Reviews by krazi4TwiSaga
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

Well it's about time Tanya....Great Chappie.... Enjoyed Bella handing Edward his balls....fierce Bella is the stuff that girls are made of...lol....

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

acting more like k-stew than B, i think.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Waxward & Sexward

Hey there's nothing wrong with a little grope action...glad this was a sweet chapter...these two kinda needed a break from all the drama....great chappie!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks!  They need to have a little fun.

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so far so good... that was a good intro... now let´s go rustle uo some RanchWard!!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

good chapter...loving the old west dialogue..it reminds me of Little House on the Praire....lol...

krazi

xoxo 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok ... so RanchWard was a bit scary in the beginning...lol..

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh,,,, RanchWard... take it down a notch.. you know you wanna hook up with Bella..lol

Krazi

xoxo

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27175
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

Wow.. this was a bit heavy... I´m afriad to know what happened... I gather that it is Edward and he and Bella are together and he´s refering to Anthony and Leah and his kids... I just don´t know who got shot... and the suspense is killing me!!! but I´ll be patient!! for now!! lol... great chapter!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

lol don't worry even thpugh there are heavy topics most of this story will be a bit more lighthearted. thank you

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 -

It was a really great start...I can´t wait to get more in depth and find out what happened to Jake and what triggered Leah´s silence...but you´ve definitely gotten my attention...great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Wow... poor Leah! :( I can´t wait to find out more of the backstory so I can put the pieces together.  Glad your back, missed the story.  I really hope that   Leah´s with Anthony.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

thank you, i'm glad you are enjoying it

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 part 2

That was intense.  I´m glad that Anthony wanted to stay with Bella.  I really hope that we´ve seen the last of James and we don´t find out that he did something bad to Leah.  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, bb

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

Hmmm... Bella´s dream, let´s hope all the good aspects of it come true.  How funny was that when Edward pouted because Bella wasn´t going to let Leah see him for two days.  I hope that Bella isn´t too hard on him for taking some initiative as far as Leah is concerned at school.  I know he could have told her, but his heart was in the right place.  Little Leah sure is a firecracker when she doesn´t get her way.  She´s too cute!  Can´t wait to see if Eddieboy gets his kiss.  You were so mean to leave us there!  Great chaptrer!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm happy to enjoyed this chapter and I love your review, very insightful, thank you :-) bb

Six Weeks by vbfb1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 100]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line? After Edward and Bella reconnect she finds out she is pregnant what happens during her pregnancy?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25980 Read Count: 22357
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Six Weeks

Great start!  I was really nervous she was going to tell him she was leaving.  Glad everything worked out for them,  Great start BB! 

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 12 Weeks

Ha! These two are a hoot, can´t wait to see how the pregancy goes! Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Glad your enjoying it tey are definitely fun to write.

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 18 Weeks

Great chapter! I love that Bella wants to do that for Esme. Can't Wait for Esme and Carlisle's reaction to the news! Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 24 Weeks

I thought that was just wonderful. I can´t wait to see her and Esme being mommies together! I really enjoying the story! Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked the chap. I don't think we will see Esme and Bella being Mommies in this fic but i am thinking there might be a sequal.

 

Thanks for the review BB

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 30 Weeks

L-O-V-E it!  That was hot Pregella going all cavewoman on Jessica. Priceless!  Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 52 Weeks On

Awww... that was a great ending.  And I was wondering if Es and Car would get their babies.  Loved the chapter and the story!  Can´t wait to sink my teeth into the next one!

 

Krazi

xxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME PANTING AND WANTING RELEASE!!! LOL... THAT WAS HAWT!!!! BY ALL MEANS CONTINUE..... GREAT START!!!!

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! Sorry to leave you wanting Release LOL Never fear the next chapter will be posted soon! Like tonight soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing our story, we appreciate it so much. Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Grrrr... another cliffie... hmmm... granted this chapter was hot as hell..not to mention.. Edward ignoring Ang is hilarious.... can´t wait for the next chapter... great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL sorry about the cliffie my bad! We're so glad you like the story so far! We appreciate your support. Again thank you Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

hahaha... Rub and Tug.... priceless... this was awesome as usual... at first I was like why is he smelling her workers.... but then it hit me.. he´s looking for the person who smells l¡ke cotton candy...lol.... that´s right Spartan... sniff ´em out... of course it´s always a pleasure to spend time with Emmett.... more...more... give me more... and give Eric to Angela...pah-leeeeeeeeeeeeeese!!! lol... Great chapter girlz!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

