Reviews by the real teacher
The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89146
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53: Stealthy Maneuvers

It would be neat to get a chapter with a little bit of James' POV.



Author's Response:

Hi real t!

All I'll say is...you've got to be patient. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts

ok....so that wasnt so bad

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Epilogue: Seasons Part 1: Fall Leaves

agh! loved it!

Summary:

Sequel to Fighting for Love: Edward and Bella are at UCLA. On their own for the first time, will they be able to handle everything that is thrown at them? Will their past come back to haunt them? Canon coupling, NC-17 and AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Fighterward, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136048 Read Count: 81565
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2011 Updated: 11 Aug 2016
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great first chapter! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Great scene! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Loved! It was wonderful!  

 

Will there be any future takes? 



Author's Response:

Maybe at some point. Not sure and nothing set in stone.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That's complete bullshit!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Powerful chapter!  Loved it! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Way to go Papa Ed! Thats awesome!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad that went well! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awe!!!!! So sweet and made me smile!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ahhhh! Can't wait for the update! I've read this and the first story straight through. .......and NOW I have to wait!



Author's Response:

Soon. The wait won't be long. :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Yay! Thanks so much!  Are we getting future takes as well?  Is live to see the gang with little ones.

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2671352
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 34: This is it

Turning point....love it! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Way to go Bella!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13

Loved it all!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake

I'd be trying to bring a lawsuit to the feds!

 

Oh and....you called the firearm in the salon a "rifle" and then called it a "shotgun"......those are two completely different types of firearms and shouldn't be used interchangeably.....just in case you didn't know.

 

:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Get It

I received like three calls in a row from a strange number from NY. I looked it up on line and it said "Fleischmanns".

 

I looked that up and it said it was in Middleton,NY...upstate in Delaware county.

 

I was like.....I know where that is...kinda!

How cool is that!?

 

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

Loved that you wrote her being real. ..passing gas and all......so darn funny!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Liking it  so far !

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

Loved the chapter! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

im all for writer's rights.....but the story seemed to end very VERY abruptly. it's almost like u got tired of writing or something else and just ended it.......whilei realize it's not my story to tell, it seem like there  is much more to tell......without the epi. i've loved the story so far and it seemed like a great idea. just kinda sucks that it's ending like this.   

 

best of luck to you!



Author's Response:

This is a type of story that could go on forever. As a person learning everything, I could have written Edward learning EVERYTHING. That being said, it would be minimal conflict in the situation that they are in. The major hurdle was the wolves and I felt like in the end if I spent too much time on the everyday stuff with nothing to build up to or come down from, that it would be disapointing to the readers in the end.

--outtake will be emailed

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

this truly is a beautiful story...thanks for letting us read it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love.  The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture.  They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.

 

“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular.  They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”

 

“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184400
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Pay Up, Pixie

Hello darling!  I am teacher over at twilighted...and just saw this story recc's over here and wanted to help out your review count.

 

I see that the story is further along over here......is it any different from the story on twilighted?

I haven't read ahead or anything....just skipped to the bottom to leave my review. 

I appreciate you letting me know!!!

 

Have a good day and good luck with your reviews!

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339386
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

Loved, Loved, LOVED this sweet story!  Thank you for writing it and I am so glad this story was the medicine that soothed your soul! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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My version of what happens after Bella saw Edward that first day of school. Could they get pass the secrets and build a relationship? 

This is my first attempt at writing a fan fiction. It started as a one shot but I got good reviews so I'm continuing the story. My vampire is a little different from Stephanie's. A little bite does not change a human into a vampire.

The beginning of the story follows the book closely but with lots of lemons then we hit a Fork in the road and all bets are off as Bella and the Cullens do all the things regular teenagers do.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 370659 Read Count: 101500
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2011 Updated: 30 Mar 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I like the hybrid Bella! It's a nice change and different spin! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Loved it all!

Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 143999
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Two Months Ago

Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: One Month Ago

Awe...yay for progress!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Living Hell

Yeah. ..a lot late moon and dad! Jackases!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Burning Fire

He's on the up and up but his relationship Isn't. ..  poor dude!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Garrett

Sorry about your divorce but hope you are in a better state now. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

Haha!  Loved it!

