Reviews by hockeymom4
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515211
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Great update.  I am wondering if the cell phone is a plant/..

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83467
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So Emmett is her saviour of sorts.  She has no family, but a job, so they'll probably be the ones to look for her?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

How did Edward come to find Bella in the first place to get such an obsession with her?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward is just a little misunderstood....

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

:) 

Great job, unique and creative!!

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

During your chase scene, it was as if I was watching a movie.  The action and suspense was very well written.

Great job, and my heart is still racing.

 

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

you did such a wonderful job on this chapter. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This sounds like an original concept for a fic.  I'm going for it.

 

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So, this isn't a B/E story?  I am guessing a B/J story?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm not normally a B/J person, but I am like Darksper.  He's a force, isn't he? 

 

I was a bit wigged out about what Bella said about Carlisle looking learily at her. 

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bloodletting?  that's another original idea, and an interesting one.

 

So, do your vamps have blood then?  And, obviously, Jasper didn't change Bella, correct?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Like how you've created classes, interesting

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Jasper is actually a very nice Darksper.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It's interesting how Jasper is supposed to be the head vampire, etc, yet he seems to cower under Bella asking for forgiveness.

 

I like him that way.  Shows he's vulnerable.

Oh, btw, I liked the vulture on the crest.  Creative and original.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yep, Carlisle is creepola.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You've really twisted things around in a good and unique way.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ima thinking carlisle is gonna be angry.  Yeah, duh?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It's rare to see Carlisle the villain, and you are writing it well.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So, I think I read that Jasper will share Bella with Peter....

And, it looks like james is rearing his ugly head.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I enjoyed seeing a softer side of Marcus.  Nice job there.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I take it Charlotte isn't exactly 100% into the plan with Peter and Bella.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think it's clever how you have intertwined people from SM's saga into your fic to create a believable AU.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just found you here.  Reading it again cuz it's been a long while.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

tough subject matter, but you wrote it well.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Another great chappie.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

You really do write dark Edward very well. 

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

You write some witty words laced with evil coming out of Darkwards mouth.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

See, he's experiencing such character growth.

 

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ahhh, so I imagine that his family are vegies?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He's broken her like a wild pony, but will he find her as interesting when her feisty ways are gone?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I just jumped out of my chair when I saw you updated.  I

You never, ever disappoint!!!  Your Darkward is, well, dark.  But, he's also got the best one-liners that I've read.

Love him.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Invaded Existence

he is learning, isn't he?

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195574
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

Wow, you certainly were original here.  What a way to go, up in flames.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?

The subject matter you wrote about is tough, but you wrote it well, and while you didn't get into the "details", the emotion showed through.

 

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

:)

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again

" I felt like I was home.

I felt like I had when I was a small child in Esme's arms before things went to shit."

Ahhh.  So it's a bit of an aedipus complex....  See, I was right last chappie, Esme needs to get her some rehab, otherwise Edward's gonna be all "mommy complex" on Bella.....

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

Nice 2nd chappie.  Wow, Esme is really a mess.  Maybe she'll go off to rehab sometime and get better....?

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

Excellent concept, nice first chappie.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

Beautiful chappie.  Well written.

And, I believe in love at first sight. 

I fell in love with a boy the first day of school in my senior year of high school.  That was September 1982.

We've been together ever since.

 

 

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My List

You are writing an engaging story.  Great job.

Reviewer: hockeymom4 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?

Very interesting and sweet how you are writing the relationship with Carmen.