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Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218311
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father

it was wonderful! i cried too but it was well worth it. my dad has been a cop for over 1 years....now he is a sargeant pilot of the texas dps.......i never want to experience that.....ever!                                                   Great chapter!

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Moving on

fuc% all those stupid skanks on ffnet.  we love u PLU!  u r the best!  love me some roscoe talk! super cute!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Mama said there'll be days like this...

loved it....big brother & sister time was great....maybe we could get an outtake?

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

I was looking forward to this update!  It did NOT dissappoint!  I loved it.  These characters are so dear to me.

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

I loved it.  I wasn't worried last chapter bc I knew that you would pull them thru it.

 

 

the wedding will b a great chapter, can't wait to read it.

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?

awww.....this last part brought on the tears.

 

loved all the pics. thx for the rec.

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - “Going to the chapel and we’re…” (Or are we?)

Wonderful.....loved every minute of the movie too!

 

I enjoyed the hatter. It was a fun and steamy read. Sad to see this story...well, any of your stories wind down and come to a close. :(

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!

Awesome chapter!!!  You captured so many of the real emotions that new mothers experience. So sad to see it end but happy for more people like us!!!

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
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Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

That job sounds interesting.  Your country's work system sounds great...very family oriented.

 

Love the story and I will patiently wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

I have a feeling they will pay for allow this....the bastards I mean!!!



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40.

The bastards will pay, but some might pay sooner than others.

I'm writing chapter 41 now, so it should be posted sometime this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Making Plans

i am really loving this story so far!  i am so glad i have a waysto go before i reach most everyone else and have to wait on chapters...

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Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 "Pig or Pork"

such a cool history lesson!  i loved it....emmett's....effin bacon and aggs!!!  cracked me up...i woke up my husband that as asleep next to me laughing!



Author's Response:

Hi there, the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Emmett's always good for a laugh isn't he!

Let me know what you think of the rest of the chapters.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - War and Television

i love your creativity and your drive for research!          the news report was awesome, but sad as well.  i hope james steps into a net nd gets trapped!



Author's Response:

Hi there, the real teacher

Thanks for your review and your compliments; I find the research into Polynesia fascinating. It makes me want to visit Hawaii again (I've visited Honolulu twice before). James will get his just desserts, but not before he makes trouble and causes some damage. Stay tuned and I look forward to your future thoughts and comments.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Thanksgiving Games

omg....i'm so ready fr those bastards to become shark bait!



Author's Response:

Hey there, the real teacher

Thanks for your review to chapter 25.

Great idea, Jimmy as shark bait!

Kind regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

of course we want more you lovely tease!!  haha

 

I want Jimmy to die a SLOW...painful death!



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing the chapter 27 teaser.

I hope you enjoyed chapter 28 just as much - you got your wish :)

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - North

so happy to have an update....love all the new questions i have to ponder



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Date

what a wonderful chpater. he is so super sweet.....ready for more answers tho.



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal. The wedding/commitment ceremony will probably be chapter 36 or 37 because we've got to get through Christmas first and the Cullen's need to discuss all the things they've discovered recently and come up with some new theories. We'll also get some news about Vivi.

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Loved the chapter!!! I particularly like the discussion about the theories and finding out that Vivi had been arrested.  Larry is just too cute!!!

 

about Esme being pregnant.  While I like the sweetness factor, I don't think it would fit well.  Yes, she is older, that means more dr visits would be required. If something happens there is no way for her to get to modern technology like she would need to.  If she were to die, then Papa Carlisle would be devastated and have to raise the baby with the help of the family...I don't want her kids to have to raise her new baby.

but if you were to make her have a healthy pregnancy then I still think that' just too much pregnancy at once for poor Carlisle.   She could be getting a hormonal imbalance or something or sympathy symptoms from Bella......because I really do hope she is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. The support for an Esme pregnancy was overwhelming and I decided to go with the storyline. Risky I know, but I need to grow as a writer and taking a risk will help me do that. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

So sad....crying....bless it all.

p

merry chistmas 



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39.

