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Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87329
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww..... Poor Alice. I want better for her.   I wonder if Ben will cause trouble? 

Edward is a damn good man!



Author's Response:

Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter.  Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions.  Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once.  As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes.  Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father.  Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day.  (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.)  There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~

TEASER:   “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.

“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.

“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.

“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.

“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago.  And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first.  Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control.  Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”

“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.

“Mom…”

“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.

“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.

“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i was in that same spot bella is n with regards to her dad.

 

     why doesn't she get upset with him for NOT being there? for spending more time with es & alice than be does his own daughter?

bella said so, that they really don't know each other....so what in the hell gives him the right to get all "daddy-ish" on her?!

 

so sorry, this is a fucking bad subject for me....



Author's Response:

I understand how you feel, from age 6 to 16 I never saw or heard a word from my father.  As you read more you will understand more of the relationship between Bella and Carlisle.  Carlisle was always there for her, but in a long distance compacity.  I totally get the hard feelings, I had them myself for MANY years.  Another chapter and another great response in reference to the chapter, we are both in such awe of our readers.  Both Jess and I are very proud of this storyline and some are already questioning if Ben will be a bad guy and pressure Bella into sex.  Well you will get the answers to those questions soon enough, in coming chapters.  We all know some won’t be happy, but we are keeping things realistic and with the times.  Keep in mind that this is and always will be a Bella and Edward story.  There will be some kink, as our girl gets older and she will bring out a side of Edward that even he doesn’t realize he has.  Bella is still a typical teenager, high school girl, bratty and selfish and we will be getting to see more of that side of her very shortly.  We have had some questions regarding Bella’s age versus Edward’s age, and we just want to be clear that Edward will not be having sex with Bella at any time in this fic, until she is over the age of 18.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing... we love reading your thoughts.  Be sure to check Fictionators every Monday for a teaser for the next chapter.  We also post the links for the teaser on our group pages.  Links are on our profile, join us and ask all the questions you wish.  See ya next Wednesday... Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review.  We are so pleased with how this is going.  Kasi and Jess
Teaser:  The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.

“What are you doing here?” I ask.

“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”

“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”

“I told you why.”

“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.

 “I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.

“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”

“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.

“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.

“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.

“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.

“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

the ultimatums are crazy....they gotta work this shit out!



Author's Response:

I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all.   Kasi~ 

Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story.  Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time.  Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10.  All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually.  We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself.  There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you.  Kasi & Jess.

Teaser for chapter 10:  “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.

“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”

“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”

“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.

“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.

“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”

“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.

“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.

“Yes, I’m okay.  Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.

“Why are you calling so late?”

“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.

“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”

“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is Liz pregnant?



Author's Response:

So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant.  Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe.  Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course.  Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon.  Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her.  You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.

Kasi & Jessica

 

Teaser:  I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.

“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”

“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.

“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aww.. I hope Alice gets everything worked out and is happy!!



Author's Response:

Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story.  Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This is just disgusting..shit like this happens everyday for people and it disgusts me.  I didn't even want to leave a review because of all ofAlice's petty,stupid, bullshit. She is disgusting. Edward needs a swift kick in the ass and to take a long, hard look in the mirror........or maybe it would be a good idea for him to have to deal with stuff likeBella hasto deal with. He should have to feel hurt like Bella does.

 

But the writers don't deserve that.  You guys are doing a phenomenal job of writing and causing people to become emotional about it. :)



Author's Response:

Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22.  First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing.  The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her.  Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing.  Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows.  If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable.  Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it.  Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice.  Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice.  Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control.  It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon. 
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups:  Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~

TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”

“You talked to Es?”

“Yeah, she calls me every day.  How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”

“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once.  He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier.  I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”

“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks.  “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”

“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.

“Yep,” she says popping the p. 

“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt.  Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”

“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

The umpires....couldn't throw Edward out of the game for that.....in real life.....it was a perfect pitch for a line drive...right at the pitcher, that happens all the time. S any player wouldn't have been ejected for that.

 

kudos to Bella....I would have wanted to hit a bitch too...and then the whole junk punching jasper thing was priceless!!!!