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

loved it..gonna miss it. good luck with ur health....:)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, both for reading and the well wishes!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

loved it....so sweet.



Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

My Surrender by KareBear1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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ALERT: POLY & Bd/Sm  Carlisle/Bella/Jasper

18 year old Bella has always been at the top of her class even graduating early from high school and getting accepted to Dartmouth on a full scholarship. She enjoyed two years of great grades and loved college. For the first time during her junior year she starts to struggle not in one class but two. She makes a plan to go and confront the two professors who just happen to be cousin and share an office even though they are in separate departments. What she did not know was that they have been scheming to get what they want the innocent Miss Swan.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Carlisle
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75116 Read Count: 57626
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2011 Updated: 13 Dec 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have enjoyed reading so far!  :)

Off The Beaten Path by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

The outtakes/futuretakes for the story The Path We Choose. Follow along with our favorite couple and the WonderTwins and see missing pieces and future events. Babies, weddings, lemons, and lots more!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69825 Read Count: 7069
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Outtake 4 - Masen

Loved Masen as a 17 year old. Although I didn't curse around my momma.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Outtake 2 - A New Cullen

Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake 1 - Bella's Pregnancy

So sweet!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Outtake 5 - The Love of a Daddy

Loved! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131141
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises

oh MY FREAKING GOSH!

 

You, my dear are effin IN-damn-CREDIBLE!

 

I don't know h ow you keep all of this separate in your mind, but you need an award for best complex story and most creative twists!

 

 

 

I give you....the licorice DNA award......licorice is twisted and DNA is complex!

 

There ya go darlin'!

 

Yes, I know....I'm a dweeb.

 

I loved it and love you!

 

Jessica is a big dummy!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

so sweet and just perfect for them.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Discussion and Dissection

you r so freaking great!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

great story idea....looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Aide-de-Camp Black

too funny!  but Jethro????..........really???

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces

i  love your writing and wondefful sense of humor!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi teach!

Thank you for the compliments. Glad you are enjoying my silly sense of humor and writing style. Hope you like chapter 15.

Thanks for the review and kind words.

-bannerday

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: True Confessions of Stealth Transgressions

great chapter!!!!!!!!  I am glad they got it all out in the open.   WOW!  Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Do the (After)Math

he needs to grovel a little!  But he still has a lot of growing up to do.....and you are doing a great job of showing us that transition.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five

hilarious! loved it...omg....what kinda shit are they going to have to dig their way out of if he reads her stoy based on him? it's either going to go bad or it's going to be something he uses to  find out how she feels about him......oh thepossibilities!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events

Crack me UP!!!!!!! LOL!  I loved it!  I have been seeing your story recc'd in different places and it makes me soooo happy for YOU!

 

Take care!

I am home sick with my 7 month old who is also sick.  I need to be doing laundry, washing bottles, unloading the dishwasher, and working on my graduate work, but.........I'M NOT!  I'm reading FF!

 

HAHA

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress

Best chapter ever! Loved it and Angela is super aware....nothing gets by her...i wonder what she is going to do with this new info?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls

thanks for the update. their time spent alone was really sweet.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

Hahaha....loved those two! They work their crap out we'll together and separately...glad they don't assume and keep crap to themselves.....that just ruins everything!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Dang.....it stopped there! Oh well.....went eager picnics to get through I'msure.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Ed and the Real Girl

Aaaawww... So sweet but the suspense is killing me....what else are we going to need for the big discussion???  You gotta let me know in advance so I can put it in my emergency tote!!!! Lol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: Blockbusters, High School Grads and Sophomore Girls

Fun chapter....ready for more sweatshirt info..... Lol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact

Ahhhh.....loved it!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69: Full Circle and Spiraling Ideas

Awwwww!!!!! Loved this to pieces!!!!!!

you are such a fun, creative, awesome writer! Love reading your stuff!!!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70: This Must Be the Place

This whole journey has been in-freaking-credible!!!!!!!!!  Loved every minute of it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

BannerBanner

 

This is the very first Fan Fic I wrote. It was written during the summer of 09. I know that it is riddled with errors and I have no intentions of fixing these errors as this story is being posted to show my growth as a writer.

