Penname: the real teacher [Contact] Real name: Kortney
Member Since: 31 Jan 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Married, mother 2 small boys, teacher.  Insanely addicted to all things twilight and Edward/Robert.  It is very sad actually!  Love Diet Coke, sweet tea, double stuffed oreos and milk, snuggling, rough-hot sex, and did I mention Edward?  Yep!  I thought I did!


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1461438
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

YAY!!!!!!  They made it out of there quick fast and in a hurry!!!!!!!!  The pictures are awesome!  I love those!  Great idea!

Yes, I am joining you from ff.net...so this is my first time here as well as the first review!!! 

Loved it!  I hope Victoria starts to adapt a little better!

I am totally a EDWARD/BELLA fan, but I am glad Jacob is here.....this is going to add something new to the mix!!!!!!!!!!!  YAY!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

oh no you didn't leave us there!  That is ridiculously evil!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

damn.....what the hell was edward doing?  Taking a shit or something!!  I am going to say that, that worked out the way it did for  story's sake....cause that would never have happened otherwise!

 

Update ASAP!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

thank god for small miracles.............stupid ass left his phone yippppeeee!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

thank  god!  ready for more!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I think it sounds like a good idea...............now....are we going to get to see what Aro has in store? And if they do give James to Aro.....how will Laurent and that other woman be explained and/or dealt with?  I know Laurent is dead and all...but that other stupid bitch will probably talk!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

awwww really...it has to end!  Great job so far with everything and major KUDOS and PROPS to you and your team for having a vision and making come true with this site!  EXCELLENT!

Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***WARNING:  This story contains heartfail, adult themes, violence, abuse, sexual situations, and is not intended for readers under the age of 18.***

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76124 Read Count: 19625
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Outtakes!

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Whispers

Rode and.vic are great!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Doctor, Doctor, Give Me the News

:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Buried Memories Ain't No Walk in the Park

I think Carlisle's actions were perfect for his situation! Hell, he's not in his doctor's office!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Adam

Loved it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Everything's Coming Up Rosie

He's gonna paaaaaaaaayyyyyy!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: I Always Feel Like Somebody's Watching Me/Evil

Bash his head in! 

Road Maps by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

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It's now six years later; Bella is graduating from Dartmouth, Edward is in Med School. How have their lives changed over the years and what's to come down the road?

AU-Human, rated NC-17 for mature language, mature subject matter, talk of abuse.SEQUEL TO BRANDED.  Please read Branded before reading this story.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149939 Read Count: 18029
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Mar 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue-Bittersweet Symphony

Loved!  If you continue, please post the info about it on this story so we will know!

Great characters!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 34: RUN!

Should have let emmett kill the fucker!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Les Bonnes Nouvelles

I figured she was. Yay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Endings and Beginnings

Loved! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 32: A Peanut By Any Other Name

So sweet! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Bon Temps

Sounds good to me! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Road Trip!

Sweet! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Lazy Day Compromises

Fun chapter!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 23: The Sperm Donor

Edward ahould have hit hack. .. beat that man's ass to a bloody freaking pulp!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Daddy Dearest

It was a devastatinglywell written chapter. I cried and bawled my eyes out.......I know this is fiction, but you and I both know that there are so many babies/children that witness that torturw daily. And it completely shatters my heart.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 27: IT'S A ---!!!

Loved!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Hormonal Horrors

I wasn't allowed to have sex either....i was on bed rest for over 3 months. 

 

Oral was wonderful and bc my poor husband was worn smooth out,  we got a vibrating toy.....that was a life saver! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 278734
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow!  What a fuck fest!

I played hop scotch all the way over here.......I marked the tour as my faves a couple of weeks ago and was going to start reading it this morning when I realized it was a sequel..so I went to your page and saw the sequel to this story,,,faved it and the outtakes...and that lead me to here.............so this is where I will begin..........everything!

BTW.....I love me some slash/girl on girl!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hahaha  you are wating no time in getting them dating!  I like it ;)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

that is sooo freaking funny....rose and emmett all pure...........hahaha  keep on preaching!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

those two are adults......what in the hell are their parents thinking....they lost all control over them when they went away to college!  

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

hmmmmmm that was a little weird.......gotta go read more so that I find out!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

i couldn't help but want to slap the shit out of Renee if she were my mom!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

oh no!!!!!!!!!!  Glad everything has worked out so far!!!  I have a feeling this dinner isn't going to go all that well.............well maybe for kate and alex.....................................

 

I am a little suspicious of who Charlotte is.........................maybe Jasper's momma????????

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wowza!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

i thought his momma might ba called charlotte!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

hehehehehehehe  I love it when I am right!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

popping the question I suppose?????????

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I knew it!!!!!!!!

