Reviews by Dulcinea21bella
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625335
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Wow, Mic, very telling chapter.  Edward doesn't grasp the intention of Carlisle's attitude towards Bella.  I hope he does ask his father about it.  Maybe Carlisle will confide in Edward what his true intentions towards Bella's future will mean for Edward.  I love this story.  We are slowing working our way into that hurricane on the horizon!  Excellent update!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

Wow.  We finally know the answer!!  It makes perfect sense.  Poor Bella, she is losing her life all over again.  Does Edward understand what is happening?  Have they continued to be intimate with eachother as a way to stay connected?  This story is so captivating.  I can't wait to read what is going to happen next.  Excellent update!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh Shit.  It is Carlisle, isn't it....

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

My heart breaks for the both of them.  THey were both such tragic victims.  I know he needs to set her free.  She needs to return to him of her own free will.

 

Excellent!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Oh, Mic.  This was beautiful.  I do hope  the epi tells us about their future.  I want to know their wedding day, and night.  I want to know the conversation when Bella tells him that she's pregnant.  I want their baby being born.  I want simple moments in their lives.  I love them.  I want to read them truly happy.  I beg of you to do some one shots from their future. 

I am Uber excited about the book!!

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83467
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am intrigued by this story and interested to see how it develops...

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am really enjoying this so far...

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really enjoyed hearing Edward's POV...

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter. I do want to know why Edward didn't simply approach her on the street and court her in the usual way...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153118
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Family Time

I was SO excited to get the alert for this chapter!  I love it!!!!  



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. It was a little hard to get back in the flow so I'm happy to hear that it wasn't too horrible.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

I discovered this story by chance about two days ago and I have spent almost every spare moment I have had reading it.  I had no idea, based on the premise, that this story could draw me is the way that it has.  You have done a remarkable job of telling this story from all the various perspectives.  I normally cannot handle reading non canon pairings but in this case I truly feel the connection between Edward and his wives.  I have become engrossed and thoroughly enraptured by this story.  Your characters are engaging and compelling.  I am eager to read more.  I can't wait to read how the story is going to progress.  Will Edward and Bella begin their DD relationship before they are married?  Will the first time he sees her bottom bared be when he must take her over his knee?  How will either character deal with that?  How will Bella deal with sharing Edward?  THe women must keep their jealousies and insecurities in check but has Edward ever had to deal with that?  I would love to see him face the possibility (even if only in his mind) of having to share one of his women.  How would he feel about that?  I feel so very invested in this plot.  I cannot stop thinking about it.  I beg of you to write more!!!  I absolutely LOVE it!!!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

I am so sorry to hear about all of your health problems.  You definitely have a great deal on your plate right now.  My prayers for a speedy recovery go out to you!

 

I was thrilled to find that you updated this story.  It is not something I would usually read as I don't do well reading lemons that aren't E/B but I find all of these characters to be endearing and I their family dynamics are fascinating.  I am enjoying this so very much!