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PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

He looks girly! Lol. Loved the chapter and all the progress! This story never needs to end. Thanks for all u do!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Michele,you r incredible! I'm serious! Wedding bells and babies sound wonderful.....I just don't want them to b rushed. I want to read about pregnancies at a normal fiction rate.....the conceptions and finding out r the most fun! But I am selfish and must say that I will read whatever u give us! Thanks so much u really r great!

Author's Response:

thank you and don't worry, we will take it nice and slow...

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Loved it!

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

wowza!  I loved it!  I truly do appreciate you not letting us hang like others would..on the edge of a cliff....struggling to find some sort of grip and foot hold!

 

Loved the turn of events!  Thanks for writing such an awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

There is no way I could do the cliffy thing - we don't do cliffies well around here, right?  I'm so glad that you liked it. Update will be next week like normal - this was just a bonus xoxo

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

thanks for the update...loved it. i m due n 9 days and thankfuly was never really sick all that much!



Author's Response:

oh my goodness! You will be a mommy before I update again!  I hope that everything goes well and please let me know what you have if you don't already know.  take care xoxo

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

loved the chapter! 

I hope people don't get offended that the chapter was mostly about carlisle and esme.  I think that this story is an EXCELLENT story.  In fact, it is one of my all time favorites! 

I think the other character plots in this story help MAKE the story so AWESOME!

So kudos to you!

It was a great chapter!

 

******

And yes I am a mommy, well I have been for almost 2 years now, but my second son was born on Monday.  He weighed 8 pounds 2 ounces and was 20 inches long.  He is perfect and everything is going well.  My other surgeries went well.  I am getting better every day, a little stronger every day and it hurts less and less to move.  Thank GOD for pain killers.

 

Take care!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

ok..I have one small but significant problem with the chapter.  I'm being serious here.

It could be that I'm from Texas and used to everything being bigger in Texas.........LOL...........but.....I just really HONESTLY don't think 75 acres is enough land for what all they are wanting to do!

Ok....E&B and J&A houses.....I'm guessing they are going to be big at least 5,000 square feet I am assuming.....even with multiple floors, their houses are going to sit on at least 2-3 acres of land.  Then, factor in swimming pools and yard space for playing, gardens, garages and driveways....that's going to take up about 10 acres per house.

Then, you'll need at least another 2 acres per barn....if you want working pens around the barn to catch the horses, work the horses, vaccinate the horses, etc.

You'll also need a security head quarters...a house of some sort that will need approximately 2 acres of land. 

Also, cottages....so that will be 1-2 acres of land per cottage. 

You'll need several pastures to be able to move the horses around so that they won't wear down the pastures/meadows that they are grazing from.  You'll also need pastures/meadows for baling hay.  Depending on the grass/rain/grasshoppers, etc.  if you want to bale hay....most people around here that are horse people don't bale their own hay......they get it from people in small square bales so they can feed a little at a time....and then they get Alfalfa from the northern states.......if you want to have them grazing...they could  be stall horses that stay in stalls most of the time....

you can get about 2 good sized round bales of hay an acre on a good year (around here right now you're lucky if you get a half a bale)......so if they are going to want to bale their own hay...you are going to need to have several acres of land to be able to bale....and then at that, I would want my pastures to not touch...in case of fire or bugs eating the crop.

So....I think for all you have written in this chapter you would need at least 50-75 acres of land for the houses, barns, cottages, working pens, etc.  Then another 25 for farm use.....hay baling...If you wrote where they would bale their own hay.

Then each horse needs about umm....a good 1-2 acres per horse, depends on the horse and like I said before...depending on the type of horse ranch...you might just want them to be in stalls the whole time and have elaborate barns. 

So, I would say you need a lot more than just 75 acres.....plus some of those acres are woodsy.  I would say you need at least 100 acres.....but that is just me and I am from TEXAS baby!  We like lots of BIG land and WIDE OPEN spaces!

