Reviews by Kimbo ACP
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Carlie are twins with mysterious powers.What's the fallout after they are abducted by a psychotic vampire? OOC! mostly canon pairings some OC's

NOW COMPLETE!

BEING BETA'D AS OF 9/19/10

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240263 Read Count: 18343
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Goodbye Sunshine, Hello Hell.

This is a good story. I was laughing so much half the time my sides were slpitting and I had happy tears. Love the term Furploding by the way. Carlise and Bella's relationship was good through the whole story. I liked how the wolves and vamps got along as well.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

The next door neighbour Jim is James Denali. I kind of figured that out at the beggining of the chapter.



Author's Response: Here I thought that I was being so flipping clever! thanks for the review

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

What is happening with James and Jacob? I want to know what they are up to know.



Author's Response:

all in good time Kimbo!! Geez, so impatient.  you will know it when they get there...promise - thanks for the note xoxo

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

It's me going to ruin it again. Hehe. Please let Anderson and Brian get to the girls in time. I really don't want the girls hurt in any way.

Is Laurent going to figure it out?

It's not fault that I put together all the clues to everything before you write it all out.

Again sorry if I ruin anything.



Author's Response:

You are awesome and you don't ruin anything - you just keep me on my toes :)

(it's actually quite scary that there is someone out there who's mind is as warped as mine..)

xoxo

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

They couldn't have Jacob as well? Oh well better then nothing at least.  I laughed when Rose said she missed cause that was just funny.

 

This chapter had to be the best in the whole story. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time.

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I figured that Rosalie was pregnant a few chapters ago. Didn't see that one coming. Note the scarcasm.

Can't wait to find out what she is having. Keep the name a secret till she has the baby that's what keeps me interested. You can tell us the sex and give us clues to the name which could actually be a good thing for you.

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

I think that you have Bella and Charlie's relationship perfect in this chapter I know from personal experience what it is like and you wrote it prefectly. I have just one question are you going to put Renee in the story as well?



Author's Response:

Hmm - that's a good question - she will make an appearance, but not now though. thanks for the review

To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

You can't let Jasper die. But at least Bella got to see him.

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135418
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow twists at every turn. Can't believe how this story is turning out. Hope that James goes to jail.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Finally the Vampire Whisperer is here. It took long enough for him to get here. Can't wait till they hand Edward his arse. This story is one of the best I have ever read.



Author's Response: Lol, thanks for sticking with me during the build up! Things are going to steamroll right along for awhile now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

The quote was to easy it's from Crossroads.

This story always gives me a little laugh when they are having an arguement.

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

Quote was easy Miss Congeniality (think that;s how you spell it). I loved the little fight they had over the tre in this chapter.

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

It's sad to see a good story end. I have read this from the stat and can't believe that it is over.

I'm glad that they have a happy ending.

Thank you for all the hard work that you put into this story and I'm happy to hear that you actually accomplished something on a list. I shoulds give that a try sometime.

Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41118
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

I can't believe that this story is finished please do Edward's POV for this story. Can't wait to read it.



Author's Response:

Thanks and I guess it's probably safe to tell you that I've just posted his POV. 

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I have been reading this since the start and I think this is my first review. I just want to tell you that I was a bit upset that it wasn't a Bella and Edward story but can I just say that it was a good story even if it was a little dark in some places. I'm glad that Bella got her happy ending in the end she deserved it after everything that happened to her. The only thing that will really bug me is what happened to Jessica Stanley? But you answered that question for me even if it will leave me scartching my head. I will be reading the alternative story as well.

Broken Roads by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Third story in FBI saga: Bella is lured back into the FBI when one of the team is hurt. Will she be able to find the perp before they strike again? Cannon coupling, language, and lemons. AU&NC-17

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116669 Read Count: 63828
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2011 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I knew you weren't finished with Bella being with them.



Author's Response:

Hehe, nope!