Well... this was high anxiety.... love the fact that Edward is going around sniffing everyone in the building... the goose egg spa...wtf...lol.....I was nervous at first that they weren´t the same color... phew...ok... that cliffie was just rude!!! great chapter Mama!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

HAHAHA....as if we wouldnt put them in the same color...hahaha...MUAH DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

WTFFFFFFFFFFF........... OMG.... you had me sweating there for a minute.... thank God Edward showed up... yeah.... Bella knows who he is!!!!  But poor Edward is just stuck with that she biotch Ang... can somebody run over her already.. where´s her trainer... has he stop putting out.... God she makes me naueated...I am totally doing sommersaults... finally.. they meet... Em is freaking hilarious..ABORT:::ABORT!!! great chapter!!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

I know..I love how Ari writes EMmett...so funny... thanks for reviewing xoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

oops... commented too soon on the meeting... and Em... I´ve been reading from my Iphone and it won´t let me review.. fucker... anyway... I sometimes run everything together.. but seriously that dream was a freaking nightmare... and the meeting... was hot and long over due... DIE ANG.... DIE!!!! great chapter!!!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

u r hilarious......I will definitely discuss ur Ang wish with Ari....maybe we can have her fall off the roof or something...LOL  xoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE KILL ANGELA & ERIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WTF... THAT ELEVATOR SEX WAS HOT LIKE A MOTHA.. AND YOU LEFT ROOM FOR A BABY...NO CONDOM.......HAHAHAHA.....I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN´T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.... GREAT AS ALWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Edward+ bella in elevator= NO TIME FOR CONDOM....just fuck like bunnies haahahah....all their emotions clouded their judgment... xoxo thanks for such an awesome review

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

It looks to me like Ang has a thing for the Oompa Loompa... let´s hope so... Bella kicking Edward under the table... haha... priceless... I loved it as always... can´t wait for more... Great chapter... Love ya BB....

 

krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

*runs and hugs Krazi*

 

Hiya BB! I'm thinkin Bella wanted to do more than just kick Edward under the table. I was getting major hostility from her. Poor Edward LOL But I'm also thinkin that if he goes through with this lil plan of his. He better start wearing a cup. Cuz Bella might just go for his balls! LOL We are sooooo glad you like our story BB! Oompa Loompa that cracks me up! Thank you for all your awesome reviews BB. We love ya hard!

 

xoxox   Ari & DLIR



Author's Response:

*runs and hugs Krazi*

 

Hiya BB! I'm thinkin Bella wanted to do more than just kick Edward under the table. I was getting major hostility from her. Poor Edward LOL But I'm also thinkin that if he goes through with this lil plan of his. He better start wearing a cup. Cuz Bella might just go for his balls! LOL We are sooooo glad you like our story BB! Oompa Loompa that cracks me up! Thank you for all your awesome reviews BB. We love ya hard!

 

xoxox   Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

Phew... that was a close one!  Angela is one krazi bitch!  I can´t believe she slapped Bella.  I know it was hard for Edward not to punch her!  Emmett is so damn funny, he couldn´t remember which of his feet were hurt. Lol!  I was immediately nervous when Angela said she was going up and Edward hadn´t found the note.  I enjoyed meet Rosalie too, I can´t wait to read the second half of the chapter.  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

she a crazy bitch...hahahah Im just going to work on part 2 and then It up xoxoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

Sheesh... that was fuck hawt!  I love that Rose and Bella are friends now.  Will the pixie, Jasper, Esme and Carlisle be making an appearance too?  I can´t help but think that we haven´t seen the last of Laurant and whoever was his accomplice.  Poor Ang is two sheets to the wind, I hope she doesn´t cause too many problems.  One can only dream!  Good job girls!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hiya Krazi!!!

Ang is more like a whole damn note book in the wind. Not just a few sheets! :) And yes everyone will be in the story soon! We're glad you like it! We're workin on the next chap now.