 

HAHAHA  This is sooooooooooooooo freaking hilarious!  Now the parents are swingers!!!!!!!  I love it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

this is crazy insane.............every body is with a three others...they are all connected and all together!!!!!!!!  It's QUADS everywhere!!!!!!!!!!!!  HAHAHA..........its great!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

so....all i can think of is mid life crises...no not really those..............um.............just mid life lifestyle changes.........yeah that works....for all the parents!!!!!!!!!

Roes, Emmett, Kate and Garrett are just getting swept up into it all!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I want a C-mas like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

hahaha  i love it!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

wow I am shocked!  Of course you would make her lose her memory.....oh please let her get it back fully intact as to what has been going on!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it!  Lots of laughs!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 82896
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 30 May 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake 2: Jacob & Victoria

Loved this! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Level headed isn't always the way to go sometimes!  Definitely follow your heart! 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awe! I lost my dad to cancer so I know how it feels!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Loved it! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 360450
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

the pics are wonderful!  So glad I found this story!  Good luck with it!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

it was nice to see his side of things!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

yay!  It's getting closer!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

it is crazy for me to remember what all they had to do and go through back in those days!  This was very tastefully done!  Great Job!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

loved it!  It was sad to see her go.....but I have a feeling that things are just heating up!  Do we get to see Tanya beheaded?  PLEASE!!!!!!  I can't stand her!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

I have already said this once.....I am so glad I have found this story!  I believe I have read your work before, if not...your name was very familiar to me.  On twilighted I am just teacher...on this site as well as ff.net I am the real teacher....so IDK...maybe I have read you before!

 

Nonetheless.......I have loved what I have read so far and am really looking forward to more!

 

Good luck with those babies of yours...my son is trying to start walking...............when that starts I don't know how I am going to get to sit at the computer and read!  LOL!



Author's Response:

My trick...baby gates surrounding them in a childproofed area where I sit in the corner and can see the whole room.  That way, I can still supervise, but if I get wrapped up it's relatively safe.  IT's hard to really get into what I'm reading/writing, which is why I do that mostly during naps and after bedtime at night... but it helped to save my sanity a bit :)

 

I'm not sure if I recognize you or not, but I'm on all three sites with the same penname.  I'm glad you're enjoying this and I hope you check out some of my other stories :)  Thanks for all of the great positive feedback :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

I hate Tanya!  I hate Tanya!  I HATE TANYA!!!!!!!!!

 

I know we have to have her in here for drama's sake and all that....but please let Bella pull rank on her and say, "off with her head"...I know as of right now, that is not Bella's nature....but just once, I would love, Love, LOVE Bella to get Tanya good, long, and hard!



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!  Ahhhh...thank you for the laugh!  The situation with Tanya will come up before too long and I haven't completely mapped out how I will resolve it yet, but I'll make it good.  :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

well.....I am glad all that got handled swiftly!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

such a nice talk between carlisle and bella!  Good luck with RL!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

well hot damn Alice!

 

I can't wait for Rose and Emmett to meet!  That ought to be good!

Will you let Bella stand up for herself in the future?  I loved Alice doing it, but noone ever writes Bella kicking Tanya's skank whore ass!

 

As you know....I can't stand the character of Tanya....off with her head!

Oh.....Edward is gonna be pissed!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

well I am not sure if I reviewd the latest chapter or not...but anyways here it is.  I love how Kate is going right back to tell Tanya (whore slut bitch) that is going to be soooo good!

Bella and Edward HAVE TO communicate with each other!  It is mandatory...........if she would just tell him what her thoughts are and vice versa, nothing would be able to be blown WAY out of proportion!

But I have a feeling you knew that already!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

awww....yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Even tho there was no beheading, I can still hope that the wench gets thrown overboard!!!!! HAHA!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Fighting fire with fire........hmmm...I like that!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

ahhhh come on out big daddy king c!  I think it is awesome that he is putting up a united front....I mean I wouldn't expect anything less but him acknowledging that fact is hott!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

well....just because I hate anything and all things related to Tanya, I hope the bitch burns!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Here are names that I think are timeless.

 

Jocelyn

Mattilyn

Adriana

Grace

Anabelle

Jaquelin

Matthew

Johnathan

Brian

Napolean...hahahaha

um....thats all I got at this moment.....the boy names aren't so great!

 

I am glad you didn't made a big spectacle out of the coronation...it moves the story along well!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

thank god she is okay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

Thank goodness they were all okay!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

I loved it!  I know we are getting to the end.... I am soooo sad!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

oh these dreadful tears!!!!!!!!!!!

Sad to see it end as well!

Nicely written!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3962]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 970296
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

god his over reactive outbursts are as bad as her stubborn streaks.....they get old!

Those two both need to grow up!

WHy should she want to tell him anything EVER if he is ALWAYS going to fly off the handle about it!?!?!?!



