Reviews by Shasta53
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153111
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Shasta53 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Home Away From Home

I am truly enjoying this story and if truly would like another beta, I'm happy to volunteer. Our has a by original plot and there are very few others willing rt touch a subject you Nate handling well. 

A couple of things I've noticed Nate that guy tend to switch tenses. Pick past our present and stay there. Also, a polygamist is a person, usually a man, that is married to more than one person at a time. The marriage is polygamous. They live in a polygamous community, not a polygamist community. The people are polygamists.

Good premise. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Shasta53 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Times Are Changing

I don't understand the concept of maintenance spankings. Can you help here?

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324377
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Shasta53 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Our First Night

Good chapter! There is no "barrier" though. If there was, menstruation would be impossible. The pain comes from being improperly prepared. :) Glad they are trying.