 

 

This is the story of how the night Janitor falls in love with the CEO.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 111 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116539 Read Count: 82638
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2011 Updated: 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

what a horn dog.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

why would she say she was fat???????

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like the idea of your story.  But do you have a beta?  I have picked up so many errors throughout your chapters.  And it's Greenwich Village.  You spelled it wrong.  It is easily googled. 

I can tell this is a first timer's story.  There is nothing wrong with it, but it does lack a certain finesse.  If you are interested in writing more, (if you haven't already) I suggest reading a few big time, well-known stories to see how their stories flow.  If you need reccomendations to stories let me know!

Take care!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ok....so they haven't even kissed yet....

 

I am not asking this question to come across as rude....but is English your native language?  I am an EFL, ESL and Bilingual teacher and whenever my students make the transition to English through writing...well, your writing resembles that.  THe way you word things, the verb usage, the pronoun usage, etc.



Author's Response:

I’m only answering on of your reviews….  As I say this was my very first try at writing a Fan Fic. No I did not have a beta on it as I didn’t know people were willing do check over other peoples writings at the time. I was very new to the world of fan fiction at the time. As it states this was my first and it was written back in 2009.  The plot line was given to me by a twelve-year-old young lady, and so I kept it pretty simple as it was written for a teen site. I only posted it here so people could see how much I’ve grown with my writings. English is my first language. It’s funny I read stories all the time and see errors and I never mention them in my reviews.

Gee, even many published books have errors in them. If you read my other stories on this site, you will see my growth. I don’t plan on have this story beta’d because of what it stands for. I use multiple beta’s on my other stories. This is a completed story that I’m posting.

Hugs

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

the climax of the story could have been built up a little bit better than what it was....but that's normal for a first time story teller....I remember my own!  HA!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

so as soon as emmett met bella last night and the only time he was around her he started calling her little sis...that is a term of endearment that is usually placed on someone after having known the person for some time...more than just one evening.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You need to go back and re-read this chapter.  There are a lot of errors that makes it hard to read.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

in response to your review reply...yes I read that this was your first story as I kept calling you a first timer in several reviews.  I also read that you took on the story after the first chapter.

As a reader, reviewer and writer I think it is most important to let others know about mistakes and errors.  Even first timers can produce error free stories.  But yes, I have read other stories on this website and the other website twilighted, where they strive to have perfect, error free chapters that have errors in them as well.  So don't sweat the errors.  I just think that a little bit of re-reading, checking again, and proof reading, makes all the difference.

I am not attacking you or the writing.  Since you seem to be put out by reviews that are trying to help and critique, maybe you should post on each chapter that you know there are errors and you don't intend to fix them, but would rather show growth through your other stories.   Then, people like me that are just trying to help wouldn't.



Author's Response:

I'm not put out by them, in fact they have helped me grow as a writter.  It's just this is a completed story and I will not go back and fix the errors. 

 

Hugs

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532367
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

They just papissed off the  wrong momma!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse

It's all been great! Irs a fucing.mafia story for crying out loud. Theres going ro be bad,gritty, raw shit that gets written. If people can't deal with it, then fuck 'em!  YOU ARE GREAT!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 1: In Like Flynn

He's a good dad in all the important ways. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

Let the haters hate.

 

You are writing a mob fic..... shit's baaaaad af in mobs.Your writing is wonderful!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

Love your chapter! I'm excited for Bella ! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

For new Detective Isabella Swan, protecting the recluse professor of music from a stalker, sounded easy enough. They find themselves mixed in forbidden romance, filled with hidden ink and red lipstick kisses from a deranged stalker. AH/OOC 18&Up ONLY.

The Banner was made by Christag Banners...She is phenominal...Thank you, Christag.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82761 Read Count: 35244
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Sex And Drugged

renee.....or the no show bar workers...hmmm...idk!



Author's Response:

Jess and I update every Wed and the next chapter is the BIG reveal chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Thank you for the story love, and I hope that you continue to enjoy this story of ours.
Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso: Epilogue

loved it! the ending was great. we all hear people say, "don't stoop to their level!" but damn, sometimes it is soooo much fun!    love the kids too! awesome!