Author's Response:

That's what I said - hopefully they will learn..

thanks for the review

xoxo

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i am glad you didn't retell everything......nice chapter!

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Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

SO SORRY!  The first two chapters I read off of my phone and it isn't easy to review from my cell. 

So now that I am at home......I will review.

 

I really love the story so far!

I like how it isn't juvenile.   Some NC-17 stories are just written poorly.  This one seems to be really, very good!  I can't wait to continue reading!

 

I love how they are both dancing around their inner selfs...their desires....it's great!  Makes for great angst!

 

Keep it up!  I know you have written several chapters from here on out so I won't review every single one unless I feel the urge!  But keep it mind that I really like it so far and am looking forward to continuing it!

 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think it was pretty good!  My  knowledge of BDSM is mediocre......so I think it is believable!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think it went well!  There is just a lot to learn!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

you might try to re-read your stories....lots of errors....but very good...I was laughing in scared anticipation!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wear the bracelets all the time...not the collar necklace!  That wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am loving it!  Bella is little bit by little bit opening up!  Yes Edward has to be patient with her...and understand what she comes from.

 

I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to her apartment and vehicle.  I know that sounds so bad because Edward didn't fall in love with her for her material things...I just think his heart will be broken and he will be mad that she has to endure that.

Kudos to Alice and Rosalie for making the best of the situation.

 

I hope Anglea isn't dead somewhere...but regardless....the news of her not showing up will hurt Bella......and I have a feeling that she won't show up!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hate it for them but Edward is right in that he has to be consistent! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

thanks for review

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

nicely done!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I meant to say  more with my last review......but some how it cut me off and I just now noticed it.

What I was going to say was that Edward needs to open up and TRUST Bella as well....with all that preaching he does to her, he might need to take his own advice.

I think he was very VERY much in the wrong...he desereves to feel frightened and worried that he has finally pushed her too far.  He isn't perfect and needs to understand that NOW he has some MAJOR groveling to do!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I think you did a great job of getting their emotions out in the open....each time they have one of these talks...they tend to open up a little bit more!  Nicely done!



Author's Response:

I had to have them talk - I was getting hives from their crossed wires!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great!  ....but i have this feeling like something bad is going to happen that causes her to move out...............and live with edward permanently......



Author's Response:

That's what I told her to do, but she is just so flipping stubborn! I got a feeling...yeah me too

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Well, happy birthday...I know it's late and all but still!

I liked the chapter.  It gavge the story an overall bit of excitement with Bella running into trouble out and about as well as in her own building.  The RIley thing is just too funny.....and it always leaves things open in the future that can get a rise out of Edward!  HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!

Now is most definitely the time to remember to follow her instincts and move the hell outta there!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I agree with Bella.....he needs to get the hell over it if she doesn't tell him something right away.  It takes some time to figure out what you are feeling and make sense of it all.  I think she told him at the best time.    Now she did drop the ball on the communication thing with what Jim said to her in the hallway.....THAT she should have told to Edward!

 

let's beat Carol's ass!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

yes I would love to see that outtake of Jasper and Alice.  I believe very PASSIONATELY that ALice has every freaking right to be pissed off, hurt, felt betrayed...all of the above!

I think Jasper fucked this up all on his own.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Well I am glad that they worked all that out!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

me too! :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

yay! baby time! i am du in 3 weeks. this is my most fave story im reading so forever sounds awesome! thanks fr the c,hapter!



Author's Response:

hey!!! Great to hear about the baby, Momma!  I hope that you will still find some time to drop by after those 2 a.m. feeds...

xoxo

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOVED THE LENGTH OF THE CHAPTER!

Yeah...something definitely isn't right with Bella's neighbors.

I get frustrated with Bella and Edward.I can see why Edward doesn't want Bella to use derogatory terms with herself.....but every now and then a girl just has to lash out and show her emotions and display and say hpw she really feels.....and she gets punished for it.......I think tht is crap.....but I could never be a sub in that context either.

I know Edward has rules for her to follow......but damn.......he is a little stiffling.....hot as hell tho!



Author's Response:

thank you for the review - he is a little ott but that's why we love him right?

TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

thanks for the teaser.....and yes that is why we love him!

 

If you had to pick anybody for Riley to look like.....who would that be?  I loved your descriptions of him....but I need to see somebody!



Author's Response:

matthew mcconaughey - that's who I saw in my mind - that slightly crinkled, irresistable smile, that not so hidden twinkle in the eye... the body that just doesn't quit - what do you think, can you see him in the leather and levi's?

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

i did love it!

I am glad Bella is 'manning up' of you will!  She will knock the paps on their asses!!!!!!!!

Oh and yeah.....the Mathew McConahey image.........yummmm! I know I didn't spell his name correctly but I got the correct image alright!!!!!! HAHAHA!



