun 2012
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet the Pack

Nice…Intro-duh-ick-tion! Edward really 'packed' Jasper, to the hilt!  ;}



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

HAHAHAHA - very good, love your play on words

Oh yes, Edward knows how to satisfy his man.

Take care

maryhell

 

 

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Before the storm

Your Boyz are so sweet, I don't know how Jasper and Edward have been able to keep their relationship between them from everyone else.

 

Job well done...**cough, cough**saving Bree, of course! **winks and smiles**Jasper did a good job loving Edward, too!

 

Now, they've got another job to do. So, take that one to the bank  ;}



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Edward and Jasper are masters at undercover. As everyone believes they are brothers, their closeness wasn't in question.

Glad you enjoyed the other *cough cough* scenes

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Can't hardly stand the abuse being given to Edward by these F'ers!

 

Oh, and the waiting must be killing Jasper, knowing that his love is harmed and, at the moment, can do nothing about it.

 

Those F'ers seem to know a lot about Edward, though. How? And more importantly...whom?



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

 

Wow, you do a lot of reading at one time. Thank you soooo much for reviewing each chapter. It really is appreciated.

Very true, the waiting is killing Jasper. 

All gets revealed eventually.

Take care

maryhell

 

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Wlho's Your Daddy

Hey, Cliffie wasn't a character, when last I read!

**as I dust the gravel off of my nose, from face-planting into that Cliff you imposed**

 

Something devilishly deliciously deviant needs to happen to James and Victoria! Let Marcus have Caius...he'll probably peel the skin off of him...okay, by me. Especially, for what they have done to Edward.



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

HAHAHAH - oh bless you.

Sorry about Cliffie, he can be a B****D

Caius won't get away with it, nor will James and Victoria.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - We're Coming

I would hate to think what would have happened if Carlisle had not been there. Edward may not have been resuscitated...DOA

 

Carlisle, question about Jasper and Edward being...more, than just brothers. Perceptive.



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Thank heavens Carlisle was there. He has to have some extra ESP in his profession, but I think it's hightened with his boys.

I'd have found some way to keep Edward alive.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Our First Time

Well, Jasper happens to love Edward's...ups and downs**waggling my eyebrows**  ;}



Author's Response:

Hi CantauRita

Yes Jasper loves Edward inside and out. There is nothing he wouldn't do for his man.

Thank you for reading and leaving such lovely reviews.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Aftermath

Jasper gave Edward a lot of food for thought...and he's happily chewing away, begging for more!



Author's Response:

Hi Centaurita

He most certainly did, and Edward will be all the stronger for it. Jasper is Edwards rock.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Let's Take You Home

Edward seems to be working it all out in his head...thanks to, Jasper.


Marcus, showing up...did not surprise me, Edward's venting...did, scary but understandably so.

My favorite part...

Well, it’ll take more than one measly fucker with a bullet to dispatch Eddie boy here. Ain’t that right, Eddie?”

That did the trick alright. It changed the course of Edward’s emotions, because Edward hated, loathed and detested, being called Eddie, and Emmett knew that.

“Don’t. Call. Me. Eddie. Fuckarthy.” Edward seethed through his teeth.

 

Made me, LOL ;D



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Thank you yet again for such a lovely review.

Emmett acts the goof, but he is more perceptive than they realise. He knows exactly how to jerk someone's strings.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Karaoke Confessions

**sigh**

After each of Edward's and Jasper's karaoke songs...I missed them being able to a little PDA, However, they more than made up for it with that coming out kiss in their kitchen in front of The Pack  ;*  HAWT!



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

MMMM - the temperature certainly rises a few degrees from now on.

Glad you enjoyed their foray into the world of Karaoke. The bbq is about to be set on fire.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Striptease and Wedding Bells

Their ceremony was a cumplete...surprise and their vows were...beautiful.

Well, I'm ready...for another day, already  ;D

 

Oh, loved the bit about the invitation for Tanya, getting lost in the mail, seeing the ring, watching Edward and Jasper kiss...and then, faint.  LOL  ;D

 

Effen flove your Emmett!

 

Thank you for sharing your talent and your time. I enjoyed the journey.

Take Care and Happy Writing

Rita ;D



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

WOW WOW WOW - thank you again for reading and reviewing every chapter. You are wonderful.

Over the moon, you enjoyed the boys adventure. 

they ave more fun with Tanya in the follow up.

The writing will continue. After their Honeymoon, and I get a couple of things out of the way, I will be wring a 3rd in the series.

Again thank you, for your time, effort and encouraging words.

Take care

maryhell

 

Cirque by maryhell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Jasper is part of a trapeze act that joins the infamous Cirque Du Soleil. Will he find love in the heights of the Big Top or somewhere else?

 

stories/35826/images/Banner_merged_Cirque_copy.jpg

 

Huge thanks goes to D Kinney for making this banner for me - she is fabulous and one of the best people I know. TTZECCDA BB.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Emmett/Jasper (slash)
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8037 Read Count: 529
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jun 2012
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cirque

That chappie had me flying...high!

 

 

Oh, and it has been my pleasure to read and review your stories. You are welcome!  ;D

 

I am so looking forward to your sequel...Hostage, Chicago. If I put you on author favorites, will I get an update when you post it? I don't want to miss it.  ;}

 

Take Care and Happy Writing

Rita ;D



Author's Response:

Hi Rita

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. 

Hostage is edging towards the front of the writing queue

Oh you sweetie for putting me on author favs. Yes you will get an update when I post it. All the x rated stuff will be on TWCS along with the rest of the story.

All the best

maryhell

 

Summary:

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Jasper dreams of finding "the one." Can a combining of summer camps make his hopes reality? 3rd place popular vote and Judge's Pick in The Summer It All Began contest .