I'm writing chapter 40 now and it should be posted in the first week of January.

I hope you had a great Christmas. Enjoy your New Year.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Awesome......sounds like fun.....what kind of company do u work for???  

 

Loved the double agent chapter. Update while on vacay.....please!!



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding and updating with another chapter.

To answer your question about what work I do, I am a compliance manager in a share registry and I specialise in Anti-money laundering. I am also learning about FATCA, which you might have heard of in the business press because it is US legislation impacting financial institutions around the world with US customers. The vacay is in about 5 weeks, but unfortunately Hawaii is off the itinerary because the friend I'm travelling with has been quite ill and the medical expenses have eaten into her holiday savings. We'll still be in the US for about 2 and half weeks visiting NYC for 8 days with day trips to Washington DC and the Hamptons. After that, we'll head to California and spend 4 days at Disneyland, 3 days in LA and 2 days in Santa Monica before heading home. I'm having a total of 8 weeks off work - at full pay. We're pretty lucky here in Australia - our employee benefits are excellent compared to the US. Every fulltime employee irrespective of age, length of service or the type of job the work in gets 4 weeks paid annual leave each year. We also get between 8 and 12 days paid sick leave each year and after 10 years continuous service we also get 8 weeks paid long service leave. All new mom's and dads also get up to 6 months paid maternity leave or paternity leave depending on the contract or government salary award they're covered by. All employees on wages (not salaries - that's me) also get overtime at between 1.5, 2 or 3 times the hourly rate (depending on when the OT takes place) and we get paid for state and federal public holidays.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Sounds like u had a great trip. Yes, I've been wondering about updates. Thank you so much for this chapter.....glad for a healthy baby and momma!

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Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Great chapter! I have been really missing this story!  

I'm glad u are in good healtha dn hope that it continues for you.

 

love how far Larry has come along too!

 

i absolutely adore PEOPLE LIKE US! And the sequel! Just Ginger is a great writer!

Summary: Past Featured Story

ail

A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

 loved  it

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Help from My Friends

squee! loved tbe first chapter

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coffee, Tea or Me?

this chapter made me smile!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Nancy Drew (verb)

love angela!

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Take a Chance on Me

thx 4 the reccs.

loved the chapter...i can totally feel their excitement!

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: A Little Traveling Music

poor edward...he's oblivious! Lol

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: I Trip Through Your Wires

yay! daddy c is in the house! tbe campbell room sounds awesome!!!

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Bedroom Confessional

GAH! Lying in bed shirtless next to Edward sounds freaking incredible!

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Over My Head

I love this family dynamic!  I really love stories that have all of these crazy characters as family or close friends (Like family).

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Rose is a Rose is a Rose is a Rose

Gotta love Rose...she definitely has her thorns!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Awake My Soul

thx for the reccs....

I sure hope mags and the denali sluts get put in their place even more so!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Liar, Liar, Sex on Fire

Yes,I've read stay too....a long long time ago....that was one of the first stories I remember reading.....loved the chapter and the tile!!!

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
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Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Up and Down

Hay, he got a woody! That's great news!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Now

Yay.....he's coming home!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Shattered

 he needs some severe counseling!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26:Returning to Beautiful Normal

Great chapter! Progress!!!

 

Summary:

Meet Edward Masen, one member of America's 'Greatest Generation'. "...just as fire tempers iron into fine steel so does adversity temper one's character into firmness, tolerance and determination…."



Thank you to Ashes AtMidnight for the lovely banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17666 Read Count: 2794
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2012 Updated: 29 Apr 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sounds like a lot of the douche bag dads from that time.



Author's Response: at least one anyway....

Dangerously in Love by bee1982 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought she had found everything in Edward Masen while she was at high school, but when he mysteriously vanishes from her life without a trace Bella has no choice but to move on.