 

 

Let me know what you think!
Too over the top for ya?!?!?! LOL!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Damn Teach! where the hell were you when I was researching my ass off for three days trying to work out how much freaking land I was going to need!!!!! Okay, so you are going to have to be my go to gal for this!!!!!  Do not be suprised if I email you to ask questions. I do  ride, but I have never lived or worked on a working ranch at all.  So yeah, 100 acres sounds good.

 

Thanks Teach.xoxo

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

i tel u a great story full of mystery and twists and turns along the way is city of sin on twilighted.....i is freaking awesome!  

loved bellas hour to shine and how in th f**k did luren and ang get to the chatteau place? it seemed like they just kind of popped up.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

it most certainly is work. the hubs and i are on a quck saturday night get away for our anniversary. we've gambled...he lost i profited...and ate a delicious seafood dinner. now we r resting in he big bed watching the world series [ GO RANGERS!!!!!!!! ] ..then we plan on gamblin some more then he is going to ravish me...agan! lol   i like the uspense u write in the story! 



Author's Response:

I hope that you got ravished several times, RT!  thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

what a beautiful name...congrats!

 

michele....i think the uncles were perfect!!!! outstanding! the pics wer amazing...as usual. i literaly squealed when i read the next installment's title!!!!  yay! cant wait but so glad SO GLAD we r continuing!!!!!  

 

if i could send u flowers i would!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

bd was good...i just wish there would have been more sexiness!

 

 

looking forward to the oscar's with this rowdy bunch!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

omg! i remember 2 years ago i would lay in bed on the weeknds and read your chapters with my baby nxt to me. now...how poetic....i am lying in bed with my now 2 year old and new 5 month old boy (2 boys) lying on either side of me....fancy way to end the story...just as i began it.cant wait for more...thanks for blesing us with your writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77040
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 World Champions

I love that Emmett and the rest of the guys won!  It just really sucks that the year after Edward retires he can't be apart of it.  I wouldn't have written it that way.  I would have given Edward the World Series.....but this isn't my story.

It's lovely.......I have really enjoyed reading it.   I agree with Bella......he should have taken care of his PRIORITIES first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I have the same damn problems with my husband!



Author's Response:

First let me say that I am so glad that you are enjoying the story.  Second, I know it seems a little harsh to let Emmett and the team win the world series the first year that Edward is not there with them. But I did it to show that Edward really is ok with being retired and that he has no regrets. He is happy for his brother and is happy with his new life with Bella.  So I hope that helps you understand why I did it that way.

 

Yes men don't often stop to think about the consequences of their actions,  do they? If I were Bella I would have been pissed too!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 It's Time!

omg!  I loved loved loved it!  I laughed and squealed and everything!!!!!!



Author's Response:

So  glad that you enjoyed it. I just thought that it would be a cool and exciting way for them to welcome baby Zachary into the world. And what better way is there to create a special bond between Edward and his son.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 No More Broken Promises

first of all ggoing back to my review about the World Series and your response to it....thank you by the way.....yes I do understand why you wrote it the way you did!  I think it was a great chapter....just a sad one for me.  I am to much of a sap to not try to make all my characters dreams come true.........but then that is where your chapter comes in and his dreams have changed and gotten to be a lot bigger.......and in this chapter , now...he has all his dreams and wants!  I do get it...I really do! :)

 

Second.....as far as this chapter goes......you made me cry!!!!!!!!!!

I know it wasn't intentional or anything.  My son is 10 months old and thankfully has been sleeping through the night since two months....yiiippppeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

 

But I remember waking up to my husband being that way and I can remember all those sweet pictures that I took of MY two boys.............it just made me a little emotional...........not to mention these new birth control pills I am on suck!!!!!!  They make me all kinds of hormonally crazy!



Author's Response:

Hi,  You know I get the whole make your characters dreams come true. I was very torn when it came time to have him retire and then again with having Emmett win the World Series. And as huge baseball fan it was hard to have Edward retire too, so it was sad for me too. I went back and forth over it many times. 

