Reviews by lovetoplay2
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315694
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

Oh- how I loved AND hated this Edward & Bella! Thanks so much for the fabulous writing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64094
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

You write the BEST stories! I love how romantic this was, and "period" stories are my favorite. You did a great job with all the facts & research, and I really liked that you included photos. Thank you so much for the fantastic writing! :)

Author's Response:

Awww...thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752679
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

I'm really enjoying this story so far & I love the plot! I just have to comment on Slutward's extra-curricular activites though. I mean holy crap- he's 27 years old & hasn't gone more than a week without sleeping with a different girl?! Up until this chapter I knew he was a man whore, but that's really just disturbing! I'm a HUGE Edward fan & usually he can do no wrong, but let me just say that Bella must really love him to be able to look past THAT MANY girls & I hope to goodness he gets tested before she sleeps with him! Ok- now that I'm done ranting about fictional characters, I can't wait to read more! Thanks! *mwah* :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174117
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

Wow! I loved this story! Thanks so much for the great writing. I can't wait to read more of your talented work! :)

Dreaming of Edward by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

 

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Ever wonder what Bella dreams about when she calls out his name? Not my usual type of story was written by request. It was written for a fan for Christmas and we decided to share it with everyone who like this sort of story. Rated NC-17 for major mature and major sex ooc au/reg pairs EXB this story is not light and fluffy so readers beware. NO INCEST, RAPE or MULTIPLE ENCOUNTERS. Vulgar language please dont read if you dont like swearing.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36388 Read Count: 17524
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm really liking this story & can't wait to read more! Thanks so much for the great writing! :)

Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long to review. I was on vacation with no wifi! I am so happy you are enjoying it! Thank for reading it.

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update- I love your writing!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! More to come soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373176
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

What an amazing story! I adore period works, especially one done so brilliantly. Thank you so much for the beautiful writing. This last chapter had me in tears! Again, I am SO looking forward to reading another of your fabulous stories. :)

Summary:

Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2011
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh- I can't wait to see what happens! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh man!! What a place to end it! I can't imagine I need to say it, but I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It's coming shortly and since this is a honeymoon weekend, there's more to come!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love where this story has gone- and the way you've written all the characters. I especially like the new Edward & all the "fun" they now have! Thanks for the great writing! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This has always been one of my favorite stories- I love the humor & the great connection E & B have. Thanks for the update- I look forward to more explanation. I LOVE Possessiveward! :)

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank you so much for the great writing! I am really liking your style- possessive Edward is my all- time favorite! And I always enjoy canon. I'll be honest, I usually wait until a story is done before I start to read it, but after reading one of your completed ones & loving it, I just keep finding myself back here reading more! I hope you plan to continue these gems. And I can't even tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to entertain me! Thanks again! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading my stories! And yes, after I recently asked my readers they agreed with you, so they will continue. Reviews like your's definitely fuel me to write more. So I hope you continue to enjoy them.

Summary:

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This is Edward's side of Dreaming of Edward. Many have wondered what was Edward thinking when he would visit Bella at night, well here's your chance. Be warn like with Dreaming of Edward, this is not a light and fluffy story. It has bad langueage and sex as the main theme! So dont read it if you dont like that sort of thing! These chapters were originaly sent out as a reward for reviewing but now I have a stories worth. Cannon couples, no incest or slash or rape!  OOC

This story doesn't stand alone you must read Dreaming of Edward to follow it.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15544 Read Count: 5155
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2010 Updated: 08 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I TOTALLY agree- there is NOTHING better than possessive & protective Edward. And I LOVE his POV! It's nice to have both, but his is definitely my favorite. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update- I love this story & am a big fan of your writing! I've been enjoying all of your stories! Thanks again! :)

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129662
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Another great story- thank you! :)

Author's Response:

THanks:)

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105119
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

I love the way their relationship is progressing & how much they both need each other. This was a great chapter! Thanks! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! Next two chapters are almost done so once they are beta'd I will post immediately. Thank you again!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I LOVE this idea- a virgin vampire Dom who (I'm assuming) just had his first orgasm and not only wants a human sub, but found one who's never had a Dom before- it's perfect!! I certainly hope you choose to continue as I can't wait to read more!! :)

Author's Response:

You assumed correctly. thank you for reading this story. Chapter 2 is at the beta being primpt and proped. I will post asap.