Author's Response:

Well some of you are worried about Bella and her tantrums.  Bella is very set in her ways, but she is still young, they will have issues to overcome, without a doubt.  Not everything will be peaches and cream all the time.  As for Edward being ejected from the game for the line drive to Jasper’s chest, we know we took some liberties there — but this is fiction.  Liz is being a good mom, and part of that is telling Bella to use her common sense.  Bella did over-react, but some people are emotionally driven and our Bella is one of them.  I love that a lot of you love Bella’s not laying down and her ability to stand up and fight.  I loved the Masen’s Little Slugger nick-name for Bella, I chuckled a lot over that.  I want to share one of my favorite comments I have read in reviews so far... “A scrappy Bella is a happy Bella!”  LOVE IT—just sayin’.  As promised we would share our favorite line with you...  Jess’s is: “No, I really didn’t hit her hard. That, or her face was just fat enough that it cushioned the blow,” I say as Dad starts to chuckle.  Mine is:  “The same man who had no time for me, but was able to catch a flying whore at the drop of a dime.”  We are both so glad that everyone seems to really be loving this story, thanks so much for your ongoing support and story love.  Thank you, (Jess) & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Baby,” I hear him say. “Are you going to wake up for me?”

“Mmhmm,” I mumble as I roll toward him. I feel his cool skin against my cheek and I hum in contentment. “I missed you.”

“I missed you too, Baby,” he says as he holds me tight.

“I really want to have sex,” I say with a sigh. “But I think I’m too tired.”

“My poor, sleepy, girl,” he says lifting my face so I can kiss him. His kiss wakes me up. I wrap my arms around his neck and deepen our kiss. His hand pushes up the t-shirt that I’m wearing. My whole body quivers as he rubs my sex. I was defiantly ready to go now. I swing my leg over him and I straddled his lap.

“I thought you were too tired, Baby?” he asks while taking my shirt off.

“But then you kissed me,” I say as I grind myself against his rock hard cock.

“Baby, you are so wet for me,” he says squeezing my ass.

“I could masturbate all day and it’s never the same,” I tell him as he kisses my neck.

“How often do you rub this little pussy?” he asks as he cups my wet sex.

“Whenever I need to,” I say as I grind myself into his hand.

“No more touching yourself when I’m not here,” he says as I pull back.

“Why?”

“Because I said so,” he says pulling me back to him.

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aaa wow...glad mom and daughter are some what back to normal!!!



Author's Response:

Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter.  Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons.  Let’s see how Edward handles it.  A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference.  There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time.  There is quite a bit of story yet to go.  We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled.  I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts.  LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks.  Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait.  I promise...  The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~

TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.

Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on.  Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better.  I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch.  I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.

“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.

“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

she is starting to show the signs of maturity.  that's good!!!



Author's Response:

Well I was not shocked at all by the fact that many of you still hate Alice, and all I can say is the next chapter will not be any better, she is really not going to be liked much after it posts.  A lot of you seem to be hating Edward more and more, as the reviews start to roll in.  I am worried after next chapter you will really hate him, but stick around, I promise it is worth it.  Chapter 23 will be posting 2 weeks from today and it will be in Edward’s POV.  Chapter 26 will bring the story to the end, and chapter 27 will be the Epilogue posted one year later from the end of 26.  There is a lot to wrap up in that short amount of time, but have faith in us, because we will do it.  Thank you to all of you who are reviewing each and every chapter, and not only that but for pimping us out so much—just AMAZING of you all, thanks.  Jess’s favorite line:  I bet the little fucking bitch is getting off on it.  My Favorite line:  I mean, you guys are my token gay friends, anyway. 

Well we hope you like the next chapter, I know I did but I like writing fucking, fighting and crazy.  (Jess) & Kasi~

 

Teaser:

“Having fun playing mommy to my son, and your sister?  Maybe you should stop trying to be my Uncles little girl and find someone your own age.”

“What, what do you mean?” I ask in shock from the sound of hatred dripping off her tone.

“Oh Bella are you that stupid?  That is a cute shirt for a twelve year old, and your ‘Daddy’ isn’t here—oh wait, never mind—I forgot I heard you and Uncle Edward playing around one night.  I didn't realize your daddy—play issues were celebrated in public too,” she says loud enough that friends of my mother’s gasp.

I pull her to the side and stare at her.  “What the fuck is your deal Alice?  We were friends, more like sisters.  Now all of a sudden you have all this rage for me.”

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

GladforEdward.... I have faith that he and Bella will be able to work through things.....but Alice is still shitty.....she really does need her head examined. LOL!!



Author's Response:

Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all.  Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story.  Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole.  So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters.  There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through.  I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We do love hearing your thoughts.  Jess & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”

“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.

“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.

“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.

“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”

“Wherever we go, we go together.  Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Awe...so sweet!

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween Hijinks

Awesome! Loved the lemon!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: And They Lived Happily Ever After

Love it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 38: The Island of Love: Epilogue

Loved it!! So sweet!

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Bird

I bet that felt good!

 

How often do you update this story?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 9: The Zoo

Yay! finally he grew a pair!