 

I have those memories of my hubs asleep with all three of our kids. The are definately some to treasure and hold on to forever. I'm sorry they made you cry, but happy that my story touched you that much. Does that make sense? LOL  

 

Ugh the hormonal crazies are not fun. The pill always made me feel like I was pregnant the way it toyed with my hormones sometimes.  Ten months is a fun age, still a baby, but they have developed their little personalities. I wish mine were still litttle. They grow so fast.

Thanks again for the amazing review. I am about half done with the next chapter, so hopefully it won't be too much longetr before its posted.

Mary

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Epilogue

loved it.......beautiful!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I am gald that you did. I hope to see ya when I take our favorite couple on their next adventure.put me on author alert so that you don't miss it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

EA

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Hall of Fame Induction Outtake

i saw this and was super excited to read it!  loved it!



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. It was a lot of fun to go back and visit them again. I haadn't realized how much I missed Baseballward until I went to write the outtake.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

EA

 

Summary:

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Banner by rpattz1990

Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 117152
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

SO IS BELLA GOING TO TELL HIM THAT THEY WERE THOUGHT TO OPEN UP FOR HER????  AND JUST FOR CLARIFICATION PURPOSES...SHE WAS A VIRGIN UNTIL TONIGHT?



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella was a virgin and No, because she wasn't sure they would get the deal.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

YES!  loved it!   What instruments or positions do the girls have in the band?  I am sure that will come in future chapters...but I just want you to know what I am thinking as I go. :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

hahahaha  I love it!  It is so awesome!  I am happy to be reading a fun loving story ....................so far!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

she is a tittybaby....crying all the time....i know people get really emotional hell I do.......but seriously?  And besides...if she and Edward were in the main house and the other couple were in the guest cottages...how in the hell did they hear them?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

so where are these songs coming from.....who really sings them?



Author's Response:

Besides the first one by Bob Carlisle and the two by Bon Jovi, I wrote all of them.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I will be honest...I have already read all this.  THese last few chapters I have just skimmed through to read the bigger paragraphs because those are the ones that are Edward's thoughts.  

I think you were too far into the story to go back to the very beginning and tell it from Edward's pov. 

So I am looking forward to getting back to Bella being in the hospital!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww.....so perfect!  I loved the last two chapters!  BRAVO!!!!!!!!

THe dream was excellent!  But I couldn't help but notice she didn't say that her belly was rounded or even mention a ring!?!?!?!?!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

like I said earlier whiny bag.......grow up...tht was nothing to cry about...........i hope it was just the meds talking!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

i like her and garrett's friendship!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

aaaawwwwwwwwwww..yeah!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68963
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 04 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob

Thank you!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 04 May 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob

Thank you!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Bella

Huh?



Author's Response:

Hi.  Sorry about delay in replying; just saw this.  The ending of this story sets up the sequel, My Heart's Desire.  I hope you read it if you have not.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Loved it! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Loved it! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

hahaha! i love a bella with a good backbone!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room

love alice....but am most definitely leary of Rose being in charge of sending the dresses off to the states...don't fucking trust her!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

freakin awesome family time.  too bad, bela should've really got to fuck the bitch up.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

i was waiting for something to happen. i just figured one of the crazy bitches had uploaded b and e's movies to the internet.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

ok...earlier in the story u wrote Mike Newton being in a celebrity baseball game with Edward and Mike being a boy bander......just thought I'd let you know.........and I assume that this 6 seconds of video is from B and E's home movies.....hmmmm......I wonder how that happened!?!?!?!?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman

i hope we aren't  even nearing the end........i want to read about bab making...and pregnancy...deliveries and growing up and badass daddyward!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

she needs to die!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda

kill her!  s'all i'm sayin.......

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Thanks for the updates! 

Summary:

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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Liked it! The dynamics were good!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  So sorry I didn't see this until now, 4 years later.  

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106302
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!  Keep it going!  I love a good dilfward story.........was this the one shot tht was posted somewhere else....or do I need to go find that?

I hope Bella makes it clear to him that she isn't usually that kind of girl.  Condoms?  He didn't know her that well....and besides he is a doctor...he knows these things!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

what a great day and night......the distance does suck.....but I am sure they'll work it out!

