Reviews by amity10
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366589
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Crash & Burn

Wow, that's just wow, loved it. I hope they can work it out, didn't exactly see Emmett trying to stop his brother from living a normal life and doing normal things like; drinking, tattoos, motorcycle riding etc. Not Bella's fault at all.

Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

AWWWWW...the are both hurting so much, I know this is a story but you have turned them into real people for me and I actually feel bad for them, I guess that's the mark of a great author. 

Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light

Excellent and REAL, life isn't always shits and giggles and that's part of the reasons I do a little happy dance when this story updates.



Author's Response:

Yeah for happy dances!!  I've been doing mine over here because the end of this mess is finally beginning!!  Edward's got a plan and there's no way for Bella to misinterpret it.

Summary:

Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 38447
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Baby, one more time!

Sorry for not reviewing before now. I got so caught up in the stories that I just had to finish them...fantastic...please consider doing another sequel for the European tour. I'm sure you would have lots of happy readers, me just being one of them. Thanks.   



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I might, I'm just not too familliar with Europe so it would take alot of research on my part.

Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Boston

Hi there, hey probably a stupid question or I have been really tired (reading this while my daughter is in hospital) but has Victoria been in the story prior to her being the Omega. Where does she fit into the whole scheme of things? Thanx.



Author's Response:

Victoria was in the first one as one of the reporters who asked her a question at the press confrence at Charlie's bar. I brought her in as Omega because it was unexpected.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135059
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

Wow, just wow, I really don't know what to say apart from OMG, that was so heartfelt and well written. Thankyou. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Dark Moon by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella told you the story of our life together, which according to her human memories was correct, she told the story, as she believed it to be. The problem with human memories is that they fade and become blurry over time. Vampire memories are stronger and more reliable. Not to say that Bella didn’t tell the story as she remembered it, but I remember it a bit different than she did.

There was quite a bit she had no knowledge of. A lot of things that happened with my family that she couldn’t know about and I never revealed to her. This is the story she wouldn’t have known to tell. My hope is that it will clear up a few misconceptions…

 

 

Edward Cullen


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115560 Read Count: 6233
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-Strategies

Excellent, as always!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: amity10 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-The Truth

He's no Alice..lol, love it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's no Alice, but we love him anyways.