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Emmett
Genre: Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19380 Read Count: 1964
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 01 Oct 2012
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Both of them were being 'jar'heads! There is always to sides to every coin.

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Drama-queenie Carlisle and Emo-tempt Emmett...Jasper and Edward will set them 'straight' with each other.

Times seems to FLY.

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Each pair of Boyz seems to be just right for the other.**sigh**

Summary:

 

"It takes a village to raise a child" and apparently, sometimes a man.

 

Jasper wants to do right by everyone around him which results in him avoiding living, until an outsider comes in and shows him how to live again.

 

A special Birthday One Shot for my dear and loving friend, Jess (JA Mash)

 

Have a great one babe!

 

Beta'd by the totally amazing and talented lady, TexasBella

 

Banner made by the beautiful and amazing lady, Arc Morpheus

 

This is slash, of course, so please don't read if it's not your thing :)


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8188 Read Count: 1389
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Turn the Tide

Sometimes that's all it takes to...'Turn the Tide', is meeting someone that listens and responds with love and...KISSES.

 

Summary:

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At the end of story Hostage, NYPD SWAT boys Edward and Jasper married. This is their Honeymoon.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Hostage
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17871 Read Count: 5320
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Mahalo, for the first go 'round

 

That one line was priceless, what Edward said after he kept Jasper from slipping in the shower...

Careful there, love, you can't fuck if you're broken ;}

 

Jasper's view of his husband, rinsing off in the outside shower...breathtakingly beautiful.



Author's Response:

Hi Rita

Oh my life. Wow you read fast, and I am sooooo grateful.

Glad you enjoyed the boys. This story is all fluff and romance. I think they deserved it, after their last adventure.

Take care

maryhell

 

 

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Yeah?  and, they even call it a...Rosary. I think I'll have to say some...Hale Mary's after that one  ;P



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

HAHAHAHAHHA - I had a lot of fun writing that chapter. Over the moon you enjoyed it too.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Edward, thinking about Jasper...brought a tear to my eye and caused my heart to clench.



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Jasper is everything to Edward. Without him, he would not survive. Their love for each other is boundless.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pool

Write on cue...Edward 'scratched' Jasper's itch...and, ate balled his but't', good!

 

Wish I could see The Packs reaction to the posed PC camera shot!



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

HHEHEHE - at times I wish I had a camera that could see around corners. I wouldn't put it past Alice, on future ventures, to beat them to a destination and install extra spy equipment.

Thank you for reading and revieiwing.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Hike

Those T-shirt slogans were a hoot!

 

So happy our Boyz gave those homophobes their cum-uppance! The Tele-Tubby names were spot-on, too!

 

Sad...we're cumming to an end of the Boyz honeymoon :(



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Glad you liked the T-Shirt slogans. I got the idea from where I was on holiday. There was a shop full of T's along those lines.

The homophobes certainly picked on the wrong guys. I think they went away with a new perspective on things.

Yes the honeymoon is coming to an end, but it won't be the end of the boys.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Oh my luau, it's back to RL, honeymoon's officially...over! Boo whoo  ;P

and, Marcus is back on the scene...Ew! Thanks for the news flash, Charlie!

So, with this development, is there more to this story?

 

Paradise, with Jasper and Edward, was purely, BLISS!

Thanks!

Rita



Author's Response:

Hi CentauRita

Bless you sweetheart. Your reviews have been absolutely wonderful - thank you.

Yes, the boys paradise is over with a bump. 

There is one more adventure to experience with them. I am in the planning stage. It will be called Hostage, Chicago Takedown. I have the first chapter written, but have more to do before I start posting.

All the very best

Take care

maryhell

Summary:

Edward keeps messing up a scene in his new movie, DiverCity. Carlisle, as Assistant Director, suggests a different way to get the performance of a lifetime. However, when 'Cut' is finally announced, the scene continues. WARNING THREESOME

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  All characters have been borrowed and played with. Sadly at the end of the day, I must return them to their original packaging. I do not own any of them


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2863 Read Count: 2873
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2013 Updated: 12 Jun 2013
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, those Boyz certainly are 'into' each other!  

'Cut'? Someone yelled.

Who's...Cut? Hmmm?  ;}

 



Author's Response:

Hi Rita

hahahahaha. I wouldn't mind a reshoot.

Thank you for reviewing.

Take care

maryhell

 

 

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 680]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 234893
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: CentauRita Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Dearest She_Viking,

8D

I'm so happy to have found you again. Thanks for pointing the way. 

Wanted to let you know that I think about you and your wonderful, beautiful stories. I received your update on Ffn about Professing of your publishing endeavors. Sensational news!

Best wishes for a Happy Holiday and a published and "wordy" New Year! Yule be a pro at it, I am for sure.**winks**  ;D

 

About time for a..."Blizzard"?

I'm dreaming of a white Christmas...with Edward and Bella curled up in the snow...**snickers**…I'm sure you got my "drift".

 

Take Care

Centaurita

 

 

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bleck!

 

Jamarr?

 

Uh Oh!

 

Thank you for your update!

CentauRita, NorCal Gal

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bleck!

 

Jamarr?

 

Uh Oh!

 

Thank you for your update!

CentauRita, NorCal Gal

Reviewer: CentauRita Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Dearest She_Viking,

 

A point of clarification in this chappie 23 here on StarsLibrary Site.

note:(Chappie 5 on  the FanFiction Site is correct)

 

"...As if on cue, they began circling each other. Around me, the crowd shouted comments as Jutta lunged again and again, each time missing her target...

Q:I believe that the name Tonna should be used vs. the name Jutta.

 

And yes, I read the last 5 chappies, again...Because your Writing and Story are just THAT good!

 

Simply a Fan of your Words and Fiction...

CentauRita, NorCal Gal