Little Girl by TeamAllTwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

Will she find what she is searching for?  After several nights of watching him across the bar, what happens when he isn’t there?  AH/18+ only please

Banner made by: TeamAllTwilight

 

 

5th place honorable mention in the Mix and Match Contest, Banner awarded from contest.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2772 Read Count: 2550
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2012 Updated: 27 Nov 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it....especially because as I was reading it I was coming down from some phenomenal sex with my older man!!!! 



Author's Response:

Wow thanks for the wonderful response to this one-shot.  I ended up placing in a 5th place tie for fans choice in the voting.  Alice and Charlie was an odd combo for me, but I couldn’t think of something more NON-CANNON, yet something I could see in my head.  I have a hard time writing anything I can’t see in my head, so writing this was a fun experience for me, since I am pretty much an Edward/Bella kind of girl.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Please check out the writing I do under my joint writing accounts too.  WeeKittyAndTAT and JessAndTAT.  Hope you enjoy the reading material you’ll find.  Kasi~  PS... WOOT WOOT for you on the olderman...LOVE IT!

Summary: Past Featured Story

beyond

The job market is bad, and recent college grad Bella's dreams of being a teacher are crumbling away. Edward is a single father and doctor, struggling to raise his seven year old daughter by himself. Fate intervenes, changing them both forever. Drabble fic. Alternating POV's.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22851 Read Count: 161044
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - epilogue 4 The End

Such a sweet story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Even though you are going through or went through some difficulties,  these past few chapters have been wonderful! Keep it up! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

sounds  like  Peter  may be feeling kinda  remorseful...hmmmm.......?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

andy taki.g control is HOT!  i hope yhey work it all out soon.....can't wait for sinfully good sexy times for b and e.

 

and then tbe boys, Jackson and Nick.......can't wait for more of them either!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

 loved it.   we all understand about the  curveball  that life can throw at us.  take care

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

 so glad  Edward overheard  Darryl  talking... and awwwww  for  Jackson. I  hope  Bonnie  is  good.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So excited this is back.....yeah!!!!!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love that they are all attacking this thing head on!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

thanks for the update...... i loved it! i actually got to read this chapter while sitting on my porch swing outside drinking coffee.....good times!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Edward handled that better than I thought he would! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Awwwww! Dammit....that made me cry! I miss the Uncles too! I was just remembering all their crazy shenanigans!!!!!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yes! I loved it....ahhhh those passionate Latin lovers!  Dayum!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it and so happy for this update!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved the update.

 

Dont you worry. Writer's block is just a thing that happens. Looking foward to more.

Summary:

Carlisle faces the hardest decision in his life. Does he follow his heart and allow his lovers to save him from Hell? Or does he hide from the pain? Warnings: Dark subject matter and graphic oral sex between four people, both male and female. This is an outtake for my fanfic, Endless Awakenings. MA/NC-17


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2780 Read Count: 1729
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2013 Updated: 25 Jan 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great!  So glad to see Carlisle's side of his healing. Thank you!!

FIGHT CLUB by beatlerosie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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I fight. I f**k. I bleed.

Occasionally blackout and then I don't remember

what the f**k I've done and with whom...

Sh*t.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 299 Read Count: 30051
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2013 Updated: 07 Nov 2014
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: FIGHT CLUB

Fun chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: FIGHT CLUB

So sad that he's lost faith.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: FIGHT CLUB

The shit hit the fan. Poor Jasper!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: FIGHT CLUB

Awesome, good luck! I'll go vote!

The Selkie Wife by Lissa Bryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary: Past Featured Story


 


 


Set during the reign of "Bloody Mary" Tudor. Bella is captured by Edward to raise his daughter. He promises to release her one day, but will he? Court intrigues and danger around every corner. Can they, and their new-found love, survive? Rated M/OOC/AU


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Selkie
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190594 Read Count: 29593
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2011 Updated: 07 Apr 2016
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I love it!  I can't get enough!  I want more! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Wahoo! Yay! Hip hip hooray!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm loving your writing! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Loved it! Truly a beautiful story!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm loving your artistic license!  Great story!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That Gardiner fellow was an Arse!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh no! This was tragic! Tears!

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Date: 19 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I love all of your historical references and bits of information! Marvelous story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has had a crush on Dr. Cullen for two years. Will her greatest fantasy come true after a night of babysitting?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109464 Read Count: 86185
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Aug 2014
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Best chapter yet!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

New story sounds good. 

Loved this little fic here....I wanted to strangle edward sometimes but he turned out okay!

 

i would love to,see some future takes of him being daddy-mob-ward! Lol :)

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281076
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I guess I missed something.  I don't remember his mom being sick. I'll need to go back and look for that in the previous couple of chapters.

 

But they do seem pretty normal.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

A wonderful and sweet chapter!  Love that Roger!!  21st bday??? Happy bday then!