Thank you sweetie for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

That was A-Mazing! I sooo love this story! I really do miss Ari as well, I lost my brother a year ago yesterday, so... I understand! Just let her know we´re not going anywhere and will be here still loving her when she gets back! Great chapter and thanks for holding it down while Ari´s away!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Yeah....I have part 2 done but Ari hasnt been on in the last 2 weeks....she needs some time....but I hope she comes back stronger than ever. She knows she has all of us but only she can help and heal herself. Thank you again for always leaving us some love...xoxoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

Hi ho hi ho... here we go! I can't wait until Ang gets served the new papers, I just want her to fall off the face of the earth. She's got some nerve trying to catch Edward cheating when she's been doing it all along. She's the reason he went to the swinger's party in the first place. I know that Eric's bi-polar ass is just waiting around the bend to wreak havoc on Kitten´s life. This is such a juicy little story! Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

W-O-W!  That was something! Once again can somebody run over Angela with a school bus or something! I´m just saying! First mention of Alice and Jazz I can´t wait until they show up, and Mom!!! That´s going to be an interesting conversation. To be a fly on the wall! Lol! Great chapter girls! Welcome back Ari!!! We missed you, but you left us in good hands with DLIR! Can´t wait for and update!! Squeee!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL I love you Krazi! I'm glad to be back! Tell ya what if you wanna drive the bus I'll stand by ya while you run her happy ass over! And yes we met Momma Esme next chap! A lil warning she's not nice!!!! Workin on the next chap now!

Thank you so much for your review.

x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

Ok, so that wast O-Mazing! and the last chapter was like a super Fu%&Fest!  Lol!  Now I´ve got it all figured out! It´s Esme that Laurent is working for! God she´s is such a biotch!  I can´t wait until Edward and Carlisle get ahold of her! 

Poor Angela, she wasn´t so bad after all and Eric just makes my skin crawl! Okay, enough ranting... update already!  Lol!  Great chappie Girlz!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL hiya Krazi!

No Ang wasn't all bad after all. And Eric is just creepy! I can't stand his greasey ass! :) We have the next chap done and we are already workin on the after that.

We love you Krazi!!! Thank you so much for your review sweetie!

x0x0x0x00x0xx0x

Ari & DLIR

Summary:

You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!!  Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA

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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!

Ari

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love

That was just....WOW!!!... I hated it... and I Loved it.... let me explain... I hated it because it was a one shot... booo hooooo..... that means it´s over... but I loved it... it was over fast but it was beautifully written... the end broke my heart...he was gonna propose and they were so happy... damn you Jacob... lol...but seriously this was a really awesome story...great story!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Ah Krazi we always love hearing from you BB! We are so glad you liked it. We worked on it for...awhile non-stop. There was a couple of days we ate, slept and wrote this story. For a deadline. But they didn't take it cuz of the rape and shit. But whatever LOL thank you for all of your support BB!

 

oxoxoxoxx Ari & DLIR

All We Knew by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary:

Bella Swan returns home after ten years and a bad marriage. Will she be able to find herself? What if her past catches up to her? AH & NC-17 for language and possible lemons. B/E, A/J,R/EM

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143567 Read Count: 114582
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2012
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

In the end the chapter played out well. I'm glad that Em and Rose have taken the next step in their relationship!  Great chapter!

 

~Krazi~

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow... I´m hooked!  I really want to know what´s going on with this Bella.  Poor Charlie must feel terrible for not being able to help.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I hope you like this one, too:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmm... dying to know what happened?  Loving the slow build.. Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Whoa... Mike the douche bag Newton!  Hopefully, he´ll get his in the end.  Love the E&B interaction.  Can´t wait for more.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Whoa... poor Bella!  She´s really a mess.  Mike really did a number on her.  I feel so bad for her.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm glad she trusts Edward, cause she would really be all alone. since she won't let anyone in.  I really am feeling sorry for Charlie.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Edward is definately her rock right now.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow... reality check for Alice!  Poor little pushy pixie.  At least she took it in stride.  I love how the relationship is building between Edward and Bella.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

She did take it rather well, didn't she?

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oooo Weee... a cliffie!  Please don't tell me that Mike has found Bella!  Oh boy!  Things just got a bit interesting!  Not to worry, Edward will make sure that everything will be okay!  Gee... just when she was kind of coming out of her shell a little.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Whew... you really got me with this one!  I really thought that Mike had shown up.  I'm so glad that Edward and Charlie are going to go with her.  I know it will be hard to face that monster again.  He's probably the reason the miscarried in the first place.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yummy... I love their trip to Wal-Mart.  These two are getting closer.  Yippie!  I´m glad she decided to let Esme and Carlisle come along.  I think they would have really be hurt, since they see her like one of their own.  I guess Alice and Emmett will now be whining to go as well.  Poor Jazz, he just does whatever Alice says to do.  Lol!  Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes, I really did enjoy Charlie´s take on things.  I´m glad that he´s okay with her being so dependent on Edward.  It´s good to see that there is someone she feels like she can trust and who somewhat understands what she´s going through.  I knew that everyone would end up going.  She doesn´t see it now, but she will be glad to have the support when it´s all said and done!  Can´t wait to read Edward´s Pov next.  Great chapter!  I´m really enjoying the story thus far!  

