i just started reading and i love, love, love your story!  i'm also giddy over the use of the pictures with each of your chapters and within the chapter!  the one of rob walking down the sidewalk with his blue sunglasses on is particularly yummy.

the break up had to be one of the more satisfying break ups i've read.  i love seeing tanya handed her ass.  i'm guessing however, that we haven't seen the last of her.

i thought the proposal was especially sweet.  i have to agree with you, it does sound like something from little rascals.   i also love that we get to see these extreme sides of edward.  fierce, controlling and domineering, very intimidating one moment and then sweet, thoughtful and loving the next.

i hope edward gets his wish soon...any idea when we'll see the prologue come back around?

more please!

great chapter...i liked it much better than the last one.  i'm glad that he finally realized that he needed to sit down and talk to bella about a few things first.

i figured edward would go insane when he heard the story of what jacob did to bella. 

i'm just curious as to why edward wasn't with bella as himself -  as edward, while in her room, instead of slipping into the role of her dom.   i know they hadn't covered all of the details of how their relationship would work, the how's, when's and where's etc...whether strictly d/s or that and more.

anyway, very hot.  you write this couple so well, their chemistry just oozes off of the pages of this story.  i'm looking forward to them getting further into each other as both d/s and beyond.

i do hope that edward keeps his word about honesty and comes clean with bella with respect to his feelings for her.  he now knows how she's feeling, please don't let him disregard her words as anything less than they were meant.  i also hopes he finds some way to make her first time special and i really hope it's as edward the first time.

love you, love your story!  thanks for writing for us!

well, i'm trying to decide if the wait was worth it.  i kind of feel jipped or maybe mislead or maybe i just had my hopes up for something more and it didn't happen.

more than the first half of the chapter was spent on things from edwards pov of the last chapter.  and while that shouldn't surprise me because you've done that pretty much throughout the story, i was more or less hoping for an immediate pick up of where you left us in the last chapter.

while i do understand edwards belief that speaking to isabella as a dom/her dom, would be best in order to get answers from her as to what's going on, there really weren't a whole lot of questions asked.  he should have kept asking questions until he got all of the information.    i also know that doms are stern and can be  a hard ass when they want answers to something, but edward really acted like an ass to isabella in this chapter and that disappoints me.   and i might not necessarily have felt that way under normal dom/sub circumstances had i not known the basics... that edward is in love with bella. 

he's thought of nothing but bella for how long?  forever?  he now has her in his grasp and instead of talking to her and asking the right questions, he's shoving his cock down her mouth and thinking about fucking her without knowing the whole story.  that's wrong.  i'm disappointed in that.  

i thought when he lead her out of carlisle and esme's he wanted to take her somewhere and discuss w.t.f. was going on.  i get it that he's impatient and has wanted her forEVER, but he acted irresponsibly...and now what's he going to do?

just imho...

still lovin' you though.

thanks for the update!

it was a really good chapter and i like how talk about the future, his career and personal life, are pretty much front and center now.

thank you for writing!

good!  definitely good!

i think i love your edward already!

thanks for writing!

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