When Bella moves to Washington DC three years later her past comes back to hit her in the face and she realised that loving Edward is going to be a dangerous game, full of fear, pain, action, but most of all passion. AH    

Thanks to my Beta'a Sally and NeeNee.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133255 Read Count: 66670
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
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Date: 11 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Loved it all! Great story :)

Summary:

 

Sequel to ‘Virgins & Villains’ and ‘Love Rescue Me’. Follow Edward, Bella and the rest of the family as they survive pregnancy, childbirth and anything else that life throws at them. Alternates between BPOV and EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52678 Read Count: 14112
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2012 Updated: 23 Oct 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Christening Gowns & A Careful Man

loved it! cant wait for mor!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Most of the next chapter is already written.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The City of Light & Falling Down

loved all of it. excited for more!



Author's Response: THanks! love to hear that.

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123073
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
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Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

well what was the treatment?

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Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 80: The Future - Part 3

awww...loved every word of it.....refresh my memory....how old are edward and izzy?



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! At the very end of The Future Part 3, Ed is 37 and Izzy is 32.

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Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

bless his heart...I'm in texas...along the way he should travel to get to his brother.....I'll be here waiting for him!!! HAHA!

 

Glad Izzy is getting better!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue 2

Sniffle is right! Loved the end..can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Very glad you enjoyed it. It will be a while before I begin the sequel...stay tuned, and thank you!

Romany by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set in England mid 1800's. Edward and Bella live in different worlds, ruled by class and money, where prejudices influence and dictate who you can love. Can they overcome the stigma and gossip to be together?

We can’t help who we fall in love with; however we are responsible for how we react to that knowledge or how we treat that person.

Thanks to fab betas RAH07890 & js18

Awesome banner by ML

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: To Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78582 Read Count: 45739
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2012 Updated: 05 Oct 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seems interesting...looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

super sweet edward and such an endearing Alice!

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Totally not liking Esme at the moment.  What a self righteous, pompous, stuck up, bitch!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

poor daddy C. hehe....

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Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

loved it!



Author's Response: Thank you xxx

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

great chapter!     loved that kick ass bella!    edward was wonderful to bella for their first time....yay!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I loved writing kick ass Bella scene. ;)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So glad they have made the vow to always be honest!  Steamy times in the barn.....oh how I can relate!!! LOL!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

can we burn the nasty cunt bitch? i hate tanya!  good thing esme was there to hear it all.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Canwe please burn the maggot riddled cunt whores at the stake?! fucking hate tanya!



Author's Response:

Love your passion, I hate T too, wonder who is the most hated??

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Omg! I about fell out of my chair because I was swooning so dang hard! Hopefully, that'll shut 'em up!!!!!



Author's Response:

How fantastic, I've never made anyone swoon before ... I like!

Summary:

New York City"s night life is always up and running, wether it's a club or a strip joint. but their is only one club that has it all, sexy women, alcohol, gambling, drugs, and a supply of rooms in the back that only the elite can get into, for private dances from one of the sultry untouchables. And if you are a high paying customer you get to spend the night with one.

NC-17 for sex, drugs, gambling, violence, and more sex.

Real banner inside

 

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32148 Read Count: 20568
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
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Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Amanda

You and me both!  He is all kinds of yummy!!  I hope she getsoutsafely!!!

 

 



Author's Response:

i know when i first saw that pic i looked at for at least ten minutes! lol Thanks for the review

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: school

so it comes across that terry is an ass...but then is an awesome loving boyfriend..yes, we now know he is a jealous dude, but....is he the type that will hurt her, beat her, rape her.....if she doesn't obey or want him?



Author's Response:

lol all that will be answered in the next few chapters

thank you for your review

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Thoughts

Hopefully, she gets away!  All these fuckers are seriously demented!