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yay!  He´s in love with her!  He takes such good care of her.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Haha!  Mind blowing sex + no condom + antibiotics = baby!!! Whoo hoo!  Let´s just see how this one plays out!!  Great chapter!  Sorry I´m behind in my reviews been reading mostly from my phone!

 

Krazi

xoxo

 

P.S.  Hope you had a wonderful Christmas as well as you little girl, hope   she´s doing much better!  Happy New Year! 

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Dum ds dum da dummmmmm!  Hmmm... I think he´s going to be elated. He wants to marry her anyway.  Great chapter!  Off to see what Eddie thinks of the new baby!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was just perfect!  I couldn´t help but laugh at Esme assuming that they were fighting and it was automatically Edward´s fault.  Can´t wait til they break all the good news, that was a sweet proposal, this Bella doesn´t need all the bells and whistles.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ha ha! I love how they put the brakes on all of Esme and Alice´s plans.  Esmom and the pixie are two tuff cookies.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Cock blocked by the wedding planners!  Lol! Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Whoa... that was a close one!  I thought she was going to leave him or something.  I´m glad they worked it out.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Yay... they found a dress!  We really should never doubt Alice´s mad fashion skills!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

OMG... what the hell was that?  How could you do that to Bella on her wedding day.  I´m glad the next chapter´s up and I don´t have to sit here suffering trying to figure out what´s going to happen!  That was mean! Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Whoo hooo! I´m now caught up too!  Now what shall I do while catching up on Taking Chances?  Hmmm... guess I´ll just go catch up on some of your other great stories!  Lol!  I´m glad that everything worked out in the end, and the wedding took place.  How funny was it that Edward cried over an a minus?  Lol!  Great chapter!  Hope your cold gets better!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweeite:) I am working on the next chapter to this one right now so hopefully, I will be able to update it tomorrow.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Whew!! I thought something was wrong with the baby there for a minute.  I'm glad all is well and these two had some drama free time.  Lol!  They so deserve it!  Great chapter!

 

Happy New Year!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Aww BB.... don't beat yourself up. It was a great chapter and I'm really glad Jessica went peacefully, I would hate to have to slap a biotch!! Lol! Great chapter... thanks for the update!!

~Krazi~

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Ha ha! Put that Kindle down and get to writing ma´am!  Lol!  I know how distracting a good story can be... I should be writing as I type this to you! Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hehe, it's so pretty......

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

It was Flovely!  Hot Christmas shower sex!  O-Mazing!  Lol!

 Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204605
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like it... it´s very refreshing... can´t wait to find out more on the single parents and where the fathers and mothers are... but of course I like all your stories... you never disappoint... great first chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I thought it was great... can´t wait to find out what happened to Sarrah... and loved E&B´s subtle flirting...lol... great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I´m loving it... and now I wanna know what happened to Brody... your really being tight lipped here...lol.... great chapter!!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

I know I am but all in due time ;)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nice dinner.... glad to find a little more info while we were at the park.... Now what does Lauren have to do with all this...hmmmm... great chapter

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was great....thanks for the quick update... kids say the darndest things... that was a bit tense at the soccer field... glad the boys are spending the day together... and Edward and Anthony are staying for dinner... hopefully it will turn it to a habit... lol... great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

THanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was good... very touching...I´m glad to finally know what happened to Brody and Sarah... I kinda figured at some point one or both of the boys will wanna play cupid... Anthony and Alex are both so adorable...great chapter... I really did feel sorry for Em... I wouldn´t intentionally hurt a flea!!! great chapter

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sunday Brunch went well... and as usual... Emmett was a hoot... love it...great chapter!!

krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow... I love the facebook chatting... this story is really sweet... I´m loving it.... Esme was so funny wanting the boys to spend the weekend...subtle much EsMom... lol...great chapter!!