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Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved this one the best....i think because the cat kinda got let out of the bag..........it would be interesting to see what CARLISLE thought about it all...did he talk to Esme about it or keep it to himself...maybe something to put in an outtake! 

 

Super happy and grateful for the fast updates...keep doing a great job!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

such a great daddy!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i knew that was coming!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh that is soooo sad....he needs to get to her quick!  Screw Kate....but it does add drama!  And any good story needs some drama!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think ought to be put in jail and never get the privilege to see emma and edward EVER AGAIN!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

when they find that stupid psychotic bitch....can they LITERALLY rip her apart??????

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well, I loved it!

 

I am happy Kate was at least trying...even though her fucked up intentions were honorable...she went about it all teh wrong way!

Glad that Riley has a conscience...........I hope he turns her in!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

THANK GOD!

 

I was so bouncy!  I couldn't determine if we would see Emma with her rightful parents in this chapter or not by the way you worded it in teh AN.  I wasn't sure if getting through B and E's POVs in this chapter.......meaning one more to go......

When they got the call I spit out my water!

YIPPEEEEEE!

I want her to call Bella momma again!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

yeah...okay.........this is getting old......bring Emma back!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

yay!!!!  That was a good stepping stone!  Way to rock that lemon!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I had pre-eclampsia.....I delivered my son three and a half weeks early.....my BP got up to 170 over 110.......but I felt absolutely fine!  He is a thriving.....almost 10 month old now!!!!!!

 

I loved the update............man oh man you can tell Edward is really stressed out!

 

If Bella isn't careful...she is going to be heavily manipulated by Emma if she keeps buying her things.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

yeah...and  i imagine wiht all the foreshadowing and hint dropping I can safely come to the conclusion from making inferences that something BAD will happen!!!!!!!!!!!!  Just please don't let it be too bad!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

awww....!!!!!!!!!

 

I am soooo glad he handled the Jake shit the way he did!

Citrus Dreams by ash_golden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has a fun time reading while waiting on Edward to come back from his hunt. LEMONY. Vamps. OOC. All canon. Please review!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7998 Read Count: 1832
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yummy!!!!!!!  I like it!  Great job at hooking us!  I think this could definitely carry on as a story.....Bella ends up in Forks still having an "Edward" in the back of her mind.....Alice sees it all coming...Bella kinda taunts Edward who doesn't want to kill her as badly as in the original books and is more sexually amped up.....yes...I could definitely see this continuing!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it!  I really liked how Alice and Bella are on the same page!  Awesome!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok well....I will just tell you what I think....(isn't that what reviews are for???)

Anyways.......I don't care what you do...a series or whatever.  BUT you SHOULD continue it.

The only thing I have to say...and I am speaking not as a reader right now but as a beta.

I don't know how serious or intense you want your story to be.  Having said that, I think it would be good if you wrote how everyone around them in their lives whether it be at home, school, etc. comes to terms with this sudden and powerful relationship.

 

If I remember correctly, Bella is the 'new girl' in town.  How is everyone else going to think?........................  "the new girl and the untouchable Edward are sooooooo wrapped up into each other it is like they knew each other all along."

How would Charlie deal with it?

If they just start being in a heavy duty relationship how well do they know each other?  Are they picking up where they left off?  Did they leave off from some where?  What caused their dreams?

 

Does Bella have a dormant, but VERY powerful ability/power as a human that she will develop into when she becomes a vampire?

 

Are you going to write them getting to know each other...or how they fell in love?

I am afraid that if this story just dives right into being a sex-filled smutacular story.....then you could potentially lose a few of the readers....well, no not lose the readers....but I will be one to think....'well, if I am horny and want to read smut then I am gonna look up your story'

 

And there is nothing wrong with that AT ALL!.....but if you want a plot line I think you need to add more to it.

 

NOW...having said all of that.......I want you to keep it going.  I really like how you have them crazy in love with each other and everyone is shocked...like what in the hell is happening here...I would love to see how Charlie reacts.....as well as other people.  And most importantly, I want to see them being very loving and PDA and all that shit at school no holds bar...which is very much  unlike the original books!