Summary: Past Featured Story

rti

After guest hosting on a morning show, Isabella becomes the new co-cost for the show. Her husband James leaves her out of spite and jealousy and Bella swears off men to focus on her new career change. Edward Cullen was known for being a portentous, arrogant, SOB while running a branch of Masen Enterprises. After the death of his grandfather, Edward becomes the new CEO. His soul focus is on the expansion of the company, and to find out who has been stealing from and framing his grandfather. When Edward visits the morning show to defend the honor of his grandfather's legacy, he finds his self extremely attracted to the beautiful co-host Isabella. In the occurrence of unexpected events the pair cannot seem to stay away from each other. How long can they resist the inevitable? Reviews for this story on fanfic 1,672

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Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the lemonade stand

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, The Inevitable, Shena's Storys to Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 306607 Read Count: 206578
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
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Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 40: The day that changed their lives again

Perfect! Great writing!

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Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Unconditional

Oh that man is dreamy! Btw.....I love all the other characters.....Seth is soooo sweet!

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Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 43: An ending is just another beginning

Loved this story! Good writing!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The day that changed their lives

Looks good so far!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 39: A love so enchanting

Great chapter!!! Too sweet!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Defying Gravity

Oh that Emily....she's a little bitch....delete her from everything! Lol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 24: My Relationship under a microscope

That lemon was awesome! Sweet chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Addiction

Loved it!

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Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: So It Continues

Good call Edward......I really can't wait to find out what Emily's deal is.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: The Interview

Bahahahaha.....loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Stormy with a ray of Hope

Loved it! How are you pronouncing the girls' names?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Smokey Mirror

Loved this...his love for her and hers for him is amazing! Great writing!

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Banner by OTBGraphics, texture by Rachel


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 142014
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 30: A New Story and a Happy Ending

Loved it!   Gonna miss these characters! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: NYC

I looked in your blog and didn't see pictures of the jewelery.  I'm loving the sequel! 

 

 



Author's Response:

Total fail on responding. Sorry! Since the story was completed last year ... you have to do some searching. Here's the search with it's tag:TNC. http://tufano79.blogspot.com/search/label/TNC

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Surprise!

Fun chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Home

So what exactly happened?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 18: A man’s Family is his life

Sorry for your loss! Great chapter! Loved the idea of the dopplegangers! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Revealed

Wowza! Happy that Jane helped a little bit.  Not surprised by Faith.....Eric....yeah, not surprised by him either.   Wonder what his mom will have to say.  And way to go Mac!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Getting to Business

Loved their kind hearts! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Fate is more than a 4 letter word

Loved Ethan!  Don't know if you are aware,but Bella can't give edward a son..it is the man's job to produce the female and male sperm. Which ever one of his little swimmers get there first, then that is the sex of the baby.



Author's Response:

Hello The Real Teacher, 

I am aware that Bella can not actually give Edward a son in the sense of being able to control it biologically. I work in the medical field and I have a son, so I know. LOL  She meant it as his wife she wants to give him a son. She nor I meant is as if she wants to control what they have based off her DNA. Just wanted to let you know that I am aware.

Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Where there is love

Loved it!   Such a great story!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Same day another Masen and Cullen?

Awe! Yeah! So sweet.....Jane needs to be handled!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Another day another Masen, or Culen

Somebody just needs to whip Faith's ass and get it over with!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The Family Business

Great chapter! Faith needs to back the hell off!

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

You did a marvelous job!  Loved this story....it was very "real" and I appreciate that! 

Love is Strange by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella Swan and Edward Cullen live in the small town of Ligonier in Pennsylvania. They've been best friends since they were six years old, and not much can keep them apart. Bella wants to leave small-town life behind, while Edward is fine with whatever, but that's not the only complication in their relationship. What happens when they fall in love ... with each other?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142307 Read Count: 86912
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2021
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 Obsessions & Consequences

Real world troubles!  I have the faith!!

 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 Obsessions & Consequences

Real world troubles!  I have the faith!!

 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 Reconnecting

So excited for you and your new school adventure! Stay safe and thanks for updating !!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 Christmas Reunions

There was a lot there!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 Going Back Home

Hang in there.....everything just sucks at times now. So reading your words is a great escape for us!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Dead Flowers

Big chapter. I think Alice needs to tread carefully...for sure. But I understand how she can't help but be protective of her brother. 

