Reviews by teamcullentwimom
Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: teamcullentwimom Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really like the story so far.  I have one question?  Whose baby does Rose have on her hip in chapter 5 when the Cullen's meet Bella.  It can't be hers because you said in this chapter that she doesn't have children.  You may have said who the baby was and I just missed it. I'll have to read that chapter again.  Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Darn it! I thought I fixed that! Okay... lets just say that Rose was... babysitting? Yeah... sounds good to me. Sorry, someone pointed it out on FF, and I thought I fixed it before posting it on here... I guess not.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: teamcullentwimom Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I liked it.  Was this the same Bree that works at "Joeys"?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Yes, it was the same Bree, not very many people picked up on that!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: teamcullentwimom Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awesome story so far!  Bella needs to give Edward a good kick in the pants.  She needs to make him beg for her not to leave and she needs to make him wait.  I can't wait for what is to come.  I'm hooked.

Summary:

Bella's not your average small town girl. She has her secrets just like anyone else but her secrets are stopping her from living the life that she deserves. Instead of embracing the opportunity presented to her, she holds back, too afraid of the unknown future to take a risk. It's up to Edward to break down her walls and show her that he is worth the risk, even if it means giving her the ultimate ultimatum.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5716 Read Count: 384
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: teamcullentwimom Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like your one shot.  It would make a really good story.  You could have Bella run away with him and write about the struggles she has trying to be a Doctors wife.  Maybe she runs into old customers and it goes bad.  You could do something really good with this. You already have me pulled in.

Closet by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

What happens when Edward and his date are caught at Make Out Point by Chief Swan? How will Chief Swan feel when it's his child in the car with Edward? Read and find out.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Emmett (slash)
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2926 Read Count: 1629
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: teamcullentwimom Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was mind blowing.  I did have to scroll back up to see if there were any clues.  I guess you got me.

Summary:

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Bella has been lusting after Edward Cullen, VP at Providence Medical Center in Portland, for years. Too bad he's married, and her boss. Rated for language and lemons. Entry for the Taste of the Forbidden Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10656 Read Count: 3364
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: teamcullentwimom Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Break Room

I usually don't read one shots but I was looking for something quick to read.  I'm so glad I picked this one.  Great story, fast moving, excellent cliff hanger!  Please continue!  How did Bella not know he had a daughter?  I would love to see Bella go head to head with Heidi. 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!  I'm really flattered that you read it, since you don't you don't usually read one shots.

As for how she didn't know he had a daughter, I think it's pretty plausible.  I'll let you in on a little secret, I basically have Bella's job, and there is a really hot V.P I drool over all the time.  That's pretty much where the similarities end...

But, I did hear through the hospital grapevine that he was divorced, but I have NO idea if he has kids.  I know a few people in administration that do, but only if their kid happens to come in with them to work for some reason.  It's not something they generally talk about that much.  They may talk about it more with each other, but I've only had one actually discuss his daughter with me.

Believe me, at some point Bella and Heidi will have a chat.  ;)

I am hoping to post the first chapter of "Beyond the Break Room" in the next couple of weeks!


-Discordia