 

And please.....if you bring Tanya, Lauren, or Jessica into this story as a means to cause drama and help develop your plot.....by all means that is fine!  But would you write it so that Bella kicks their asses!?!?!?!?!?!?  Maybe not Tanya because she is a vamp and Bella isn't at the moment.....but maybe Bella's talent could be that she gets into Tanya's head and causes her to go stupid or something!

 

It's just, hardly anyone writes Tanya (SLUT WHORE BITCH) getting her ass handed to her by Bella.....or any other bithc for that matter like Lauren or Jessica.....they always get it from Rose or Alice....I want to see Bella stand up for what is hers and hers ALONE!!!!!!!!

 

Now......how long was this crazy ass note?

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 158929
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Way to put up with the psycho !!!!!!!!!!!  Love this Bella!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

oh what the hell?!?!?!?!?!  Really...Ben......come on!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

way to let the bitch have it!!!!!!!!!  Atta girl!  I am thrilled that she is getting her fire back!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i figured Edward was gonna be the father....but I was hoping that JAsper would father Alice's baby............don't know why...and nothing is wrong with it....I am just a team belward all the way!

But the whole chapter was beautiful!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I bet Rose is too and is pissed because she stole her thunder!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

wow!!!!!!!!!  That is a shocker!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

hahaha  loved it!  I hate any and all things Tanya denali.......but this version isn't so bad.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

yay!!!!!!!!! can't wait!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

they are all so yummy and funny too!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

awwwww emmett!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

oh I couldn't even begin to guess!

I remember how that feels....I was pregnant throughout the summer with my son.  He came three weeks early and he will soon be a year old on August 7th.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) My kids were Nov,Dec, and Oct babies. We live in Texas so it was very Hot! Happy early birthday to your son!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

the seth thing was absolutely hilarious!  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Rude awakenings?? Um i know how i generally feel about them the more the merrier and to each is own....but for some reason...the three of them going at it while bella was asleep upstairs feeling down on herself ........well....that just rubbed me the wrong way.

Author's Response:

Thank you:) You have to remember that B/E/J had alot of sex while Alice wasn't about to, either:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yes, I know that B/E/J had a alot of sex.....but it still just didn't sit well with me.  I guess no matter how pervy and sexually deviant I am.....and no matter how much of a loving orgy type thing that I love to read about within your stories...(CAUSE I REALLY DO)...........I am just still a pro bella and edward all the way.......bella, edward & jasper are great....really great....but alice, edward & jasper...I don't know....if it can't be bella with them all, then I want to be like bella or protect bella and if bella can't be in it....then nobody can be in it.

Crazy...right?????  I know.........maybe it's the crazy hormones...I don't know.

My husband was a grooms man for some friends of ours wedding this weekend......the weekend before that he was at the bachelor party.  I couldn't go to the bachelorette party because of something else that I HAD to attend to.....but.....when I found out they went to a tittybar....and he said he didn't do anything bad...yes I believe him....but still, it just seemed to have brought out my REALLY BAD jealous streak...and then yesterday was the wedding.  My husband doesn't dance...EVER! Maybe for a total of 45 seconds at our wedding with me only.....and he was fucking frolicking along with the bitch that he got paired up with from the bridemaids'.............can you tell I am fighting some weird ass demons here..........I am rambling. GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I get it!!! Trust me, I do but I have to show that Alice/Edward/Jasper have that connection too. But I do get what you are saying.

And, I'm sorry your husband was an ass with the dancing. MEN!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76112
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh why did you have to go and bring two bit slut bag cunt whore into this?

 

I like your story so far!  I just really hate Tanya!

 

 

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that would suck!  But think about it.......after they get their relationship going.....wouldn't it be fun to lick all that chocolate off of him?!!!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i can see where in his mind he would think that she had great submissive abilities...always looking down...

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

peter is an ass!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

well I hope Edward would be the one at the door!