Author's Response:

Review Reply for Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso

 

Hello we are so sorry that this author’s response is so late in coming to you.  Jess and I are so very proud of the work we put into Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso, and working together on it was a pleasure for the both of us.  Thank you for the story love and appreciation we got from you along this journey.  We are both pretty open to answering questions regarding the story, so feel free to ask anything if you like.  There is no sequel planned for in the foreseeable future for this story.  We have been asked about Out-Takes and at this point that is also not a plan.  Jess and I have a story outline we are working on, but both have other projects that have to wrap, or age more before we really sink our teeth in.  We have almost the first full chapter written, however it will be no sooner than September 2012 before any of it will or would get posted.  Keep us on Author alert, who knows when we may change our minds…LOL 

Jess has a lot of wonderful story ideas that she is working on right now and they are great.  I am sure if you haven’t already, you would never regret checking out her other stuff she has already written either. 

I am currently working on His Cimmerian View with WeeKitty, it is published under Weekittyandtat.  I also have a few irons in the fire, but I don’t really like posting more than one story at a time.  I would rather give all my attention to one stories details.

We hope to see you again, and again thank you so very much for all of your support in this fandom we both love so much.
Kasi (& Jess)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: A Little Detective Work

screw not hurting anyone....i'd knock that effed up bitch out!



Author's Response:

I loved this review so much I skyped a copy to Jess so she could laugh with me.  I just loved it.  No worries thigns will move fast from here.  We only have the EPI yet to write.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi (&Jess)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The doctors at this busy, New York hospital all have the same goals; saving lives, setting the on-call rooms on fire, and maybe, falling in love? Grey's Anatomy concept with Twilight character twist. Canon Couples. Rated: M - Romance/Humor - Bella/Edward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199786 Read Count: 177593
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 18 Nov 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Loved every bit of it! Great story!

Summary:

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Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner!  Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!

To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35413
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Standing Appointments...

kudos for this. i  think u did a great job of writing it and following the prompt.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86571
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Outtakes Part 1

Loved the story!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218283
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Summer Time

loved it! the dinner with garett and peter was so amazing! great job!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

loved it...super sweet!  i'm just wondering what n the hell is going to HAVE to happen so that those two hard headed people finally get together??

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

u poor thing! thx for the update

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Very intriguing start!

 

Sorry I am just now able to start reading.  But then again, it works out...I don't have to wait for updates!  YET!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S

Looking forward to finding out more about Edward's past.

 

The Cullen home look a lot like my cousin's house here in Texas...I'll have to find a pic of it or go take one and send it to you!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

Jerks!  Thank God for Billy.....

I would love to read his POV throughout all of this at some point.  What do u think?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

awww...love esme and carlisle!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Her and Carlisle's conversation was nice.

 

Bless her heart, she's had to build this extraordinarily tough and impenetrable shield around her for so long that she is fighting her own battle.  She needs to learn to trust and not jump tp conclusion but then again......how has not jumping to conclusions ever benefitted her...it probably hasn't.  Poor thing.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Those grandbabies are just precious!  You need pics for them too!

 

And I love the pics being in this story, just as much as I did PLU...don't change it!

 

So proud of Bella!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

WoW!  Bella handled that pretty well.  I am kinda shocked at Jasper's method of questioning...he could have least said he didn't want to ask the questions but he felt a need to.   JERK!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

And this cliffie right here is the reason I am so glad I waited to read the story!

 

I loved the little chats they had and all the back ground information about everyone. 

 

What Emmett found out is heart breaking....looking forward to more on that later!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I read this chapter around 12:30 last night and tears slid down my face the majority of the time.  Man!  He is soooooo good with her!

 

"Stay"....OMG!   EPIC heart flutters!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

yay!  she really deserves it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

again....so happy i dont have to wait for the update...tho thats fixing to change next chapter.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

it couldn't be real life like if they just got all happy and had no kinks to work out.  great job...yeah the separation sucks....but it's for the best.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

i got it....i liked the way u did it...but now i have to wait with the rest of 'em! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

lordy they have a hole to dig themselves out of.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

i love the characters too! i squealed when i saw the update.   ppl really say this story is horse shit???  wtf r they snorting? this is a great story and has become my DEAR story. i love it and u...cant wait until next week!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

loved it

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

loved the chapter and am gad u r doing better.  just love that roscoe! he needs an award also!