Author's Response:

thank you! As for MM? Who cares about the spelling - it is the six pack on top of the six pack that I relate to - as well as that irresisable smile and that twinkle in his eyes...hmm!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

we definitely want to see the teen years!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

ok so I am not upset by her weaknesses.  It is human!  My fists clenched and my toes stiffened in anger. 

Edward ought to mother fucking know how Bella feels.  He can reassure her all damn day long and make her feel good, but he is a complete dumb shit idiot if he thinks that she is going to go to this play party and not feel inferior!  It is human freaking nature!

I was pissed the hell off too!

As much as I would like to try to be his submissive I wouldn't have been able to stay there any longer.  Bella got hit after hit to her emotional state.  Whether it was anger, jealousy, nervousness, possessiveness....it doesn't matter.  That was her first time with him being there.........he is a freaking hot as hell actor that anybody would love to have...especially those little dim witted bitches.

Yes, I would have faked getting sick, said red, whatever the hell I had to do in order to get him out of there and take my collar off so that I could tell him exactly how I felt.

I know she has rules............I am just tellinng you how this chapter made me feel and what I would more than likely do.  I'm not saying that is what she should have done.  

But I would have been one pissed off bitch!

There....I think I feel marginally better....I think I could keep going on and on but that would be a waste of time!

Have a good week!



Author's Response:

And this is why you and I do not belong to this very special group of people who embrace this lifestyle!! *giggles*  we would probably be banned for life!

And believe me, from the research that I have done, people who do live this life every day seem to be so very dedicated and serious about it.  Their dedication and devotion to their Dom/sub is awesome.  I really battled to write this chapter, because I had to see both of their sides of the events. I bleated like a stuck sheep to my beta on more than one occasion!

so, onward and upward, I think you will be happier about the next chapter :)

thanks for the comments and reviews.

Michele

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I think this was an adequate balance! Nicely done!

Author's Response:

thanks teach :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

jake and jim

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

loved it!  Thank god you didn't drag this out!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

i really want to say thank you for updating on Saturdays!  I always look forward to it!  This chapter was so long!  Thanks for all your writing.  I kow its hard to sit down sometimes and crank out thousands of words!  So bravo! 



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review - this week I have been stuck on the next chapter and if it wasn't for Fiorella, chapter 45 would just be lines of drivel - but thanks to her, I'm all cranked up to write. So, it does get hard, but this chapter just kind of wrote itself - Charlie and Bella needed to get this out.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

great chapter..and I got it early!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - I couldn't sleep and decided to post early

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Loved it!  They have progressed so much!  YAY!!!!!!!!!!  I like Jared Leto as well......I remember him more as the actor.....but yes I am a fan a BIG fan of 30StM as well....he has that UBER sexy voice and eyes....but is way too little for me.....I need a tall masculine man.....he's great to look at...but too scrawny.  I love his look in the video From Yesterday.....something about that eyeliner and that red tipped hair.................yumm!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I hate those kind of weeks!  glad u got through it!!

Loved the chapter!  Thanks for updating.  However, the pics weren't showing up.  The only pic that I was able to see was the little girl with her easter basket.  The pics didn't show up on my phone or my laptop.  I would love to see the pics, please!



Author's Response:

hey Teach - I have no idea what the hell I did wrong, but if you have an idea, please let me know! I'm going to try and load these for you now.  

EDWARD AND EMMETT

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Loved it!  Thanks from the bottom of my heart for this story.....it has gotten me through my pregnancy.  I am now 8 months pregnant.  I used to look froward to every Saturday morning because there would be a new chapter in my inbox.  But now anytime I get an update I stop everything and read it!

 

SO THANKS A MILLION!!!!!!  I don't ever want this story to end!  You have such a good way of bringing new things to the table and keeping us on our toes!   WONDERFUL!



Author's Response:

Oh hey there mom-in-waiting!  That is so cool - I just hope that you will find time to read when baby is here (between midnight and 4.a.m??)  You look after yourself now, TRL, and look after the 'baby Teach'  as well

Michele xoxo

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Loved it!   I am so jealous of those birthing suites.....I wish they had something like that where I had my boys!   June 26th huh?  I had my second son, Korbin, on June 27th.  My birthing 'suite' (LOL HAHAHA) was plain and sterile with that phony 'compfy' lookin' fold out chair/bed.....my husband despises those things....they are not comfortable at all and no snacks were provided!   But the characters had money to buy all that stuff with....we're just hard working middle classers!

 

I loved the chapter but it makes me kinda sad to say that with every chapter we get closer to the end.  I have been reading this story for soooo long, since the beginning and it makes me soooo sad.......shortly after my son was born and all throughout my second pregnancy and the birth of my second son.   so it's a bit emotional for me to think about the end.

 

Take care!