 

Atta girl Bella for getting Peter where it hurts.....slimey douchebag!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

no i didn't but was pleasantly surprised....good move!  Looking forward to more................especially when she finds out what the hell is going on!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well that sucks..................i am sooooooooooo glad two bit crackwhore got thrown the fuck out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Jasper and Edward find themselves out of luck in adopting a child, Jasper decides it is time to try a new route. What sacrifices will this couple make to become parents? Can Bella make their dream come true? Written for the FGB auction. JxE and eventually JxExB


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29005 Read Count: 22157
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue: EPOV

I liked it a lot! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast

They are sweet! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV

Awe!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183957
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Rescue

Loved it!    Can we get a future take please?  I'm interested in what happened with the volturi, Jane as  rose and Emmett's servant, the baby, Emmett's charges, etc.



Author's Response:

Lol, you're not the only one who would like to have a sequel to this story, but unfortunately I invested a lot of time in it and didn't get quite enough incentive to continue it. If I got 3000-4000 reviews on FF instead of about 750, I would have gladly written a sequel, but not with less then 20 reviews per chapter... Sorry.

We're Married by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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1st Place Winner!! Til Death Do Us Part O/S Contest Entry:A drunken night lands four friends in Vegas with the purpose of getting married. Best friends getting to share their day with each other, but their spur of the moment nuptials don’t turn out as planned.AU/AH/OOC/ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7101 Read Count: 2054
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: We're Married

Great one shot! 

Summary:

Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 38352
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Las Vegas

hilarious!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chicago

I did enjoy Edward's POV...sometimes he is really refreshing!  LOL!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Dallas

i loved the length of it!  THe compassion in this chapter is wonderful!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Lubbock

I am from Texas.............go HORNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

lol, I'm from Texas, too. WE are huge Horns fans!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: San Diego

all of their hormonal outbursts and the guys sticking their feet in their mouths is sooooo damn funny!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Home Sweet Home

sounds like they had fun...i want some fun too!

 

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Wouldn't that be a good kind of fun to have, too?  :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches

loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Hormones, Grammies, and Baby

awwww!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Hurry, Baby, Hurry

aaaaawwwww  that is soo sweet!

 

And DAMN right....edward cut it close!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Baby, one more time!

wow!  You skipped ahead a whole year!  I think that's great, but what happened when Breaking Dawn had to go out on tour........did little Charlie stay at home with Bella?  Did they go together as a family?

Say you are going to write the European tour with little Charlie and the rest of the babies around!?!?!?!

 

I can see it now!............PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Well, Breaking Swan didn't go back on tour during the year because they were focusing on a new album, Charlie's birth, then Olivia's and Aubrey's.

 

And I might write another one covering the European tour but I don't know yet. At times this one got really hard to write and I would have to do a ton of research on Europe before I could do it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor.  But in this story, things are not always what they seem.  Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot.  Canon and non-canon couples.  Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc.  Various POVs.    

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(Banner above by the amazing Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com)

 

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Categories: King Arthur/Merlin, Twilight, Crossover, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC, King Arthur/Guinevere, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance, Love and Faith, Supernatural
Series: Finished, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155108 Read Count: 21896
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Outtake

Sad to see it go withput a glimpse into King Edward

and Queen Isabella's lives on the throne with children

of their own ajd the other character's comimg and goings,

but it was a lovely story!

 

Jasper/Mordred is a complex character and I am glad

you gave us this final letter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!  I am so sorry for the delay in responding.  Tbh, Jasper/Mordred was my favorite in this.  A truly evil man who was almost defeated by love of all things.  And now his legacy lives on in Rosalie.  

Summary:

 

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Bella is not supposed to date a cop like her father, but when she meets Deputy Cullen, that all goes out the window. They try to keep their relationship a secret while they can't keep their hands off each other.

My o/s entry in the FML contest from FF.net that made it into the top 20. Originally posted on FF.net 1/31/10.

Awesome banner by Robrator for thetwilightawards.com


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4554 Read Count: 1355
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2010 Updated: 23 May 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251278
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Loved!