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Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Damnit! I've been reading for a couple of hours now and all of a sudden I can't hit the next button!!!  Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awe! Gosh...THat had to be sooooo hard!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Awe.......love that take charge Edward is back!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awwww! Super perfect! Can't wait to find out what the lawyer finds out.....and how it's handled.....and the. Dropping the bomb like that on the other family.......burn! :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this first chapter. I'm happy Bella is a mind oriented woman with her own sense of intelligence and some snark! 

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Let's blow Tanya up!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

H hahaha :)

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved this chapter!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm sorry about your inbox...but I love this story! Keep it up sweet girl!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wonderful emails! He finally opens up! Sweet cab driver too!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh wowza!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love that Roger! Manor man....Edward is at rock bottom......bless it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh that levi is just precious!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Lizzy has Bella on her side..... its all gonna be okay!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thanks for the update

Yes her skin needs to be really tough

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved it!  will suburgatory be on this website  as well?

 

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272409
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I absolutely love this story. Thank you so very much for continuing to write!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So glad they discussed everything!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

My is so big right now! Loved this chapter! Jacob's reappearance was great!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Beni is wonderful! Great chapter!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love your descriptions and all the new information. "Ta" for updating. :)

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I absolutely loved it! I really like how you had a time jump there. It gets the story moving faster! Thanks for writing!

 

Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Vampgirl79

 

Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Banner made by Vampgirl79

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106077
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Outtake - Photo Session

Loved it! Super intimate and sexy.



Author's Response: Thanks! That's exactly what I was going for.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Box

It's ore of a broken heart kind of thing, plus he put her in an awkward situation by making her the other woman.



Author's Response: Thanks! You're really getting it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - A walk down memory lane

Poor girl...that sucks!



Author's Response: I'm glad you agree with me. There were readers stating that it wasn't that bad what happened to her.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Your place or mine?

Great so far!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Revelations

Got part of his history out of the way...



Author's Response: Well, it's actually most of his story. There's a bit more in a later chapter but not so much.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 32 - Happy New Year

Loved it! Great reunion...I'm glad it wasn't drawn out. Thx



Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I thought there was no use in having them talk for several hundred words when actually with the "I love you" everything was said. Next chapter will be fun. See you Friday.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue - Part III

Wonderful story!



Author's Response: Thanks! Your words mean a lot to me.

Summary:

 

Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106121
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Santino Chapter 8

Loved!

What If by Kittyinaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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What would happen if Bella is in college when the Cullens came? What if Carlisle is acting his age? What if Twilight starts now, but with a twist, a huge twist named Carlisle Cullen?

A/J, R/EM Es/? C/B E/? All will be revealed later.

This story was inspired by Feral Blood.  It was dicussed with the writer of the story and she endorsed it.  I have in no way try to steal anything from that wonderful story, but her Carlisle opened me up to a totally different world and made it where I wanted to write and read Bella with other characters.  Thank you…

Banner is made by MMsimpy09.  She is trying to help me out, and works with me to do the Banners.  If you are interested, her site is here:

Meg’s Modern Art

This Disclosure is for all stories contained under this heading: Twilight is the property of Stephenie Meyers. All characters belong to her, the plot of this is my own.

For more information, check out my website: http://kittyinaz.wordpress.com/

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106015 Read Count: 22612
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Feb 2016
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Walk A Mile

I like the way this chapter was written! 

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Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Take Me As I Am

Progress!  Yeah! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Day Turns into Night

Yay! Esmé is coming back! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Into Your Eyes

Communication is key! Good job to those two! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 11: It Held Through

So sweet! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Be In Our Past

This ought to be good! 

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: I Can See Your Dreams

Two thumbs up! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Love Speaks in Silence

I would love to be in that tub! 

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Sunlight in Your Universe

He's so sweet!   Okay,  so maybe my first thoughts were right. ......Edward and Esme??? Please just don't let it be Fucking Tanya! Lol!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: It’s Been A Long Time Coming

Sam and Seth was such a wonderful surprise!   So have I picked up on the clues that Edward's mate is Carlisle?

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: It Is You I Have Waited For

I like your ideas......very creative! 

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: It Starts With Love

Awe! I love the different webs you are spinning in the story so far! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: I Step to The Edge

Two thumbs up! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A Moment in Change

I'm intrigued! :)

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: To Reach For Something More

Love the connection between them 2!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Nothing Left of Me

I never thought I'd like anything but B/E.........but you have done a great job of weaving this tale so far! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Dead End Fury

Oh my! King is fixing to have a field day with all of this.

 

Update soon,  please! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Long Blinding End

Yay!  I'm so ready for more! I've missed this story!