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

I am so excited about this story- I love the plot & adding some intrigue about Bella's past is perfect! At this point Edward is so unemotional, which I guess at this point is to be expected. I only hope that along the way this story ends up like your others have, with the two of them madly in love. And a little possessive, protective Edward would be great as well! I'm not a big Tanya fan, so the idea of her training him was a bit disturbing, but at least he wasn't WITH her. And I LOVE that despite the story line, he still is experiencing everything for the first time. His POV is always my favorite as well. I was thrilled you wrote another chapter so quickly. Thank you so much for the great writing- I quite literally can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I will do my best to live up to your expectations. From reading the rest of my stories, I am sure you have guessed I am a hopeless romantic! Tanya is not my favorite either but I could see her doing it to get his attention. Yeah, it didn't work. Not in my stories anyways. I cringe when I read summeries about them being together.

I hope to get the new chapter up just as quickly. It's almost ready to be betad but every time I reread it I add more. So I hope you like long chapters.

Thank you again!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

I was wondering about something. When Edward's thinking how the cottage is perfect for her to scream, he also thinks the following, To feel so much desire for something was nothing new for me, but still it astounded me how
desperate I was for her. Is he talking about desiring blood? I only ask because in the first chapter he said that he had never even had an erection before Bella, so I was just wondering. I loved that he is so drawn to her already that he stayed outside to watch her sleep. It makes me hopeful that he will someday allow Bella to see some of his emotions. Edward as a Dom is so hot, but I am already missing his sensitive side a bit. The ending was heart wrenching! Thanks so much for the update- I love this story!!

Author's Response:

Please always free to ask if it doesn;t give toomuch away i am more than happy to tell you.

as for him being desperate. You are correct he was thinking aout his desire for blood especially from his newborn stage, but also he has been desperate to find someone who would full fill his life long dream of being a dominat..

You did read correctly he was a virgin until Bella.

i dont think you will be missing it for very long, some characteristics will show he is not as strict ss he thinks.

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Still loving this great story- thanks! :)

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

Oh- I love protective Edward! And the car sex! I have to admit that I don't really like Bella's nickname of 'Little Eddie'. It just seems so silly & adolescent considering the nature of their relationship. The playroom scene was great. I'm curious as to why Edward put her in a chastity belt though-doesn't he trust her w/others, or is it so she can't touch herself? I'm excited to see what happens when he's away! Thanks for the great writing! :)

Author's Response:

Dont worry she wont be calling it that all the time. As for her belt it plays heavily in the next chapter. You might find yourself being thankful she had it on. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

Ugh- of course now I'm dying to know what happens! And I loved the way all the bad guys were dealt with. My only question though, is why does Edward think that if Bella becomes a vampire she wouldn't still be his submissive? With her personality, I wouldn't think it would matter. I'll be anxiously waiting for more! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

Tanya, I expect to be a crazy bitch. But Esme helping her try to RAPE Edward- WTF??!! I am really hoping that Edward will find out that Bella loves him too. And that he'll eventually want to change her. Just because she'll be a vampire, doesn't mean he can't still control her! I love this story- thanks for the great writing!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you SO much for the update! I've missed you & this great story! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

Still loving this story! I hope they get to telling each other their feelings eventually. I'm curious why Edward can't always hear her- it's a nice twist! The only thing I don't get is why Edward thinks he can't dominate her if she's "physically" stronger than him?? Isn't the whole D/s relationship more "mental" than anything? Thanks for the fun read! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

I love this story, although I'm dying for them to admit their feelings for each other & become a couple as well. Still curious about the break in her thoughts he experiences & how violent & strange her thoughts were during class. Will we find out why soon? Thanks for the great story! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

Jealous Edward- so hot! I love this story! Thanks :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom

Oooh- I'm so happy that they're now a 'couple' and said the 'I love yous'! This is such a great story! Thanks :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thanks so much for the update- I LOVE this fic! After this dramatic ending I can't wait for more! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311985
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

I loved this chapter- thanks! :)

Author's Response:

thank you for reading and reviewing!  more to come soon...

Summary:

Social reject Bella Swan finds her whole life changing before her eyes after her first encounter with the cute boy at the Concrete Canal. Three years later, she shows her uppity classmates that she's so much more than they ever thought possible.

Written for the A Picture Says It All Anonymous contest. Based on picture prompt 29.