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Subtly is not Esme forte ;)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ohh.... how sweet Alex´s first sleepover... I remember my son´s... I also remember him returning home at bedtime... thank God his friend only lived upstairs...lol.... Charlie likes Edward... score... great chapter,,,

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

THAT WAS A CUTE GIRL´S NIGHT OUT... CAN´T WAIT TO FIND OUT HOW THE BOY´S SLEEPOVER GOES....GREAT CHAPTER... GLAD THE ICE IS BEING BROKEN AROUND BELLA...

 

KRAZI

XOXO



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

lol. I know how Bella feels, the first time my son was away, I was a wreck and he was with my brother. lol. I felt bad for Anthony, he wanted Bella to hold him too. Thankfully, she offered to make him waffles for hugs, and Alex following Edward´s lead was too cute. Alex telling Emmett he was big was hilarious. I really love this story!!! great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sorry I´m such a spaz! I commented on this chapter in the other review as well, but I fail to mention Edward reading Bella´s books made me piss myself! lol let´s head to the zoo!!!! great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

lol,it's all good! Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awwww... that was just adorable.. I am so in love with these two!! The zoo was a great day!!! great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ha ha! No problem, it turned out great anyway.  I just love how the kids are on cupid patrol too.  Actually, everyone is.  Esme in the grocery store hmm... That was... awkward, but fun.  What does that say about me?  Lol!  Great Chapter!

 

krazi

xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I heart Esme:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ha ha! Well here´s a litte snack, hope it tides you over.  Lol!  The date is going perfectly, and you ended it well.  Wow, that was really touching, the part about Esme being sick and all.  Can´t wait to read Bella´s thoughts on their first kiss.  The little Rascals romance between Anna and Alex is too cute!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awwww...  That was so sweet.  I´m just so in love with this story!  Alex and Anna are going steady, how adorable.  Rose was a hoot as usual.  Okay, now for more sweet kisses.  Lol! Great chappie!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Alex is such a little charmer!  His encounter with Mary was just too cute for words, it had me in tears.  Anthony is a riot too, apparently he´s been schooling Edward on how to make Bella his girlfriend.  These two are just the sweetest!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I smiled the whole time I wrote this chapter.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ha!  These two just crack me up, they are so frigging cute!  And the boys are just amazing.  Great chapter as always!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ha! Dinner at the Cullen´s always a great event. I just love little Ivy, and how Alex is taking to Nana  and Papa. This story is so awesome! Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whoa!  Didn´t see that coming!  Your sneaky. I wonder how Bella will react? Will she introduce Alex, or maybe not this time? Great chapter as always!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I did enjoy it!  Squee!  The drama was necessary given the circumstances.  Hmmm ... Edward spends the night ... interesting!  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This chapter was so ... awww .... worthy!  Those little boys are just the sweetest, and I love how Edward and Bella refer to them as ´ours´.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Aaaaaaaaaaaa!  WHAT WAS THAT! NOTICE THE SHOUTY CAPITALS!   I did not see that coming.  You could have warned me.  I thought we were friends!  Sheesh!  I know your going to fix this, you would never hurt Alex and Anthony on purpose.  Keeping that thought at the forefront of my mind, gives me the courage to go on.  Your a sneaky little Butterfly!  Great chapter inspite of... !  Lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Wow, Shouty capitals and all....I am sneaky but you know me better than that, don't you? Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Maybe even tonight, if I feel inspired:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I knew you would fix it, and FIX IT, you did!  That was hot and juicy, but still sweet.  I just love the story of these two.  Can´t wait for another sleepover!  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Told you!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Aww... that ending was too sweet!  Glad the meeting with Lauren went well; I know    it´s hard for B to forgive her and just let it go, so I hope she does right by Alex.  The cookie baking was trully ´aww´ worthy, but Alex and Bella´s moment at the end swelled my heart the most.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Another great night with the Swan-Cullen´s!  I hope they let the boys go fishing with Charlie, it was really sweet of him to refer to Anthony as his grandson too. They are so going to make the perfect family!  Great chapter Babe!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response: Thank you, Krazi ;)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad your back Hon!   Still sending lots of love and prayers your way!  I truly hope your daughter is better!  

