Reviews by lynsrob
Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55122
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Sixpence for the Richer

The ring and flower girl's dress are beautiful. I never heard of the sixpence for your shoe, but I like it a lot.



Author's Response:

The sixpence thing was something I found doing all the wedding research and I fell in love with it!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Wedding Bells!

Your description of the wedding was wonderful, the conversations so enjoyable, I was giggling and crying. That was an incredible lemony ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks...that was my first wedding and my first lemon of that variety as a writer...I was so scared to write them both.  Happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Without You

Great job with the furniture, everything was obviously done with Edward in mind. Our loving duo seemed to handle the distance better than expected, can't wait for their reunion.



Author's Response:

Bella definitely thought about Edward's taste, which mean I had to too, but I love doing the research and apartment hunting for these stories!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Little Things

This was a beautiful birthday chapter and a beautiful story. Loved each and every chapter, even a couple of the hard ones. I can't wait to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing your wonderful words.



Author's Response:

This review means so much to me.  This story was my baby and the love that I've gotten for it means the world to me, especially from all the people who found me over here after the move! 

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Sounds like maybe her eggs didn't take.



Author's Response:

People have two guesses, from looking at your later reviews...you guessed both!  I will tell you this, it happens in the first year of marriage.  Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Plans, Parties and Portland

Bella's wedding dress is beautiful. The other dresses are lovely as well. I just had a terrible thought. Could it be in the prologue that Bella found out she has cancer again? I pray not, I don't think I could handle that.



Author's Response:

Bella's dress took me a while to find and I kept looking...it was something I started looking for it in the original!  Although I won't give the answer, especially in reference to the prologue...Bella's fear over her mortality will play a role in this story.  Sorry to be cryptic!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: One Hand, One Heart

Beautiful wedding, I loved all the music selections they were great. Can't wait to find out where Edward is taking Bella.



Author's Response:

The music was originally a poll over at ffn with some of my fave music...the honeymoon location was something I found very early and then had to keep a secret from my sis for months so i was very Edward-like in that way.  THanks for the reviews~

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella Notte

Christmas and New Year's were wonderful, can't wait for your next update so I can get my fill of E & B love. Thanks for sharing your wonderful stories.



Author's Response:

Awe...I'm working on the next chapter so it shouldn't be too long.  I'm so glad you like the stories!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Many Shades of Love

Sounds like E & B had a very Happy Valentine's Day. Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Well after the disaster that was last year, he wanted to do something special!

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The City She Loves & the Place We Call Home

This chapter was wonderful, so much bonding with E & B. The NY trip was fun to read about & Leah's little rant about getting her away from Esme was adorable. I missed this story so much and I'm very glad you updated.

Author's Response:

Thanks, it took a long time to get it out...but I really love this story and its getting to one of my favorite parts of the story now.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lynsrob Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: I Would Die for That

Thank you for leaving us with the happier ending of that chapter. So bad about Eli, but at least he's alive and sounds positive. Congrats to Edward and Bella and their 2 new little ones. Looking forward to another update.