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I actually won Kharizzmatic's Pick in the A Picture Says It All Contest! I'm so honored and excited. This was my prize, make my Khar herself!
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7251 Read Count: 4256
[Report This] Published: 16 Oct 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Someday

Wow- what a great story & a nice change of pace from the usual. I loved it! Thanks! :)

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is the first story of yours I've read, and I really liked it! I chose a vampire one as they are usually my favorite, and I was glad to read you plan on writing more. However, I enjoyed your writing so much, and you have so many other stories already written that sound great- I can't wait to start reading another! Thanks so much for the great writing! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I love this story & have really enjoyed this little shot of adrenaline to the story. The only thing that confused me- Edward is extremely protective of Bella, even needing to discuss it with his therapist. And after all that happened, he tried to talk EMMETT into going in to see her before him??!! WTF?!

Author's Response:

the only thing i can say is that he remembered emmett's breakdown over the phone and felt he needed to 'see' Bella .  Edward also knew that once he was in that room, he was not leaving...so he was willing to hang back for a few minutes...only a few though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

Oh how I love EPOV- especially this chapter! Thanks! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed

I'm loving this story and am very glad you've included EPOV. It's always my favorite- but especially in this story. I know why Bella is so hesitant for a physical relationship, but I'm hoping (along w/Edward!) that she will want to broaden her horizons now that they clearly have a permanent commitment. If she's not ready now, what could possibly make her ready once they're married?? And although I understand that everyone in Bella's life is very protective of her, it bothered me just a bit how "afraid" Bella seemed to be of Charlie's reaction to Edward asking for her hand. Would she not marry him if Charlie didn't agree?? She is an adult, and really should start acting that way. I guess that's why I like EPOV better- even though he's been through hell as well, he just seems to think more like I would expect someone in their situation should, and she seems so immature. I do love this story though, and I hope you don't think I'm trying to knock the characters. I just figured you might appreciate how they seem to others. You're a GREAT writer, and it's fun to read a plot with so many twists and turns. I'll be looking forward to more! Thanks :)

Author's Response:

we'll have to see what happens with the physical aspect of their relationship...they will eventually 'do the deed'.  I believe I would insist that Emmett be at least a thousand miles away. lol.  She's not really afraid of Charlie, but he's the only parent she has left, and she desperately wants his approval.  She would still have married Edward, but it would have broken her heart if Charlie hadn't approved.  Little by little she is coming out from under her family's over-protectiveness.  she's trying.  Edward's not perfect, he's just worked a lot of thinks out in his head.  He's quite an isolated soul.  Thanks very much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

As I've come to expect, you've written yet another amazing story! Thank you so much for sharing your gift for writing with us. :)

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great plot- thanks! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this! Don't let a few nasty old hags get to you- you were honest about what to expect & they clearly shouldn't be reading this if that's how they feel. I think it's great & can't wait to see where this goes. I'm thrilled it appears Tanya will be out of the picture. And even though this is clearly not the typical "one-to-one" relationship, I like the fact that Edward feels stronger for Bella than anyone else. Thsnks for the great writing! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm most curious as to why no one's able to get pregnant. I'll definitely be looking forward to reading more! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hmm... I'm torn. The naughty side of me likes Edward having 2 wives, but after this chapter I'm kinda hoping Maxine doesn't make it. I know, I'm selfish to want him all to myself. I mean Bella!! :) I'm anxious to see how it turns out! Thanks for the great entertainment!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the chapter! Even though J & T are clearly deranged and deserve the most anger, I am equally mad at Carlisle. He's an ass! And I'm glad Bella is giving Edward the cold shoulder after the way he treated her!!

The Car Wash by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Picture inspired one shot for now. But how knows. An early morning naked car wash could brighten anyones day but can it change your future? Mature theme. M for a reason. Picture inside.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9000 Read Count: 8656
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sweet- I love it when they're both virgins. And the naked car wash- mmm! Thanks! :D

Hide and Seek by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A day of play for some not so childish vampires. E X B and an afternoon of adult fun.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 587 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2011 Updated: 20 Apr 2011
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice!! ;)
Thanks!

Summary:

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31 Days of Halloween / Picture prompt 18 / Can a Halloween Ball change everything? Can beauty find true love with an evil beast in one glance? Edward and Bella will find out when he exposes his true nature. Darkward

Banner by BusyMommy


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1821 Read Count: 1001
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for the treat! I loved this :)

My Way by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Edward wants to marry Izzy.  Izzy wants the proposal to be the way their life will be.  Will interfering friends and relatives allow that to happen?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5327 Read Count: 697
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww- so darn sweet! Another great fic of yours- thank you! xoxo

Summary:

My contribution to Breath-of Twilight's V-Day Countdown

Edward has an admirer which of the three will she turn out to be?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9284 Read Count: 674
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great- I so love nerdy Edward! Thanks for the great writing! :)