 

Hate this for Rosalie!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Dead Flowers

Big chapter. I think Alice needs to tread carefully...for sure. But I understand how she can't help but be protective of her brother. 

 

Hate this for Rosalie!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 A Second Chance

Congratulations on your NY school gig! That's great! Sorry about your family's health stuff...that is so hard to deal with.

 

Enjoying the growth aspect of this story. Good work! 😊

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 A Second Chance

Congratulations on your NY school gig! That's great! Sorry about your family's health stuff...that is so hard to deal with.

 

Enjoying the growth aspect of this story. Good work! 😊

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 A Second Chance

Congratulations on your NY school gig! That's great! Sorry about your family's health stuff...that is so hard to deal with.

 

Enjoying the growth aspect of this story. Good work! 😊

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806319
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

So glad Damion is  happy!  he deserves it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

Your lemons are always outstanding ! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 37: OOC

Way to go DADDY!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 49: By the Book

Glad Sonny worked it all out!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue Two

Happy tears! but sad that  its over!

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87329
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Their relationship seems a bit weird at times.....lovers, partners, parent/child, dominant/submissive....isn't all about the sex between these two, or does Edward really see her as a young adult...rather than just so done he can bend to his will?

 



Author's Response:

Well, I did give warning that things would not be super peachy.  Edward is an asshole, and he is very demanding of Bella’s attentions, yet he seems to forget that she is young and wants to have fun.  Bella does act very immature at times, and her ability to communicate properly sucks.  Edward being a complete dick is not going to change for a few chapters, however he will have great moments along with shitty.  Bella however will start to blossom and show her maturity level rising.  Edward’s emotions were running very high in this chapter and the way that they played emotions off of the other caused them both to act in a way they normally wouldn’t.  Jess feels this chapter is as bad as it gets for them, I think there is one more where Edward makes me want to hate him, however chapter 23 will be in Edward’s POV and that chapter will show everyone where he stands.  There are questions regarding Edward’s age and Bella’s age and the difference in ages.  At the start of the story Edward was 31 and Bella was 14, so there is a 17-year difference between them.   I want to touch on the fact that we have had two people at this point message us saying they are walking away from this story after this chapter—I am personally sorry to hear that mainly because the resolutions planned for them are alone worth sticking around for.  Now we asked what your favorite line was and not everyone participated, but I still will share with you all Jess’s favorite line.  This is from when she was at the club and after meeting Riley and talking to him she thinks to herself ... “He reminds me of Jake, and I’d bet money his girlfriend has a dick, too.”  Oh and speaking of her time at the club, her friend from School Corin, knew Seth before the club, somehow that got over looked by a couple of you.  So no worries Seth nor Riley are bad people, and Corin is cool too.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and if you still have questions hit us up on Facebook or PM.  (Jess) & Kasi~
Chapter 20 TEASER:  I’m sitting here in a sexual innuendo filled daze, but the timer dinging gets my attention.  I pull the pan form the oven, and it smells even better in the kitchen than it did ten minutes ago.  I put the garlic bread in and pull the salad out and toss it.  I place everything on the table and pull the garlic bread out just as Edward comes in the room.

“Damn Baby, that smells better than it did before,” he compliments and I smile.

I watch as Edward gets out a bottle of wine from the chiller cabinet and opens it.  I don’t drink often, but when we have a nice dinner we almost always have a glass or two.  He pours our glasses and carries them to the table.  I get everything in place and light the candles, as he dims the light.

“This is very romantic, Baby,” he says pulling out my chair.

“Thank you, my love,” I say after sipping the wine he gave me.

Dinner is amazing and we eat quietly while exchanging looks that say we have much better things to do than talk.  We clean up together and I smile when I see him cover the apple pie I made and place it in the warming rack on low. 

“I can’t wait any longer, come with me,” he says pulling me by my hand upstairs.  Instead of going to the bedroom, he pulls me into his office.  Walking to the wall safe he punches in the code and opens the door.  My eyes grow wide as he pulls out a rather large light blue velvet box and turns to hand it to me.

“What—what’s this for?” I stammer.