Now as far as Bella and Edward are concerned, they are seriously sexually frustrated, when it does happen, I know it will be epic!  I am in no rush.  I like the slow build, and speinding more time with the boys.  Can´t wait until they make it official and become a family.  Maybe when the kids go fishing with Grampa Charlie!  Lol!  Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Whoa... that was heavy!  It was so sweet of Sarah to encourage Bella to love Anthony and Edward, I was almost in tears during the dream.  I was also worried that Alex was having some type of allergic reaction, but I´m glad he was ok.  God it brought back so many memories of childhood when he said his tummy hurt and she asked him if he had to potty.  Haha!  When I was a kid, that was the first question asked, like it was the solution to everything!  Lol!  Okay, I won´t lie, I do the same with my son, but that sitll doesn´t make it any less funny.   Now, I can´t wait for some BxE alone time.  I hope now that Sarah has spoken to Bella in the dream, they finally let go and say the magic words to each other!  I´ll keep my finger crossed!  Great chapter, can´t wait for the next one!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

lol, I do it with my kids too.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Whoa... Now that´s what I call, a night on the town!  Way to finally bring these two together.  It couldn´t have turned out to be more perfect!  Is that wedding bells I hear!  Lol!  Great chapter Hon!

 

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

lol, thanks :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Talk about a tear jerker.  Where do I begin?  The excruciating 3 hour ride.  Anthony calling Bella, Mommy for the first time.  Anthony worrying about Alex.  This entire chapter was a Kleenex moment!  I knew something was going to happen to Alex, poor little guy.  At the end when Anthony said what he said, I had to just give in and let the tears fall, that was absolutely beautiful!  I can´t wait until Alex is awake, I bet he´s going to be looking for his ´Daddy´!  Beautiful chapter!  I´m so glad school is out!  Squee!  Now we won´t have to wait long for Alex to wake up!  Lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Girl, I cried like a baby through the whole chapter!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Bravo!!!! Welcome back!!  Trust me it was well worth the wait!  You nearly brought me to tears, when Anthony misunderstood Alex´s reference to Brody as his father.  Those little boys are too cute!  Can´t wait to see where they´re going to live.  Great chapter!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, honey:) Away from the Sun is next:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

*Sighs*  The return of one of my favorite stories!  The pillowcases sound so cute and a very sweet gesture, I´m sure they made things a little less scary.  I´m glad they decided to just sell their houses and buy one together.  Now on to happy times and maybe a cute little green-eyed sister!  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Happy New Year!

~Krazi~

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Welcome back! I´ve really missed these four. Although, this cliffie has got me a bit nervous! I hope it was all just a misunderstanding and Lauren understands that in the midst of everything that Bella just wasn´t thinking clearly and she didn´t mean to leave Lauren out of the loop! Great chapter! Good luck with the awards!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Woooo Hooooo!  Way to go Edward!  Lol!  Esme kinda choked me up when she was talking in the kitchen.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wooo hooo! Thanks for the new chapter bb! It was great, I was wondering how the situation with Lauren showing up would work out. I have to agree with Bella's first reaction, Lauren hasn't been back in her life for longer than a minute and it will take time. When your child is deathly ill, the few moments you can think rationally, you think of the people that are always there. So, I'm good with Bella's reaction. Also glad they resolved it peacefully, afterall, their relationship is still a work in progress. Great chapter!

 

~Krazi~

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That was well worth the wait.  I can´t wait to see how Thanksgiving goes and will Edward asks Charlie´s permission to marry Bella then too.  Hmm... don´t keep us in suspense too long!  Lol! Great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Aww... you should have put a Kleenex warning for this one!  Loved it as always!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Great as usual! It was super sweet and Charlie was funny!  Can´t wait to see how many sisters Santa brings.  It was sweet that Edward was nervous about wanting to adopt Alex.  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Haha... I needed tissues for this one! It was perfect and I can´t wait to see these two under the arch tying the knot.  Thank God there´s going to be a sequel, I´m definitely not ready to say goodbye to the four yet.  Can´t wait for a little sister or brother to take over the Cullen household!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

That was wrong on sooo many levels!  Thank goodness this is not goodbye, but see you later!  Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us and I look forward to the sequel!  Looks like we´ll be Moving Forward with a new addition!  Lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

dlir

Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: My name is Bella

whoa...didn´t see that one coming... now what are we gonna do.... Somebody´s gonna be upset... but who.... great chapter..

 

krazi

xoxox



Author's Response:

heheh thanks ...DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: No regrets

I love the start so far... glad we broke up with Mike early on...lol.... can´t wait to see where this goes...great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

thank you sooo much.....enjoy the rest...xoxoxo DLIR

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: For now

haha... can Jasper show up and make this allll better... I don´t wanna hurt Alice either.. but I am so Team Bellward... lol... great chapter!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

me too me too...BELLWARD...keep reading chicky....hehe